Unit 2 Home Sweet Home 温馨之家（单元写作精练）英语人教版2024八年级上册

Unit 2 Home Sweet Home 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元以“温馨之家”为话题，此类话题常见的写作角度涉及： 话题①课本19页3c要求给朋友写邮件就如何装修房子寻求帮助，在进行此类写作时，需要留意邮件的格式规范。 话题②课本20页4a要求以家庭中不可少的家务劳动为写作话题，此话题写作体裁多以议论文为主，谈论对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由以及讨论中学生是否应该做家务的书面表达是常考察的。 与话题①相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 装饰动作：decorate, paint, hang（悬挂）, stick（粘贴） 装饰物品：poster, fairy lights（串灯）, curtains（窗帘）, rug（地毯）, photo frame（相框） 装修区域：apartment, living room, kitchen, bedroom 风格描述：cute, modern, lovely, colorful 短语 decorate the house,buy some flowers, make a poster, go shopping, bring a pair of scissors, buy glue, bring a brush, make paper cuttings, bring a painting put in a brighter light, paint the house blue,a pair of scissors, some tools for DIY, tidy up 句型 ① Here are clear instructions. 这里有清楚的说明。 ② I'd like to have my new house decorated. 我想装修一下我的新房子。 ③ You'd better get some tools. 你最好拿一些工具。 ④When you do DIY, you make, repair or decorate things yourself instead of paying someone to do it. 当你自己动手做的时候，你会自己制作、修理或者装饰这些东西，而不是付钱让别人去做。 ⑤ You can always rearrange the living - room the way you like. 你可以随时按自己的喜好重新布置这个客厅。 名言 ①A house is made of walls and beams; a home is built with love and dreams. 房子是砖瓦堆砌，家是爱与梦想筑成。 ②Beauty is in the details. 美在细节中。 与话题②相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 housework（家务），chores（家务琐事），responsibility（责任），independence（独立性），waste（浪费）。 短语 share chores（分担家务），do the dishes（洗碗），take out the rubbish（倒垃圾），fold the clothes（叠衣服），sweep the floor（扫地），make the bed（铺床），clean the living - room（打扫客厅），help out with（帮忙；帮助…解决困难） 句型 ① 1 like...but I hate...我喜.…..但我讨厌...... ②Different students have different opinions about... 关于.…..，不同的学生有不同的观点。 ③What’s more, it can also help us...除此之外，它还能帮助我们..…. ④Could you please sweep the floor? 你能扫下地吗？ ⑤I think children should help parents with housework. 我认为孩子应该帮父母做家务。 ⑥It is important for children to do chores. 对孩子来说做家务是重要的。 ⑦I think it’s our duty to help our parents with some chores.我认为帮助父母做一些家务是我们的责任。 名言 ①Helping parents is helping ourselves. 帮助父母就是帮助自己。 ②When you help your parents, you grow as a person. 在帮助父母的过程中，你也在成长。 写作步骤 懂 话题① 一、Before-writing 1、清楚写邮件的格式 称呼（Dear...）→ 开头问候 → 正文 → 结尾祝福 → 署名 2、思考以下问题 1）If you could decorate your room, what changes would you make? 2）Would you ask friends for help? 3、 搭建写作框架 开头 问候朋友，说明写信目的 Hope you’re doing well! I’m planning to decorate my room and I was wondering if you could help me. 正文 1. 描述装饰计划（如风格、颜色）； 2. 具体请求（如帮忙搬运家具、提供创意）； We want to paint the wall blue. Could you help me make a poster? I would like to put up the paper cutting. 结尾 表达感谢与期待回复 Your help would mean a lot to me. Let me know what you think. 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。注意邮件格式（如邮件称呼大小写）和语法问题（如请求句型使用是否得当）。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换邮件，标注亮点表达，提出补充建议（如增加具体装饰细节）。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，强调礼貌用语和清晰表达的重要性。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 话题② 一、Before-writing 1. Tick the chores you do at home. Chores Tick Chores Tick take our the rubbish do the laundry do the dishes fold the clothes walk the dog sweep the floor make the bed clean the bathroom help to cook 2. Ask yourself the following questions. 1). How often do you do chores? 2). What do you think about doing chores? 3). Do you think teenagers should help with housework? 3、 搭建写作框架 开头 表达你对中学生是否应该帮助父母做家务的观点 Different students have different opinions about doing housework. 支持观点：I strongly believe that... / It’s necessary to... 反对观点：Some students may think... / However,... 正文 用论据证明自己的观点： 支持的理由或者反对的理由。 There are three reasons, first,....Second, .... What’s more,...(on the one hand, .... On the other hand,....) 可使用连接词：First of all, Moreover, What’s more, 结尾 对自己的论点进行总结 In a word, I think.... All in all, it’s ...to.... 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和could句型 。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换作文，标注亮点表达，提出补充论据。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，强调礼貌用语和清晰表达的重要性。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 （一） 假设你是张华，收到了好友赵敏的电子邮件。