内容正文:
Unit 2 School life 写作篇
【实践演练】1
假如你是Chris,你校学生会主席想要让学生们的学校生活更加丰富多彩,现在向全校学生征集建议。请根据下面海报要求,给学生会主席写一封建议书。
Need Your Ideas
Hi, guys!
Thanks for supporting our Students’ Union.
To make our school a better place, please write to us and talk about your ideal school life.
●What do you think of your school life now?
●What after-school activities would you like?
●What do you want to do with your friends?
注意:1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,语言顺畅,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chairperson,
I’m a student in Grade 8.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my ideal school life. I hope my ideas will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Chris
附录:
套用通式一【答案】
套用通式二【答案】
【实践演练】2
假如你是李华,为了提高同学们的身体素质,助力同学们健康成长,学校准备组织课后体育锻炼活动,现向同学们就活动内容征集意见。请你根据以下内容要点和写作要求,用英语给学校校长写一封邮件,向学校提出建议。
内容要点:1. 你建议学校在课后开展哪些体育活动?(至少2条)
2. 你的理由是什么?
写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上提示的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数90左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:跳绳rope skipping 羽毛球badminton
体操gymnastics 太极Tai Chi
Dear headmaster,
I’m so glad to hear that our school will organize some activities after class. Here is my advice.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【实践演练】3
某英语报以“如何让在校学生更加健康快乐地生活”为主题征稿。假如你是李华,请你以书信的形式写一篇征文稿。
内容包括:1. 针对学校课外活动、体育活动、组织考试等方面提出建议;
2. 针对师生关系、课堂教学、作业布置等方面提出建议。
注意:1. 信中不得出现真实人名,校名和地名;
2. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to write to you and share my suggestions about making our school life better.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【实践演练】4
为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长,学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是李华,用英语给校长写一篇100个词左右的建议信。注意:文中应包含所有要点,并适当发挥;不能出现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, I hope our school will ________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【实践演练】5
某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园,健康生活”的征稿活动。请你根据以下提示内容积极投稿,倡导同学们“爱护校园环境,健康快乐生活”。
写作要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现真实个人信息;
4. 词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions will work for you!
【实践演练】6
在我们的校园里,我不仅学到了丰富的知识,还结识了许多志同道合的同学与朋友。我们一起学习、一起成长,共同度过了无数美好的时光。这里,是我梦想起航的地方,也是我心中永远的乐园。 请根据提示,以“My ideal school life”为题。写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求:1. 所写内容必须包括提示中所有的信息,并做适当发挥;
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
My ideal school life
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Unit 2 School life写作篇
【实践演练】1
假如你是Chris,你校学生会主席想要让学生们的学校生活更加丰富多彩,现在向全校学生征集建议。请根据下面海报要求,给学生会主席写一封建议书。
Need Your Ideas
Hi, guys!
Thanks for supporting our Students’ Union.
To make our school a better place, please write to us and talk about your ideal school life.
●What do you think of your school life now?
●What after-school activities would you like?
●What do you want to do with your friends?
注意:1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,语言顺畅,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chairperson,
I’m a student in Grade 8.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my ideal school life. I hope my ideas will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Chris
【答案】
Dear Chairperson,
I’m a student in Grade 8. I will tell you about my school life now. Now I have too much homework every day. I don’t have time for after-school activities. I think my school life is terrible.
I think my ideal school life should be meaningful and colorful. I hope our after-school activities will be rich. I would like our school to hold some activities, such as Art Festivals, sports meetings, and so on. What’s more, I hope our school will have a school trip at least once a term. In this way, we will know more about the world. During my holidays, I want to join in volunteering with my friends to help others in need.
This is my ideal school life. I hope my ideas will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Chris
【来源】江苏省盐城市盐都区第一共同体2024-2025学年八年级上学期11月期中考试英语试卷
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封建议信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据问题提示,给学生会主席写一封建议信,注意语句要通顺,语法要正确。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开头已给出,承接上文介绍自己目前的学校生活;
第二步,介绍自己理想中的学校生活,想要参加的课后活动,以及想和朋友去做什么;
第三步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①tell sb anout sth告诉某人关于某事
②too much太多
③would like sb to do sth想要某人做某事
④at least至少
⑤in need在困难中
【高分句型】
①I think my school life is terrible.(运用了宾语从句)
②I want to join in volunteering with my friends to help others in need.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
附录:
套用通式一【答案】
Dear Chairperson,
I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that the school should reduce the amount of daily homework, so we can have time for after-school activities. Second, I think the school should organize more diverse after-school activities, such as an Art Festival and a sports meeting, because these events can make our school life more colorful and meaningful. Moreover, we need to have at least one school trip per term so that we can broaden our horizons and learn more about the world.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and consider creating a more balanced and enriching school life for us.
Yours sincerely,
Chris
套用通式二【答案】
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Chris, a student from Grade 8. I’m writing this letter to share some suggestions about improving our school life.
Our school has many wonderful aspects, but there are still some areas that need improvement. For example, students are burdened with too much daily homework, which leaves us no time for after-school activities. To solve this problem, I think we should reduce the amount of homework assigned each day. Because this would allow us to explore our hobbies and develop reading and writing skills. What’s more, the variety of after-school activities is limited currently. In my opinion, the school should organize more diverse events, such as an Art Festival and a sports meeting. The reason for this is that these activities can enrich our campus life.
I hope my suggestions can be considered. Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Chris
【实践演练】2
假如你是李华,为了提高同学们的身体素质,助力同学们健康成长,学校准备组织课后体育锻炼活动,现向同学们就活动内容征集意见。请你根据以下内容要点和写作要求,用英语给学校校长写一封邮件,向学校提出建议。
内容要点:1. 你建议学校在课后开展哪些体育活动?(至少2条)
2. 你的理由是什么?
