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Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals . (写作提升)
介绍动物或植物
【典例导引】
本单元的话题是“植物和动物的奇妙之处及与人类生活的联系”,针对这一话题,我们可以围绕植物和动物的独特特性及其对人类生活的影响展开讨论。此类作文通常会以说明文、议论文或应用文为主(如科普文章或环保倡议书)。人称多用第三人称或客观视角,时态以一般现在时为主,写作时应通过具体事例说明植物和动物的奇妙之处及其与人类生活的联系,并遵循“提出观点—举例论证—总结结论”的逻辑顺序。本单元相关话题写作素材有:
(1)one of the largest/heaviest/most beautiful ... 世界上最大/重/美丽的......之一
(2)weigh as much as ... 重达......
(3)We must protect... 我们必须保护......
(4)Imagine...but there are almost no ... 想象一下.......,但几乎没有......
(5)At this moment you realize... 此时此刻你意识到.......
(6)People, plants, and animals are all connected. 人类、植物和动物都是相互联系的。
(7)Think about what you can do to ... 想想你能做些什么来......
【典例】
假如你是李华,你校将在英语周举办征文比赛,主题是“An amazing plant/animal”。请根据以下信息用英文写一篇短文投稿。
提示:(1)最令你惊奇的动物/植物是什么;
(2)关于它们的有趣事实;
(3)它们在生态系统中的重要性;
(4)......
要求:(1)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,符合英语书写规范。
(2)在第(4)点中透当自由发辉,加入自己的观点,不少于80词。
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【导图】
【范文借鉴】
【专项训练】
1.你的老师Miss Chen要求你们以小组为单位写一篇主题为保护动植物的倡议性文章,以下是你们小组成员的观点,请根据以下表格要点提示,适当发挥完成作文。
Protect Man’s Best Friends
Jim
动物帮助我们做很多事,比如帮助盲人;
Anna
植物能净化空气;使我们的生活更便利;
你的观点
动物对我们的帮助(请补充至少一个点)
植物对我们的帮助(请补充至少一个点)
你们的倡议
停止伤害(harm)动物、砍伐树木;
保护动植物,让地球更美好……
注意:
作文必须包括表格所有信息;
词数:80词左右;
不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Protect Man’s Best Friends
Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives._________________________
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2.动物是我们人类的朋友,在我们的生活中占很重要的位置。请你以“Mountain Gorillas”为题,参考以下表格,写一篇英语短文简单介绍一下山地大猩猩,并呼吁人们保护动物。
Mountain gorillas (山地大猩猩)
Habitat (栖息地)
central Africa
Situation
in great danger
Characters
gentle and clever
Dian Fossey (a scientist)
be interested in mountain gorillas; do a lot for the animals; write books
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等);
3. 词数:不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Mountain Gorillas
The wild mountain gorillas live in the central Africa. __________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.动物与人类是地球上共生的伙伴,彼此之间的和谐关系对于维护生态平衡以及促进人类幸福感具有重要意义。
假定你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展以 “Animal Friends” 为主题的交流活动,作为社团成员,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈为什么动物是我们的朋友以及我们如何与它们和睦相处。
提示词语:help, happy, learn
提示内容:●Why are animals our friends?
●What can we do to get on well (和睦相处) with them?
Good morning everyone. Today, I’d like to talk about our animal friends.____________________________
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4.请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,并将其发表在校英文网站上。
提示:
1. 大象是陆地上最大的哺乳动物,可以活到80岁;
2. 目前数量在减少,因为:
①人们砍伐森林,使一些大象渐渐失去了家园;
②人们捕杀大象来获取象牙;
3. 应如何保护它们(不少于三条措施)。
要求:
1. 内容应包括提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 恰当运用比较级和最高级,80词左右。
参考词汇:象牙 ivory 哺乳动物 mammal 贡献 contribution
Dear schoolmates,
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5.假如你是李梅,你校校英文报正在以“我的宠物”为题开展征文活动,请你根据下列表格中的提示,写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的宠物猫。
Name
Mimi
What it eats
fish, meat, …
Size
small
Features (特征)
friendly, clever, …
Colour
yellow and white
What it can do
catch mice, …
Why you like it
…
/
/
要求:
1. 文章必须包含提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone. I have a pet cat at home. ____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.植物对人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华,请你根据以下思维导图的提示,以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性,呼吁大家爱护花草树木。
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息;
(4)词数不少于70。
The Importance of Plants
We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.___________________________________________________________________
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In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.