在邮件中，赵敏认为青少年应该专注于学业，不需要承担家务。请结合邮件内容，回复一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点并说明理由。   Dear Zhang Hua,   How’s everything? I saw a survey today saying many teenagers do housework. But I think it’s unnecessary. We’re already busy with exams and homework. Don’t you agree? What’s your opinion?   Zhao Min   要求：   1)语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；   2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；   3)70词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。   Ⅰ 思维导图 1)观点表达：In my view, teenagers should 1 .   2)理由阐述：   First, doing chores helps 2 .   Second, it teaches 3 .   For example, 4 .   3)总结呼吁：Therefore, 5 .   Ⅱ 谋篇布局   第一步：审题。人称 6 ；时态 7 .   第二步：列提纲   第一段：表明立场（支持青少年做家务）。   第二段：分点说明理由（培养责任感、提升生活技能等）。   第三段：总结观点，鼓励行动。   Ⅲ 遣词造句   1)Doing chores can improve your time management. Doing chores can build teamwork. (用“not only... but also”改写)   8 2)It makes you understand your parents’ efforts. (用“疑问词+不定式”结构升格)   9 3)Teenagers should focus on both study and life skills. (用“as well as”升格)   10 Ⅳ 使用连接词（Moreover, For instance, In conclusion）增强逻辑性。 Dear Zhao Min,   Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I have a different opinion.   Looking forward to your reply.   Yours, Zhang Hua 答案： 1．观点表达：In my view, teenagers should do housework.故填do housework。 2．理由阐述：First, doing chores helps develop responsibility.故填develop responsibility。 3．Second, it teaches how to appreciate others’ work.故填how to appreciate others’ work。 4．For instance, cleaning your room teaches you to organize things.故填cleaning your room teaches you to organize things。 5．总结呼吁：Therefore, balancing study and chores is key to growth.故填balancing study and chores is key to growth。 6．人称：第一人称、第二人称。故填：第一人称、第二人称。 7．时态：一般现在时。故填：一般现在时。 8．句意：做家务可以改善你的时间管理。做家务可以建立团队合作。用“not only... but also”改写为“Doing chores can not only improve your time management but also build teamwork.”。故填Doing chores can not only improve your time management but also build teamwork. 9．句意：这会让你理解父母的努力。用“疑问词+不定式”结构升格为“It teaches how to understand your parents’ efforts.”。故填It teaches how to understand your parents’ efforts. 10．句意：青少年应该同时注重学习和生活技能。用“as well as”升格为“Teenagers should focus on study as well as life skills.”。故填Teenagers should focus on study as well as life skills. 例文 Dear Zhao Min,   Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I have a different opinion. In my view, teenagers should do housework.   First, doing chores helps develop responsibility. For instance, cleaning your room teaches you to organize things. Moreover, it improves life skills like cooking. Second, it teaches how to appreciate others’ work. When you clean dishes, you realize your parents’ daily efforts.   Therefore, balancing study and chores is key to growth. Let’s try to help at home!   Looking forward to your reply.   Yours,   Zhang Hua 【解析】1．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，表明立场； 第二步、说明理由； 第三步、总结观点，鼓励行动并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①for instance例如 ②be key to………的关键 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①When you clean dishes, you realize your parents’ daily efforts.(when引导时间状语从句) （二） 假如你是Jimmy，你的好朋友Sam要搬进新居，他想向你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识，回复邮件表达你的建议。 Hi, Jimmy, You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I often feel tired and stressed afer school. What color should I paint the wall? What can make me feel energetic? Could you please offer me some advice? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Sam 要求：1.要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ； 2.70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. ____________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jimmy 【答案】One possible version: Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. Blue can bring peace to your mind and body. As a Grade 9 student, you always have much homework to do and feel stressed easily. So blue is the best colour. As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. You’d better put some green plants in your bedroom. They can make the room full of life and make you feel energetic. Hope my advice will be of some help and you will enjoy your new life! Yours, Jimmy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，给出关于卧室装修的详细建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①too much太多 ②had better do sth.