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九年级(全)·Unit
6
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第六课时 单元写作指导
话题概述
本单元的核心话题是“发明与创造”,属于 2022 新课标“人与社会”范畴中的“科学与技术”这一
主题群,涉及子主题“科学技术与工程,人类文明与创新”。 此类书面表达要求学生能够介绍某项发
明的用途、特点等。 话题写作的角度涉及:①介绍历史上的某项发明创造;②介绍一款新的发明与设
计等。
典例探究
随着社会的发展,各种发明以及科技产品为我们的日常生活带来越来越多的便利。 李华一直想
发明一种可以改善环境的东西。 两周前,他终于成功了。 他发明了一款魔法垃圾箱 ( Magic
Dustbin)。 请根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文介绍李华的发明。 内容包括:
1. 用途:装垃圾;
2. 功能:会说不同的语言,它会把人们乱扔的垃圾打扫干净,并提醒人们不要乱扔垃圾;
3. 评价:有用、便宜、节约人力和财力。
参考词汇:
litter(n.
垃圾)
四步法写作
第一步:思路剖析
(一)仔细审题
①文体:本文主要介绍李华的发明,是一篇
②人称:介绍李华的发明应以第 人称为主
③时态:介绍发明的用途、功能及其评价应以 为主
(二)篇章布局
Beginning:引入主题———介绍李华发明了一款魔法垃圾箱
Body:介绍这款垃圾箱的 、
Ending:对这款魔法垃圾箱进行
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第二步:推敲词汇
1.
梦想做某事 2.
改善环境
3.
被用来…… 4.
扔垃圾
5.
打扫干净 6.
一种有用的发明
第三步:连词成句
1.
他一直梦想着发明一些能帮助改善环境的东西。
2.
它是用来装垃圾的。
84 广西英语(RJ)
3.
如果有人把垃圾扔在地上,垃圾将会立刻被垃圾箱清理干净。
4.
这是一个非常有用的发明,而且价格不贵。
第四步:分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Li
Hua
wanted
to
invent
something
that
can
help
improve
the
environment
when
he
was
young.
Two
weeks
ago,
he
achieved
his
dream.
He
invented
a
magic
dustbin.
Its
used
for
holding
waste.
It
can
speak
different
languages.
It
can
clean
up
the
litter
dropped
by
someone
beside
the
dustbin
at
once.
And
the
person
will
be
told
not
to
do
that
again
by
the
dustbin.
The
special
dustbin
makes
the
streets
clean.
Its
a
very
useful
invention
and
it
doesnt
cost
much.
By
using
it,
our
city
will
need
fewer
cleaners
and
save
more
money.
What
do
you
think
of
this
invention?
①Since
Li
Hua
was
very
young,
he
has
always
dreamed
of
inventing
something
that
can
help
improve
the
environment.
Two
weeks
ago,
he
achieved
his
dream.
②A
magic
dustbin
was
invented
by
him.
Its
used
for
holding
waste.
It
can
speak
different
languages.
③If
someone
drops
litter
on
the
ground,
it
will
be
cleaned
up
by
the
dustbin
at
once.
At
the
same
time,
the
person
will
be
told
not
to
do
that
again
by
the
dustbin.
The
special
dustbin
makes
the
streets
clean.
Above
all,
its
a
very
useful
invention
and
it
doesnt
cost
much.
④By
using
it,
fewer
cleaners
will
be
needed
and
more
money
can
be
saved
for
our
city.
What
do
you
think
of
this
invention?
①句使用 since 引导的时间状语从句;②句使用一般过去时的被动语态;③句使用 If 引导的条件状
语从句;④句使用含情态动词 can 的被动语态。
实战演练
伟大的发明促进人类的进步。 请你以“ The
Greatest
Invention
in
My
Eyes”为题,并根据以下内
容,用英文写一篇短文介绍一项伟大的发明。 内容包括:
1. 你认为最伟大的发明是什么;
2. 这项发明起到了什么作用;
3. 这项发明对我们生活的影响。
注意:1. 词数为 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
The
Greatest
Invention
in
My
Eyes
What
do
you
think
is
the
greatest
invention?
In
my
opinion,
the
Internet
is
the
greatest
invention
in
the
world
which
brings
us
much
convenience.
In
fact,
the
Internet
may
be
the
most
important
invention
for
humans,
bringing
us
into
a
new
age
of
information
technology.
Even
the
use
of
5G
today
is
based
on
the
Internet.
It
has
also
completely
changed
our
life.
The
world
has
become
a
global
village.
People
from
different
places
are
connected
together
by
the
Internet.
It
offers
lots
of
convenience
to
our
daily
life,
such
as
online
classes,
mobile
payment,
online
shopping
and
self-driving
cars.
