专题07 书面表达（湖南专用）-【好题汇编】三年（2023-2025）中考英语真题分类汇编

专题07 书面表达 （2025·湖南）在假期，我们应该更多地陪伴家人还是朋友呢？在学校英语论坛上，同学们以此为话题发帖讨论。假如你是李华，请你跟帖参与讨论。 内容包括： （1）陈述你的观点并说明理由； （2）结合观点，介绍你的假期计划。 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息； （2）写作词数为80个左右。 Spending more time with family or friends? All My page Li Hua Mike 2 minutes ago With such long hours in school on weekdays, I’d like to spend more time with my family. I plan to help babysit my little brother at home. Gina 5 minutes ago I feel like spending more time with friends. We can do what we like together. We are going to discuss projects or be volunteers. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2025·长沙）学校英文报正在开展以“Mistakes—steps towards success”为题的讨论。请你根据以下提示，并结合自身感悟，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要求：（1）短文必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥； （2）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Mistakes—steps towards success Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2024·湖南）英语课上老师要求以"Sports make us better"为话题开展三人一组的讨论，假定你是李华，将代表小组在全班发言，请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括： （1）介绍你们各自喜欢的运动； （2）谈谈运动对你们的影响。 注意：（1）文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息： （2）写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Group One. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thank you. （2024·长沙） 学校英文校刊主编读了第一节（回答问题）中David Smith的故事后，深受触动，发起主题为"What does Music Bring to Me?"的征文。你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容，并作适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： （1）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 What does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·衡阳） 假如你是李强，你校即将举办的"活动周"有四个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你想参加的活动内容并说明其理由。 Project A Sports Day A Volunteer Day A School Trip Day A Talent Show Day Activities ·play basketball ·run ·…… ·visit the old people's home ·clean up Nanhu Park ·…… ·visit Hengyang Museum ·go to the countryside ·…… ·sing a song ·draw ·…… Reasons ·keep healthy ·feel relaxed ·…… ·care for the old ·protect the environment ·…… ·learn a lot ·be close to nature ·…… ·improve myself ·take up a hobby ·…… 要求： 1. 根据上面表格中的信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，需适当发挥； 2. 文中不出现真实的校名和人名等； 3. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚； 4. 词数不少于80。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·永州） 毕业在即，为了解同学们中考结束后两周内的计划，你校就此开展了一次问卷调查。假如你是李华，请根据下表中的信息，给你的外国笔友Tom写一封英文电子邮件，告诉他你的计划并期待他的假期分享。 Activities Reasons 1. learn to make a dish 2. learn to sing a song 3. learn to do a sport 4. practise handwriting 5. travel with classmates 6. read a book 7. learn paper cutting 8. stay with families 　 要求: 1. 文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名； 2. 从表中列举的活动中任意选择1—2 项内容并陈述理由； 3. 词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I'm writing to tell you mine. My plan is to... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （2023·岳阳） 为了培养学生的劳动意识，增强他们的动手能力，学校打破年级限制，成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示，以"Our Labor Clubs"(我们的劳动社团)为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍以下的三个劳动社团，并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团，详细说明喜欢的理由。 　 1. Paper cutting 2. Cooking 3. Flower growing Materials and tools *scissors *red paper … *a pot *bowls *a knife *ingredients (调料) … *flower seeds (花种子) *earth (泥土) *flowerpots (花盆) … Activities *cut... with… *put... on… … *cook delicious dishes for… *make a healthy menu about... … *grow flowers… *do a research about… … Goals of joining *understand the beauty of… *decorate (装饰)… … *learn cooking skills *become confident … *get close to…. *relax from… … ★★★★★ Your favorite club ______________ Reasons ______________ 要求：1.词数80~100； 2.介绍表格中的三个社团，结合实际情况，可适当发挥； 3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名，校名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 Our Labor Clubs Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club? Now I'd like to introduce some of our labor clubs. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·郴州中考） 在我们的成长过程中，自律起着重要的作用。为了加强青少年的自我约束能力、某英语杂志社正在开展以"争做自律好学生"为主题的征文比赛。请你以How to be a self-disciplined student为题，写一篇英语短文参赛。 要点如下： 1. 在学校：遵守校规，与同学相处融洽…… 2. 在家里：按时完成家庭作业，帮助父母做家务…… 3. 其他方面：多阅读，少玩电子游戏 4. 自律的作用：使我们更健康，更快乐…… 参考词汇：self-discipline n.自律；self-disciplined adj.自律的 要求： 1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数） 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。 