最好做某事 ③full of充满 [高分句型] ①A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. (so连接的并列句，宾语从句) ②As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. (原因状语从句) 题型通关 练 1、学校即将举办“家庭生活美好瞬间”摄影征文活动。假设你是王明，请你结合下面一组家庭照片，写一篇英语短文参赛。 要求：1.必须使用过去时态描述每张照片中的活动，可适当拓展细节； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Mother, went shopping in a supermarket Father, volunteered to pick up rubbish took part in a painting competition all the members, camped in a park Hello, everyone. I’m happy to be here to share my family photos with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you enjoy my photos. Thank you! 2、家是最小国，国是千万家。家庭的幸福，来源于每位家庭成员的努力。在第32个国际家庭日（5月15日）来临之际，《校园英语周报》现举办以“The Secret of Happiness—My Family Story”为主题的征文活动，一起解锁提升家庭幸福感的“密码”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 谈谈你理解的幸福家庭； 2. 分享你和家人之间的一个温暖故事； 3. 在日常生活中，如何建立和谐的家庭关系（请列举两到三种具体做法）。 注意： 1. 词数70左右； 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3、做家务是家庭成员的义务，作为家庭一员，你一定做过许多力所能及的家务。请根据提示写一篇短文讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历故事，包括以下要点： 1.你是否喜欢做家务，你常做哪些家务； 2.重点讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历（包括起因、过程、结果）； 3.你父母对你所做家务的评价及你的收获、感受。 要求： 1.词数70左右； 2.必须包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文章中不得涉及真实的人名，校名和地名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4、俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。 要点： 要求： (1) 短文须包括所给要点信息，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名以及地名； (3) 词数70左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5、假设你是Jack，你的新家最近刚刚装修完毕，你迫不及待地想向你的美国笔友Mike介绍一下。请根据下列提示，写一封英文书信描绘一下你的新公寓。 位置：位于“绿色花园”，紧邻学校； 楼层和面积：17楼，120平方米； 布局： 现代风格，三室两厅，一厨，一卫。一 个大阳台； 最喜爱之处：有自己的卧室；阳台，因为…… 不满意之处： ……(请自行发挥，并说明原因) 要求：70词左右。文章的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How are you? My new flat has just been finished. I’m glad to introduce it to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come to China and visit my new flat soon. Best wishes, Jack 6、近日，你班针对中学生在家很少做家务这一现象举行了一场英语辩论赛。请根据写作要求，以“My Opinions on Doing Housework”为题写一篇不少于70词的短文。 写作要求： 1.简述这一现象： 2.结合表格信息，表明你的观点并陈述理由： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Should We Do Housework? Pros Cons develop independence look after themselves understand the idea of fairness … ☒ a waste of time ☒ we’ll do it when we get older ☒ the parents’ job ☒ … __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7、劳动创造美好生活。每个人都可以从劳动中收获珍贵的回忆。作为一名初中生，在学习之余，承担起家务劳动，有助于提升自己的生活能力。请大家以“Labor is the Key of Happiness”为题，讲述一次自己做家务的经历，并谈谈你的收获。 写作要求如下： （1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数70词左右； （2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8、假设你们班（总数50人）进行了一项有关“做家务”的调查，请根据下面表格中的调查数据，以“Doing housework”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，报告此次调查的结果并发表自己的看法。 短文需包括以下要点： 百分比 做家务情况 40% 洗衣、洗碗、洗菜等 35% 打扫卫生 12% 购买家居物品 8% 烹饪 5% 几乎不做家务 要求： 1. 约70词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 2. 必须包含所提供的全部信息，可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。 3. 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Doing Housework Last week, our class made a survey on doing housework among ourselves. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9、做家务可以培养自我能力。在周末，帮助父母做家务是应该的。请你描述你在周末所做的家务。 内容包括： 1. 做家务的原因； 2. 在周末你做的家务（至少两件事）； 3. 你的感想。 作文要求： 1. 词汇提示：做家务 do some housework 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的校名和个人的真实姓名； 2. 语句连贯，词数70个左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Home Sweet Home 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元以“温馨之家”为话题，此类话题常见的写作角度涉及： 话题①课本19页3c要求给朋友写邮件就如何装修房子寻求帮助，在进行此类写作时，需要留意邮件的格式规范。 话题②课本20页4a要求以家庭中不可少的家务劳动为写作话题，此话题写作体裁多以议论文为主，谈论对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由以及讨论中学生是否应该做家务的书面表达是常考察的。 