读后续写（个人成长＋互助＋亲情＋友情＋人与动物）清单 - 2024-2025学年高一下学期人教版期末复习

XX中学高一下期末 读后续写复习 姓名：________________ 目录 【Ⅰ】个人成长 模板：遭遇挫折，获得成长类 2 【典例呈现】：篮球啦啦队女孩—成功入选体操队 2 【Ⅱ】互助与救助 模板：帮助别人，获得成长类 3 1.互助：【典例呈现】： 医院做志愿者 3 2.救助：【典例呈现】 回家途中救助受伤司机 4 【Ⅲ】友情 模板：朋友之间相互帮助类 5 【典例呈现】：送好朋友（家境困难）的奶奶生日礼物 5 【Ⅳ】亲情 模板：家人之间产生问题-沟通-理解关爱类 6 【典例呈现】：独生子Victor 的改变 6 【Ⅵ】人与动物 模板：人与动物相互治愈 7 【典例呈现】：Max帮助主人克服恐狗症 7 【Ⅰ】个人成长 模板：遭遇挫折，获得成长类 【典例呈现】：篮球啦啦队女孩—成功入选体操队 续写情节：(1para)失败（灰心）—（转折）他人鼓励—重拾信心—(（2para）努力后再次尝试（成功）—升华 第一段：消极情绪 1 I found myself trapped in a situation that everything was wrong. The sadness was heavy like a dark shadow, floating in the air. Words failed to express my feeling , tears streaming down my face . 2 Helpless and sad，I said in a low voice "I’m sorry and heartbroken ,mom. I failed .What should I do ? I’m ready to quit," avoiding eye contact/communication with her. 3 Sensing my disappointment, mom patted my shoulder and said in an encouraging / comforting voice :" Never mind, my honey. Life is full of ups and l downs. Where there's a will, there’s a way . Believe in yourself and you’ll make it sooner or later.” 4 Touched/Moved by the words , I felt my self-doubt faded away and my eyes lit up . Finally ,I decided / made up my mind to practice hard. I was lost in practice with heart and soul day and night 我发现自己陷入了一种似乎一切都不对劲的境地。悲伤如同黑影一样沉重, 漂浮在空气中。言语难以表达我的遗憾，眼泪大颗滚落。无助又难过，我低声说：“好难过好心碎啊，妈妈，我失败了,我该怎么办呀？我准备放弃了”，避免跟她眼神交流。感受到我的沮丧，妈妈拍拍我的肩膀 并 以一种鼓励的语气说：”没关系，亲爱的，生活总是跌宕起伏。有志者事竟成。相信你自己并坚持你的梦想，你早晚会成功的！“ 被妈妈的话触动，我感觉到自我怀疑消失，眼神亮了起来。最后我决定努力练习。日夜全身心地沉浸在练习中 第二段：练习后成功实现梦想，升华 5 The big day finally came/arrived. 6 （紧张害怕 高分）Anxious and worried, my mind went blank，only standing there in despair and wondering how to deal with this situation. Suddenly, a wave of anxiety flooded over me . So scared was I that I froze. With butterflies in my stomach, I took a deep breath and tried to calm down ,only to find my heart pounding wildly and my hands sweating. 7 Suddenly mom's words flashed in my mind .With determination, I started my performance. 8 Luckily, with endless efforts, I made it. At that moment ,an inner voice told me : “All the efforts paid off.” My friend also said :“Congratulations! You are the best.” 9 Moved and happy, I hugged my friend, wearing a bright smile. 10 Not until then did I realize that whatever challenge we met, it's perseverance and others’ encouragement that drove us to achieve our dream. The experience was like an everlasting flower , blooming in the river of my memories.那一天终于来了。又紧张又担心，我的大脑一片空白，只是绝望地站着，想知道怎么办。突然，紧张席卷了我。我吓得呆住了。心里七上八下，紧张万分，我深吸一口气并尝试冷静下来，结果只发现我的心狂跳以及手心都是汗。突然，妈妈的话闪过我的脑海。带着决心，我开始表演。幸运的是，随着不懈的努力，我入选了。内心的声音告诉我：所有付出都得到了回报。朋友说：恭喜你！你是最棒的。感动又开心，我紧紧抱住朋友, 绽放了一个明媚的笑容。在那一刻，我意识到无论我们遇到什么困难，是坚持和别人的鼓励驱使我们实现梦想。 【Ⅱ】互助与救助 模板：帮助别人，获得成长类 1.