7.同学们,大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华,请你根据以下思维导图的提示以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性,呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息;4. 词数:不少于70词。
The Importance of Plants
We all know, plants are very important for our humans, animals and the environment we live. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.__________________________________________________________
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8.兔狲是国家二级保护动物,也是一种濒危动物。你打算在本周的英语角活动中介绍这种动物,并呼吁大家保护动物,热爱大自然。请你根据提示,写一篇英语发言稿。
要求:(1)须全面反映图文信息;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
(3)80—100词左右。
The Pallas’s CatLooks: ● long hair ● gray or brown ● about the size of a house cat
Living environment: grassland (草原) and deserts
Food: smaller animals, such as mice and pikas (鼠兔)
Facts: (1) They lose their homes; (2) Humans kill them; (3) It’s difficult to keep them at the zoo.
Hope: …
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9.动物是人类的好朋友,人们应该善待动物。请根据下面提示以“Let’s Help Animals”为题写一篇词数80~100 的英语短文,呼吁人们热爱动物、保护动物。
要点提示:
1.简要介绍大熊猫(产于中国西南部,颜色黑白相间,喜欢吃竹子和睡觉,现仅存大约2000只);
2.分析濒危动物将要灭绝的原因(例如栖息地范围缩小,人类对野生动物的大肆捕杀……);
3.提出保护动物的方法(例如捐钱,建立自然保护区等)。
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10.学校举办了以“protecting animals” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请根据下面表格中的提示,写一篇不少于80词的英语演讲稿,讲述自己为保护动物所做过的事情,并谈谈以后的打算。
内容提示:
事迹
为拯救大象筹款,收养小动物
感悟
动物是人类的朋友,保护动物就是保护我们自己
打算
加入动物保护俱乐部,号召朋友共同保护动物
要求:
1. 必须用上所有的内容提示,语句通顺,书写规范;
2. 词数80左右,已给出的句子不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. _________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
11.如今,世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝,如熊猫、鲸鱼、大象等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物,创造人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“Protect Endangered Animals”为题,根据以下内容要点,选择一种濒危动物,写一篇英语演讲稿,在开学初的“英语节”活动中和大家分享。
内容包括:1. 介绍该濒危动物的外形等基本情况及其生存现状;
2. 列举其濒危的原因,至少两点;
3. 提出具体保护措施,至少两点。
写作要求:1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
2. 词数在80词左右,开头部分已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 书写规范,卷面整洁;
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. ________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.动物是人类的朋友,然而由于环境污染、人类捕杀等原因,很多动物濒临灭绝。假如你是李华,你所在学校将在世界动物日到来之际,开展以“拯救动物”为主题的演讲活动。请你以“Let’s Protect Whales!”为题,从鲸鱼的习性、现状和原因、采取措施等方面完善思维导图,并根据导图写一篇英文演讲稿!
要求:
(l) 参照以上提示,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2) 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(校名、姓名和地名等等);
(3) 词数80词左右(标题开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Let’s Protect Whales!
Dear friends,
It’s my great honour to give a speech today!___________________________________________________
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13.假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明,现在正在向初中学生讲述植物的重要性并倡议学生们要保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性(The Importance of Plants)的作文,可适当发挥。
提示:
(1)What plants can you see in our daily life?
(2)What do plants need to grow well?
(3)Why are plants important? (至少三点)
提示词:environment环境;provide提供
要求:1.短文必须包括所有提示内容;
2. 词数:不少于70,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants.________________
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14.3月12日是植树节,假设你们班组织去公园植树。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍此次活动并表达你的感想。
提示:
(1)What did you help do in the activity?
(2)Why are trees so important?(至少两点)
(3)What should you do next?
注意:
(1)短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)词数70个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My classmates and I went to the park to plant trees on March 12th. ________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.假设你是林东,昨天晚上在电视上看了一个有关东北虎(Siberian tiger)的纪录片,对东北虎的生存现状非常担忧。请根据以下提示,向某英语报社写一篇保护东北虎的倡议书。
提示:
1. 东北虎强壮、漂亮,是人们在动物园最喜欢观看的动物之一。
2. 现在东北虎的数量正变得越来越少。
3. 东北虎处境危险的原因:人们砍伐森林,东北虎没有栖息地;人们想要虎皮(fur)而杀死虎。
4. 保护东北虎的建议:自然保护区(natural reserve),号召人们不买……。
要求:包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,不得逐句翻译:正确运用形容词的比较级和最高级;不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Do you know the beautiful Siberian Tigers? Have you seen them in the zoo?_________________________
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Let’s try our best to save the Siberian tigers.
