Unit 6 Section B Writing 课件2024-2025学年人教版（2024）英语七年级下册

Unit 6 Rain or Shine Section B Writing By the end of this lesson, you will be able to: Use the present continuous and simple present tenses to describe weather scenes and people’s activities (e.g., "It is raining. People are carrying umbrellas"). Analyze the structure of a descriptive text (weather → activities → feelings) and apply it to your own writing. Learning objectives: Reading for writing 2a Complete the passage with the correct forms of the words in brackets. There is a huge storm today. I am sitting in my room and ___________ (look) out of the window. It ____________ (rain) very hard. The rain is pouring down. The wind ____________ (blow) hard too. It is difficult for people to use their umbrellas. A man in the street ________ (look) angry. He is shouting and ________ (run) after his hat! is blowing is raining looking looks running 向外看 v.吹 Language points pour v. (雨)倒出，倾倒 Point 1. The rain is pouring down. (教材P47 2a) 【拓】pour down (雨)倾盆而下,倒下来 pour ... into ... 把…倒入… The rain is ________ down hard, making it difficult to go to school. A. pouring B. cutting C. falling D. putting Language points It is adj. for sb. to do sth. Point 2. It is difficult for people to use their umbrellas. (教材P47 2a) It is + adj. (+ for sb.) + to do sth. 做某事 （对某人来说）是……的。 Language points shout v. & n. 喊叫；呼唤 Point 3. He is shouting and running after his hat. (教材P47 2a) shout at (对...大声叫喊) shout to (对...大声叫喊) 因生气或愤怒对某人大声叫喊 因距离大声叫喊让别人听见 Don't shout to me.I can hear. Mom is angry,so she shouts at me. Language points run after 追逐，追赶 Point 4. He is shouting and running after his hat. (教材P47 2a) 【拓】run away 逃跑 run out (of) 用光; 耗尽 Two rabbits ran away,so he is running after them. Structure What aspects does it write about? There is a huge storm today. I am sitting in my room and ___________ (look) out of the window. It ____________ (rain) very hard. The rain is pouring down. The wind ____________ (blow) hard too. It is difficult for people to use their umbrellas. A man in the street ________ (look) angry. He is shouting and ________ (run) after his hat! is blowing is raining looking looks running the weather people’s activities people’s feelings Beginning Body Ending 1.weather: 干燥的空气 大雪 倾盆大雨 新鲜的空气 温暖的阳光 2.activities: play basketball 打篮球 read books 读书 散步 锻炼 待在家 度假 3.feelings: 放松的 累的 glad 高兴的 great 很棒的 情绪高涨 玩得开心，过得愉快 Important words and phrases to help you 段落布局 dry air heavy snow/snow heavily rain cats and dogs fresh air warm sunshine take a walk do exercise stay in/stay at home (be)on vacation relaxed tired be in high spirits enjoy oneself/ have a good time/ have fun ★句式 *开头句 1.The weather is _______(晴朗的). 2.Bill is ____________(度假)in Harbin.  *中间句 1.He has to ________(待在家里).  2.His father is ___________________(堆雪人).  3.She is ____________(沐日光浴) on the beach. 4.Her family are ______________(情绪高涨). sunny on vacation stay in building a snowman sunbathing in high spirits P59 *结尾句 1. _______________(欢迎来参观)!  2.Helen hopes to _________(过得愉快) in Sanya.  Come and visit have fun 【类题仿写】 现在是星期六上午,Bill和Helen及家人分别在Harbin和Sanya度假。请你根据下表中提示的信息进行描述。80个单词左右。 Item Harbin Sanya weather snowy and cold sunny and hot feeling really cold very nice activities stay in; build a snowman sunbathe; swim hope come and visit have fun 【考场·答题流程】 Step 1:“三定”审题 定体裁 ①记叙文 定人称 ②第____人称 定时态 ③以____________为主 三 现在进行时 Step 2:“三段”谋篇 It’s Saturday morning.(时间描述) Bill is on vacation in Harbin while (然而)Helen is in Sanya. In Harbin,the weather is snowy and cold.(地点+天气)The temperature is -18℃.(温度)Bill feels very cold. He has to stay in.He is watching a football match on TV.His father is building a snowman in the yard.(活动) Bill hopes we come and visit Harbin and enjoy the beautiful sight. (表达感受和期望) In Sanya, it is sunny and hot.Helen feels very nice. She is sunbathing on the beach.Her brother is swimming in the sea.Her family are in high spirits.Helen hopes to have fun in Sanya. Homework $$