互助：【典例呈现】： 医院做志愿者 续写情节： (para 1 )糟糕环境描写 +负面情绪（着急、担心、不知所措）+努力平静寻找方法— （para 2）帮助结果=救援来了—作者受到触动—感恩—感悟和升华：传递善意 第一段：Suddenly, I noticed a foreigner standing beside the machine with a confused look. 1 The heavy atmosphere was like a dark shadow, floating in the air. 2 Confused andworried, he stood there in despair. 3 Seeing his anxiety, I approached him with a warm smile and asked if he needed any help in English. 4 His eyes lit up immediately. He explained that he had trouble in understanding the ... 5 Without any hesitation, I guided him step by step, showing how to solve this problem. 6 With our joint efforts , we make it . Finally, he sighed in relief and expressed his heartfelt gratitude:“You’re so warm-hearted and patient .I can’t thank you more!”A bright smile spread over our face. 7 At that moment , breeze blowing and sunshine flooding in my mind. I realized it is my assitance that made a big difference to him . 1.沉重的气氛就像一团黑影，漂浮在房间里。2.困惑而焦虑，他失望地站在那里。3.看到了它的焦虑，我走近他，面带微笑，并用英语问他是否需要帮助。4.他的眼睛立刻亮了起来。他解释说 他在理解……上遇到了困难。 5.毫不犹豫，我一步一步地指导他，演示如何解决这个问题。6.在我们的共同努力下，我们成功了。最后，他松了一口气并表达了由衷的感激之情：“你真热心，有耐心。我非常感谢你”.灿烂的笑容在我们脸上绽放。7.笑那一刻,微风吹拂,阳光洒进我的心田。我意识到就是我的帮助对他有了巨大的影响。 第二段：That moment really touched my heart. 8 A wave of warmth washed over me .An idea flashed in my mind that I realize my small acts of kindness can be powerful enough to make a big difference in others’ day. 9 As time went by, I kept volunteering and helping those in need, each effort adding more warmth to the world, during which I felt a deep sense of satisfaction. 10 This experience not only enriched my life, but also taught me valuable lessons about compassion ,patience and communication. “ Roses given, fragrance in hands .” It was love and help that made the world go round. From then on, I became more caring and positive, and always devoted myself to spreading kindness . 8. 温暖传遍全身。一个想法在脑海中浮现,那就是我意识到，我的小小的善举可以强大到足以对别人的一天产生巨大影响。9. 时光慢慢逝去，我不断做志愿，帮助更多的人，每一次互动都为世界增添了更多的温暖，在此期间我感到了深深的满足感。 10. 这次经历不仅丰富了我的生活，也教会了我宝贵的一课：关于同情心，耐心和沟通。“赠人玫瑰，手留余香” 是爱和帮助让世界运转起来。从那时起，我变得更加关心他人和积极向上,并且致力于传播善意。 2.救助：【典例呈现】 回家途中救助受伤司机 续写情节： (para 1 )：遇见车祸 +司机受伤（着急、担心、但犹豫）+最终努力救助，司机得救— （para 2：作者感动—感恩—升华：传递善意，自己得到成长。 第一段：Taking a deep breath, Nancy stepped forward to the car. (1) Getting close to the car, Nancy found the seatbelt was digging into his neck, making it difficult for him to breathe.(原文) (2) A wave of anxiety washed over her . (原文) Nervous and worried, she shouted to the crowd, asking for something sharp to cut the belt. (3) A man handed her a knife, and Nancy carefully cut the seatbelt, which made the driver breathe easily. (4) Seeing that, Nancy sighed in relief .An inner voice told her :"Nancy ,you are great. A small act of kindness can make a big difference ". (5) Then, an ambulance came and the rescue team arrived. The driver was saved. The comforting atmosphere was floating in the air. A big smile spread over Nancy's face. 