与话题①相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 装饰动作：decorate, paint, hang（悬挂）, stick（粘贴） 装饰物品：poster, fairy lights（串灯）, curtains（窗帘）, rug（地毯）, photo frame（相框） 装修区域：apartment, living room, kitchen, bedroom 风格描述：cute, modern, lovely, colorful 短语 decorate the house,buy some flowers, make a poster, go shopping, bring a pair of scissors, buy glue, bring a brush, make paper cuttings, bring a painting put in a brighter light, paint the house blue,a pair of scissors, some tools for DIY, tidy up 句型 ① Here are clear instructions. 这里有清楚的说明。 ② I'd like to have my new house decorated. 我想装修一下我的新房子。 ③ You'd better get some tools. 你最好拿一些工具。 ④When you do DIY, you make, repair or decorate things yourself instead of paying someone to do it. 当你自己动手做的时候，你会自己制作、修理或者装饰这些东西，而不是付钱让别人去做。 ⑤ You can always rearrange the living - room the way you like. 你可以随时按自己的喜好重新布置这个客厅。 名言 ①A house is made of walls and beams; a home is built with love and dreams. 房子是砖瓦堆砌，家是爱与梦想筑成。 ②Beauty is in the details. 美在细节中。 与话题②相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 housework（家务），chores（家务琐事），responsibility（责任），independence（独立性），waste（浪费）。 短语 share chores（分担家务），do the dishes（洗碗），take out the rubbish（倒垃圾），fold the clothes（叠衣服），sweep the floor（扫地），make the bed（铺床），clean the living - room（打扫客厅），help out with（帮忙；帮助…解决困难） 句型 ① 1 like...but I hate...我喜.…..但我讨厌...... ②Different students have different opinions about... 关于.…..，不同的学生有不同的观点。 ③What’s more, it can also help us...除此之外，它还能帮助我们..…. ④Could you please sweep the floor? 你能扫下地吗？ ⑤I think children should help parents with housework. 我认为孩子应该帮父母做家务。 ⑥It is important for children to do chores. 对孩子来说做家务是重要的。 ⑦I think it’s our duty to help our parents with some chores.我认为帮助父母做一些家务是我们的责任。 名言 ①Helping parents is helping ourselves. 帮助父母就是帮助自己。 ②When you help your parents, you grow as a person. 在帮助父母的过程中，你也在成长。 写作步骤 懂 话题① 一、Before-writing 1、清楚写邮件的格式 称呼（Dear...）→ 开头问候 → 正文 → 结尾祝福 → 署名 2、思考以下问题 1）If you could decorate your room, what changes would you make? 2）Would you ask friends for help? 3、 搭建写作框架 开头 问候朋友，说明写信目的 Hope you’re doing well! I’m planning to decorate my room and I was wondering if you could help me. 正文 1. 描述装饰计划（如风格、颜色）； 2. 具体请求（如帮忙搬运家具、提供创意）； We want to paint the wall blue. Could you help me make a poster? I would like to put up the paper cutting. 结尾 表达感谢与期待回复 Your help would mean a lot to me. Let me know what you think. 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。注意邮件格式（如邮件称呼大小写）和语法问题（如请求句型使用是否得当）。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换邮件，标注亮点表达，提出补充建议（如增加具体装饰细节）。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，强调礼貌用语和清晰表达的重要性。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 话题② 一、Before-writing 1. Tick the chores you do at home. Chores Tick Chores Tick take our the rubbish do the laundry do the dishes fold the clothes walk the dog sweep the floor make the bed clean the bathroom help to cook 2. Ask yourself the following questions. 1). How often do you do chores? 2). What do you think about doing chores? 3). Do you think teenagers should help with housework? 3、 搭建写作框架 开头 表达你对中学生是否应该帮助父母做家务的观点 Different students have different opinions about doing housework. 支持观点：I strongly believe that... / It’s necessary to... 反对观点：Some students may think... / However,... 正文 用论据证明自己的观点： 支持的理由或者反对的理由。 There are three reasons, first,....Second, .... What’s more,...(on the one hand, .... On the other hand,....) 可使用连接词：First of all, Moreover, What’s more, 结尾 对自己的论点进行总结 In a word, I think.... All in all, it’s ...to.... 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和could句型 。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换作文，标注亮点表达，提出补充论据。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，强调礼貌用语和清晰表达的重要性。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 （一） 假设你是张华，收到了好友赵敏的电子邮件。在邮件中，赵敏认为青少年应该专注于学业，不需要承担家务。请结合邮件内容，回复一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点并说明理由。   Dear Zhang Hua,   How’s everything? I saw a survey today saying many teenagers do housework. But I think it’s unnecessary. We’re already busy with exams and homework. Don’t you agree? What’s your opinion?   Zhao Min   要求：   1)语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；   2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；   3)70词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。   