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九年级(全)·Unit
1
13
第六课时 单元写作指导
话题概述
本单元的核心话题是“英语学习”,属于 2022 新课标“人与自我”范畴中的“生活与学习”这一主
题群,涉及子主题“积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法与策略,勤学善思”。 此类书面表达要求学生
能够描述自己在学习生活中常见的一些问题,并针对他人的学习问题给出建议。 话题写作的角度涉
及:①如何成为一名好的英语学习者;②如何学好英语;③向学习有困难的同学、朋友等提建议。
典例探究
假如你是李华,最近你的朋友姚璐来信说,她的英语很差,她感到非常着急,听说你的英语很好,
想向你寻求几点学习英语的建议。 请给你的朋友写一封回信。
内容包括:1.
每天早上大声读二十分钟英语;
2.
经常和朋友用英语交谈;
3.
制作单词卡片;
4.
……
Dear
Yao
Lu,
I
heard
you
have
some
problems
in
learning
English.
Yours,
Li
Hua
四步法写作
第一步:思路剖析
(一)仔细审题
①文体:本文为一封回信,是一篇
②人称:向朋友提出一些学习英语的建议,应以第 人称为主
③时态:介绍学习英语的方法,应以 为主
(二)篇章布局
Beginning:引入主题(已给出部分)
Body:针对英语学习,给出至少 点建议,包括: ; ;
等
Ending:表达自己对朋友的期待
ì
î
í
ï
ï
ïï
第二步:推敲词汇
1. 大声朗读英语
2. 和朋友用英语交谈
3. 制作单词卡片
4. 记笔记
5. 复习语法
6. 做更多的练习
第三步:连词成句
1.
每天早上大声朗读英语二十分钟是很有用的。 (It
is+adj. +to
do
sth. )
2.
你应该尽量和你的朋友用英语交谈。
3.
制作单词卡片可以帮助你更加容易地记住单词。
4.
我相信你的英语将会变得越来越好。
14 广西英语(RJ)
第四步:分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Dear
Yao
Lu,
I
heard
you
have
some
problems
in
learning
English.
Heres
my
advice.
First,
I
think
it
is
good
to
study
in
the
morning
and
read
English
aloud
for
twenty
minutes
every
morning.
Second,
you
should
talk
with
your
friends
in
English.
In
this
way,
your
pronunciation
will
improve
quickly.
Then,
making
word
cards
can
help
you
remember
words
more
easily.
You
should
take
notes
carefully
in
class,
too.
This
will
help
you
review
the
grammar
after
class.
Lastly,
you
should
also
do
more
exercises
after
class.
On
weekends,
you
should
watch
English
TV
programs
often.
I
believe
your
English
will
get
better
and
better.
Yours,
Li
Hua
Dear
Yao
Lu,
I
heard
you
have
some
problems
in
learning
English.
Dont
worry
about
them.
Heres
my
advice.
First
of
all,
I
think
it
is
good
to
study
in
the
morning.
①It
is
very
useful
to
read
English
aloud
for
twenty
minutes
every
morning.
Second,
you
should
talk
with
your
friends
in
English
as
much
as
possible.
In
this
way,
your
pronunciation
will
improve
quickly.
Whats
more,
making
word
cards
can
help
you
remember
words
more
easily.
② It
is
also
necessary
to
take
notes
carefully
in
class.
This
will
help
you
review
the
grammar
after
class.
Last
but
not
least,
you
should
also
do
more
exercises
after
class.
③ On
weekends,
youd
better
watch
English
TV
programs
often.I
believe
your
English
will
get
better
and
better.
Yours,
Li
Hua
①、②句使用 It
is+adj. +to
do
sth.
句型;③句使用 Youd
better
do
sth. 句型。
实战演练
假如你是李华,三年的初中生活即将过去,你的外籍同学 Sam 在英语学习上曾帮助过你。 在即
将毕业之际,请你在 Sam 的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段留言。 内容要点:
1.
你在学习上曾遇到的困难;
2.
Sam 对你的帮助及建议:
(1)多听多读;
(2)多看英语电影,多唱英文歌曲;
(3)……(自由发挥,不少于一项内容)
3.
你的收获及对 Sam 的感谢和祝福。
注意:
1.
词数为 80 左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.
文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear
Sam,
How
time
flies!
Its
time
for
us
to
say
goodbye.
During
the
past
three
years,
you
have
given
me
so
much
help
in
English
that
I
cant
thank
you
too
much.
I
still
remember
three
years
ago,
I
had
difficulty
in
learning
English.
It
was
difficult
for
me
to
memorize
so
many
words
and
understand
what
people
were
saying.
My
spoken
English
and
written
English
were
poor,
too.