写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上提示的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数90左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:跳绳rope skipping 羽毛球badminton
体操gymnastics 太极Tai Chi
Dear headmaster,
I’m so glad to hear that our school will organize some activities after class. Here is my advice.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I’m so glad to hear that our school will organize some activities after class. Here is my advice.
In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities after class. First, we can organize ball games like basketball, football and ping-pong. We are always excited when we play such ball games. We can build a strong body and learn teamwork spirit at the same time. Second, we can choose gymnastics, Tai Chi and rope skipping because these activities won’t make us so tired. And they can help some shy students make more friends. Third, we can line up and run together on the playground. After running, we will be more energetic in class.
I really hope our school can organize these activities to make us healthier and stronger.
Yours,
Li Hua
【来源】安徽省宣城市2024-2025学年八年级上学期1月期末英语试题
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:根据所给内容要点和写作要求完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍自己的建议及理由;
第三步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①teamwork spirit团队合作精神
②at the same time同时
③line up排队
【高分句型】
①We are always excited when we play such ball games.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
②I really hope our school can organize these activities to make us healthier and stronger.
(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【实践演练】3
某英语报以“如何让在校学生更加健康快乐地生活”为主题征稿。假如你是李华,请你以书信的形式写一篇征文稿。
内容包括:1. 针对学校课外活动、体育活动、组织考试等方面提出建议;
2. 针对师生关系、课堂教学、作业布置等方面提出建议。
注意:1. 信中不得出现真实人名,校名和地名;
2. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to write to you and share my suggestions about making our school life better.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to write to you and share my suggestions about making our school life better.
Our school has many good things, but there are still some parts that need to change. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next, I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And the school should organize fewer exams as well. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And I hope they can talk less but give us more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【来源】2022年湖南省永州市零陵区中考一模英语试题(笔者有较大改动)
【总体分析】
①题材:以书信形式撰写的征文稿,主题围绕 “如何让在校学生更加健康快乐地生活”,向英语报编辑提出关于学校活动、教学等方面的建议,属于建议类应用文。
②时态:时态以一般现在时为主,一般将来时为辅。
③提示:题目明确给出内容要点,包括针对学校课外活动、体育活动、组织考试等方面以及师生关系、课堂教学、作业布置等方面提出建议,同时对字数、格式和不得出现真实信息等作出要求。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开头表明写信目的,即向编辑分享让学校生活更美好的建议,直接回应题目要求。
第二步,主体部分分点阐述建议,先从学校层面提出开放图书馆、增加课外活动、给予更多文体时间和减少考试等建议;再从教师层面提出改善师生关系、优化课堂教学、减少作业量等建议,逻辑清晰,全面覆盖题目要点。
第三步,结尾表达希望建议有用,礼貌收尾,符合书信格式和征文要求。
【亮点词汇】
①organize组织(活动或考试)等,如 “organize more after-class activities”“organize fewer exams” 。
②as for:用于引出新的话题,在文中用于从学校方面建议过渡到教师方面建议,使文章衔接自然,如 “As for our teachers” 。
③What’s more:表示递进关系,进一步补充建议,丰富文章内容,如 “What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.”
【高分句型】
①Our school has many good things, but there are still some parts that need to change.(运用了but并列句)
②I think our school can organize more after-class activities.(运用了宾语从句)
【实践演练】4
为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长,学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是李华,用英语给校长写一篇100个词左右的建议信。注意:文中应包含所有要点,并适当发挥;不能出现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, I hope our school will ________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Headmaster,
These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, I hope our school will open the library more often so that we can borrow books easily. It would also be great if you could organize more after-class activities, like sports games or art clubs, to make our school life more colorful. Giving us more time for sports during the day would help us stay healthy and active. And please organize fewer exams to reduce our stress. Second, for our teachers, I suggest they talk less but more clearly in class. Making classes more interesting by using games or stories would help us learn better. Also, finishing classes on time and giving us less homework would give us more free time to relax.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【来源】2025年山东省济宁市泗水县中考二模英语试题
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“针对学校的建议和针对老师的建议”两个方面重点介绍改善学校生活的具体建议;
第三步,书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①more often更经常地
②on time 准时
③reduce stress 减轻压力
【高分句型】
①First, I hope our school will open the library more often so that we can borrow books easily.
(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
②Making classes more interesting by using games or stories would help us learn better.
(运用了动名词短语作主语)
【实践演练】5
某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园,健康生活”的征稿活动。请你根据以下提示内容积极投稿,倡导同学们“爱护校园环境,健康快乐生活”。
写作要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现真实个人信息;
4. 词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions will work for you!
【答案】
Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you.
First, it’s important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and sweep the floor every day, because a good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, we should do some sports like running, playing basketball and swimming. Third, we’d better look after ourselves well by developing good living habits, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, we should get on well with each other. Staying in a good mood helps us enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
I hope these suggestions will work for you!
【来源】贵州省六盘水市2023-2024学年八年级下学期期中考试英语试题
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
【写作步骤】
第一步,提出主题——学生需要健康的校园生活,并引出下文的具体建议;
第二步,阐述如何拥有健康校园生活的具体建议;
第三步,总结并表达希望。
【亮点词汇】
①look after照顾
②get on well with sb.与某人相处融洽
【高分句型】
①Staying in a good mood helps us enjoy a happy and healthy school life. (运用了动名词作主语)
②I hope these suggestions will work for you! (运用了宾语从句)
【实践演练】6
在我们的校园里,我不仅学到了丰富的知识,还结识了许多志同道合的同学与朋友。我们一起学习、一起成长,共同度过了无数美好的时光。这里,是我梦想起航的地方,也是我心中永远的乐园。 请根据提示,以“My ideal school life”为题。写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求:1. 所写内容必须包括提示中所有的信息,并做适当发挥;
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
My ideal school life
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【答案】
My ideal school life
I’m a Grade 8 student. I have too much homework every day. I don’t have time for after-school activities. I think my school life is terrible.