Yours,
Lin Dong
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学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals . (写作提升)
介绍动物或植物
【典例导引】
本单元的话题是“植物和动物的奇妙之处及与人类生活的联系”,针对这一话题,我们可以围绕植物和动物的独特特性及其对人类生活的影响展开讨论。此类作文通常会以说明文、议论文或应用文为主(如科普文章或环保倡议书)。人称多用第三人称或客观视角,时态以一般现在时为主,写作时应通过具体事例说明植物和动物的奇妙之处及其与人类生活的联系,并遵循“提出观点—举例论证—总结结论”的逻辑顺序。本单元相关话题写作素材有:
(1)one of the largest/heaviest/most beautiful ... 世界上最大/重/美丽的......之一
(2)weigh as much as ... 重达......
(3)We must protect... 我们必须保护......
(4)Imagine...but there are almost no ... 想象一下.......,但几乎没有......
(5)At this moment you realize... 此时此刻你意识到.......
(6)People, plants, and animals are all connected. 人类、植物和动物都是相互联系的。
(7)Think about what you can do to ... 想想你能做些什么来......
【典例】
假如你是李华,你校将在英语周举办征文比赛,主题是“An amazing plant/animal”。请根据以下信息用英文写一篇短文投稿。
提示:(1)最令你惊奇的动物/植物是什么;
(2)关于它们的有趣事实;
(3)它们在生态系统中的重要性;
(4)......
要求:(1)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,符合英语书写规范。
(2)在第(4)点中透当自由发辉,加入自己的观点,不少于80词。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【导图】
【范文借鉴】
【专项训练】
1.你的老师Miss Chen要求你们以小组为单位写一篇主题为保护动植物的倡议性文章,以下是你们小组成员的观点,请根据以下表格要点提示,适当发挥完成作文。
Protect Man’s Best Friends
Jim
动物帮助我们做很多事,比如帮助盲人;
Anna
植物能净化空气;使我们的生活更便利;
你的观点
动物对我们的帮助(请补充至少一个点)
植物对我们的帮助(请补充至少一个点)
你们的倡议
停止伤害(harm)动物、砍伐树木;
保护动植物,让地球更美好……
注意:
作文必须包括表格所有信息;
词数:80词左右;
不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Protect Man’s Best Friends
Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives._________________________
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【答案】
Protect Man’s Best Friend
Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. Here are the opinions of our group members.
Jim says that animals help us do many things. For example, animals can help blind people. Anna says that plants freshen the air and make our life more convenient. In my opinion, animals are our good friends, so we should get along well with them. Animals are also helpful to us. Dogs can accompany our families so that they do not feel lonely. The plants provide us with food, so they are so important for us. We should stop harming animals and cutting down trees.
In a world, we have only one earth so we should live peacefully! Let’s protect animals and plants, make the earth a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注心不要遗漏“信息提示”中保护动植物的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,引出观点;
第二步,具体阐述各自关于保护动植物的观点和倡议等;
第三步,书写结语表达“保护动植物,让地球更美好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②get along well with相处融洽
③stop doing sth停止做某事
[高分句型]
①Here are the opinions of our group members.(here be句型)
②Dogs can accompany our families so that they do not feel lonely.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
2.动物是我们人类的朋友,在我们的生活中占很重要的位置。请你以“Mountain Gorillas”为题,参考以下表格,写一篇英语短文简单介绍一下山地大猩猩,并呼吁人们保护动物。
Mountain gorillas (山地大猩猩)
Habitat (栖息地)
central Africa
Situation
in great danger
Characters
gentle and clever
Dian Fossey (a scientist)
be interested in mountain gorillas; do a lot for the animals; write books
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等);
3. 词数:不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Mountain Gorillas
The wild mountain gorillas live in the central Africa. __________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Mountain Gorillas
The wild mountain gorillas live in the central Africa. The big animals are in great danger. Many people believe that mountain gorillas are fierce. But in fact, gorillas are both gentle and clever. They use their strength only when they want to protect their families or groups.
Dian Fossey is interested in the animals. She has learned a lot about the gorillas. She has done a lot for the animals. She has also written many books so that people can do something to protect the animals.