How to be a self-disciplined student Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·怀化）健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以"How to keep healthy?"为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。 要求： 1. 文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息； 3. 词数80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 should (√) shouldn't (x) do sports every day refuse to exercise keep a balanced diet have junk food eat fruit and vegetables stay up too late have enough sleep play computer games a lot keep happy sit for a long time . . . . . . How to keep healthy? Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·张家界） 假如你是张家界某青少年宣讲团的李娟，国外友人Peter对首届湖南省旅游发展大会的吉祥物之一 "鲵宝宝 "很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍 "鲵宝宝 "。 写作要点: Name Ni Baobao Appearance (外貌) round face, big eyes… Xilankapu scarf (西兰卡普围巾)… Meaning (象征意义) be friendly… say hi to… protect the animal… … … 写作要求: 不得使用真实姓名和学校名； 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 不少于60词(文章开头及结尾均已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:鲵宝宝 Ni Baobao 吉祥物 mascot 大鲵 giant salamander Dear Peter, I'm happy to hear from you. It's my honor to introduce the mascot to you. In fact, the mascot was designed from the protected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to seeing you in Zhangjiajie. Let's experience Tujia culture and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Yours truly, Li Juan （2023·株洲） 学校英语角即将开展一次以 "朋友 "为主题的演讲活动，请你写一篇演讲稿参加活动，包括以下内容： 你最好的朋友是什么样的？ 你的朋友曾给予过你什么？ 你准备为你的朋友做什么？ 词数90左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2023·长沙）学校英文报正在以"Amazing Hunan"为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： (1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； (3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: transport 交通；convenient 方便的 Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07 书面表达 （2025·湖南）在假期，我们应该更多地陪伴家人还是朋友呢？在学校英语论坛上，同学们以此为话题发帖讨论。假如你是李华，请你跟帖参与讨论。 内容包括： （1）陈述你的观点并说明理由； （2）结合观点，介绍你的假期计划。 注意： （1）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息； （2）写作词数为80个左右。 Spending more time with family or friends? All My page Li Hua Mike 2 minutes ago With such long hours in school on weekdays, I’d like to spend more time with my family. I plan to help babysit my little brother at home. Gina 5 minutes ago I feel like spending more time with friends. We can do what we like together. We are going to discuss projects or be volunteers. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I think we should spend more time with family during holidays. Family members give us unconditional love and support, and holidays are the perfect time to strengthen these bonds. During this vacation, I plan to help my parents with housework and cook meals together. We will also visit my grandparents, as they always enjoy sharing stories with me. Of course, I won’t forget my friends—I will make a video call to them every week and meet for a short outing. But family comes first because they are my lifelong pillars. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据题干要求完成观点陈述和假期计划说明，需包含两个指定要点，注意不要有语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确表达观点； 第二步：给出支持观点的理由； 第三步：具体描述假期计划。 [亮点词汇] ① unconditional love 无条件的爱 ② strengthen bonds 加强联系 ③ lifelong pillars 终身支柱 [高分句型] ①We will also visit my grandparents, as they always enjoy sharing stories with me.（as引导原因状语从句） ②But family comes first because they are my lifelong pillars.（because引导原因状语从句） （2025·长沙）学校英文报正在开展以“Mistakes—steps towards success”为题的讨论。请你根据以下提示，并结合自身感悟，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要求：（1）短文必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥； （2）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Mistakes—steps towards success Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文： Mistakes—steps towards success Mistakes are a part of life. Instead of fearing them, we should see them as chances to grow. When we make mistakes, we can learn a lot from them. They help us understand things better and make our skills stronger. For example, when I tried to learn a new sport, I kept falling. But each time I got up, I got better. Mistakes also build resilience. They teach us to stay positive and never give up. What’s more, mistakes encourage creativity. They push us to find new ways to solve problems. In the end, mistakes are not something to be afraid of. They are steps that lead us to success. 