I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. During the rest of the time, I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. There are many organizations and clubs in our school. I would like to join the organizations which I am interested in. Learning online is part of my school life, but the homework is not much, and very easy. We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher. Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind. Students will get along well with each other and help each other. Our school will have a school trip at least once a month. In this way, we will know more about the world. During my holidays, I want to be a volunteer to help others in need.
This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true someday.
【来源】湖南省岳阳市汨罗市2024-2025学年八年级上学期期末质量监测英语试题
【详解】
【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步,简单介绍并评价自己现在的学校生活;
第二步,详细介绍自己理想中的学校生活;
第三步,总结全文,表达期望。
【亮点词汇】
①would like to想要
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③get along well with与……相处融洽
【高分句型】
①I think my school life is terrible. (运用了宾语从句)
②I would like to join the organizations which I am interested in. (运用了定语从句)
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Unit 2 School life 写作篇
【话题解读】
学校与学校生活几乎是我们每个人在生命成长过程中绕不开的话题。本单元主题围绕 “学校生活” 展开,涵盖了不同特色学校介绍、不同学校生活的比较、国际学校不同国籍学生的交流互动、交换生对两国学校的比较、对学校生活的问卷调查以及对改善学校生活的建议等等。
本单元主要的写作任务是对如何改善学校生活,提出自己的建议,即:建议信的写作。教材中所给的写作示例是典型的三段论:开头(导入):称呼、说明写信原因和目的;主体:有礼貌的提出建议内容并给予相应的理由;结尾:希望对方觉得自己的建议有用,并希望对方采取措施进行改进以及签名。此外,教材写作示例特别强调了对建议信写作的要求:表达要清楚(目的明确、理由充分),语言要得体(语气正式、用词礼貌)。
在本单元“School life”的大背景下,与本单元相关的写作题目可以与课程设置、课堂活动、课外活动、学习环境(校园设施、校园美化)、生活环境等相结合,提出问题和相应的改进建议。还可以拓展延申至对未来学校生活畅想的写作。
【常用素材】
以下是选自本单元的素材
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develop improve
offer/provide suggest
aware boring
hands-on international
attention blog
chopstick/fork/spoon environment
drama facility
cookie/fried/hamburger/pizza/salad
importance lunchtime
plastic programme
suggestion textbook
moreover adv.此外
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be aware of
be good for the environment
better understand the importance of
develop good habits from an early age
get plenty of hands-on experience from ...
get to know each other better
give suggestions on
make some suggestions on
go to different classrooms for different lessons
have a chance/an opportunity to learn ...
have more /the most weeks off for the summer holiday
make more notes about ...
offer different safety programmes
pay attention to
provide a survey below
search online to finish one’s homework
share one’s personal opinions or experiences
take part in different types of sports
teach sb. how to survive in the face of danger
work in pairs
write a suggestion letter
in one’s opinion
a great place for sb. to enjoy reading
a science festival
the reason for ...
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1. I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
我写信是为了就如何改善我们学校生活的某些方面提出一些建议。( )
2. Education is our passport to the future. Let’s explore schools around the world, find out what makes school life special and share ideas on how to make our school better.教育是我们去未来的通行证。让我们探索世界各地的学校,找出学校生活的独特之处,并分享如何让我们的学校变得更好的想法。( )
3. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more sports facilities, so we can take part in different types of sports.首先,我建议我们学校应该提供更多的体育设施,这样我们就可以参加不同类型的运动。( )
4. Second, I think we should have more books in the library, because the library is a great place for us to enjoy reading and open our minds.其次,我认为我们应该在图书馆增加更多的书籍,因为图书馆是我们享受阅读和开拓思维的好地方。( )
5. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online.此外,我们需要在图书馆增加更多电脑,以便我们更方便地在线搜索。( )
6. I hope you will find my suggestions useful and improve the school in some of these ways.我希望你会觉得我的建议有用,并且采纳其中一些方法来改善学校。( )
7. So our school offers different safety programmes to teach us how to survive in the face of danger.因此,我们学校提供不同的安全课程,教我们在面对危险时如何生存。( )
8. Tomoya’s school has different programmes to help students stay safe.Tomoya 的学校有不同的项目来帮助学生保持安全。( )
9. There are many interesting subjects to choose from, such as drama and foreign languages.有许多有趣的科目可供选择,如戏剧和外语。( )
10. We get plenty of hands-on experiences from these programmes.我们从这些课程中获得了大量的实践经验。( )
11. Every year, my school has a science festival. It is a chance for us to be creative with our learning.每年,我的学校都会举办科学节。这是我们在学习中发挥创造力的机会。( )
12. But I love our Science lessons the most. We get to do all kinds of hands-on activities.但我最喜欢我们的科学课。我们可以参加各种实践活动。( )
13. We often need to borrow books from the library or search online to finish our homework.我们经常需要从图书馆借书或在线搜索来完成作业。( )
14. The library is a great place for us to enjoy reading and open our minds.图书馆是我们享受阅读和开拓思维的好地方。( )
15. My classmates and I want to protect the environment. We are also aware of the importance of green energy.
我和同学们想保护环境。我们也意识到绿色能源的重要性。( )
16. So, we built a small car for this year's science festival. This car gets its energy from the sun, so it is quite clean.
