Unit 4 Reading for writing(2) 课件 2024-2025学年外研版英语七年级下册

Unit 4 The art of having fun Developing ideas - Read for writing ② 1 The writing task What is the monster ? Why is it a monster ? Body How do you fight the monster ? Ending The time-eating monster Beginning 2 Read and check Which writing is better? Why? A B Let’s check! Let's polish! with only 2 paras Let’s polish! Content The time-eating monster There has a monster around me. It come from the short videos. It’s very dangerous. I always watch short videos for two or three hours, even five hours. I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” The monster comes and start to eat away my time. My neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. So, I decide to fight it. I should stand up and leave the screens. I can also go outside, feel the sun on my face. Passage 1.0 what why how The time-eating monster Do you know there are a monster in our life? It’s very dangerous. Maybe you don’t have, But I life have one. It is my mobile phone game. I often get lost in the monster world. I download a mobile game thinking,“I will just play 10 minutes.” The monster comes and start to eat away my time. My neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. So, I decide to fight it. I should stand up and leave the screens. I can also go outside, feel the sun on my face. The time-eating monster There has a monster around me. It come from the short videoes. It’s very dangerous. I always watch short videoes for two or three hours, even five hours. I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” The monster comes and start to eat away my time. My neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. So, I decide to fight it. I should stand up and leave the screens. I can also go outside, feel the sun on my face. Passage 1.0 Let's polish! Writing tip: When you write, make sure you use the correct tense. Check if the subject and verb agree. Let's polish! The time-eating monster have a little fun watch for a long time feel relaxed my neck-sore my eyes -dry eat away my time miss out lunch or dinner cause and effect I always watch short videos for two or three hours, even five hours. I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” The monster comes and starts to eat away my time. My neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. Let's check! I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” My neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. vs I always watch short videos for two or three hours, even five hours. I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” The monster comes and starts to eat away my time. My neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. contrast Let's check! I always watch short videos for two or three hours, even five hours. linking words first, at first, and then, but soon, later, after that, finally, at last... _. At first I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” But soon the monster comes and starts to eat away my time. After that, my neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Writing tip Using makes your writing easier to follow. contrast and linking words I always watch short videos for two or three hours, even five hours. I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” The monster comes and starts to eat away my time. My neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. Let's check! Passage 2.0 The time-eating monster There is a monster around me. It comes from the short videos. It’s very dangerous. I always watch short videos for two or three hours, even five hours. At first, I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” But soon the monster comes and starts to eat away my time. After that, my neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. So, I decide to fight it. I should stand up and leave the screens. I can also go outside, feel the sun on my face. Can you make it better ? Let's beautify! There is a monster around me. It comes from the short videos. It’s very dangerous. Let’s beautify! Writing tip An attractive beginning helps the writing a lot. How does the writer lead in the topic ? Have you ever thought there could be a monster around you? Well, there is one around me. It comes from the short videos, and believe me, it’s very dangerous. Let's beautify! Let’s beautify! So, I decide to fight it. I should stand up and leave the screens. I can also go outside, feel the sun on my face. So, I decide to keep the monster away by having fun in a balanced way. Stand up and leave the screens. Go outside, feel the sun on my face and have a walk in the fresh air. There is so much for me to do. The choice is mine. Passage 1.0 The time-eating monster Have you ever thought there could be a monster around you? Well, there is one around me. It comes from the short videos, and believe me, it’s very dangerous. I always watch short videos for two or three hours, even five hours. At first, I just think,“ I only have a little fun and I feel relaxed.” But soon the monster comes and starts to eat away my time. After that, my neck becomes sore and my eyes get dry. Sometimes, I even miss out lunch or dinner with family. So, I decide to keep the monster away by having fun in a balanced way. Stand up and leave the screens. Go outside, feel the sun on my face and have a walk in the fresh air. There is so much for me to do. The choice is mine. Passage 3.0 Let's compare and enjoy! Must-do: 1. Polish your writing with the help of the checklist. 2. Stick your writing in the classroom and give your stars to the best ones according to the checklist. Choose-to-do: Make your weekend plans to have fun in a balanced way. Share them in class. Homework Homework Homework 18 $$