【解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍错误给人们带来的好处； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①make mistakes犯错 ②give up放弃 ③be afraid of害怕 [高分句型] ①When we make mistakes, we can learn a lot from them. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②They are steps that lead us to success. (that引导的定语从句) （2024·湖南）英语课上老师要求以"Sports make us better"为话题开展三人一组的讨论，假定你是李华，将代表小组在全班发言，请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括： （1）介绍你们各自喜欢的运动； （2）谈谈运动对你们的影响。 注意：（1）文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息： （2）写作词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Group One. That's all. Thank you. 【答案】 Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One. Below, on behalf of our group, I will report on our discussion. Cindy’s favorite sport is volleyball. She often plays volleyball with her friends. By playing volleyball, she has become more confident and healthy. Frank loves riding a bicycle best. By riding a bicycle, his body has become stronger and stronger. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. Playing basketball has taught me the spirit of teamwork and never giving up. That's all. Thank you. 【知识点】提纲作文；议论文；表达建议；表达态度 【解析】【分析】这是一篇看图作文，要求以"Sports make us better"为题，写一篇发言稿，依次绍每个组员喜欢什么运动，该运动对他或她有哪些好的或变化的影响。最后再介绍自己喜欢的运动和运动带给我的好处。介绍其他组员的运动时，文章要使用一般现在时，但介绍组员的运动时要使用第三人称单数做主语，介绍自己的运动运动时用第一人称单数做主语。 【知识点】健康与运动、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇讲稿: ②时态:一般现在时为主: ③提示:写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题介绍组内交流结果: 第二步，细节介绍组员们喜爱的运动以及运动带来的影响 [亮点词汇] ①on behalf of 代表 2stronger and stronger 越来越强壮 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] If I have time. I will go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.(条件状语从句) （2024·长沙） 学校英文校刊主编读了第一节（回答问题）中David Smith的故事后，深受触动，发起主题为"What does Music Bring to Me?"的征文。你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下图所示的笔记内容，并作适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： （1）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 What does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. …… 【答案】What does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best things in life are free. Overall, music enriches my life, making it more meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life. 【知识点】命题作文；说明文；音乐作品赏析与文化价值 【解析】【分析】本文是一篇命题作文，要求以What does Music Bring to Me?为题来介绍音乐为自己带来那些益处。通过分析材料内容可知，第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍自己的经历；第三步，书面结束语，表达自己的感受。本文主要时态为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时"，人称以第一人称和第三人称单数为主。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【点评】文章围绕音乐给自己带来了些什么展开阐述。文章结构应清晰，各部分内容之间过渡自然，建议使用亮点词汇take up开始从事；deal with处理；broaden my horizons开阔眼界；deepen my understanding加深我的理解。高分句型Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges.（定语从句）；I hope all of us will value music and make it a part of our life. （省略that的宾语从句）。 （2023·衡阳） 假如你是李强，你校即将举办的"活动周"有四个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你想参加的活动内容并说明其理由。 Project A Sports Day A Volunteer Day A School Trip Day A Talent Show Day Activities ·play basketball ·run ·…… ·visit the old people's home ·clean up Nanhu Park ·…… ·visit Hengyang Museum ·go to the countryside ·…… ·sing a song ·draw ·…… Reasons ·keep healthy ·feel relaxed ·…… ·care for the old ·protect the environment ·…… ·learn a lot ·be close to nature ·…… ·improve myself ·take up a hobby ·…… 要求： 1. 根据上面表格中的信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，需适当发挥； 2. 文中不出现真实的校名和人名等； 3. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚； 4. 词数不少于80。 【答案】 Our school is going to hold an “activity week”. I want to join “A Sports Day” and “A Volunteer Day”. In the first project, there are many activities, such as playing basketball, running, jumping and so on. I think these sports can help me keep healthy and at the same time can make me feel relaxed. In the second project, I will visit the old people’s home, because I want to care for the old and bring them joy. What’s more, I will also clean Nanhu Park. It will help protect the environment and make our life more pleasant. 【知识点】提纲作文；材料作文 【解析】【分析】这是一篇表格类提示作文。以第一人称和一般现在时，介绍自己在学校活动日，所参加的活动和理由。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从所给的四个项目中至少选择两个活动； 第二步，具体介绍想参加的活动和原因。 [亮点词汇] ①such as比如 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③at the same time同时 ④what’s more而且 [高分句型] ①I think these sports can help me keep healthy and at the same time can make me feel relaxed. （省略that的宾语从句） ②I will visit the old people’s home, because I want to care for the old and bring them joy.