因此,我们为今年的科学节制作了一辆小车。这辆车从太阳获取能量,因此非常清洁。( )
17. Our school also pays a lot of attention to food education. We learn how to cook meals and eat well.
我们学校也非常重视饮食教育。我们学习如何做饭和健康饮食。( )
18. In this way, we are more aware of the importance of a healthy diet.通过这种方式,我们更清楚健康饮食的重要性。( )
19. However, we usually go to different classrooms to have different lessons. ... but we get to know more students.
然而,我们通常去不同的教室上不同的课……,但我们能认识更多学生。( )
20. They do not change classrooms as often as we do, so they share more time with their classmates and get to know each other better.他们不像我们这样频繁更换教室,因此他们与同学相处的时间更多,也能更好地了解彼此。( )
21. Nancy’s school has more weeks off for the summer holiday than Tomoya's school. Linlin’s school has the most weeks off for the summer holiday.Nancy的学校暑假放假周数比Tomoya 的学校多。( )
22. Linlin的学校暑假放假周数最多。Linlin’s school has less break time than Tomoya's school. Tomoya's school has the most break time.Linlin的学校课间休息时间比Tomoya的学校少。Tomoya的学校课间休息时间最多。( )
以下选自各地试题书面表达参考答案中的素材:
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advice建议 recommendation推荐,建议 advise建议
insist坚持认为,坚决要求 recommend推荐,建议 put forward提出。
★★★★★★
exam/test考试 homework作业 lecture讲座
mark分数 notebook笔记本 textbook教科书
progress进步 summary总结 vocabulary词汇
group discussion小组讨论 online learning在线学习 study method学习方法
correct纠正 improve提高 memorize记忆
preview预习 review复习 summarize总结
understand理解
★★★★★★
classroom教室 laboratory实验室 library图书馆
playground操场 gym体育馆 computer room计算机室
music room音乐室 reading room阅览室 dining hall食堂
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difficulty困难 pressure压力 problem问题
exam anxiety考试焦虑 lack of confidence缺乏自信
★★★★★★
do volunteer work做志愿者工作 have apicnic野餐
hold a sports meeting举办一次运动会 organize acompetition组织/举办一次竞赛
organize an(outdoor)activity组织一次(户外)活动 set up a club创建一个俱乐部
sign up a speech contest报名参加一次演讲比赛
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1. I would like our school to hold some activities, such as Art Festival, sports meeting, and so on.
我希望我们学校举办一些活动,比如艺术节、运动会等等。
2. I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music.
我希望我们学校给我们更多时间用于体育、艺术和音乐。
3. What’s more, I hope our school will have a school trip at least once a term.
此外,我希望我们学校每学期至少组织一次集体出游。
4. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities.首先,我希望我们学校更频繁地开放图书馆。其次,我认为我们学校可以组织更多课外活动。
5. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.我希望我们有更多机会参加这些研学旅行。
6. I hope our after-school activities will be rich.我希望我们的课外活动丰富多彩。
7. I suggest that the school reduce the amount of homework or give students more time to complete it.
我建议学校减少作业量或给学生更多时间完成作业。
8. We should have more free time to balance our study and life.我们应该有更多自由时间来平衡学习和生活。
First, I think we should have more English speaking activities. Second, it would be better if the school could open the library on weekends. Finally, I suggest organizing more outdoor activities.首先,我认为我们应该举办更多英语口语活动。其次,如果学校能在周末开放图书馆就更好了。最后,我建议组织更多户外活动。
9. Organize more after-school activities, such as lectures and competitions so that we can have more opportunities to show our talents and abilities.组织更多课外活动,如讲座和竞赛,以便我们有更多机会展示才能。
10. Update/Upgrade the teaching and classroom equipment in order to improve the effect of teaching and learning.
更新教学和教室设备,以提高教与学的效果。
11. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting.
至于我们的老师,我希望他们成为我们的朋友,让课堂更有趣。
12. And I hope they can talk less but give us more time to practice.我希望他们少讲些,多给我们时间练习。
13. And the school should organize fewer exams as well.学校也应该减少考试次数。
14. What’s more, I hope our teachers will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
此外,我希望我们的老师少布置作业,并按时下课。
15. It’s important to keep our school clean.保持校园清洁很重要。
First, we should save water and electricity. Second, saving paper is necessary. Third, we should plant more trees to make our school more beautiful. Last but not least, don’t litter everywhere, or it will pollute our environment.首先,我们应该节约用水和用电。其次,节约用纸是必要的。第三,我们应该种更多树,让校园更美丽。最后但同样重要的是,不要随处乱扔垃圾,否则会污染环境。
16. Firstly, the canteen could lower the prices and enrich the variety of dishes. Secondly, more cooks could be hired to improve cooking efficiency and taste.首先,食堂可以降低价格并丰富菜肴的种类。其次,可以雇佣更多厨师来提高烹饪效率和口感。
17. I suggest that the school hire a new chef or work with a better food supplier.我建议学校雇佣新厨师或与更好
的食品供应商合作。
18. I think the classroom should be cleaned twice a day.我认为教室应该每天打扫两次。
19. We should take out the rubbish before school is over.我们应该在放学前把垃圾倒掉。
20. Don’t throw the waste paper everywhere.不要到处扔废纸。
21. I hope that we can do something to make the environment more pleasant and beautiful, such as planting more trees, repairing school buildings and improving school roads.我希望我们能做些事情让环境更舒适美丽,比如种植更多树木、修缮校舍和改善校园道路。
22. Let’s make our environment tidy and comfortable.让我们把我们的环境整理得整洁舒适。
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1. Students often have to spend several hours on homework every night.学生们每晚经常要花几个小时做作业。
2. We have too much homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it. That makes us have less rest time.我们每天作业太多。有些学生不得不熬夜处理,这让我们休息时间更少。
3. The school roads are not very clean, and there are not enough trees which can provide shade in summer and make the school more beautiful.校园道路不太干净,而且树木不足,无法在夏天提供树荫并让学校更美丽。