Ⅰ 思维导图 1)观点表达：In my view, teenagers should 1 .   2)理由阐述：   First, doing chores helps 2 .   Second, it teaches 3 .   For example, 4 .   3)总结呼吁：Therefore, 5 .   Ⅱ 谋篇布局   第一步：审题。人称 6 ；时态 7 .   第二步：列提纲   第一段：表明立场（支持青少年做家务）。   第二段：分点说明理由（培养责任感、提升生活技能等）。   第三段：总结观点，鼓励行动。   Ⅲ 遣词造句   1)Doing chores can improve your time management. Doing chores can build teamwork. (用“not only... but also”改写)   8 2)It makes you understand your parents’ efforts. (用“疑问词+不定式”结构升格)   9 3)Teenagers should focus on both study and life skills. (用“as well as”升格)   10 Ⅳ 使用连接词（Moreover, For instance, In conclusion）增强逻辑性。 Dear Zhao Min,   Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I have a different opinion.   Looking forward to your reply.   Yours, Zhang Hua 答案： 1．观点表达：In my view, teenagers should do housework.故填do housework。 2．理由阐述：First, doing chores helps develop responsibility.故填develop responsibility。 3．Second, it teaches how to appreciate others’ work.故填how to appreciate others’ work。 4．For instance, cleaning your room teaches you to organize things.故填cleaning your room teaches you to organize things。 5．总结呼吁：Therefore, balancing study and chores is key to growth.故填balancing study and chores is key to growth。 6．人称：第一人称、第二人称。故填：第一人称、第二人称。 7．时态：一般现在时。故填：一般现在时。 8．句意：做家务可以改善你的时间管理。做家务可以建立团队合作。用“not only... but also”改写为“Doing chores can not only improve your time management but also build teamwork.”。故填Doing chores can not only improve your time management but also build teamwork. 9．句意：这会让你理解父母的努力。用“疑问词+不定式”结构升格为“It teaches how to understand your parents’ efforts.”。故填It teaches how to understand your parents’ efforts. 10．句意：青少年应该同时注重学习和生活技能。用“as well as”升格为“Teenagers should focus on study as well as life skills.”。故填Teenagers should focus on study as well as life skills. 例文 Dear Zhao Min,   Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I have a different opinion. In my view, teenagers should do housework.   First, doing chores helps develop responsibility. For instance, cleaning your room teaches you to organize things. Moreover, it improves life skills like cooking. Second, it teaches how to appreciate others’ work. When you clean dishes, you realize your parents’ daily efforts.   Therefore, balancing study and chores is key to growth. Let’s try to help at home!   Looking forward to your reply.   Yours,   Zhang Hua 【解析】1．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，表明立场； 第二步、说明理由； 第三步、总结观点，鼓励行动并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①for instance例如 ②be key to………的关键 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①When you clean dishes, you realize your parents’ daily efforts.(when引导时间状语从句) （二） 假如你是Jimmy，你的好朋友Sam要搬进新居，他想向你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识，回复邮件表达你的建议。 Hi, Jimmy, You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I often feel tired and stressed afer school. What color should I paint the wall? What can make me feel energetic? Could you please offer me some advice? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Sam 要求：1.要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ； 2.70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. ____________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jimmy 【答案】One possible version: Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. Blue can bring peace to your mind and body. As a Grade 9 student, you always have much homework to do and feel stressed easily. So blue is the best colour. As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. You’d better put some green plants in your bedroom. They can make the room full of life and make you feel energetic. Hope my advice will be of some help and you will enjoy your new life! Yours, Jimmy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，给出关于卧室装修的详细建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①too much太多 ②had better do sth.最好做某事 ③full of充满 [高分句型] ①A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. (so连接的并列句，宾语从句) ②As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. (原因状语从句) 题型通关 练 1、学校即将举办“家庭生活美好瞬间”摄影征文活动。假设你是王明，请你结合下面一组家庭照片，写一篇英语短文参赛。 要求：1.