（because引导的原因状语从句） （2023·永州） 毕业在即，为了解同学们中考结束后两周内的计划，你校就此开展了一次问卷调查。假如你是李华，请根据下表中的信息，给你的外国笔友Tom写一封英文电子邮件，告诉他你的计划并期待他的假期分享。 Activities Reasons 1. learn to make a dish 2. learn to sing a song 3. learn to do a sport 4. practise handwriting 5. travel with classmates 6. read a book 7. learn paper cutting 8. stay with families 　 要求: 1. 文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名； 2. 从表中列举的活动中任意选择1—2 项内容并陈述理由； 3. 词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I'm writing to tell you mine. My plan is to... Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, How are you going? Graduation is coming. Our school did a survey about our plans in two weeks after high school entrance examination. I'm writing to tell you mine. My plan is to learn how to make a dish. When my parents are not at home, I can cook by myself. At the same time, I can cultivate my independence well. By cooking food, I can also help myself and parents eat healthily. I also want to learn to do a sport. One of my favorite athletes is Malong, so I want to learn how to play table tennis. On the one hand, this sport can exercise my body and is good for my eye health. On the other hand, I can make more friends. I'm looking forward to your vacation plans. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】应用文写作；书信、电子邮件 【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态为"一般现在时"；根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。写作步骤：第一步，开头文章已给，介绍写邮件的背景；第二步，具体阐述自己的两项计划，并详细陈述理由；第三步，最后结尾，期待对方的分享。 【点评】例文按照写作步骤，围绕"假期计划"展开，时态、人称正确，句子流畅、自然。其中①At the same time同时；②On the one hand...On the other hand.….一方面……另一方面….…；③be good for对……有好处，等短语的运用恰到好处。其中My plan is to learn how to make a dish.(动词不定式作表语)；及One of my favorite athletes is Malong，so I want to learn how to play table tennis.这两个句子的应用为文章增色不少。 （2023·岳阳） 为了培养学生的劳动意识，增强他们的动手能力，学校打破年级限制，成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示，以"Our Labor Clubs"(我们的劳动社团)为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍以下的三个劳动社团，并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团，详细说明喜欢的理由。 　 1. Paper cutting 2. Cooking 3. Flower growing Materials and tools *scissors *red paper … *a pot *bowls *a knife *ingredients (调料) … *flower seeds (花种子) *earth (泥土) *flowerpots (花盆) … Activities *cut... with… *put... on… … *cook delicious dishes for… *make a healthy menu about... … *grow flowers… *do a research about… … Goals of joining *understand the beauty of… *decorate (装饰)… … *learn cooking skills *become confident … *get close to…. *relax from… … ★★★★★ Your favorite club ______________ Reasons ______________ 要求：1.词数80~100； 2.介绍表格中的三个社团，结合实际情况，可适当发挥； 3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名，校名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 Our Labor Clubs Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club? Now I'd like to introduce some of our labor clubs. 【答案】Our Labor Clubs Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club? Now I'd like to introduce some of our labor clubs. We have a Paper Cutting Club. We need scissors, red paper and knives. We can cut red paper with scissors and knives into different shapes. We can put our works on the display board. We can understand the beauty of Chinese culture and decorate classrooms with them. We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. We can cook delicious dishes for parents and friends. We can make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. In the Cooking Club, we can learn cooking skills and become confident about ourselves. We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We can grow flowers and do a research about flowers and plants. We can get close to nature and relax from enjoying the beauty of flowers. Among them, Cooking Club is my favorite because I like cooking and I want to cook for my parents to make them happy. 【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文 【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文和命题作文写作，要求以"Our Labor Clubs"为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。首先介绍学校劳动社团；然后，具体介绍三个社团需要的工具，活动和参加目标；最后，介绍自己最喜欢的劳动社团及原因。时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。 【点评】这篇短文详细、全面地阐明了对劳动社团的介绍，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：the beauty of......的美丽；a healthy diet健康饮食；do a research about做一个关于......的研究。等以及句型结构，如：We can get close to nature and relax from enjoying the beauty of flowers. (and连接并列结构)；Among them, Cooking Club is my favorite because l like cooking and I want to cook for my parents to make them happy. (because引导的原因状语从句和and连接的并列句)。 （2023·郴州中考） 在我们的成长过程中，自律起着重要的作用。为了加强青少年的自我约束能力、某英语杂志社正在开展以"争做自律好学生"为主题的征文比赛。请你以How to be a self-disciplined student为题，写一篇英语短文参赛。 要点如下： 1. 在学校：遵守校规，与同学相处融洽…… 2. 在家里：按时完成家庭作业，帮助父母做家务…… 3. 其他方面：多阅读，少玩电子游戏 4. 自律的作用：使我们更健康，更快乐…… 参考词汇：self-discipline n.自律；self-disciplined adj.自律的 要求： 1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数） 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。 How to be a self-disciplined student Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life. 【答案】How to be a self-disciplined student     Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life. How can we be self-disciplined students?     First of all, we should follow school rules and get on well with our classmates at school. Secondly, we should finish our homework on time and help our parents with housework at home. Thirdly, we should read more and play computer games less.     Self-discipline is good for us in many ways. It makes our life easier, happier and healthier. Our life and study are so well organized that we can save a lot of time. What’s more, being self-disciplined helps us prepare for a better and brighter future. 【知识点】命题作文；自我提升 【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。某英语杂志社正在开展以"争做自律好学生"为主题的征文比赛，请你以How to be a self-disciplined student为题，写一篇英语短文参赛。文章要包含要点提示中的所有信息，可以适当发挥。主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称，注意句子之间衔接要连贯，符合逻辑关系，符合英文表达习惯。 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以How to be a self-disciplined student为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出如何成为自律的学生； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“在学校、在家里和其他方面”重点介绍； 第三步，介绍自律的作用。 [亮点词汇] ①First of all首先 ②get on well with与……相处融洽 ③on time按时 ④prepare for为……做准备 [高分句型] What’s more, being self-disciplined helps us prepare for a better and brighter future.（动名词作主语） （2023·怀化）健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以"How to keep healthy?"为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。 要求： 1. 文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息； 3. 词数80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 should (√) shouldn't (x) do sports every day refuse to exercise keep a balanced diet have junk food eat fruit and vegetables stay up too late have enough sleep play computer games a lot keep happy sit for a long time . . . . . . How to keep healthy? Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. 【答案】One possible version: How to keep healthy? Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. We should do sports every day. We shouldn't refuse to exercise. Running for an hour every day is good for health. We should keep a balanced diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn't have junk food, because they are bad for health. We had better not stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is helpful. We shouldn't paly computer games a lot. It is bad for our eyes. Sitting for a long time is also bad for our health. We may feel pain in my shoulder and back. We should have a happy mood. We can keep happy by listening to music and talking to our friends. 【知识点】应用文写作；材料作文；身体健康 【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文写作。首先，引出本文"如何保持健康"的主题；然后根据提示材料提出建议。时态以一般现在时为主。人称主要是第一人称复数为主，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 【点评】这篇短文详细、全面地阐明了自己对如何保持健康提出了自己的看法，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语、包含宾语从句和定语从句的准确使用，为文章增色不少。如：pay attention to注意；keep healthy保持健康；refuse to do sth拒绝做某事；keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食；be bad for对.......有坏处。等等以及句型结构：it is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.(动词不定式作主语)We shouldn 't have junk food, because they are bad for health. (because引导原因状语从句)等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。 （2023·张家界） 假如你是张家界某青少年宣讲团的李娟，国外友人Peter对首届湖南省旅游发展大会的吉祥物之一 "鲵宝宝 "很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍 "鲵宝宝 "。 