4. There is rubbish all over the floor in our classroom now. The things in the class are also in a mess.
现在我们的教室地板上到处都是垃圾,教室里的东西也乱七八糟。
5. Some facilities and equipment at school are old, such as computers and projectors.
学校的一些设施和设备陈旧,如电脑和投影仪。
6. Colorful after-class activities are very important to our healthy growth, but we can hardly have a chance to take part in them.丰富多彩的课外活动对我们的健康成长非常重要,但我们几乎没有机会参加。
7. There are few after-school activities for us to take part in, which can help us out of the stress of hard study.
我们能参加的课外活动很少,而这些活动本可以帮助我们摆脱繁重学习的压力。
8. It can make our school life more interesting and help us relax.
它可以让我们的学校生活更有趣,并帮助我们放松。
9. Firstly, using phones in class can distract us from listening to the teacher and doing our homework. Secondly, spending too much time on phones is bad for our eyes and health. We might even become addicted to games or social media.首先,在课堂上使用手机会让我们分心,无法专心听讲和做作业。其次,花太多时间在手机上对我们的眼睛和健康有害。我们甚至可能沉迷于游戏或社交媒体。
10. Bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others.
欺凌会让我们感到不安全和不快乐,使我们难以在学校学习和与他人相处。
11. Students may feel sad and helpless when meeting troubles in life. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring serious results. Then their grades will be worse and worse.学生在生活中遇到麻烦时可能会感到悲伤和无助。如果这些问题得不到妥善解决,可能会带来严重后果,然后他们的成绩会越来越差。
12. For example, we can clean the desks and floors every day, because a good environment is helpful to our study and health.例如,我们可以每天打扫桌椅和地板,因为良好的环境有助于我们的学习和健康。
13. For example, English corners or English speech contests can help us improve our oral English.
例如,英语角或英语演讲比赛能够帮助我们提高英语口语。
14. This will help us focus on studying and stay healthy.这将帮助我们专注学习并保持健康。
15. The prices of the dishes are rather high and there are few of dishes.菜肴的价格相当高,而且种类很少。
16. The long queues cost us a great deal of time for lunch break.长长的队伍让我们在午休时花费了大量时间。
17. The food tastes bad, leading to serious waste.食物味道不好,导致严重浪费。
18. The food is often cold and tasteless.食物经常又冷又没味道。
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1. I hope my ideas will be helpful to you.我希望我的想法对你有所帮助。
2. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.希望我的建议有帮助。感谢阅读我的信。
3. I hope they will work for you.我希望它们对你有用。
4. I hope my suggestions can be considered. I believe our school life will become better with these improvements.
我希望我的建议能被考虑。我相信通过这些改进,我们的学校生活将变得更好。
5. I sincerely hope these problems can be solved in the near future.
我真诚地希望这些问题能在不久的将来得到解决。
6. I hope our school will have a brighter future and become a better self.
我希望我们的学校有一个更光明的未来,成为更好的自己。
7. I will feel very happy if my advice is taken. I hope our campus will be more beautiful and colourful.
如果我的建议被采纳,我会很高兴。我希望我们的校园会更加美丽多彩。
8. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.
我希望我们所有人都能友好待人,对欺凌说不。
9. If everyone can make a contribution to our school, it will be better and better.
如果每个人都能为学校做出贡献,它会越来越好。
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1. It is high time that we took some measures to improve the campus environment.
是我们采取措施改善校园环境的时候了。
2. What we need to do now is to encourage more students to participate in campus activities.
我们现在需要做的是鼓励更多学生参与校园活动。
3. With the development of our school, it becomes necessary to upgrade the teaching facilities.
随着我们学校的发展,升级教学设施变得很有必要。
4. Taking everything into consideration, we should start the campus construction as soon as possible.
综合考虑所有因素,我们应该尽快开始校园建设。
5. Only in this way can we create a more comfortable learning atmosphere.
只有这样,我们才能营造一个更舒适的学习氛围。
6. Not until we solve these problems can we enjoy a better school life.
直到我们解决这些问题,我们才能享受更好的学校生活。
7. The reason why I put forward this suggestion is that it can benefit all students.
我提出这个建议的原因是它能让所有学生受益。
8. As far as I’m concerned, building a new art center is of great significance.
在我看来,建造一个新的艺术中心意义重大。
9. It is believed that the new measures will bring great changes to our campus.
人们相信这些新措施将给我们的校园带来巨大变化。
10. If we work together, there is no doubt that our school will become more beautiful.
如果我们齐心协力,毫无疑问我们的学校将会变得更美丽。
【写作通式】
通式一
Dear __________(收信人称呼),
I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve __________(具体事项).
First, I would like to suggest that __________(有关学校) should __________(采取的具体措施), so we can __________(措施1带来的益处). Second, I think __________(有关学校) should __________(具体措施 2), because __________(措施2的理由). Moreover, we need __________(具体资源或改变 3) so that __________(结果).
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and __________(改进的具体要求).
Yours sincerely,
__________(写信人名字)
通式二
Dear __________(收信人称呼),
I’m __________(写信人名字), a student from __________(年级、班级). I’m writing this letter to share some
suggestions about __________(需要改进的方面).
Our school has many wonderful aspects, but there are still some areas that need improvement. For example,
__________(指出存在的问题1). To solve this problem, I think we should __________(提出建议1). Because __________(给出理由1). What’s more,(指出存在的问题 2). In my opinion, __________(提出建议2).
The reason for this __________(给出理由 2).