必须使用过去时态描述每张照片中的活动，可适当拓展细节； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Mother, went shopping in a supermarket Father, volunteered to pick up rubbish took part in a painting competition all the members, camped in a park Hello, everyone. I’m happy to be here to share my family photos with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you enjoy my photos. Thank you! 【答案】 Hello, everyone. I’m happy to be here to share my family photos with you. Last week, all of my family were busy. My mother went shopping in a supermarket. She bought a lot of food and daily necessities. My father volunteered to pick up rubbish. He wanted to make our environment cleaner. I took part in a painting competition. I tried my best to draw a beautiful picture and I won the first prize. My parents were proud of me. On the weekend, we went camping in a park. We enjoyed the nature and fresh air. We had a great time there. I hope all of you enjoy my photos. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要出现语法错误，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头问候并引入介绍家庭照片这一主题；   第二步，阐述家庭成员的具体活动； 第三步，书写结语并致谢。 [亮点词汇]   ①go shopping去购物   ②pick up捡起   ③be proud of对……感到自豪 [高分句型]   ①I tried my best to draw a beautiful picture and I won the first prize. (and连词表并列)   ②I hope all of you enjoy my photos. (省略that的宾语从句) 2、家是最小国，国是千万家。家庭的幸福，来源于每位家庭成员的努力。在第32个国际家庭日（5月15日）来临之际，《校园英语周报》现举办以“The Secret of Happiness—My Family Story”为主题的征文活动，一起解锁提升家庭幸福感的“密码”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 谈谈你理解的幸福家庭； 2. 分享你和家人之间的一个温暖故事； 3. 在日常生活中，如何建立和谐的家庭关系（请列举两到三种具体做法）。 注意： 1. 词数70左右； 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Family is the source of happiness and the harbor of warmth. To me, a happy family means mutual respect, understanding, and support among all members. One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother. Everyone had a role to play, and the joy on her face was priceless. To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions. First, spend quality time together, such as having meals or playing games. Second, communicate openly and honestly to understand each other’s feelings and needs. Lastly, show appreciation and gratitude for each other’s efforts and contributions. By following these steps, we can create a loving and supportive family environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体描述家庭中发生的一件有意义的事； 第三步，最后提出促进家庭和谐幸福的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①the source of……的来源 ②prepare for准备 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother. (when引导的表语从句) ②To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions. (动词不定式作目的状语) 3、做家务是家庭成员的义务，作为家庭一员，你一定做过许多力所能及的家务。请根据提示写一篇短文讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历故事，包括以下要点： 1.你是否喜欢做家务，你常做哪些家务； 2.重点讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历（包括起因、过程、结果）； 3.你父母对你所做家务的评价及你的收获、感受。 要求： 1.词数70左右； 2.必须包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文章中不得涉及真实的人名，校名和地名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last Saturday, I learned to cook tomato soup. Although I often help with simple chores like sweeping floors and folding clothes, cooking was new to me. Seeing my parents working overtime, I decided to prepare dinner.   First, I washed tomatoes and cut them clumsily. Next, I fried eggs nervously as oil splashed out. Then I added water and noodles, stirring carefully. The soup looked pale, so I added salt three times. Finally, I served two bowls with shaking hands.   My parents praised my effort though the soup was salty. Mom said: “The best meal comes from love, not perfect skills.” This experience taught me that housework requires patience and care. Now I understand why parents always remind us to finish chores properly. Helping family makes me feel grown-up. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己常做的一些家务； 第二步，接着具体阐述自己一次学做菜的经历； 第三步，最后介绍父母对这次做菜的评价，及自己的收获与感受。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②splashe out飞溅 ③remind sb to do sth提醒某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Although I often help with simple chores like sweeping floors and folding clothes, cooking was new to me. (Although引导的让步状语从句) ②This experience taught me that housework requires patience and care. (that引导的宾语从句) 4、俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。 