However,
Im
lucky
that
I
met
you,
a
kind-hearted,
smart
and
patient
boy.
Firstly,
you
taught
me
to
listen
and
read
more.
And
they
really
helped
me
a
lot.
Besides,
you
suggested
that
I
should
watch
English
movies
and
sing
classical
English
songs.
In
addition,
you
told
me
to
form
the
habit
of
reading
aloud
in
the
morning
and
reading
novels
before
going
to
bed.
As
a
result,
I
finally
made
great
progress.
Thank
you
for
all
your
help
and
best
wishes
to
you.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
分层讲练册
1
Unit
1 How
can
we
become
good
learners?
第一课时 Section
A(1a~ 2d)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
一、1.
sentences 2.
patient 3.
making 4.
tapes
5.
asks
二、1.
pronunciation 2.
keeping 3.
conversations
4.
textbook 5.
aloud 6.
fewer
三、1.
B 2.
A 3.
F 4.
C 5.
D
二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
B 2.
C 3.
B 4.
C 5.
A 6.
C 7.
A 8.
C
9.
C 10.
B
二、1.
C 2.
B 3.
C 4.
A 5.
B
三、1.
listen 2.
because 3.
yourself 4.
seeing 5.
last
6.
Dictionaries 7.
new 8.
carefully 9.
at
10.
notebook
第二课时 Section
A(3a~ 3b)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
1.
quickly 2.
poor 3.
expressions 4.
watch 5.
by
6.
discovered 7.
useful 8.
up 9.
my 10.
grammar
一境多练
1.
Because
her
pronunciation
was
poor.
2.
Listening
to
something
interesting.
3.
I
usually
improve
my
English
by
listening
to
English
songs
and
watching
English
soap
operas. (开放性试题,言之有
理即可。)
二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
A 2.
C 3.
A 4.
A 5.
B 6.
B 7.
A 8.
C
9.
B 10.
C
二、1.
A 2.
C 3.
B 4.
B 5.
A
三、1.
She
was
an
engineer. /
An
engineer.
2.
Because
she
couldnt
speak
English
very
well. /
Because
it
is
hard
for
her
to
communicate
with
others
in
English.
3.
By
listening
to
English
news
(on
her
way
to
work).
4.
Very
successful. /
Very
good.
/
Wonderful. /
Excellent.
5.
If
we
work
hard
and
dont
give
up,
we
can
learn
to
speak
a
new
language
and
do
great
things.
第三课时 单元语法讲练
(Grammar
Focus~ 4c)
语法练习
一、1.
covering 2.
dancing 3.
doing
4.
writing
5.
memorizing 6.
Fixing 7.
is 8.
leaving
二、1.
with 2.
in 3.
watching 4.
Repeating 5.
by
6.
turning 7.
novel 8.
herself 9.
accident
10.
passing
三、1.
by
making 2.
discussing
in
English 3.
by
bike
4.
word
by
word 5.
by
using
四、1.
physics 2.
repeating 3.
notes 4.
chemistry
5.
memorize
第四课时 Section
B(1a~ 1e)
深挖教材练基础
一、1.
remembered 2.
increased 3.
partners 4.
playing
5.
mistakes
二、1.
speed 2.
joined 3.
pronounce 4.
enough
5.
review 6.
go 7.
problem 8.
languages
9.
writing
三、1.
C 2.
B 3.
E 4.
F 5.
A
第五课时 Section
B(2a~ Self
Check)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
一、1.
Connecting 2.
wisely 3.
protecting 4.
created
5.
Writing
二、1.
knowledge 2.
active 3.
ability 4.
whether
5.
brain
三、1.
Jack
doesnt
think
he
is
born
with
the
ability
to
learn
English
well.
2.
English
learning
and
Chinese
learning
have
a
lot
in
common.
3.
We
should
connect
the
knowledge
we
learned
in
class
with
our
daily
lives.
4.
Even
if
you
meet
a
lot
of
difficulties
in
English
learning,
you
should
never
give
up.
5.
He
improves
his
pronunciation
by
reading
English
words
aloud.
二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
A 2.
B 3.
C 4.
B 5.
A
二、1.
Because
he
is
really
interested
in
Chinese
culture.
2.
They
think
it
is
like
an
impossible
task.
3.
By
watching
videos
online.
4.
Talking
about
different
topics
in
Chinese
in
his
daily
life.
5.
How
Adam
Smith
learns
Chinese
well.
三、1.
spends 2.
her 3.
questions 4.
practice
5.
comfortable 6.
when 7.
fresh 8.
up 9.
easily
10.
without
第六课时 单元写作指导
典例探究
第一步:(一)应用文;
二;
一般现在时
参考答案
2
(二)大声朗读英语;和朋友用英语交谈;
制作单词卡片
第二步: 1.
read
English
aloud 2.
talk
with
friends
in
English 3.
make
word
cards 4.
take
notes 5.
review
the
grammar 6.
do
more
exercises
第三步 1.
