读后续写5（和解类）课件+学案-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写 和解类 2016年10月浙江卷:吵架出走迷路 常考的十大主题 材料主题 续写走向 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 亲情类 给他人提供无私帮助 助人类 为亲人付出甚至作出牺牲 师生类 老师对学生的耐心或者关爱 动物奇缘 关爱动物及动物的智慧和可爱面 和解类 双方发生矛盾最后和解 脱险类 陷入危险最后脱险 诚信类 欺骗他人但认错/恪守承诺 励志类 克服困难达成目标或者梦想 教诲类 通过一件事传授他人人生哲理 正义类 好人得到好报/坏人得到恶报 这一类型属于冲突/矛盾化解型故事，通常以一个具体的时间或故事为背景，主要涉及两人其中一人遇到了某种困难或者两人之间存在某种误会，续写部分往往是如何帮助对方或在对方的帮助下如何成功的解决问题，弥补破碎的关系，最后是主题的升华。 材料主题 基本续写走向 1 和解类 双方发生矛盾最后和解 续写主题分类（5） ↓ 设计这类故事的续写情节时，常涉及后悔、内疚、欣慰、激动、兴奋、感激等情绪描写，也会涉及回忆两人日常温馨相处的心理描写等。 和解类 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away. With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom! "she cried. "Help!" No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Reading Task 阅读任务 who 人物 when 时间 where 地点 what 事件 why 原因 how 方式 theme 主题 ending 结局 5W 1H 积极正能量 Activity 1读取信息&预测结局 Reading Task 阅读任务 who 人物 when 时间 where 地点 what 事件 why 原因 how 方式 theme 主题 ending 结局 Jane, Tom one weekend in July in the forest Jane was lost they quarreled she was noticed by a helicopter. 和解类 They got home and led a happy life . 读线索5W1H In what order is the material developed? One weekend in July, …… As night was beginning to fall, …… Jane rose at the break of the day, …… But …… and it was getting dark again. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Time 读结构 With no path to follow, Jane……with复合结构 ……, she turned around, hoping to ……分词作状语 Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that …… Jane rose……, hungry and thirsty. 形容词作状语 If only she had not left her mobile phone …… 固定句式 Never in her life had she tasted anything better. 倒装 读语言 Beginning Climax Ending quarrel angry saw helicopters was rescued? process lost confused，tired 小组讨论，设计4个合理情节，使故事完整，写出英文提纲。选择一个发言人进行展示。 续写情节1： 续写情节2： 续写情节3： 续写情节4（ending）： Check list: 1.书写规范； 2.与所给短文融洽度高; 3.与所提供各个段落开头语衔接合理； 4.故事完整。 Activity 2 设计情节 Activity 3 展示点评 各小组选择一个发言人进行展示，小组互评和教师点评（优缺点、理由及建议)。 续写情节1： 续写情节2： 续写情节3： 续写情节4（ending）： Check list: 1.书写规范； 2.与所给短文融洽度高; 3.与所提供各个段落开头语衔接合理； 4.故事完整。 Paragraph 1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Paragraph 2： It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 续写情节2：Jane thought of all the things that she and Tom had experienced together. 续写情节4：It was Tom who called the police to save Jane. 续写情节1：Jane felt scared and disappointed. 续写情节3：Jane felt regretted and continued to find the way out. 构思 Para. 1: But no more helicopters came and it was dark.  续写部分: 简当时的感受？ 简是如何过夜的？ 简睡着了吗？ Para. 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 续写部分：简获救了吗？ 谁救了简？ 怎么救的？ 她当时的感受？ Paragraph 1 ：  But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. _______________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 ：  It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _______________________________________________________________________ 原文分析 根据下面的推断， 本段应该是Jane独自在森林里度过，根据前文， 本段侧重于Jane的内心描写。 表明上一段Jane在森林里又独自度过了一天。 本段应该是Jane如何被救，根据前文， 可能直升机又来了。 Paragraph 1 Paragraph 1 ：  But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane lay down near a stone. She reminded her husband’s good deed. She missed Tom. She regrated to quarrel with Tom. Paragraph 2 Paragraph 2 ：  It was daybreak when Jane woke up. helicopter was flying overhead again. she flagged her yellow blouse. she was eventually noticed. It was her husband, and they agreed never to quarrel again. A: actions 动作的丰富性 F: feelings 情感表达的多样性 S: surroundings 恰当运用环境描写 Activity 4 Write Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ scared/frightened happy/moved Jane felt frightened. When Jane realized before her was Tom, she was overjoyed and moved. 作品1 Feeling scared and helpless, Jane sat beside a tree and held her shoulders in her arms to make herself warmer. 