Unit7 What's the highest mountain in the world写作指导课件2024-2025学年人教版英语八年级下册

Unit 7 Writing -protect wild animals 1 单元话题解读 本单元的写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群，涉及子主题有“中国主要城市及家乡的地理位置与自然环境；世界主要国家的名称、地理位置与自然景观；世界不同地区的生态特征；常见的动物及其特征与生活环境”等。常见的写作任务是描述某个国家或地区的自然景观、野生动物及濒危动物保护、环境保护等。体裁多为说明文、书信类应用文或议论文等。 写作技巧 本单元写作出题围绕着“保护野生动物” 展开， 命题形式可以是写一篇保护动物的倡议书， 也可以是根据提示或图片介绍一种或几种野生动物的相关情况。 结合单元所学，我们可以运用: 1.形容词和副词的比较级最高级来描述动物的特征 ; 2.衔接词because, so,first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, one reason is, another reason is等词， 使文章内容更具逻辑性 。 单元素材积累 1. It is mostly because of human activity.大部分是因为人类的活动 2.It's time to take action to protect animals是时候采取行动保护动物 3. Animal protection organizations can raise awareness of the importance of protecting wild animals.动物保护组织能够提升保护野生动物的重要性的意识。 4.we can refuse to eat any endangered animals or use products made with parts of their bodies, such as their fur or teeth.我们拒绝吃任何濒危动物或使用由它们身体的一部分制作成的产品，比如它们的皮毛或牙齿。 5.If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better如果我们坚持做到以上的事情，我相信环境会变得更好 6.All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans.所有的这些坏事都是由糟糕的环境造成的，但是糟糕的环境是由人类造成的。 4 7.Pandas have become so popular that they are now a symbol of China.熊猫变得如此受欢迎，他们现在是中国的一种象征。 8.Scientists say there are fewer than 2000 pandas living in the forests.科学家们说现在不足2000头大熊猫生活在森林里。 9.The Chinese government is trying hard to help save the pandas.中国政府正在尽力帮助拯救大能猫。 10. They live in the sea.它们住在大海里。 11.We should protect whales from.…….我们应该保护鲸鱼免受…… 12.I think people should/shouldn't…我觉得人们应该、不应该 13. We can plant more trees to make homes for them.我们可以多种些树给它们提供家。 14. We shouldn't eat their meat and use things made by them.我们不应该吃它们的肉，用它们做成的东西。 15. Let's work together to protect the wild animals.让我们一起行动保护野生动物。 题目一：2020年1月2日晚，白鲟（Chinese paddle fish）灭绝的报道被各大媒体转发，无数网友惋惜不已。然而，还有许多动物同白鲟一样，被世界自然保护联盟（TUCN）列为"极危"等级，它们的出路又在何方?请你就此写一篇短文，谈谈你对动物保护的看法和建议。 要点∶ 1.当前生物存在灭绝危险的原因主要在于人类的活动——污染、捕措和走私; 2.我们可以采取什么措施来保护动物—政府制定法律;增强人们的动物保护意识;拒绝食用濒危动物或者买卖濒危动物制品。 参考词汇∶濒危动物endangered animals;灭绝extinct （adj.）;走私smuggle（w.）;增强意识raise awareness 写作任务解析 第一步：仔细审题 1、格式-- 2、时态-- 3、人称-- 4、体裁-- 命题作文 一般现在时 第一和第三人称 题目：2020年1月2日晚，白鲟（Chinese paddle fish）灭绝的报道被各大媒体转发，无数网友惋惜不已。然而，还有许多动物同白鲟一样，被世界自然保护联盟（TUCN）列为"极危"等级，它们的出路又在何方?请你就此写一篇短文，谈谈你对动物保护的看法和建议。 议论文 7 第二步：谋篇布局 第一段— Animals are our friends. However,many of them are endangered or even extinct.The Chinese paddle fish was recently reported to have been missing. 引出话题，提出动物是我们的朋友 题目：2020年1月2日晚，白鲟（Chinese paddle fish）灭绝的报道被各大媒体转发，无数网友惋惜不已。然而，还有许多动物同白鲟一样，被世界自然保护联盟（TUCN）列为"极危"等级，它们的出路又在何方?请你就此写一篇短文，谈谈你对动物保护的看法和建议。 8 第二步：谋篇布局 第二段— Why are some animals in danger? It is mostly because of human activity.Pollution makes animals lose their homes. Hunting and smuggling directly kill animals.Nature has its own rules. Once one species disappears, other animals will be affected. We need to protect animals in order to keep the biodiversity of our planet. 为什么一些动物处于危险中以及提出自然有自己的规则。 9 第二步：谋篇布局 第三段— It's time to take action to protect animals. First of all, governments can make stricter laws. They can make a list of endangered animals and ban hunting or smuggle them. Second, animal protection organizations can raise awareness of the importance of protecting wild animals. Third, we can refuse to eat any endangered animals or use products made with parts of their bodies, such as their fur or teeth 关于保护动物的措施和建议。 10 Sample Writing Animals are our friends. However,many of them are endangered or even extinct.The Chinese paddlefish was recently reported to have been missing. Why are some animals in danger? It is mostly because of human activity.Pollution makes animals lose their homes. Hunting and smuggling directly kill animals.Nature has its own rules. Once one species disappears, other animals will be affected. We need to protect animals in order to keep the biodiversity of our planet. It's time to take action to protect animals. First of all, governments can make stricter laws. They can make a list of endangered animals and ban hunting or smuggle them. Second, animal protection organizations can raise awareness of the importance of protecting wild animals. Third, we can refuse to eat any endangered animals or use products made with parts of their bodies, such as their fur or teeth. 11 2020年3月3日是联合国第七个“世界野生动植物日”，我国提出了“维护全球生命共同体”的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们，就是守护我们的未来。下面，让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧！   假如你是熊猫惜惜，请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80词左右的书信。 要求：1. 信中包含所给信息内容；2. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 注意：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：symbol (n. 象征)  destroy (v. 破坏)    中考链接 1. 基本信息：13岁，来自四川，中国的象征；爱好（自主发挥）。 2. 我的烦恼：朋友少，家园常常遭到破坏…… 3. 我的愿望或建议（自主发挥，至少两条）。 Dear friends, My name is xixi ___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Xixi  中考链接 Dear friends, My name is Xixi. I'm one of your favorite animals — Panda. I come from Sichuan, China. I am 13 years old. I am a symbol of China. I usually like to play with my friends. I also like climbing trees and sitting on the trees. I like bamboo best. It's my favorite food. But I've had some problems recently. My home is often destroyed and I don't have much room to move around. My friends are fewer and fewer because some people have destroyed my home. There is no one to play with me and I am very lonely. My favorite food is getting less and less. I'm really sad. I hope human friends can help me. I hope that people can protect the environment and give me more space to live. If you can cut down fewer trees, my friends and I will be very happy. Yours, Xixi 14 $$