要点： 要求： (1) 短文须包括所给要点信息，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名以及地名； (3) 词数70左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：   In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place. We’ve shared different ideas.   Some say it’s a good idea to spend more time with family. They believe family members should share happiness and worries. When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up. Home is always the first place for us to get help and support. Others think it’s necessary to remember family’s birthdays and prepare small presents. The feeling of being loved can bring us more pleasure.   In my opinion, showing love for family is really important. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我们能做些什么让家变得更快乐的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山介绍我们讨论了如何让家变得更快乐； 第二步，具体阐述同学们对于能做些什么让家变得更快乐的想法； 第三步，表达自己个人的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①cheer sb. up使某人高兴起来 ②in one’s opinion在某人看来 [高分句型] ①When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up. (When引导的时间状语从句) ②Others think it’s necessary to remember family’s birthdays and prepare small presents. (省略that的宾语从句) 5、假设你是Jack，你的新家最近刚刚装修完毕，你迫不及待地想向你的美国笔友Mike介绍一下。请根据下列提示，写一封英文书信描绘一下你的新公寓。 位置：位于“绿色花园”，紧邻学校； 楼层和面积：17楼，120平方米； 布局： 现代风格，三室两厅，一厨，一卫。一 个大阳台； 最喜爱之处：有自己的卧室；阳台，因为…… 不满意之处： ……(请自行发挥，并说明原因) 要求：70词左右。文章的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, How are you? My new flat has just been finished. I’m glad to introduce it to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come to China and visit my new flat soon. Best wishes, Jack 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How are you? My new flat has just been finished. I’m glad to introduce it to you. My new flat is in Green Garden. It is next to my school. My home is on the 16th floor. It is about 120 square metres in size. My new flat is very modern. There are three bedrooms, two living rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a big balcony. I feel happy to have my own bedroom now. The balcony is my favourite place, because I can sit there and chat with my friends. But there is only one bathroom, so I have to share it with my family members. I hope you can come to China and visit my new flat soon. Best wishes, Jack 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的新公寓，主要围绕位置、楼层和面积以及布局展开； 第二步，介绍自己最喜爱之处和不满意之处，并说明原因。 [亮点词汇] ①next to紧挨着 ②chat with sb与某人聊天 ③share sth with sb与某人分享某物 [高分句型] ①There are three bedrooms, two living rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a big balcony.（There be句型） ②The balcony is my favourite place, because I can sit there and chat with my friends.（because引导原因状语从句） 6、近日，你班针对中学生在家很少做家务这一现象举行了一场英语辩论赛。请根据写作要求，以“My Opinions on Doing Housework”为题写一篇不少于70词的短文。 写作要求： 1.简述这一现象： 2.结合表格信息，表明你的观点并陈述理由： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Should We Do Housework? Pros Cons develop independence look after themselves understand the idea of fairness … ☒ a waste of time ☒ we’ll do it when we get older ☒ the parents’ job ☒ … __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Opinions on Doing Housework Nowadays, many middle school students seldom do housework at home. Some think it’s a waste of time and they’ll do it when they grow up. Also, they believe it’s their parents’ job. However, I strongly believe we should do housework. First, doing housework helps us develop independence. By doing it, we can learn to look after ourselves. Second, it makes us understand the idea of fairness. We live with our parents, so we should share the housework. What’s more, it’s a good way to show our love for our parents. In a word, doing housework is meaningful. Let’s start doing housework from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕中学生在家做家务这一现象展开讨论并阐述观点 ②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述现象、表达观点和阐述理由 ③提示：紧扣“中学生做家务”现象，先简述现象，再结合表格信息从正反及自身观点角度，有条理地论述，内容充实、逻辑清晰 [写作步骤] 第一步，简述现象：点明如今很多中学生在家很少做家务，以及部分学生认为做家务是浪费时间、应该长大后做、是父母职责等想法 第二步，表明自身观点并陈述理由：从培养独立性、理解公平、表达对父母的爱等方面阐述 第三步，总结收尾：强调做家务有意义，呼吁大家从现在开始做家务 [亮点词汇] ①seldom很少 ②independence独立性 ③fairness公平 [高分句型] ①Some think it’s a waste of time and they’ll do it when they grow up.