I think we should do something like Dian Fossey to protect the animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生写作时注意要按表格提示的要点写,不要遗漏表格中“山地大猩猩的栖息地、现状、性格特点,以及科学家Dian Fossey对它们的关注”等要点,根据实际情况可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍山地大猩猩的栖息地、现状、性格特点等要点,纠正人们对其凶猛的错误认知;
第二步,讲述科学家Dian Fossey对山地大猩猩的关注及所做之事;
第三步,发出呼吁,表明我们应像Dian Fossey一样保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
① in great danger 处于极大危险中
② in fact 事实上
③ be interested in 对……感兴趣
④ learned a lot about 学习大量有关于……
⑤ so that 以便,为了
[高分句型]
① They use their strength only when they want to protect their families or groups. (时间状语从句)
② She has also written many books so that people can do something to protect the animals. (目的状语从句)
③ I think we should do something like Dian Fossey to protect the animals. (宾语从句)
3.动物与人类是地球上共生的伙伴,彼此之间的和谐关系对于维护生态平衡以及促进人类幸福感具有重要意义。
假定你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展以 “Animal Friends” 为主题的交流活动,作为社团成员,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈为什么动物是我们的朋友以及我们如何与它们和睦相处。
提示词语:help, happy, learn
提示内容:●Why are animals our friends?
●What can we do to get on well (和睦相处) with them?
Good morning everyone. Today, I’d like to talk about our animal friends.____________________________
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【答案】
Good morning everyone. Today, I’d like to talk about our animal friends.
Take dogs for example. Dogs are our most loyal friends as humans. The loyalty of dogs is well-known. No matter what situation the owner is in, the dog always stays by their side. Dogs are very intelligent. They can learn some commands and help people with the simplest things, such as guarding their homes and accompanying the elderly and children. It can sense the emotions of its owner. When the owner is happy, it wags its tail, and when the owner is sad, it quietly accompanies him.
As owners, we should understand the behavior habits of dogs and spend as much time as possible with them to establish friendships and trust relationships. Do not use violence against dogs.
In short, animals are friends of humans, and we should live in harmony. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍动物朋友;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,以狗为例,介绍了狗狗为什么是人类的朋友及人类怎么与狗狗相处;
第三步,书写结语,表达人类要与动物和谐共处。
[亮点词汇]
①take...for example以……为例
②be well-known众所周知
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①When the owner is happy, it wags its tail, and when the owner is sad, it quietly accompanies him. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Do not use violence against dogs. (祈使句)
4.请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,并将其发表在校英文网站上。
提示:
1. 大象是陆地上最大的哺乳动物,可以活到80岁;
2. 目前数量在减少,因为:
①人们砍伐森林,使一些大象渐渐失去了家园;
②人们捕杀大象来获取象牙;
3. 应如何保护它们(不少于三条措施)。
要求:
1. 内容应包括提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 恰当运用比较级和最高级,80词左右。
参考词汇:象牙 ivory 哺乳动物 mammal 贡献 contribution
Dear schoolmates,
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【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on land. They will be able to live to be about 80 years old. However, these days the number of elephants is becoming much smaller. Because people cut down forests, they are losing their homes. Also, people kill them for their ivories. Elephants are in great danger. I think we should try our best to protect them. First, we should help make rules to stop people from killing elephants. Second, we shouldn’t cut down trees. Third, we shouldn’t buy anything made of ivory.
I believe everyone’s contribution can make a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍大象的基本信息以及目前面临的危险以及原因;
第二步,介绍保护措施;
第三步,总结全文
[亮点词汇]
①be able to能够
②cut down砍倒
③in danger处于危险中
[高分句型]
I think we should try our best to protect them.(宾语从句)
5.假如你是李梅,你校校英文报正在以“我的宠物”为题开展征文活动,请你根据下列表格中的提示,写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的宠物猫。
Name
Mimi
What it eats
fish, meat, …
Size
small
Features (特征)
friendly, clever, …
Colour
yellow and white
What it can do
catch mice, …
Why you like it
…
/
/
要求:
1. 文章必须包含提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone. I have a pet cat at home. ____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I have a pet cat at home. Its name is Mimi. It is small with soft fur and it has two bright eyes. It’s yellow and white. It likes eating fish and meat, but it doesn’t like vegetables. Mimi is very friendly and always makes me feel warm. Mimi is clever and can catch mice. It likes playing hide-and-seek with me. It also likes sleeping and it sleeps most of the time. I like Mimi very much because it is not just a pet, but a real friend to me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要交代宠物猫的外貌特征;
第二步,具体交代宠物猫的喜好和性格特征;
第三步,简要介绍喜欢自己宠物猫的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①soft柔软的
②friendly友好的
③like doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
I like Mimi very much because it is not just a pet, but a real friend to me. (because引导的原因状语从句)
6.植物对人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华,请你根据以下思维导图的提示,以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性,呼吁大家爱护花草树木。
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息;
(4)词数不少于70。
The Importance of Plants
We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.___________________________________________________________________
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In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.
