25年5月浙江六校高三应用文高分 清单 -2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

英语应用文高分语料汇编 编者按 今天给大家分享的是 25 年 5 月浙江六校的应用文高分分享, 是不可多得的名校高分应用文素材。这次的六校应用文考察 “描述” 这个大类, 话题锚定在 “走进新农村”, 算是现在很多时事新闻都会去提到的概念。对于我们考生来说, 我们在拆解一个熟悉的 “陌生人” 话题的时候, 可以试着从两个角度展开思考: 1. 字面意义来说, 这个话题具有什么含义? 尤其是在当下时代背景中有什么含义? 2. 出卷老师,考察这个话题的意义是什么? 是想考察学生哪方面的能力? 第一个问题可以帮助我们快速找到应用文 “上价值” 的部分,让我们的文章没有那么 “干”。拿这篇文章来举例,走进新农村重在一个 “新” 字。我们自然而然地会想问,什么叫做 “新农村” ? “新” 在哪里？ 结合 “科技助农” 的时代背景我们就会恍然大悟:哦,我可以抓住科技这个抓手,比如无人机灌溉、比如无人化收割等等。当然啦,我们的思路也可以落到“美丽乡村”上,去写新农村背景下人民的安居乐业。除此之外, 这次还有学生以 “5G 覆盖率” 来写 “农村面貌”, 比如: This activity enabled me to understand the power of technology and catch a glimpse of what the future holds. As AI and 5G advance relentlessly, we must ensure that no one is left behind in this digital tsunami. 读到这里, 大家有没有发现, “科技” 和 “传统文化” 一样, 都可以成为应用文丰富内容或者升华价值观的 “抓手”。 第二个问题需要我们结合要点去思考。这篇应用文给到的第一个要点是“你的见闻”, 我们就要问自己, 我写的时候是重描述, 还是重在写自身的历程? 如果是描述, 我的语言要拿捏到什么程度? 要事无巨细全都展开吗? 还是说锚定一个细节? 再结合第二个要点 “你的感想”, 去思考这两个要点之间有何联系? 我在写的时候可以怎么样把两个要点的 “内里” 穿成一条线让整个文章变得连冠且完整? 总的来说, 这份资料的语言质量很高 (基本上达到了甚至超过了浙江高考考生高分标准), 很值得大家去积累。同时,也推荐大家看看整篇的考场作文,去学习每个作者写作的思路。 【题目速览】 假定你是李华,上周你参加了学校组织的 “走进新农村 (Exploring New Rural China)” 研学活动。请你给新西兰朋友 Oliver 写一封邮件分享这次经历, 内容包括: (1) 你的见闻; (2) 你的感想。 【高分语料】 A. 开头写得好的: 1. I can’t wait to share with you an activity themed "Exploring New Rural China" that I participated in last week, which was nothing short of spectacular. 2. Greetings from China! Guess what? Last week, I stumbled upon a fabulous opportunity to participate in the research study activity themed "Exploring New Rural China", which was elaborately designed and smoothly launched by our school. 3. Hope this email finds you thriving! Last week, our school launched an instructive activity under the theme "Exploring New Rural China", dedicated to broadening our horizons. You can’t imagine how enlightening it was! 4. Wandering through patches of emerald sprouts, dotted with AI-driven agricultural management devices—this was how the picturesque tapestry of New Rural China unrolled during our field trip. Witnessing this transformation firsthand was truly captivating. 5. Hope this letter finds you well. Guess what? Our school held an event themed "Exploring New Rural China" last week. Since this indelible episode benefited me a lot, I couldn’t wait to share it with you. 6. Guess what? Last week witnessed a fruitful and eye-opening activity entitled "Exploring New Rural China" and I can’t wait to share it with you! 7. Guess what? I got a vivid glimpse of China’s vibrant countryside during an activity called "Exploring New Rural China" last week. It was absolutely mind-blowing! I can’t wait to tell you more. 8. Hope this email finds you in good spirits. Remember the "Exploring New Rural China" event I mentioned earlier? It turned out to be such a refreshing and eye-opening experience! B. 你的见闻:最好要有叙述的框架,指很明显的叙述逻辑 1. Upon arriving at the destination, we were stunned by its extraordinary blend of tradition and modernization. Breathing the crisp, clean air and caressed by the gentle breeze, we were intoxicated by the natural scenery, an escape from the hustle and bustle. But what impressed us most was its rapid development and the widespread use of high-tech facilities, such as 5G coverage. 2. With their explanation, we witnessed a detailed monitoring system that could provide real-time data on the plants’ health, delved into the theoretical knowledge behind the automated integrated system of irrigation and fertilization, and experienced the diverse use of drones in agriculture. 3. Looking back on that memorable day, I still recall the brilliant sunshine casting a rosy glow on the vast grasslands, fragrant flowers adorning the vibrant fields, and the melodious chirping of lovely birds echoing in our ears. The fresh air seemed to whisper the lively ambiance of the countryside. Yet, these were not the most electrifying aspects. After an immersive viewing experience, we were greeted by surprisingly advanced technological farming, from high-tech sowing robots to fully automated machines. All these marvels left a deep impression and fascinated me tremendously. 4. It is no exaggeration to say that rural China is undergoing a profound transformation. No sooner had we arrived than idyllic fields and buildings unfolded before our eyes. Also worth noting is the AI-powered irrigation system, which dramatically boosts efficiency and productivity. The highlight of the study tour was our hands-on experience controlling drones for fertilization. 