内容正文:
作业24 读后续写
1.个人成长
Writing1(2025全国二卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:向 外 国 人 解
释中国人名字的发
音和背后的意义
关键词:
Pronunciation
词数:283 建议时间:24分钟
“Whatisyourname? ”isaquestionmostfrequentlyaskedwhenpeoplemeetforthefirsttime.
Butforme,itwasthefirstchalengeIencounteredasaninternationalstudentinIreland.
ThepronunciationsystemoftheChineselanguageisquitedifferentfromthatofEnglish.FornG
ativespeakersofEnglish,someChinesewordsareratherdifficulttopronounce.MygivennameQiG
uyu(秋雨),forinstance,happenedtobeagreatchalengeformanyofthem.EverytimeIgaveaselfG
introduction,Ihadtoexplainhowtopronouncemynameatleastfivetimes,yettheystilcouldnot
sayitthewayIdid.
Onceinalecture,theprofessortriedrepeatingmynameaftermeoverandoverinfrontofthirty
classmates.IrealydidnotknowwhetherIshouldcontinuecorrectinghimorsimplydropthematter.
Ifearedthatmyclassmatesmightgrowtiredofmyeffortsorevenlosepatiencewithme.Afteral,I
didcareabouthowotherswouldthinkofme.IrealizedthatifIdidntstop,theentirelecturewould
beruined.“Itsokay,professor,”Ishrugged(耸肩).Theawkwardmomentendedwiththeclass
eruptingintolaughter.Iforcedasmile,unsurehowtorespondfurther.
Afterthatincident,Istoppedactingasa“Chineseteacher”.Insteadofcorrectingotherswhen
theywerestrugglingtopronouncemyname,Ijustsmiledandnoddedapprovingly.Thisapproach
sparedmethediscomfortofhavingtooverGexplain.However,Isoonfoundthatbydoingso,Imight
belosingsomethingmoreimportant:theopportunitytoshareasmalpartofmyculturalidentity.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Inaclassdiscussion,Iwasinvitedtoexplainthemeaningofmyname.
Manyofmyclassmatesgotinterestedandcameuptomeafterclass.
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英语
Writing2(2025浙江1月卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:12岁的 Kevin冷
静果断处理突发事件
关键词:
trouble
词数:338 建议时间:24分钟
Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.
Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hil,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshad
raisedthe12GyearGoldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodo
riskythings.Mrs.Hil wasasleep.Kevinsighed(叹息)andhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhapG
pen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.
Mrs.HilsfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Greenshouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehad
bothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheir
frontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.Withhisheartinhis
mouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hilshomephoneandcaledthepolice.
Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithwhateverhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevin
decidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hilshouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.GrabG
bingabranchfromacutGdowntree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow.“Stoprightthere! Youmust
leaverightnow!”hecaledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.
Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief.“Hey,
kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfatherswatchwashere,”
heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.
Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoed(回响)intheair.ThemanstoodupinapanG
ic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfolowedoutandtoldthe
arrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.
KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hilshouse.Somehowhewasntsurehehaddonetherightthing.
“Whatifhehastoldthetruth?”hethoughttohimself.Themanswordssoundedprettyconvincing.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.
KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.
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第五部分 写作
Writing3(2024浙江1月卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:运 用 心 术 解
决日常生活难题
关键词:way 词数:324 建议时间:24分钟
Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajor
headachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.ItwasasixGstorybuilding.Oneach
floor,halwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachersoffices.
Somewhereinthebuilding,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.
Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.
Althedifferenthalwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.She
decidedthatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplace
didntexist.
InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunone
milearoundthetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewas
nothingshefearedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,“amile”wasusedtodescribelong
distances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometohergrandfathers,andthatalwaysseemedlikealong
way,eveninacar!
WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(哨子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,
whilesomeofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactualyfelbehind.“Itsjustthebeginning,”she
thought.“Ilcomeinlastforsure.”
SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Eva
startedusingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword“mile”.Instead,shefocused
onreachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingto
thespotwherethetrackcurved(拐弯).Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.
Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.
Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.
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英语
Writing4(2023新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:得遇良师,
挑战自己,爱上写作
关键词:writing 词数:324 建议时间:24分钟
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.I
saidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymy
secondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadalowedmetopresG
entmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedaltheparts.Noone
laughedharderthanhedid.
So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail? Hisreply:“BeG
causeIloveyourstories.Ifyourewilingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”
Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.
IchosePaulRevereshorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwho
rodeahorseatnighton April18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswere
coming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorsesmouth.Notabriliantidea,butfunny;and
unlikelytobeanyoneelseschoice.
Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight? Didhegettired? Havedoubts? Didhe
wanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,like
Revereshorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspeling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrect
mygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfGdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewof
them.
WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,
writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinalyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinG
ninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidntwin,Iwouldntcare.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.
Iwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresentation.
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第五部分 写作
2.亲情友情
Writing(2025全国一卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:兄弟间
的冰释前嫌
关键词:brother 词数:313 建议时间:25分钟
MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmalgatheringinthe
earlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.
Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadntcounted
on:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50Gpoundbaloffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasily
knockovermyniecessmalboysandmysixGmonthGoldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowed
up,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.
Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthin
thebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.
Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.
Itwasanawkwardmoment.IdidntwantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmy
brotherwasnthappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventualy,mybrotherdecidedtoleave
ratherthanforcetheissue.
Afewdayspassed,andIhadntheardanythingfrommybrother.ItextedhimandexpressedwiG
shesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise-ashock,actualy:“Notachance.”
Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afteral,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Wel,
helgetoverit,Ireasoned.
Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinking
heshouldcalfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmy
brothersshoes.HewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirtyGfiveyearshadpassedawayafew
monthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrothersdoor.
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英语
3.助人为乐
Writing(2024新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:与出租车司
机的诚信之约
关键词:Promise 词数:350 建议时间:25分钟
ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoVienG
naandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyan
hourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbusto
Prague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedinto
thefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.
ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadntheardofthe
busstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthe
stillookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupa
friend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphone
downandstartedthecar.
Finaly,withjusttwominutestospareweroledintothebusstation.Thankfuly,therewasa
longqueue(队 列)stil waitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turned
around,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.
JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywalet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpuled
outmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.
AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.
Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghalofthebusstation.There,attheenG
trance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmy
cardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcaledGunteraspromised.
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第五部分 写作
4.人与动物
Writing(2023浙江卷)
新鲜度: 难度: 体裁:记叙文
话题:作者与
蜂鸟的故事
关键词:hummingbid 词数:337 建议时间:25分钟
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
IwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriendsfarminwesternWashington.IparkedmycaroutG
sidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.A
noiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperately
tryingtoescape.ShewascoveredinspiderGwebs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.She
ceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.
Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebroken
windowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closG
ingthedoorsecurelybehindme.
WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.
IremovedthestickyspiderGwebsthatcoveredherheadandwings.Stil,shemadenoattempttofly.
Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired? Ortoothirsty?
AsIcarriedheruptheblackberryGlinedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebeG
gantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.
Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistiny
creaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.
Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthe
window.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.IwasstandingbythecarwhenahumG
mingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntil
shecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcalandwasgone.
Foramoment,al werespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“ShemusthavecometosaygoodGbye.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.开头已给出.
Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.
Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.
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[参考范文]
DevelopmentofTransportinChina
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port,ChinesetransporthasseenanenormousdevelopG
ment.Firstly,sharedbicycleshavebecomeapopularchoice
incities,providinganecoGfriendlyandcostGeffectivewayto
travelshortdistances.Secondly,thehighGspeedtrainnetG
workhasrevolutionizedlongGdistancetravel,significantly
reducingtraveltimeacrossthecountry.Finaly,theriseof
newenergyvehiclesreflectsChinascommitmenttosusG
tainabledevelopmentandreducingcarbonemissions.These
advancementshighlightChinasprogressincreatingamodG
ern,efficient,andenvironmentalyfriendlytransportsysG
tem.
3)咨询信
Writing
[语篇解读] 本篇书面表达是一篇应用文.要求考生给
外教 Chris写一封邮件,询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍加
拿大体育运动的文章的进展,并提醒交稿时间.
[参考范文]
DearChris,
Hopethisemailfindsyou wel! Last month,you
kindlyagreedtowriteanarticleaboutsportsinCanada,
andwereallookingforwardtoreadingit.
Im writingtopolitelyinquireabouttheprogressof
thearticle.WouldyoumindlettingmeknowhowitsgoG
ing? Also,couldIremindyouthatthedeadlineforsubmisG
sionisthisFriday,June14th? YourinsightsintoCanadian
sports wil surelyenrich ourreadersunderstanding of
globalsportsculture,whichwilbeofbenefittous.
Thankyouagainforyoursupport!
Bestwishes,
LiHua
(3)其他类:网贴
网贴
Writing
[审题分析]
英
文
跟
帖
审体裁 应用文(网站)
审人称
和时态
以第一人称为主,
第三人称为辅
以一般现在时为主
审要点
六项提名的概括
你的推荐
推荐理由
[参考范文]
Hieveryone! Im LiJinfrom Chenguang Middle
School.Gladtojointheforumdiscussion! ThesixnominaG
tedentriesforthecosmicGbounddiscareimpressivelydiG
verse,coveringlanguage (“helo”invarioustongues),
iconicarchitecture(theGreatWalandpyramids),tradiG
tionalart(PekingOpera),naturalharmony(animalsounds),
andmoderntech(ChinashighGspeedtrains).Together,they
mirrorhumanityscreativity,history,andbondwithculG
tureandnature.