（省略了that的宾语从句） ②doing housework helps us develop independence.（动名词作主语） ③What’s more, it’s a good way to show our love for our parents.（“what’s more”用于递进阐述；“it’s a good way to...”句式） 7、劳动创造美好生活。每个人都可以从劳动中收获珍贵的回忆。作为一名初中生，在学习之余，承担起家务劳动，有助于提升自己的生活能力。请大家以“Labor is the Key of Happiness”为题，讲述一次自己做家务的经历，并谈谈你的收获。 写作要求如下： （1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数70词左右； （2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Labor is the Key of Happiness Last Saturday, with my parents out, I decided to clean the messy living room. I first organized scattered books and toys, then mopped the floor until it was shiny. Doing the laundry was tiring—sorting clothes, using the machine, and hanging them to dry. Though my back ached, the house turned tidy. When my parents returned, they were surprised and praised me. I felt proud and realized how much work goes into keeping a home. This experience taught me practical skills and made me understand my parents’ efforts. Now I help with chores weekly, finding joy in creating a clean space. Labor shows me happiness comes from my own hard work. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要谈谈自己的收获，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述一次自己做家务的经历； 第二步，介绍自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②help with sth帮助做某事 ③come from来自 [高分句型] ①I first organized scattered books and toys, then mopped the floor until it was shiny.（until引导时间状语从句） ②Though my back ached, the house turned tidy.（though引导让步状语从句） ③Labor shows me happiness comes from my own hard work.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） 8、假设你们班（总数50人）进行了一项有关“做家务”的调查，请根据下面表格中的调查数据，以“Doing housework”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，报告此次调查的结果并发表自己的看法。 短文需包括以下要点： 百分比 做家务情况 40% 洗衣、洗碗、洗菜等 35% 打扫卫生 12% 购买家居物品 8% 烹饪 5% 几乎不做家务 要求： 1. 约70词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 2. 必须包含所提供的全部信息，可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。 3. 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Doing Housework Last week, our class made a survey on doing housework among ourselves. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Doing Housework Last week, our class made a survey on doing housework among ourselves. 40% of the students do laundry, wash dishes, wash vegetables and so on. 35% of them clean the house. 12% buy household items. 8% cook. Only 5% hardly do any housework. I think doing housework can help us develop good habits and a sense of responsibility. We should all do more housework. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图表中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，说明关于家务的调查； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，说明相关家务的比例； 第三步，书写结语，希望大家做家务。 [亮点词汇] ①wash dishes洗碗 ②and so on等等 ③a sense of responsibility责任感 [高分句型] ①I think doing housework can help us develop good habits and a sense of responsibility.（省略that的宾语从句） 9、做家务可以培养自我能力。在周末，帮助父母做家务是应该的。请你描述你在周末所做的家务。 内容包括： 1. 做家务的原因； 2. 在周末你做的家务（至少两件事）； 3. 你的感想。 作文要求： 1. 词汇提示：做家务 do some housework 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的校名和个人的真实姓名； 2. 语句连贯，词数70个左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I often do some housework at home. It’s important for students to do some housework. As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework. Last Sunday, when my parents went shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in right place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt so happy at that time. So I keep doing housework, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room. Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学生应做家务的原因； 第二步，介绍自己在周末做的家务； 第三步，谈谈自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①keep doing sth.不停做某事 ②such as例如 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me.（when引导时间状语从句） ②Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them.（动名词作主语） 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$