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2025年秋期新人教版八年级上册英语 Unit 6主题写作专项
一.话题概述
本单元的主题是“制订计划”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇,向读者介绍自己在新的一年中想要改进的三个方面。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①说明自己想要在哪些方面进行改进;②阐述改进这些方面的原因;③详细说明具体的改进方法。
在中考书面表达中,与该主题相关的命题形式较为多样,通常以说明文或应用文的形式出现。
二.写作实例
每当新年来临,人们常常会设定提升自己的目标。他们或者决心努力学习、开始培养新的兴趣爱好,或者决定来一次说走就走的旅行。现在请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文说一说自己来年的计划。
要点:1. What are your New Year’s resolutions?(at least three) 2. How are you going to do that?
要求:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范,可适当增加细节,使行文流畅;2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 词数 80 以上。
三.审题指导
1. 体裁:说明文
2. 时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
3. 人称:以第一人称为主
4. 必备词句:①make some resolutions 制订一些计划 ②improve my English 提高我的英语水平 ③practice for at least half an hour every day 每天至少练习半小时 ④make it 获得成功;达到预期目的 ⑤I also plan to eat more vegetables and fruits to stay healthy. 我还计划吃更多的蔬菜和水果来保持健康。 ⑥I know it’s not easy to keep these resolutions, but I am going to try my best. 我知道坚持这些计划不容易,但我会尽我的最大努力。
四.谋篇布局
段落
内容
示例
第一段
引出话题介绍新年计划
I have made some resolutions to _______.
第二段
具体的新年计划是什么以及如何执行
First, I want to _______. I plan to _______ and _______ every day. I am going to _______. Second, I decide to learn to _______. I am going to _______ and practice for _______ every day. Third, I want to _______. I am going to _______ and _______ with my friends. I also plan to _______ to stay healthy.
第三段
点题升华,强调要坚持执行新年计划
I know it’s not easy to keep these resolutions, but I am going to _______. I believe I can make it and _______!
佳作剖析 优秀范文
As the New Year is coming, it is the perfect time to think about the changes we want to make. I have made some resolutions to make myself better ①. I hope I can keep them.
First ②, I want to improve my English. I plan to read English books and listen to English songs every day. I am going to try to speak English with my friends. Second ②, I decide to learn to play the guitar. I am going to take guitar lessons and practice for at least half an hour every day. Third ②, I want to exercise more. I am going to go running in the park three times a week and play basketball with my friends. I also plan to eat more vegetables and fruits to stay healthy ⑤.
I know it’s not easy to keep these resolutions, but I am going to try my best ⑥. I believe I can make it and have a great year ahead ③!
亮点评析
1. “make...better”可以体现作者对未来的期待和积极进取的心态,让读者感受到作者的决心和信心。
2. “First”“Second”“Third”这些衔接词能够有效地连接各个句子,使文章的过渡更加自然、流畅。
3. 宾语从句可以使文章的各个部分更加紧密地联系在一起,增强连贯性。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①get close to one’s dream ②sign up ③try out ④in great fear ⑤serve one’s motherland ⑥suffer from ⑦quiet down ⑧on the job ⑨I will fly the plane high in the sky to protect our country’s airspace. ⑩The point is that you make a fresh start to make yourselves become better or try new things.
写作实战
假如你是李华,刚刚收到美国笔友 Mike 给你发来的电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容给他回复。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going? My parents want me to be a doctor in the future and I’m also interested in medicine. I’m making the plan now. What’s your dream job? What are you going to do to make it come true? What are your New Year’s resolutions to improve yourself? Please share them with me.
Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes!
Yours,
Mike
注意:1. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;2. 词数 80—100。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you._______________________________________
Yours,
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