南希深吸了一口气，朝汽车走去。1.南希走近车时，发现安全带扎进了他的脖子，他呼吸都困难了。2.一股焦虑的情绪涌上心头。她又紧张又担心，向人群喊道，要一把锋利的东西来剪断腰带。3.一个男人递给她一把刀，南希小心翼翼地剪断了安全带，这样司机就松了一口气。4.看到这些，南希松了口气。一个内心的声音对她说：“南希，你太棒了。一个小小的善举可以带来很大的不同。” 5.然后，一辆救护车来了，救援队也到了.司机得救了。空气中弥漫着舒适的气氛。南茜的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 第二段：A few days later, Nancy received a call from the driver, Dave. (6) Dave's voice filled with gratitude , and excited and grateful, he thanked her for saving his life. “You were my lifeline,” he said. (7) A wave of surprise swept over Nancy . This was an unexpected gratitude. (8) Dave continued :"I didn't remember much about the accident, but I remembered your voice, telling me to hang on. It was you that made me survive . I couldn't thank you more!" (9) Nancy was touched by his heartfelt gratitude , feeling warm in her mind. (10) Nancy couldn't help but reflect on the painful memory from the past, (照应原文)but this time, it felt different. (11) This time, she had done the right thing, and she felt proud of herself and strongly believed it was love and help that made the world go round. 几天后，南希接到司机戴夫的电话。6. 他的声音里充满了感激之情，戴夫既兴奋又感激. 他感谢她救了他的命。“你是我的救命稻草，”他说。7. 南希大吃一惊。这是一种意想不到的感激。8. 戴夫继续说：“我不太记得那次事故，但我记得你的声音，告诉我坚持住。是你让我活了下来。我真是太感谢你了！”9. 南希被他衷心的感谢感动了，心里暖暖的。10.南希不禁回想起过去的痛苦记忆，但这一次，感觉不同了。11.这一次，她做了正确的事，她为自己感到骄傲，并坚信是爱和帮助使世界运转。 【Ⅲ】友情 模板：朋友之间相互帮助类 【典例呈现】：送好朋友（家境困难）的奶奶生日礼物 续写情节：朋友K有困难——A准备帮助——K得知（惊讶，感动，开心，喜极而泣）——A安慰朋友—升华（朋友应该相互帮助，友谊永存） 第一段：That night, Athur asked his mom to join his secret plan. ①At that moment, learning what they were going through，mom’s heart skipped a beat. Surprised and relieved, mom agreed happily. An good idea flashed in their mind. ②The big day finally came. They came to K’s home with a secret present and a bunch of flower, hoping to bring an unforgettable and bright day ③Upon seeing their arrival, K felt a mix of joy and surprise, tears welling up in eyes. ④Patting K’s shoulder, A said in an encouraging voice: friends are always together. Hurry up to open the present 1.在那一刻，得知他们正在经历的事情，妈妈的心跳加速了一拍。又惊呀又欣慰，妈妈高兴地同意了。他们脑海中闪过一个好主意。2.这个重要的日子终于到来了。他们带着一份秘密礼物和一束鲜花来到 K 的家，希望能带来难忘而愉快的一天。3.看到他们的到来，K 感到喜悦和惊讶交织在一起，泪水在眼眶中涌出。4.拍拍 K 的肩膀，A 用鼓励的声音说：朋友总是在一起的。赶快打开礼物 第二段：Kyle’s grandmother opened the present. ⑤Seeing the present ,at that moment, so surprised was grandmom that she froze, with eyes wide open. The present was what she wanted—an album. Words failed to express her feeling. She was moved to tears. ⑥K said with heartfelt gratitude:“You’re so caring and kind. I can’t thank you more!”A bright smile spread over his face . ⑦ “That’s what friend means. There’s no need to say thank you” A said . ⑧ Breeze blowing and sunshine flooding in K’s world，he got refreshed and warmth returned to his heart. The golden sunlight shone on them and saw their friendship. Cheerful laughter floating in