IbelieveChinashighGspeedtrainsstandout.More
thanadvancedtransport,theyrebridgesunitingcitiesand
people.Withspeedsupto350km/h,theyverevolutionized
travel,shrinkingdistancestohours.Theirvastnetwork
symbolizeshumaninnovationandthedrivetofosterunity
andsharedgrowth.Forextraterrestrialcivilizations,theyd
highlightourambitiontobuildaconnectedworld.
Inconclusion,whileal nominationsarevaluable,
highGspeedtrainspowerfulyrepresentourabilitytoturn
dreamsintoaunifiedfuture.
作业24 读后续写
1.个人成长
Writing1
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了作者作
为国际学生在爱尔兰因中文名字发音难而遭遇挑战,之后
在一次课堂讨论中分享名字含义,意识到分享文化身份重
要性,并借此与同学增进文化理解的故事.
[参考范文]
Inaclassdiscussion,Iwasinvitedtoexplainthe
meaningofmyname.Standingup,IfeltamixofnerG
vousnessandexcitement.“Myname,Qiuyu,combinesthe
charactersforautumnandraininChinese,”Ibegan,my
voicesteady.“Autumnrepresentsharvestand maturity,
whilerainsymbolizesnourishmentandgrowth.Together,
theyembodyatimeofabundanceandrenewal.”AsI
spoke,Inoticedtheraptattentionofmyclassmates,their
eyesreflectingcuriosityandrespect.Itwasamomentof
connection,abridgebuiltbetweenculturesthroughthe
simpleactofsharingmyname.
Manyofmyclassmatesgotinterestedandcameupto
meafterclass.Theysurroundedme,theirquestionspouG
ringoutlikeastream.“Whatothernameshavebeautiful
meaningsinChinese?”“Canyouteachushowtowriteour
namesinChinesecharacters?”Ismiled,feelingawarmth
spreadthroughme.Itookoutapieceofpaperandbeganto
sketchoutcharacters,explainingeachstrokeanditssignifG
icance.Throughthisinteraction,IrealizedthatbyembraG
cingmyculturalidentity,Iwasnotonlypreserving my
heritagebutalsoenrichingthelivesofthosearoundme.It
wasasmalyetmeaningfulsteptowardsfosteringcultural
understandingandappreciation.
Writing2
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述 Kevin在父母
不在家时,看到一男子闯入格林夫妇家,他报警并阻止男
子,男子被捕后他怀疑自己是否做对.
[参考范文]
WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalk
tothem.Heexplainedhowhehadwitnessedthestrangeman
enteringtheirhouseandhowhewasarrested.Mr.and Mrs.
Greenlistenedattentively,withamixtureofsurpriseandgratiG
tudeontheirfaces.Mrs.GreenhuggedKevin,thankinghimfor
hisbravery.Mr.Green,however,lookedthoughtful.Heasked
Kevintodescribethemanindetailandthenrevealedthatthe
manwasindeedhisyoungerbrother,whohadcometoretrievea
watchtheirfatherhadleftbehind.Kevinseyeswidenedin
shock.
KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfound
tothepolicestation.Ontheway,Mr.Greenexplained
thatthewatchwasafamilyheirloom,passeddownfrom
generationtogeneration.Atthepolicestation,theyexG
plainedthesituationtotheofficers,whoweresurprised
butunderstanding.Theman,whohadbeenreleasedafter
hisidentitywasverified,waswaitingoutside.Hesmiled
weaklyatKevin,whofeltamixofembarrassmentandreG
lief.Mr.Greenhandedoverthewatchtohisbrotherwith
apatontheback,andtheyalagreedtokeepintouch.
Kevinlearnedanimportantlessonthatday:alwaysverify
thefactsbeforetakingaction,butneverhesitatetohelp
thoseinneed.
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详解详析
Writing3
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了高中生 Eva
因为方向感不强,经常在学校里迷路,在一次体育课上教
练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候 Eva发现跟着树的影子
能找到方向,她通过这个方法重新认识到了校园.
[参考范文]
WhenCoachPittsaid “Nicework!”toheratthefinG
ishline,Evawassurprised.Inthevastexpanseofher
school,agirlwithpoordirectionalskilsstruggledtonaviG
gateandoftengotlost.Oneday,duringgymclass,sheobG
servedauniquewaytofindherway-folowingtheshadG
owsoftrees.Asthesuncastitsrays,thegirlnoticedhow
theshadowscreatedpatternsontheground,guidingher
path.Shetookaleapoffaithandfolowedtheshadows,
surprisingherselfwitheachturnandstretch.Herefforts
werenoticedbytheteacher,whopraisedherinnovative
thinking.
Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththe
schoolbuilding.Sheusedtheshadowstonavigatethe
schoolhalways,find herclasses,and evenlocatethe
schoolsvariousfacilities.Thisnewfoundskil notonly
helpedthegirlnavigateherschoolbutalsoinstiledinhera
senseofconfidenceandadventure.Shelearnedexcitedly
thatwithalittlecreativityandobservation,anychalenge
couldbeovercome.Andwitheachstepshetook,sheleft
behindalegacyofinspirationforthosewhofolowedinher
footsteps,knowingthatevenwithoutaclearsenseofdirecG
tion,theresalwaysawaytofindonesway.
Writing4
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,
therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirst
prizeinthewritingcontestandthatthere wouldbean
awardpresentationintwodays.Iwassohappytohearthe
newsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknew
youdwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitG
edly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothe
stagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomy
teacher.Isaid,“Itsyouwhomakemefalinlovewith
writing,mysocialstudiesteacher.WithoutyourrecogniG
tionandguidance,Icouldnthave writtenthisarticle.
Againthankyouverymuch!”
IwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresenG
tation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,
hesaid“Congratulations! Youareagoodwriter,sokeep
writing.”“YouknowIdidntlikewritingbefore,butnowI
amcrazyaboutit! I wil try my besttocreategood
works.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,Ihavewrittenmany
goodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.IowemysucG
cesstomysocialstudiesteacherwhoisabeaconinmylife
ontheroadtowriting.
2.亲情友情
Writing
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者因担心
弟弟的狗 Toby影响聚会,要求弟弟看好狗,后因天气变化
导致弟弟提前离开并心生芥蒂.两个月后作者意识到自
己的过错,主动带着妻子做的饼干登门道歉,最终兄弟俩
和解的故事,展现了亲情中理解与包容的重要性.
[参考范文]
Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Ihadbeenso
focusedonkeepingthepartyundercontrolthatIfailedto
considerhowimportantToby wasto mybrotherduring
thisdifficulttime.Mypridehadkeptmefromreaching
out,andnowmonthshadpassedwithoutaproperconverG
sation.Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthima
voicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorandaskingif
wecouldmeet.Tomyrelief,hecaledbackthenextday,
andweagreedtogettogethersoon.
Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmy
brothersdoor.Heopeneditwithasurprisedsmile,and
foramoment,neitherofusspoke.Thenwehugged -
something wehadntdonesincebeforehis wifepassed
away.WesatontheporchwithTobyrestingbesideus,
andIhandedhimtheboxofbiscuits.“Thankyou,”hesaid
quietly.Wetalkedforhours,laughing,rememberingold
times,andslowlyrebuilding whathadbeenlost.AsI
watchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrothersleg,I
knewwewerefinalyonthepathtohealing.
3.助人为乐
Writing
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在一次
因风暴延误的旅途中,匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一
班去布拉格的公共汽车.司机冈特不熟悉车站位置,通过
电话求助后顺利抵达.到达时作者却发现自己没带现金,
尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功,而车站的取款机也故
障了.
[参考范文]
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.WithG
outhesitation,hereachedintohisownwaletandhanded
mesomecash.“Here,takeitbecauseIthinkyouneedsome
cashtopayforthebus,”hesaid,therebeingtrustinhis
eyes.Iwastouchedbyhisgenerosity,tearsofgratitude
streamingdownmycheeks.Havingpromisedtopayback
hismoneyandwrittendownhistelephonenumber,IboarG
dedthebusjustintime.IwavedatGunterthroughthe
window,mouthing “Thankyou.”againandagain.His
warmsmilewasthelastthingIsawwiththebuspulingaway.
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,Icalled
Gunteraspromised.Iwantedtorepayhimandproperly
expressmygratitude.Heansweredthephonecheerfuly,
rememberingmeimmediately.Wearrangedto meetata
caféneartheairport.When we met,Ihandedhimthe
moneyIowed,alongwithasmalgiftfromPraguetoshow
myappreciation.GunterwasdelightedandwespenttheafG
ternoonchattingaboutourlives,hobbiesandtravels.What
hadstartedasastressfuleveningturnedintoawonderful
friendship,althankstoGunterskindnessandtrustinme.
4.人与动物
Writing
[参考范文]
Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Asmy
carnearedit(时间状语从句)mythoughtsdriftedbackto
themomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespiG
derGwebs(定语从句).Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.
Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindow
wasnowheretobefound(主语从句).Leavingthehouse,I
couldnthelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow(宾语从
句).
IwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdapG
peared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturned
aroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.It
seemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme(主语从句),its
beadyeyeslockedon mineasiftryingtoconveysome
deep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweat
thesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknew
thatIwouldalwayscherishthememories(宾语从句)we
shared(定语从句)asIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway
(时间状语从句).
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