It
is
very
useful
to
read
English
aloud
for
twenty
minutes
every
morning.
2.
You
should
talk
with
your
friends
in
English
as
much
as
possible.
3.
Making
word
cards
can
help
you
remember
words
more
easily.
4.
I
believe
your
English
will
get
better
and
better.
实战演练
Dear
Sam,
How
time
flies!
Its
time
for
us
to
say
goodbye.
During
the
past
three
years,
you
have
given
me
so
much
help
in
English
that
I
cant
thank
you
too
much.
I
still
remember
three
years
ago,
I
had
difficulty
in
learning
English.
It
was
difficult
for
me
to
memorize
so
many
words
and
understand
what
people
were
saying.
My
spoken
English
and
written
English
were
poor,
too.
However,
Im
lucky
that
I
met
you,
a
kind-hearted,
smart
and
patient
boy.
Firstly,
you
taught
me
to
listen
and
read
more.
And
they
really
helped
me
a
lot.
Besides,
you
suggested
that
I
should
watch
English
movies
and
sing
classical
English
songs.
In
addition,
you
told
me
to
form
the
habit
of
reading
aloud
in
the
morning
and
reading
novels
before
going
to
bed.
As
a
result,
I
finally
made
great
progress.
Thank
you
for
all
your
help
and
best
wishes
to
you.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
Unit
2 I
think
that
mooncakes
are
delicious!
第一课时 Section
A(1a~ 2d)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
一、1.
wonderful 2.
interesting 3.
crowded 4.
eating
5.
races
二、1.
relatives 2.
pounds 3.
spent 4.
strangers
5.
perfect
三、1.
B 2.
F 3.
D 4.
E 5.
A
二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
C 2.
B 3.
C 4.
A 5.
C 6.
B 7.
A 8.
B
9.
C 10.
C
二、1.
C 2.
B 3.
C 4.
A 5.
C
三、1.
hot 2.
traditional 3.
warmth 4.
especially
5.
relatives 6.
ended 7.
experience 8.
their 9.
or
10.
daily
第二课时 Section
A(3a~ 3c)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
1.
in 2.
wishes 3.
touching 4.
Whoever 5.
steal
6.
and 7.
slowly 8.
garden 9.
her 10.
admiring
一境多练
1.
The
Spring
Festival
is
so
happy
and
warm
that
everyone
is
looking
forward
to
it.
2.
Because
Hou
Yi
shot
down
the
nine
suns.
3.
A
二阶 衔接中考练题型
一、1.
C 2.
A 3.
B 4.
B 5.
C 6.
A 7.
C 8.
C
9.
A 10.
B
二、1.
C 2.
A 3.
C 4.
C 5.
A
三、1.
They
were
often
held
on
given
days
at
given
places.
2.
3 / Three.
3.
I
can
put
“buy”
there.
4.
4 / Four.
5.
Its
about
shopping
festivals
in
ancient
times.
第三课时 单元语法讲练
(Grammar
Focus~ 4c)
语法练习
一、1.
could 2.
moves 3.
said 4.
makes 5.
is
6.
discussed 7.
spent 8.
changes
二、1.
How 2.
What 3.
whether 4.
that 5.
if /
whether
三、1.
What
a 2.
How
lucky 3.
What
an 4.
What
bad
news 5.
wonder
how 6.
wonders
where
I
will
7.
whether;
or
not 8.
whether / if
I
can 9.
will
come
10.
whether
he
could 11.
the
sun
rises
12.
What
a
good
day 13.
How
patient 14.
What
a
useful
method
15.
How
fast
四、1.
third 2.
treat 3.
ties 4.
that 5.
wonder
第四课时 Section
B(1a~ 1d)
深挖教材练基础
一、1.
dinosaurs 2.
mushrooms 3.
stayed 4.
happiness
5.
photos 6.
happened
二、1.
make 2.
togetherness 3.
whether 4.
during
5.
riddles 6.
favorite 7.
meters 8.
shows 9.
cute
10.
lunar
三、1.
B 2.
D 3.
E 4.
F 5.
C
第五课时 Section
B(2a~ Self
Check)
一阶 深挖教材练基础
一、1.
smelt / smelled 2.
coming 3.
celebration 4.
took
5.
involves
二、1.
picnic 2.
customs 3.
bottom 4.
express
5.
counted 6.
to
三、1.
It
was
a
wonderful
time
when
we
went
camping
in
the
mountains
last
summer.
2.
The
New
Years
Eve
dinner
holds
great
importance
to
Chinese
people.
参考答案