I hope my suggestions can be considered. Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
__________(写信人名字)
【范文示例】
在学校开展 “优化校园设施与资源,提升校园生活质量”的活动中,校长鼓励全校学生为改善校园环境和学习资源提出建议。假设你是八年级学生李华,请根据以下提示,写一封信给校长,阐述你对改进学校生活某些方面的想法和建议。
提示:1. 增加体育设施,丰富体育活动;
2. 增加图书馆藏书,满足阅读需求;
3. 增添图书馆电脑,方便网络查询。
要求:1. 涵盖所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺;
3. 词数 120 左右。
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Unit 2 School life 写作篇
【话题解读】
学校与学校生活几乎是我们每个人在生命成长过程中绕不开的话题。本单元主题围绕 “学校生活” 展开,涵盖了不同特色学校介绍、不同学校生活的比较、国际学校不同国籍学生的交流互动、交换生对两国学校的比较、对学校生活的问卷调查以及对改善学校生活的建议等等。
本单元主要的写作任务是对如何改善学校生活,提出自己的建议,即:建议信的写作。教材中所给的写作示例是典型的三段论:开头(导入):称呼、说明写信原因和目的;主体:有礼貌的提出建议内容并给予相应的理由;结尾:希望对方觉得自己的建议有用,并希望对方采取措施进行改进以及签名。此外,教材写作示例特别强调了对建议信写作的要求:表达要清楚(目的明确、理由充分),语言要得体(语气正式、用词礼貌)。
在本单元“School life”的大背景下,与本单元相关的写作题目可以与课程设置、课堂活动、课外活动、学习环境(校园设施、校园美化)、生活环境等相结合,提出问题和相应的改进建议。还可以拓展延申至对未来学校生活畅想的写作。
【常用素材】
以下是选自本单元的素材
★★★★★★
develop形成,发展 improve改进,改善
offer/provide提供 suggest建议
aware意识到,知道 boring没趣的,令人厌倦的
hands-on实际操作的 international国际的
attention注意,专心,注意力 blog博客,网址
chopstick筷子/fork餐叉/spoon勺,匙 environment环境
drama戏剧,戏,剧 facility设施,设备
cookie饼干/fried油炸的/hamburger汉堡包/pizza比萨饼/salad沙拉
importance重要性 lunchtime午餐时间
plastic塑料的/塑料 programme课程,计划,节目
suggestion建议 textbook课本,教材
moreover adv.此外
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be aware of意识到
be good for the environment对环境有益
better understand the importance of更好地理解……的重要性
develop good habits from an early age在早期就形成好习惯
get plenty of hands-on experience from ...从……中获得很多实战经验
get to know each other better更好的了解彼此
give suggestions on提出关于……的建议
make some suggestions on给一些关于……的建议
go to different classrooms for different lessons去不同的教室上不同的课程
have a chance/an opportunity to learn ...有机会去学习……
have more /the most weeks off for the summer holiday暑假休息时间更多/最多
make more notes about ...对……做更多的笔记
offer different safety programmes提供不同的安全项目
pay attention to注意
provide a survey below以下提供一项调查
search online to finish one’s homework搜索网络来完成某人的作业
share one’s personal opinions or experiences分享某人的个人观点或经历
take part in different types of sports参加不同种类的运动
teach sb. how to survive in the face of danger教某人面对危险如何生存
work in pairs小组合作/两人一组进行活动
write a suggestion letter写一封建议信
in one’s opinion在某人看来
a great place for sb. to enjoy reading一个让某人享受读书的好地方
a science festival科技节
the reason for ...……的理由
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1. I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
我写信是为了就如何改善我们学校生活的某些方面提出一些建议。(建议信的开篇句)
2. Education is our passport to the future. Let’s explore schools around the world, find out what makes school life special and share ideas on how to make our school better.教育是我们去未来的通行证。让我们探索世界各地的学校,找出学校生活的独特之处,并分享如何让我们的学校变得更好的想法。(建议借鉴他人经验)
3. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more sports facilities, so we can take part in different types of sports.首先,我建议我们学校应该提供更多的体育设施,这样我们就可以参加不同类型的运动。(建议增加体育设施)
4. Second, I think we should have more books in the library, because the library is a great place for us to enjoy reading and open our minds.其次,我认为我们应该在图书馆增加更多的书籍,因为图书馆是我们享受阅读和开拓思维的好地方。(建议丰富图书馆藏书)
5. Moreover, we need more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to search online.此外,我们需要在图书馆增加更多电脑,以便我们更方便地在线搜索。(建议增加图书馆电脑设备)
6. I hope you will find my suggestions useful and improve the school in some of these ways.我希望你会觉得我的建议有用,并且采纳其中一些方法来改善学校。(建议的总结句)
7. So our school offers different safety programmes to teach us how to survive in the face of danger.因此,我们学校提供不同的安全课程,教我们在面对危险时如何生存。(建议引入安全培训项目)
8. Tomoya’s school has different programmes to help students stay safe.Tomoya 的学校有不同的项目来帮助学生保持安全。(建议设置安全保障课程)
9. There are many interesting subjects to choose from, such as drama and foreign languages.有许多有趣的科目可供选择,如戏剧和外语。(建议丰富课程种类)
10. We get plenty of hands-on experiences from these programmes.我们从这些课程中获得了大量的实践经验。(建议增强实践教学)
11. Every year, my school has a science festival. It is a chance for us to be creative with our learning.每年,我的学校都会举办科学节。这是我们在学习中发挥创造力的机会。(建议举办科技主题活动)
12. But I love our Science lessons the most. We get to do all kinds of hands-on activities.但我最喜欢我们的科学课。我们可以参加各种实践活动。(建议增加实验性学习环节)
13. We often need to borrow books from the library or search online to finish our homework.我们经常需要从图书馆借书或在线搜索来完成作业。(隐含建议完善图书与网络资源)
14. The library is a great place for us to enjoy reading and open our minds.图书馆是我们享受阅读和开拓思维的好地方。(支持图书馆资源优化的建议)
15. My classmates and I want to protect the environment. We are also aware of the importance of green energy.
我和同学们想保护环境。我们也意识到绿色能源的重要性。(建议加强环保教育与实践)
16. So, we built a small car for this year's science festival. This car gets its energy from the sun, so it is quite clean.
