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Continuation Writing Based on B9U3
The Chain of Kindness
Kindness
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Say what you see!
To
paralyzed
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Key elements of a story
retelling
characters
action
(who)
S
(what)
Kindness
settings
feelings
(when+where)
(why+how)
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Key Elements---Retelling ---Summary
Summary:
On a cold rainy night,
paralyzed
瘫痪的)Tom had a
flat
tyre and got stuck in the car.Hopefully,a blind old man and a young
optimisti
girl helped him fix the car,which transformed Tom into
an
积极的)man!
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Kindness has a life-changing
power!
inspired,optimistic
grateful,relieved
Tom was transformed into
The old blind man
an 3.optimisti man.
helped Tom fix the car.
frustrated,defeated
Tom had 1.a flat tyre
and got stuck in the
rain.
para.1-2
para.3-11
para.12-14
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Tom is FRUSTRATED!
(paras 1-3)
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Describe Emotions
4
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Tom is frustrated!(paras 1-3)
supporting lines
Facial expressions
Actions
Language
Surroundings
(rain,street,night)
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Technique 1:Facial
Expressions
Her
face
is enlightened with sheer joy and
her eyes
are sparkling with satisfaction.her
mouth
curves
upwards in a perfect crescent(
牙)
This is the language of happiness,spoken
through the universal language of facial expressions.
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Technique 2:Action
He
balled
his fists
torn
the paper
into pieces,s
stromed
out of the meeting
room furiously and
slamme
the door
d
behind him.