In
a
word,
the
Internet
has
made
our
lives
wonderful
and
it
will
continue
to
do
so.
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二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
C 2.
A 3.
C 4.
B 5.
A 6.
C 7.
B 8.
A
9.
A 10.
B
二、1.
C 2.
C 3.
B 4.
A 5.
C
三、1.
easiest 2.
developed 3.
their 4.
solve 5.
tool
6.
activity 7.
remain 8.
helpful 9.
properly
10.
because
第二课时 Section
A(3a~ 3c)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
1.
accident 2.
ruler 3.
boiling 4.
remained 5.
so
6.
quite 7.
plants 8.
national 9.
trade 10.
without
一境多练
1.
A 2.
B 3.
In
the
order
of
time.
二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
A 2.
C 3.
B 4.
B 5.
B 6.
B 7.
A 8.
C
9.
C 10.
C
二、1.
B 2.
B 3.
A 4.
B 5.
C
三、1.
He
said
it
was
a
piece
of
wood
with
lead
inside
it.
2.
In
1795.
3.
As
long
as
55
kilometers. / 55
kilometers.
4.
They
were
from
Hungary. / Hungary.
5.
Whatever.
第三课时 单元语法讲练
(Grammar
Focus~ 4c)
语法练习
一、1.
solved 2.
locked 3.
found 4.
added 5.
rang
6.
suddenly 7.
musical
二、1.
lower 2.
somebody 3.
fridge 4.
translated
5.
bell 6.
wolves 7.
of
8.
cookies 9.
earthquake
10.
warns
三、1.
when;
was
invented 2.
how;
was
built 3.
was
invented
by 4.
taken
away
by;
thrown
into 5.
was
invited
to 6.
were
planted
last
year 7.
were;
translated 8.
was
given 9.
were
provided
to
10.
were
told
to 11.
was
accepted
by
第四课时 Section
B(1a~ 1e)
深挖教材练基础
一、1.
customers 2.
salty 3.
happily 4.
potatoes
5.
thicker 6.
going 7.
ordered
二、1.
cooked 2.
crispy 3.
by 4.
sourer 5.
until
6.
called 7.
in 8.
put
三、1.
A 2.
B 3.
E 4.
F 5.
D
第五课时 Section
B(2a~ Self
Check)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
一、1.
Canadian 2.
enjoys 3.
moving 4.
risen
5.
divided 6.
professional
二、1.
Olympics 2.
active 3.
including 4.
nearly
5.
heroes 6.
to
三、1.
It
is
believed
that
the
invention
of
the
Internet
has
greatly
changed
the
way
people
communicate.
2.
The
invention
of
electricity
has
not
only
brought
light
into
our
lives,
but
it
has
also
provided
energy
for
human
development.
3.
Our
school
organized
this
competition
to
encourage
students
to
invent
some
useful
things.
二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
C 2.
C 3.
B 4.
A 5.
B 6.
C 7.
B 8.
A
9.
C 10.
C
二、1.
C 2.
C 3.
B 4.
B 5.
A
三、1.
She
lives
in
the
USA.
2.
I
can
put
“result”
there. / Result. / Its
“result” .
3.
Because
their
products
are
cheap
and
simple
to
use.
4.
Paragraph
2 / Two.
5.
Chinese-made
electric
vehicles
are
becoming
more
and
more
popular
worldwide.
第六课时 单元写作指导
典例探究
第一步:(一)说明文;三;一般现在时
(二)用途;功能;评价
第二步 1.
dream
of
doing
sth. 2.
improve
the
environment
3.
be
used
for 4.
drop
litter 5.
clean
up 6.
a
useful
invention
第三步:1.
He
has
always
dreamed
of
inventing
something
that
can
help
improve
the
environment.
2.
Its
used
for
holding
waste.
3.
If
someone
drops
litter
on
the
ground,
it
will
be
cleaned
up
by
the
dustbin
at
once.
4.
Its
a
very
useful
invention
and
it
doesnt
cost
much.
实战演练
The
Greatest
Invention
in
My
Eyes
What
do
you
think
is
the
greatest
invention?
In
my
opinion,
the
Internet
is
the
greatest
invention
in
the
world
which
brings
us
much
convenience.
In
fact,
the
Internet
may
be
the
most
important
invention
for
humans,
bringing
us
into
a
new
age
of
information
technology.
Even
the
use
of
5G
today
is
based
on
the
Internet.
It
has
also
completely
changed
our
life.
The
world
has
become
a
global
village.
People
from
different
places
are
connected
together
by
the
Internet.
It
offers
lots
of
convenience
to
our
daily
life,
such
as
online
classes,
mobile
payment,
online
shopping
and
self-driving
cars.
In
a
word,
the
Internet
has
made
our
lives
wonderful
and
it
will
continue
to
do
so.
参考答案