因此,我们为今年的科学节制作了一辆小车。这辆车从太阳获取能量,因此非常清洁。(建议融入绿色科技教育)
17. Our school also pays a lot of attention to food education. We learn how to cook meals and eat well.
我们学校也非常重视饮食教育。我们学习如何做饭和健康饮食。(建议开展饮食教育课程)
18. In this way, we are more aware of the importance of a healthy diet.通过这种方式,我们更清楚健康饮食的重要性。(建议培养健康饮食意识)
19. However, we usually go to different classrooms to have different lessons. ... but we get to know more students.
然而,我们通常去不同的教室上不同的课……,但我们能认识更多学生。(建议推行走班制以拓展社交)
20. They do not change classrooms as often as we do, so they share more time with their classmates and get to know each other better.他们不像我们这样频繁更换教室,因此他们与同学相处的时间更多,也能更好地了解彼此。(建议优化班级固定模式以增强互动)
21. Nancy’s school has more weeks off for the summer holiday than Tomoya's school. Linlin’s school has the most weeks off for the summer holiday.Nancy的学校暑假放假周数比Tomoya 的学校多。(隐含建议调整假期时长)
22. Linlin的学校暑假放假周数最多。Linlin’s school has less break time than Tomoya's school. Tomoya's school has the most break time.Linlin的学校课间休息时间比Tomoya的学校少。Tomoya的学校课间休息时间最多。(隐含建议增加课间休息时间)
以下选自各地试题书面表达参考答案中的素材:
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advice建议 recommendation推荐,建议 advise建议
insist坚持认为,坚决要求 recommend推荐,建议 put forward提出。
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exam/test考试 homework作业 lecture讲座
mark分数 notebook笔记本 textbook教科书
progress进步 summary总结 vocabulary词汇
group discussion小组讨论 online learning在线学习 study method学习方法
correct纠正 improve提高 memorize记忆
preview预习 review复习 summarize总结
understand理解
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classroom教室 laboratory实验室 library图书馆
playground操场 gym体育馆 computer room计算机室
music room音乐室 reading room阅览室 dining hall食堂
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difficulty困难 pressure压力 problem问题
exam anxiety考试焦虑 lack of confidence缺乏自信
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do volunteer work做志愿者工作 have apicnic野餐
hold a sports meeting举办一次运动会 organize acompetition组织/举办一次竞赛
organize an(outdoor)activity组织一次(户外)活动 set up a club创建一个俱乐部
sign up a speech contest报名参加一次演讲比赛
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1. I would like our school to hold some activities, such as Art Festival, sports meeting, and so on.
我希望我们学校举办一些活动,比如艺术节、运动会等等。
2. I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music.
我希望我们学校给我们更多时间用于体育、艺术和音乐。
3. What’s more, I hope our school will have a school trip at least once a term.
此外,我希望我们学校每学期至少组织一次集体出游。
4. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities.首先,我希望我们学校更频繁地开放图书馆。其次,我认为我们学校可以组织更多课外活动。
5. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.我希望我们有更多机会参加这些研学旅行。
6. I hope our after-school activities will be rich.我希望我们的课外活动丰富多彩。
7. I suggest that the school reduce the amount of homework or give students more time to complete it.
我建议学校减少作业量或给学生更多时间完成作业。
8. We should have more free time to balance our study and life.我们应该有更多自由时间来平衡学习和生活。
First, I think we should have more English speaking activities. Second, it would be better if the school could open the library on weekends. Finally, I suggest organizing more outdoor activities.首先,我认为我们应该举办更多英语口语活动。其次,如果学校能在周末开放图书馆就更好了。最后,我建议组织更多户外活动。
9. Organize more after-school activities, such as lectures and competitions so that we can have more opportunities to show our talents and abilities.组织更多课外活动,如讲座和竞赛,以便我们有更多机会展示才能。
10. Update/Upgrade the teaching and classroom equipment in order to improve the effect of teaching and learning.
更新教学和教室设备,以提高教与学的效果。
11. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting.
至于我们的老师,我希望他们成为我们的朋友,让课堂更有趣。
12. And I hope they can talk less but give us more time to practice.我希望他们少讲些,多给我们时间练习。
13. And the school should organize fewer exams as well.学校也应该减少考试次数。
14. What’s more, I hope our teachers will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
此外,我希望我们的老师少布置作业,并按时下课。
15. It’s important to keep our school clean.保持校园清洁很重要。
First, we should save water and electricity. Second, saving paper is necessary. Third, we should plant more trees to make our school more beautiful. Last but not least, don’t litter everywhere, or it will pollute our environment.首先,我们应该节约用水和用电。其次,节约用纸是必要的。第三,我们应该种更多树,让校园更美丽。最后但同样重要的是,不要随处乱扔垃圾,否则会污染环境。
16. Firstly, the canteen could lower the prices and enrich the variety of dishes. Secondly, more cooks could be hired to improve cooking efficiency and taste.首先,食堂可以降低价格并丰富菜肴的种类。其次,可以雇佣更多厨师来提高烹饪效率和口感。
17. I suggest that the school hire a new chef or work with a better food supplier.我建议学校雇佣新厨师或与更好
的食品供应商合作。
18. I think the classroom should be cleaned twice a day.我认为教室应该每天打扫两次。
19. We should take out the rubbish before school is over.我们应该在放学前把垃圾倒掉。
20. Don’t throw the waste paper everywhere.不要到处扔废纸。
21. I hope that we can do something to make the environment more pleasant and beautiful, such as planting more trees, repairing school buildings and improving school roads.我希望我们能做些事情让环境更舒适美丽,比如种植更多树木、修缮校舍和改善校园道路。
22. Let’s make our environment tidy and comfortable.让我们把我们的环境整理得整洁舒适。
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1. Students often have to spend several hours on homework every night.学生们每晚经常要花几个小时做作业。
2. We have too much homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it. That makes us have less rest time.我们每天作业太多。有些学生不得不熬夜处理,这让我们休息时间更少。
3. The school roads are not very clean, and there are not enough trees which can provide shade in summer and make the school more beautiful.校园道路不太干净,而且树木不足,无法在夏天提供树荫并让学校更美丽。