动作描写 Slowly, the sun hid itself behind the mountains and it was hard to see anything. 环境描写 Jane felt frightened. 作品2 When Jane realized before her was Tom, she was overjoyed and moved. 神态描写 There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she embraced him and was too thrilled to say anything. 动作描写 1.简又累又害怕，躺在一块石头旁，想念远方的家人。 2.一阵悔恨涌上她的心头，然后她就睡着了，眼里噙着晶莹的泪水。 3.尽管她很虚弱，但她挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。 Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. A surge of regret flooded over her, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. 续写赏析 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn’t be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” A surge of regret flooded over her, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes. 注意连接词以及短语的使用。 续写赏析 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again. Overwhelmed with excitement, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others’ attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter. 注意倒装句的亮点句型的使用。 续写赏析 There, she saw her husband staring at her, relief written all over his face. As tightly as possible, she embraced him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest. 注意结尾的升华表达。 Activity 5 Summary 续写逆向构思法 通读全文，确定要素、主题和续写方向 结合主题、段首语设计分情节（基本4个） 列出提纲（可用关键词代替） 和解类万能结尾： 1. They agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest. 2. Although part of me was still haunted by a surge of regret, I still felt relieved because I had captured a precious friendship. 3. Friendship is the most invaluable thing in the world. 4. Just then,the old saying appeared in my mind that “Fridship is the greatest gift in life.” 5. Friends are hidden treasures. 6. At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement and the laughter echoed in the room. 和解类万能结尾： 7. Feeling the warm sunlight breaking through the window, the whole family hugged in happiness. 8. How few there are who have courage enough to own their faults or resolution enough to mend them！ 承认并 改正错误，需要有足够的勇气和决心。 9. Sincere friendship like health, the value of which is seldom known until it is lost.真诚的友谊好象健康，失 去时才知道它的可贵。 10. The heart is not conquered by force, but conquered by love and tolerance.人心不是靠武力征服的，而是靠爱和 宽容大度征服。 来自同学的佳句 $$ 读后续写 和解类 练习一 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（2016年浙江卷） One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away. With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom! "she cried. "Help!" No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. 注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Reading Task 阅读任务 who 人物 when 时间 where 地点 what 事件 why 原因 how 方式 theme 主题 ending 结局 Paragraph 1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. 续写情节1： _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 续写情节2： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 续写情节3： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写情节4： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 和解类万能结尾 1. Friendship is the most invaluable thing in the world. 2. Just then, the old saying appeared in my mind that “Fridship is the greatest gift in life.” 3. Friends are hidden treasures. 4. At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement and the laughter echoed in the room. 5. Feeling the warm sunlight breaking through the window, the whole family hugged in happiness. 6. How few there are who have courage enough to own their faults or resolution enough to mend them！ 承认并改正错误，需要有足够的勇气和决心。 7. Sincere friendship like health, the value of which is seldom known until it is lost.真诚的友谊好象健康，失去时才知道它的可贵。 8. The heart is not conquered by force, but conquered by love and tolerance.人心不是靠武力征服的，而是靠爱和宽容大度征服。 9. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$