5. Located near a mountain and a stream, the new rural village offered me a refreshing perspective quite different from traditional villages. Massive agricultural facilities were operating across wide fields while drones hovered overhead to inspect the crops. Meanwhile, the entertainment activities also surprised me, from dance competitions to hiking, showcasing the village’s vibrancy and progress. Besides agriculture, villagers engaged in various jobs such as tourism, creating a dynamic economic atmosphere. 6. The moment I stepped off the bus, I was greeted by a flourishing scene in the town fields. Gone were the days of farmers manually sowing, fertilizing, and harvesting; now drones and smart sprayers tended the crops. As we strolled along the path, a guide vividly narrated the evolving journey of the rural area. Inside the town, houses along the trail were delicately painted with images of residents beaming with happiness and pride. 7. Upon arrival, the sight of countless farmers engaged in their work held me spellbound. And as I stepped closer, I was even more amazed to see robots and drones applied to sowing, weeding, and fertigation. To deepen our understanding, we listened to a speech by a young local farmer who had returned after graduating from university. He introduced high-tech equipment to this once-impoverished area, significantly boosting its economy. Beyond admiration for this young man, I was deeply moved by how technology can be a powerful tool to increase agricultural yield and alleviate poverty. (这个同学的思路蛮不一样的, 很主流价值观) 8. What I experienced sharply contrasted with my initial impression of rural China. Here, farming machines had replaced manual labor, helping to plow the fields, loosen the soil, and remove weeds. With just a few taps on their phones, farmers could let digital systems adjust fertilizer amounts based on crop conditions. Advanced drip irrigation and drone technologies were also introduced to improve efficiency, all of which have visibly improved farmers’ living conditions. 9. The instant I stepped into the new rural area, I was astounded by the transformed environment: the once-smelly stream filled with litter had vanished, replaced by a bubbling flow of clean water; the formerly gray sky had been completely renewed, with white clouds dancing across a blue backdrop. After a brief appreciation, we were warmly welcomed by a group of farmers whose weathered faces broke into radiant smiles. Under their meticulous guidance, we tried farming firsthand while gaining insight into the pivotal role technology now plays in their lives. 10. Buzzing with anticipation, we gathered at the school gate. Upon arrival, we marveled at the fields stretching beyond the horizon. Various machines were performing their tasks precisely and automatically. What caught our eyes most were drones flying above, monitoring pests and maintaining optimal humidity levels for crop growth. Wandering along the clean roads, we were greeted by gracious villagers whose bright smiles made our day. 11. The moment I walked into Leifeng Village, I was greeted by lucid waters and lush mountains surrounding the elegantly designed residential houses. With classified garbage bins lining the roads, everything was clean and spotless. The scene in the fields was truly amazing: farmers were using technologies like artificial intelligence and drones to enhance productivity. Several villagers told us that modern technology had significantly increased their harvests, and the future looked promising. We later visited the community center, where seniors chatted over tea and children played in a kid-friendly corner, a vivid picture of public well-being. C. 你的感想:最多多层次,分点展开 1. Agriculture is to a country what water is to life. Through this meaningful experience, I not only realized the significance of the New Rural Project, but also witnessed how technology empowers rural development. 2. Our leading teacher told us that these rural areas used to be filthy and poor. Nevertheless, it was the villagers’ pursuit of a better future that led them out and reshaped everything. That’s what I learned from this precious opportunity! 