the air, they bathed themselves in love. The warmth of friend enveloped them. ⑨An inner voice told K “no matter what happens ,nothing is more valuable than friendship. Friend ,our warmest shelter ,is always there. It was friend that provides support ,comfort and company when we’re in need and feel down .Friendship matters most in the world.” With friendship can the world become happier and warmer. The experience was like an everlasting flower , blooming in the river of their memories. 5.看到礼物，那一刻，奶奶惊讶得愣住了，睁大了眼睛。礼物是她想要的专辑。言语无法表达她的感受。她感动得流下了眼泪。6. K 感谢地说：“你太好了。非常感谢！他的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。 7. “这就是朋友的意义。无需说谢谢，”A说。8. 微风拂面，阳光洒进 K 的世界，他焕然一新，暖意回归。灿烂的阳光照在他们身上，见证了他们的友谊。欢快的笑声飘荡在空气中，他们沐浴在爱中。朋友的温暖笼罩着他们。9. 内心的声音响起“无论发生什么，没有什么比友谊更珍贵。朋友，我们最温暖的庇护所，永远在那里。当我们有困难时，失落时，是朋友提供了支持、安慰和陪伴。友谊在世界上最重要。有了友谊，世界才能变得更快乐、更温暖。这次经历就像永恒之花，绽放在他们的记忆长河中。 【Ⅳ】亲情 模板：家人之间产生问题-沟通-理解关爱类 【典例呈现】：独生子Victor 的改变 续写情节：父母有了养女后忽视了Victor—Victor在学校捣乱以吸引父母关注—(para1)老师约谈父母—父母反思并改变—(para 2 )Victor感受到爱,积极改变—升华（沟通，理解和爱消除家人隔阂） 第一段：Upon hearing feedback of teacher, Victor’s parents got lost in thought. ①Learning what the little kid was going through，parents’ hearts skipped a beat. Sad and guilty, not until then did they realize they ignored Victor. ②They were about to make some changes when a good idea flashed in their mind. Actions speak louder than words. They decided to … ③On a sunny day, they came to Victor’s room. Patting Victor’s shoulder ,mom said in a comforting voice: “Honey, we feel extremely sorry to ignore you, but we’re not on purpose. It’s just because we’re busy taking care of your little sister ” ④Without any hesitation, they hugged the boy tightly, with tears streaming down cheeks. 得知这个小孩子正在经历的事情，父母的心跳加速了一拍。悲伤且内疚，直到那时他们才意识到他们忽视了Victor。当他们正准备做出一些改变时，一个好主意在他们的脑海中闪过。行动胜于雄辩。他们决定......在一个阳光明媚的日子里，他们来到 Victor 的房间。妈妈拍着 Victor 的肩膀，用安慰的声音说：“亲爱的，我们非常抱歉忽视了你，但我们不是故意的。只是因为我们忙着照顾你的小妹妹”。他们毫不犹豫地紧紧地拥抱了男孩，泪水顺着脸颊流下。 第二段：Victor realized his parents still cared for him. ⑤At that moment, breeze blowing and sunshine flooding in his world，he got refreshed and warmth returned to his heart. A wave of wild happiness flooded over him. Joyful and relieved, He made up his mind to make a change. He started to tend sister with mom …… ⑥Seeing what the little boy was doing, parents felt a mix of joy and relief, tears welling up in eyes .With deep love in mind, mom said in a comforting voice :“ I’ll always love you.” ⑦ Cheerful laughter floating in the room, the family bathed themselves in the great love. The warmth of family enveloped them. No matter what happens ,nothing is more valuable than family. Family, where life begins and love never ends ,is always there. It was family that provides support ,comfort and company when we’re in need and feel down . With love of family can the world become happier and warmer. The experience was like an everlasting flower , blooming in the river of their memories. 