【答案】
The Importance of Plants
We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
First of all, for people, plants can meet our basic needs. We can get a lot of food from plants. Some plants can be made into medicine and clothing. They are also important for animals. Many animals live in the forest and they live on plants. Finally, trees and other plants help clean the air, so we can breathe the fresh air every day. They can also cover the soil to stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away.
In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从人类的角度,谈论植物的重要性;
第二步,从动物的角度,谈论植物的重要性;
第三步,从环境的角度,谈论植物的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①be important for对……重要
②stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.(and连接两个并列成分)
7.同学们,大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华,请你根据以下思维导图的提示以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性,呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息;4. 词数:不少于70词。
The Importance of Plants
We all know, plants are very important for our humans, animals and the environment we live. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.__________________________________________________________
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【答案】
The Importance of Plants
We all know, plants are very important for our humans, animals and the environment we live. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
In food and medicine, people can eat plants or use them as medicine. Animals eat the fruit from the trees. In shelter, when the weather is sunny and hot, you can sit in the shade under a tree. It’s nice and cool. People use wood from trees to build houses and furniture. In clothing and school things, clothing is also made from trees and plants. Books, paper, pencils and erasers all come from plants. In environment, plants help make the air clean and fresh. The plants cover the soil and can stop the wind.
In a word, all of us cannot live without plants. The plants are important.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据思维导图的提示谈论植物的重要性,时态运用正确,注意无拼写和语法错误,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出话题;
第二步,分别从对人类、动物和环境方面介绍植物的重要性;
第三步,总结。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce sth to sb 把某物介绍给某人
②be made from 由……制成
[高分句型]
①In shelter, when the weather is sunny and hot, you can sit in the shade under a tree. (时间状语从句)
8.兔狲是国家二级保护动物,也是一种濒危动物。你打算在本周的英语角活动中介绍这种动物,并呼吁大家保护动物,热爱大自然。请你根据提示,写一篇英语发言稿。
要求:(1)须全面反映图文信息;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
(3)80—100词左右。
The Pallas’s CatLooks: ● long hair ● gray or brown ● about the size of a house cat
Living environment: grassland (草原) and deserts
Food: smaller animals, such as mice and pikas (鼠兔)
Facts: (1) They lose their homes; (2) Humans kill them; (3) It’s difficult to keep them at the zoo.
Hope: …
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【答案】
The Pallas’s Cat
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to tell you something about the pallas’s cat.
They are endangered now. Firstly, let me tell you something about their looks. They have long hair and their hair is gray or brown. The size of it is about a house cat. Secondly, I’d like to tell you about their living environment. They live in grassland and deserts. As for food, they like eating smaller animals such as mice and pikas. They are cute animals. But now they have lost their homes and many humans kill them. At the same time, it’s difficult for us to keep them at the zoo.
So I’d like to call on all of us to protect this kind of animal and don’t hurt them.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点明写作目的,引出要介绍的动物——兔狲;
第二步:具体从外貌、生活环境、食物喜好等方面详细介绍兔狲,并阐述兔狲濒危的原因;
第三步:书写结语,发出呼吁,号召大家保护兔狲,使文章具备现实意义。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth.乐意去做某事
②as for对于、至于
③call on号召
[高分句型]
①At the same time, it’s difficult for us to keep them at the zoo.(it固定句型)
9.动物是人类的好朋友,人们应该善待动物。请根据下面提示以“Let’s Help Animals”为题写一篇词数80~100 的英语短文,呼吁人们热爱动物、保护动物。
要点提示:
1.简要介绍大熊猫(产于中国西南部,颜色黑白相间,喜欢吃竹子和睡觉,现仅存大约2000只);
2.分析濒危动物将要灭绝的原因(例如栖息地范围缩小,人类对野生动物的大肆捕杀……);
3.提出保护动物的方法(例如捐钱,建立自然保护区等)。
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【答案】
Let’s Help Animals
Animals are our good friends. We should treat them well. But now some wild animals like pandas are in danger. Pandas, with black and white fur, mainly live in the southwest of China. They like to eat bamboos and they sleep a lot. They are very cute and most people like them. However, we have only 2000 pandas now.