3.It was then that I realized these harmonious scenes were all made possible by poverty-alleviation policies. The transformation provided farmers with a platform to live a colorful life, and the experience truly allowed me to appreciate the vitality of New Rural China. 4. This activity enabled me to understand the power of technology and catch a glimpse of what the future holds. As AI and 5G advance relentlessly, we must ensure that no one is left behind in this digital tsunami. (这句可以背诵) 5. Needless to say, the mind-blowing study tour fulfilled our purpose of broadening horizons and filled us with pride in the wide application of cutting-edge technology in agriculture. It also evoked a sense of nostalgia and brought us back to our roots. 6. Witnessing such a remarkable transformation in the new rural region, I am determined to constantly better myself and delve into a related career path. 7. The activity was truly thought-provoking. With the collective efforts of our country and its people, the days when rural areas were perceived as underdeveloped are gone. We teens should shoulder the responsibility of achieving overall well-being and building a brighter future where villages and cities thrive together. 8. Recent years have witnessed the dramatic transformation of rural China. With global digitalization, cutting-edge technology has been integrated into agriculture, significantly enhancing efficiency. I’m so proud of the development of rural China and will strive to contribute my own strength to it one day! 9. The new landscape of rural China, full of promise, showed me the power of modernization. By blending traditional rural scenery with bold reinvention, rural China has entered a new era of innovation. 10. It was such a transformative trip, breaking all my stereotypes about remote areas. Technology is making all the difference. As we learned about the farming systems, the guide ardently encouraged us to pursue more scientific breakthroughs-made even more inspiring against the backdrop of such an impressive landscape. D. 结尾: 1. Share your insights with me as well! I bet high-tech advances are revolutionizing your country too! 2. Enclosed are some photos I captured during the study tour. I’m also curious about rural development in New Zealand and eagerly await your reply. 3. For me, the trip truly captured the essence of "new" in our country’s development. From production to culture, every modernized aspect gave us a profound sense of belonging. What are your thoughts? 4. As farmers reap their harvest, I believe I can also claim my own success through perseverance. Have you had a similar experience? Looking forward to your reply! 5. I’ve attached some photos to this letter. Hope you’ll enjoy them! 6. I hope we can visit rural China together someday! Check out the photos I attached and the views are simply breathtaking. 7. These experiences made me appreciate the power of innovation in unexpected places. Do you think technology has had a similar impact where you live? 8. Seeing the fusion of nature and technology was eye-opening. I’d really like to know if you’ve had a similar experience in your part of the world. 9. I feel this journey taught me more than any textbook ever could. Have you ever had a field trip that changed the way you see the world? 10. I’m still overwhelmed by the experience and hope these snapshots help convey the beauty I witnessed. 【考场范文】 Version 1 这篇文章的语言十分契合应用文“续写化”的特点。在描述所见所闻时,描写的度拿捏得比较好,集中在 “新农村” 人民安居乐业的一面。一方面很契合 “乡土中国” 的景观,另一方面也能 echo 下一部份的议论。 Dear Oliver, Hope this email finds you in good spirits. Remember the "Exploring New Rural China" event I mentioned last time? It turned out to be a truly refreshing and enlightening experience! The moment I stepped off the bus, I was greeted by a flourishing scene in the town fields, not farmers sowing, fertilizing, and harvesting by hand, but drones and smart sprayers tending the crops. As we strolled along the path, our guide vividly described the remarkable transformation of the rural area. In the town, the houses lining the trail were beautifully painted with images of residents beaming with happiness and pride. It was such a transformative trip, breaking all my stereotypes about remote areas. Technology is making all the difference. As we learned about the advanced farming systems, the guide passionately encouraged us to pursue further scientific breakthroughs-made all the more inspiring by the impressive landscape around us. I’ve attached some photos I snapped during the visit. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts! Yours, Li Hua Version 2 Dear Oliver, Hope this email finds you well! I couldn’t wait to share with you my incredible experience from the Exploring New Rural China activity organized by our school. The moment I walked into Leifeng Village, I was greeted by crystal-clear waters and lush mountains surrounding elegantly designed residential houses. With classified garbage bins placed neatly along the roads, the entire area was clean and spotless. The sight in the fields was truly impressive, where farmers were using advanced agricultural technologies like artificial intelligence and drones to boost productivity. Several villagers told us that these innovations had significantly increased their harvests and that the future looked bright. Later, we visited the community center, where seniors chatted over tea and children played in a kid-friendly area, a vivid and heartwarming picture of people’s well-being. The whole activity was deeply thought-provoking. Thanks to the collective efforts of our country and its people, the outdated image of rural areas as underdeveloped is fading away. As teenagers, we should take on the responsibility of contributing to national well-being and building a future where both cities and villages flourish side by side. Yours, Li Hua Version 3 这篇的描写集中在突出乡村的静谧和自然景观,这部分蛮细腻的。与之形成对比的是,后面的自动化农业写的有一点点 “粗糙”,但瑕不掩瑜。 Dear Oliver, Greetings from China! Guess what? Last week, I stumbled upon a fabulous opportunity to participate in a study activity centered around "Exploring New Rural China", which was thoughtfully designed and smoothly organized by our school. Looking back on that memorable day, I still remember the brilliant sunshine casting a rosy glow over the vast grasslands, fragrant flowers adorning the vibrant fields, and the melodious chirping of birds echoing in our ears. The fresh air seemed to whisper the lively ambiance of the countryside. Yet, these were not the most electrifying parts. After an immersive viewing experience, we were greeted by surprisingly advanced technological farming. From high-tech sowing robots to fully automated machines, all the innovations left a deep impression on me and sparked tremendous fascination. On the way back home, I could hardly contain my pride and excitement. China has truly made remarkable progress in both agriculture and technology, don’t you think? Share your insights with me as well! I bet high-tech advances are revolutionizing your country too! Yours, Li Hua Version 4 Dear Oliver, I can’t wait to share with you the incredible experience I had last week during an activity themed "Exploring New Rural China". It was truly nothing short of spectacular. Upon arriving at the destination, we were stunned by its extraordinary blend of tradition and modernization. Breathing in the crisp, clean air and feeling the gentle breeze, we were completely enchanted by the natural scenery, a perfect escape from the hustle and bustle of city life. Yet, what impressed us most was the rapid development and the widespread use of high-tech facilities, such as full 5G coverage. After an informative lecture by local officials about the area’s transformation in recent years, we had the chance to interact with villagers. They shared heartfelt stories about how their lives had changed and how innovation had empowered their community. Not only did this journey deepen my understanding of the "New Rural" initiative and the importance of reform, but it also made me realize that to truly thrive, we must embrace and adapt to our ever-evolving world. Attached to this email are some photos I captured during the trip. Do you feel the same way? I’d love to hear about the rural development in your country too. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【试题共鸣】 假设你是李华,本周末你校将要举办以“乡土中国(Rural China)”为主题的摄影展,请你写一封邮件给交换生 James,邀请他来参观这次展览,内容包括:(1)展览的时间和地点；(2)展览的内容和意义。 要求:在学习完以上浙江六校高分素材以后,在完全模拟考场的状态下 (即不翻阅资料,纯模拟考试), 18 分钟以内 (含草稿) 写完以上这篇应用文。同时思考, 这篇应用文的 “乡土中国” 和浙江六校的 “走进新农村” 这两个话题, 有什么区别? 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$