在那一刻，微风拂面，阳光洒在他的世界里，他焕然一新，温暖又回到了他的心中。一阵幸福感涌上心头。开心又松了一口气，他下定决心要做出改变。他开始和妈妈一起照顾妹妹......看到小男孩的所作所为，父母们感到喜悦和解脱交织在一起，泪水在眼眶中涌出。怀着深深的爱，妈妈用安慰的声音说：“我会永远爱你。欢快的笑声飘荡在房间里，一家人沐浴在爱中。 家庭的温暖笼罩着他们。无论发生什么，没有什么比家庭更珍贵。家庭，这个生命开始的地方、爱永无止境的地方，永远在那里。当我们需要帮助和感到沮丧时，家人会提供支持、安慰和陪伴。有了对家人的爱，世界才会变得更快乐、更温暖。这段经历就像一朵永恒的花朵，在他们记忆长河中绽放。 【Ⅵ】人与动物 模板：人与动物相互治愈 【典例呈现】：Max帮助主人克服恐狗症 续写情节：Jenny害怕狗—收养的狗Max鼓励她去救被困的puppy—(para1) 经过艰难思想斗争（害怕，紧张，犹豫）—最终救出狗狗—（para2）克服恐惧，喜欢狗—升华（同情心，帮助弱小，动物陪伴人） 第一段：Jenny took a deep breath, trying to calm herself down. ①The fear was like a dark shadow, floating in the air. Nervous and worried, her mind went blank, only standing there in despair and wondering how to deal with this situation. So scared was she that she froze. With butterflies in her stomach, she took a deep breath and tried to calm down ,only to find her heart pounding wildly and hands sweating. ②With Max's encouragement ,an idea flashed in her mind.Thinking twice, Jenny decided to help the puppy out with a hard stick. Arms holding and petting the puppy, Jenny said in a comforting voice: "You'll be OK soon," hoping to ease its trembling. Max sat beside her, offering support quietly. ③To her relief ,the puppy started to relax, wagging its tail and eyes lightening as if grateful to her. Seeing this, she sighed in relief. ④（第一段万能衔接）This unexpected rescue was about to change her understanding of the relationship between humans and animals.恐惧就像一个黑影，漂浮在空气中。紧张和担忧，她的大脑一片空白，只能绝望地站在那里，想知道如何应对这种情况。 她吓得愣住了。心理紧张，七上八下，她深吸一口气，试图冷静下来，却发现自己的心跳加速，手上冒汗。在Max的鼓励下，她脑海中闪过一个想法。再三思考后，珍妮决定用一根棍子帮助小狗出来。珍妮抱着小狗并抚摸着，用安慰的声音说：“你很快就会没事的，”希望能缓解它的痛苦。 Max 坐在她身边，静静地提供支持。令她松了一口气的是，这只小狗开始放松，摇着尾巴，眼睛发亮，仿佛在感激她。见状，她松了一口气。（第一段万能衔接）这次意外的救援，即将改变她对人与动物关系的理解。 第二段：That moment of rescuing the puppy became a turning point for Jenny. ⑤From then on, Jenny found her fear fading away and she got closer to Max . ⑥One day, when she played with Max in the park, the puppy rushed to them like a lightning, jumping up and down, licking her face, laughter of happiness floating in the park. ⑦Watching the puppy was right where it belonged, safe and sound, Jenny felt a mix of joy and relief, tears welling up. The two dogs not only healed her sorrow but kept her company. ⑧Not until then did Jenny realize compassion was the universal language of all lives. And only when we help the weaker life and live in harmony with nature can we make the world warmer and happier. The experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of Jenny’s memory. 从那时起，珍妮发现她的恐惧逐渐消失，她与麦克斯越来越亲近。一天，她和Max在公园里玩耍时，那只小狗像闪电一样冲向他们，上蹿下跳，舔着她的脸，幸福的笑声在公园里飘荡。 看着这只小狗待在它应该在的地方，安然无恙，珍妮感到喜悦和解脱交织在一起，泪水涌了出来。这两只狗不仅治愈了她的悲伤，还陪伴着她。直到那时，珍妮才意识到同情心是所有生命的通用语言。只有帮助弱小的生命，与自然和谐相处，才能让世界更温暖、更快乐 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$