Why are so many wild animals in danger? People kill too many of them for their meat, fur, bones and other parts of the body. People also cut down many trees and take away their homes so that animals may have no place to live or food to eat. So they are becoming fewer and fewer.
Animals are our good friends. We should build more reserves and make laws to protect them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文写作;
②时态:时态主要为一般现在时;
③提示:写作主题已给出,写作时主要围绕要点提示展开,适当增加细节,使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍大熊猫的现状,引出动物濒临灭绝的问题;
第二步,分析濒危动物要灭绝的原因;
第三步,提出保护动物的方法,呼吁大家保护野生动物。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险中
②cut down砍伐
③take away拿走
[高分句型]
①People also cut down many trees and take away their homes so that animals may have no place to live or food to eat.(结果状语从句)
②We should build more reserves and make laws to protect them.(动词不定式作目的状语)
10.学校举办了以“protecting animals” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请根据下面表格中的提示,写一篇不少于80词的英语演讲稿,讲述自己为保护动物所做过的事情,并谈谈以后的打算。
内容提示:
事迹
为拯救大象筹款,收养小动物
感悟
动物是人类的朋友,保护动物就是保护我们自己
打算
加入动物保护俱乐部,号召朋友共同保护动物
要求:
1. 必须用上所有的内容提示,语句通顺,书写规范;
2. 词数80左右,已给出的句子不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. _________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I am kind and I love animals. I raised money for elephants last year. And I keep some homeless animals at home.
Animals are our friends. I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves. In the future, I will work harder and do more to protect animals. First, I will join the animal protection club and learn more about animals so that I can help them better. Second, I will also ask my family and friends to protect animals. I hope everyone can try their best to make the animals live in peace.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:材料所给内容请勿遗漏,突出写作重点,注意时态切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍并讲述自己在保护动物方面做过的事情;
第二步,重点阐述保护动物的感悟和打算;
第三步,表达愿望,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money募款
②in the future未来;今后
③try one’s best to do尽某人最大努力去做
④live in peace和平共处;平静地生活
[高分句型]
①I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves.(宾语从句)
②I will join the animal protection club and learn more about animals so that I can help them better. (目的状语从句)
11.如今,世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝,如熊猫、鲸鱼、大象等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物,创造人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“Protect Endangered Animals”为题,根据以下内容要点,选择一种濒危动物,写一篇英语演讲稿,在开学初的“英语节”活动中和大家分享。
内容包括:1. 介绍该濒危动物的外形等基本情况及其生存现状;
2. 列举其濒危的原因,至少两点;
3. 提出具体保护措施,至少两点。
写作要求:1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
2. 词数在80词左右,开头部分已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 书写规范,卷面整洁;
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. ________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. I want to talk something about endangered animals—pandas.
Pandas live in Sichuan, China. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely. But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍濒危动物的基本情况、生存现状以及濒危的原因,比如繁殖困难、食物短缺等;
第三步,给出保护它们的具体的建议,比如建设自然公园等。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on以……为食
②be in danger处于危险之中
③set up建立
④so that以便于
⑤raise money筹钱
[高分句型]
①We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②It is also a good idea to raise money for them. (it作形式主语句型)
③I hope there will be more pandas in the world. (省略that的宾语从句)
12.动物是人类的朋友,然而由于环境污染、人类捕杀等原因,很多动物濒临灭绝。假如你是李华,你所在学校将在世界动物日到来之际,开展以“拯救动物”为主题的演讲活动。请你以“Let’s Protect Whales!”为题,从鲸鱼的习性、现状和原因、采取措施等方面完善思维导图,并根据导图写一篇英文演讲稿!
要求:
(l) 参照以上提示,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2) 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(校名、姓名和地名等等);
(3) 词数80词左右(标题开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Let’s Protect Whales!
