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Unit 6 Beautiful landscapes
(Integration2)
Phrases(para1)
Mount Huangshan 黄山
in the south of 在…南边
Anhui Province 安徽省
more than 不只是 …
Phrases(para1)
in East China 在中国东部
1900 metres high 1900米高
one of the most amazing
mountains 最令人震惊的山之一
Phrases(para2)
be famous for... 因…而出名
pine trees 松树
in strange shapes 造型奇特
a wonderful sea of
clouds 一片美丽的云海
Phrases(para2)
relaxing hot springs 令人放松的温泉
a white wonderland 一个白色仙境
Phrases(para3)
several ways 几种办法
enjoy the beauty of.. 享受…的美
walk up paths and steps
to the top 沿着小路和台阶走到顶 端
take a cable car 乘缆车
Phrases(para3)
an amazing view 令人惊叹的景色
stay overnight 过夜
watch the sunrise or
sunset 看日出或者日落
a fantastic view 美妙的景色
Brainstorming
Ifyou want to write an article about a beautiful or an interesting landscape in China,what would you talk about?
●Where;
●What can we see;
●Feelings …
questions.
◆What is the landscape Daniel chooses
to write about?
◆Where is the landscape?
◆What is the landscape famous for? What can people do there?
Daniel
What it is Mount Huangshan
Where it is In the south ofAnhui
Province
What it is famous for Pine trees and rocks in
strange shapes;a sea of clouds;hot springs
What you can do there Get to the top to see an amazing view;enjoy the
view at sunrise or sunset
Re ad the table in Part D1 on page 77 and answer the following
Pre-writing
Complete the table in Part D1 with the information about the
landscapes you choose.
Daniel Me
What it is Mount Huangshan
Where it is In the south ofAnhui
Province
What it is famous for Pine trees and rocks in strange shapes;a sea of clouds;hot springs
What you can do there Get to the top to see an amazing view;enjoy the
view at sunrise or sunset
□ Mount Huangshan,more than beautiful
Mount Huangshan is in the south of Anhui Province in East China.It is only about 1,900 metres high,but it is one of the most amazing mountains in China.
Mount Huangshan is famous for its pine trees and rocks in strange shapes,a wonderful sea of clouds,and relaxing hot springs.In winter,snow covers the mountain and it becomes a white wonderland.
There are several ways to enjoy the beauty of Mount
Huangshan.You can walk up paths and steps to the top or
take a cable car.From the top,
you can enjoy an amazing
view.Many people like to stay
overnight on the mountain to
watch the sunrise or sunset.It
is a fantastic view.
Daniel
What it is Mount Huangshan
Where it is In the south ofAnhui
Province
What it is famous for Pine trees and rocks in strange shapes;a sea of clouds;hot springs
What you can do there Get to the top to see an amazing view;enjoy thee
view at sunrise or sunset
How did Daniel turn the information in the table into an article?
Pay attention to the title of Daniel's article first.
kat athy ie Mount Huangshan,more than beautiful
Use a short,catchy title that makes the readers want to find out more.
Paragraphs
Paragraph 1 Content
What you can do or see in the place
Paragraph 2 Some special or interesting things about the place
Paragraph 3 General information such as the name of the place and where it is
Read Daniel's article and match the paragraphs with their content.
Pre-writing
Read and find useful expressions in the article and come up with
more with the help of the chart below.
Content
General
information
Some special or interesting things
What you can do
or see
Expressions
Name:(1)
Where it is:(2)
(3)
(4)
Paragraphs
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Give general information
such as the name of the
place and where it is. Mount Huangshan is in the south of Anhui Province in East China.It is only about 1,900 metres high,but it is one of the most amazing mountains in China.
Paragraph 1 General
information Name:
...is a(n)beautiful/amazing...landscape in China.
●.…is one of the best-known/most amazing …
●.…is an amazing place.
Where it is:
O...is in the south/north/east/west of...
●...lies in...
Writing
Mount Huangshan is famous for its pine trees and rocks in strange shapes,a wonderful sea of clouds,and relaxing hot springs.In winter,snow covers the mountain and it becomes a white wonderland.
● It is famous for..
● In winter/spring … . …
● It is special because...
Some special
or interesting
things
Writing
Descibe some special or interesting things
about the place.
Paragraph 2
There are several ways to enjoy the beauty of Mount
Huangshan.You can walk up paths and steps to the top or
take a cable car.From the top,
you can enjoy an amazing
view.Many people like to stay
overnight on the mountain to
watch the sunrise or sunset.It
is a fantastic view.
● You/People can...
● One thing you can do
there is ...
● People like to see/go to...
What you can do or see
Writing
Paragraph 3
Explain what you can do_ or see in the place.
Think about what else we can add to the article about a landscape
in China.
our feelings by
using exclamatory sentences with
what/how,.. .
● What a(n)...!
● How...they/it...!
Write an article about a beautiful or an interesting landscape in
China.You can refer to Part D2 and “Useful expressions”on
page 78 for ideas about structure,content and expressions.
问题 是 否 如果为“否”, 如何改进?
你在短文中是否介绍了一个中国的地貌景观?
你的短文是否有一个简短而吸引人的标题?
你在短文的首段是否对该地貌景观的名称、位置等 基本信息进行简单的描述?
你在短文的主干部分是否描述了该地貌景观的独特 之处和那里的特色活动?
你在短文的尾段是否对该地貌景观进行简要评价?
你在短文中是否提供了重要和充足的细节来介绍该 地貌景观的基本信息、独特之处和那里的特色活动1
你的短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语来介 绍该地貌景观的不同方面?
你的短文在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确?
【写作自评表】
评价指标 得分 评分标准
短文是否介绍了一个中国的地貌景观? 5=Excellent
4=Good
3=Acceptable
2=Needs
improvement
短文是否有一个简短而吸引人的标题?
短文是否有清晰的开头和结尾?
短文是否分段描述了该地貌景观的基本信 息、独特之处以及那里的特色活动?
短文中各段的细节是否充足?
短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语
短文在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确
【写作互评表】
The Changbai Mountains in Jinlin Province are among the most beautiful and amazing mountains in China.The tallest peak is about 2,700 metres high and it is the highest one in North-east China.
The Changbai Mountains are famous for beautiful views.Tianchi Lake there is like a clear blue mirror.The mountains are home to many plants and animals. In winter,the snow covers the trees,and the mountains look like an ocean of white.
There are lots of things to do in the Changbai Mountains.In summer,we can hike along the mountain paths.In winter,many people like to go skiing there. Making snowmen and having snowball fights there are also great fun.
How amazing the Changbai Mountains are!They're a wonderful gift from nature and a treat for our eyes.
Changbai Mountains,more than
amazing
>learnt more about different landscapes of China;
described and written an article about a beautiful or
an interesting landscape in China;
>better understood the beauty of our own country.
>better understood the beauty of our earth.
In this lesson,
we have
Through the
whole unit,
we have
The beauty of the natural world lies in landscapes.
Homework
Must do:
■ Perfect your writing.
■ Finish the exercises.
Choose to do:
■ Draw a poster to call on other students to get along well with landscapes.
Thank you!
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