写作要点: Name Ni Baobao Appearance (外貌) round face, big eyes… Xilankapu scarf (西兰卡普围巾)… Meaning (象征意义) be friendly… say hi to… protect the animal… … … 写作要求: 不得使用真实姓名和学校名； 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 不少于60词(文章开头及结尾均已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:鲵宝宝 Ni Baobao 吉祥物 mascot 大鲵 giant salamander Dear Peter, I'm happy to hear from you. It's my honor to introduce the mascot to you. In fact, the mascot was designed from the protected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander. I'm looking forward to seeing you in Zhangjiajie. Let's experience Tujia culture and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Yours truly, Li Juan 【答案】参考范文: Dear Peter, I'm happy to hear from you. It's my honor to introduce the mascot to you. In fact, the mascot was designed from the protected animal in Zhangjiajie, giant salamander. We call it Ni Baobao. It has a round smiling face with big eyes. And it has a small nose and a small mouth. In my opinion, it is a little fat but cute. What's more, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands for Tujia culture. Look, it is waving its little hands and saying hi to you. It is friendly, isn't it? Besides, do you know why we call it Baobao? As far as I can see, it aims to protect the animal. If you come to Zhang Jiajie, you can't miss it. I'm looking forward to seeing you in Zhangjiajie. Let's experience Tujia culture and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Yours truly, Li Juan 【知识点】提纲作文；书信、电子邮件 【解析】【分析】这是一篇表格类和提示作文。主要以一般现在时和第三人称根据所给的提示从外貌和象征意义介绍"鲵宝宝"。这是一篇书信，先寒暄，再开始介绍。首先介绍姓名、外貌；再介绍象征意义；最后表达自己的看法。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。in one's opinion ；look forward to期盼；What's more, it wears a Xilankaupu scarf which stands for Tujia culture.(which引导的限制性定语从句) Besides, do you know why we call it Baobao?(why引导的宾语从句)，还运用了and，What's more，look等使上下文衔接的更好。 （2023·株洲） 学校英语角即将开展一次以 "朋友 "为主题的演讲活动，请你写一篇演讲稿参加活动，包括以下内容： 你最好的朋友是什么样的？ 你的朋友曾给予过你什么？ 你准备为你的朋友做什么？ 词数90左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。 【答案】例文 What's the meaning of a friend to you? Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will listen to you when you're sad. Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will give you a gift on your birthday. But to me, a friend is someone I can depend on and I love. When I was eight years old, I met my best friend, Li Mei. Her personality was different from mine. She's very active and brave. When I was sad, she would sit next to me and comfort me. When I was happy, she could share my joy. What's more, she always encourages me. She told me not to give up when I met any difficulty. She advised me to have another try if I wanted to give up halfway. So far, we have been friends for eight years. Although we were not classmates anymore, I believe that we'll still be good friends forever. What's more, I will prepare a birthday party for her to give her a surprise. 【知识点】命题作文；演讲稿 【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。根据要求以朋友为题写一篇演讲稿。由题意可知该文内容包括三点：1 你最好的朋友是什么样的？2 你的朋友曾给予过你什么？3 你准备为你的朋友做什么？动笔前先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，高级词汇如so far；next to；be different from ；give up；what's more等以及高级句型结构，如 Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will listen to you when you're sad. Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will give you a gift on your birthday. 的运用为文章增色不少；使文章显得更加自然，流畅，显得更有档次。 （2023·长沙）学校英文报正在以"Amazing Hunan"为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： (1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）； (3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: transport 交通；convenient 方便的 Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. 【答案】One possible version: Amazing Hunan Hunan is a lovable and livable place. Let me tell you something about Hunan. First, there are lots of places of interest, such as Zhangjiajie. Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature. Second, the high-speed train is convenient and user-friendly, so you can go to Hunan by high-speed train. Third, Hunan cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway. If you like noodles, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering rice noodles in Hunan. What's more, the people in Hunan are helpful and warm-hearted. You will feel at home here. Welcome to Hunan. 【知识点】材料作文 【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文，本文要求按照所给提示介绍湖南的相关信息，写作中要包含湖南的名胜古迹，交通工具，美食和人等，根据材料内容可知时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第二人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。 【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将湖南的名胜古迹，交通工具，美食和人等信息逐一进行了陈述，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，连贯，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语如let sb do sth让某人做某事，lots of许多，places of interest名胜古迹，such as例如，consist of由......组成，kinds of各种各样的，feel at home感觉宾至如归等以及句型结构，如Zhangjiajie is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加自然流畅。 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$