Dear friends,
It’s my great honour to give a speech today!___________________________________________________
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【答案】
Let’s Protect Whales!Dear friends,
It’s my great honour to give a speech today! Whales live mainly in the sea. They eat small fish and other sea lives. They are mammals. But because of water pollution and human fishing, their numbers are dwindling. In order to protect them, we must not buy their products. No sale, no harm. At the same time, we have to reduce pollution and protect the ocean. Animals are our friends. We live on the same earth together. Let’s act together to protect whales.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍有关鲸鱼的一些事实,如习性;
第二步,介绍鲸鱼所处的现状和原因;
第三步,介绍建议采取的措施并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①mainly主要地
②mammal哺乳动物
③dwindle减少
④in order to为了
⑤reduce减少
[高分句型]
Let’s act together to protect whales.(祈使句)
13.假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明,现在正在向初中学生讲述植物的重要性并倡议学生们要保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性(The Importance of Plants)的作文,可适当发挥。
提示:
(1)What plants can you see in our daily life?
(2)What do plants need to grow well?
(3)Why are plants important? (至少三点)
提示词:environment环境;provide提供
要求:1.短文必须包括所有提示内容;
2. 词数:不少于70,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants.________________
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【答案】
The Importance of Plants
My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants.
Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. Plants need sunlight and rain to grow well. They are very important to us. First, plants can provide us with fruit, medicine, wood and so on. Second, plants provide oxygen for human beings and beautify the environment. Finally, plants can also provide homes and enough food for animals.
So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍日常生活中的植物;
第二步,介绍植物需要什么才能长得好;
第三步,最后介绍植物很重要的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sth for sb 为某人提供某物;
②produce oxygen 产生氧气;
③beautify the environment 美化环境。
[高分句型]
①Plants are very important to us for several reasons. (for several reasons 表示原因);
②They produce oxygen, which is essential for our survival. (which引导的定语从句)。
14.3月12日是植树节,假设你们班组织去公园植树。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍此次活动并表达你的感想。
提示:
(1)What did you help do in the activity?
(2)Why are trees so important?(至少两点)
(3)What should you do next?
注意:
(1)短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)词数70个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My classmates and I went to the park to plant trees on March 12th. ________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My classmates and I went to the park to plant trees on March 12th. I helped carry water for the trees and then watered them. I was tired but very happy.
As we know, trees are important. Trees can not only make the environment beautiful, but help clean the air. It’s good for our health. What’s more, trees can stop the wind and sand. And, we can use them to build houses and make paper.
Next I plan to be a volunteer to tell more people the importance of protecting trees.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍此次植树活动,并表达你的感想,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍在植树活动中你做了什么;
第二步,介绍为什么树很重要;
第三步,介绍接下来你应该做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③the importance of……的重要性
[高分句型]
Next I plan to be a volunteer to tell more people the importance of protecting trees. (动词不定式作宾语以及目的状语)
15.假设你是林东,昨天晚上在电视上看了一个有关东北虎(Siberian tiger)的纪录片,对东北虎的生存现状非常担忧。请根据以下提示,向某英语报社写一篇保护东北虎的倡议书。
提示:
1. 东北虎强壮、漂亮,是人们在动物园最喜欢观看的动物之一。
2. 现在东北虎的数量正变得越来越少。
3. 东北虎处境危险的原因:人们砍伐森林,东北虎没有栖息地;人们想要虎皮(fur)而杀死虎。
4. 保护东北虎的建议:自然保护区(natural reserve),号召人们不买……。
要求:包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,不得逐句翻译:正确运用形容词的比较级和最高级;不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Do you know the beautiful Siberian Tigers? Have you seen them in the zoo?_________________________
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Let’s try our best to save the Siberian tigers.
Yours,
Lin Dong
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Do you know the beautiful Siberian Tigers? Have you seen them in the zoo? I think the Siberian Tiger is one of the most popular animals in the zoo. The reason is that they are strong and beautiful. But nowadays the number of the Siberian Tigers is becoming smaller and smaller. Why? Because people cut down so many forests that the Siberian Tigers have no places to live in. In order to protect them, we should build more and more natural reserves. Besides we must make laws to stop people from killing them.
Let’s try our best to save the Siberian tigers.
Yours,
Lin Dong
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏信息,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明来信的目的;
第二步,介绍东北虎的生存现状和造成这些问题的原因,并提出保护东北虎的建议;
第三步,书写结语。号召大家尽力保护东北虎。
[亮点词汇]
①the number of……数量
②cut down砍伐
③in order to为了
④stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Because people cut down so many forests that the Siberian Tigers have no places to live in. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②In order to protect them, we should build more and more natural reserves.(in order to do sth表目的)
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