4. There is rubbish all over the floor in our classroom now. The things in the class are also in a mess.
现在我们的教室地板上到处都是垃圾,教室里的东西也乱七八糟。
5. Some facilities and equipment at school are old, such as computers and projectors.
学校的一些设施和设备陈旧,如电脑和投影仪。
6. Colorful after-class activities are very important to our healthy growth, but we can hardly have a chance to take part in them.丰富多彩的课外活动对我们的健康成长非常重要,但我们几乎没有机会参加。
7. There are few after-school activities for us to take part in, which can help us out of the stress of hard study.
我们能参加的课外活动很少,而这些活动本可以帮助我们摆脱繁重学习的压力。
8. It can make our school life more interesting and help us relax.
它可以让我们的学校生活更有趣,并帮助我们放松。
9. Firstly, using phones in class can distract us from listening to the teacher and doing our homework. Secondly, spending too much time on phones is bad for our eyes and health. We might even become addicted to games or social media.首先,在课堂上使用手机会让我们分心,无法专心听讲和做作业。其次,花太多时间在手机上对我们的眼睛和健康有害。我们甚至可能沉迷于游戏或社交媒体。
10. Bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others.
欺凌会让我们感到不安全和不快乐,使我们难以在学校学习和与他人相处。
11. Students may feel sad and helpless when meeting troubles in life. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring serious results. Then their grades will be worse and worse.学生在生活中遇到麻烦时可能会感到悲伤和无助。如果这些问题得不到妥善解决,可能会带来严重后果,然后他们的成绩会越来越差。
12. For example, we can clean the desks and floors every day, because a good environment is helpful to our study and health.例如,我们可以每天打扫桌椅和地板,因为良好的环境有助于我们的学习和健康。
13. For example, English corners or English speech contests can help us improve our oral English.
例如,英语角或英语演讲比赛能够帮助我们提高英语口语。
14. This will help us focus on studying and stay healthy.这将帮助我们专注学习并保持健康。
15. The prices of the dishes are rather high and there are few of dishes.菜肴的价格相当高,而且种类很少。
16. The long queues cost us a great deal of time for lunch break.长长的队伍让我们在午休时花费了大量时间。
17. The food tastes bad, leading to serious waste.食物味道不好,导致严重浪费。
18. The food is often cold and tasteless.食物经常又冷又没味道。
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1. I hope my ideas will be helpful to you.我希望我的想法对你有所帮助。
2. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.希望我的建议有帮助。感谢阅读我的信。
3. I hope they will work for you.我希望它们对你有用。
4. I hope my suggestions can be considered. I believe our school life will become better with these improvements.
我希望我的建议能被考虑。我相信通过这些改进,我们的学校生活将变得更好。
5. I sincerely hope these problems can be solved in the near future.
我真诚地希望这些问题能在不久的将来得到解决。
6. I hope our school will have a brighter future and become a better self.
我希望我们的学校有一个更光明的未来,成为更好的自己。
7. I will feel very happy if my advice is taken. I hope our campus will be more beautiful and colourful.
如果我的建议被采纳,我会很高兴。我希望我们的校园会更加美丽多彩。
8. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.
我希望我们所有人都能友好待人,对欺凌说不。
9. If everyone can make a contribution to our school, it will be better and better.
如果每个人都能为学校做出贡献,它会越来越好。
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1. It is high time that we took some measures to improve the campus environment.
是我们采取措施改善校园环境的时候了。
2. What we need to do now is to encourage more students to participate in campus activities.
我们现在需要做的是鼓励更多学生参与校园活动。
3. With the development of our school, it becomes necessary to upgrade the teaching facilities.
随着我们学校的发展,升级教学设施变得很有必要。
4. Taking everything into consideration, we should start the campus construction as soon as possible.
综合考虑所有因素,我们应该尽快开始校园建设。
5. Only in this way can we create a more comfortable learning atmosphere.
只有这样,我们才能营造一个更舒适的学习氛围。
6. Not until we solve these problems can we enjoy a better school life.
直到我们解决这些问题,我们才能享受更好的学校生活。
7. The reason why I put forward this suggestion is that it can benefit all students.
我提出这个建议的原因是它能让所有学生受益。
8. As far as I’m concerned, building a new art center is of great significance.
在我看来,建造一个新的艺术中心意义重大。
9. It is believed that the new measures will bring great changes to our campus.
人们相信这些新措施将给我们的校园带来巨大变化。
10. If we work together, there is no doubt that our school will become more beautiful.
如果我们齐心协力,毫无疑问我们的学校将会变得更美丽。
【写作通式】
通式一
Dear __________(收信人称呼),
I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve __________(具体事项).
First, I would like to suggest that __________(有关学校) should __________(采取的具体措施), so we can __________(措施1带来的益处). Second, I think __________(有关学校) should __________(具体措施 2), because __________(措施2的理由). Moreover, we need __________(具体资源或改变 3) so that __________(结果).
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and __________(改进的具体要求).
Yours sincerely,
__________(写信人名字)
通式二
Dear __________(收信人称呼),
I’m __________(写信人名字), a student from __________(年级、班级). I’m writing this letter to share some
suggestions about __________(需要改进的方面).
Our school has many wonderful aspects, but there are still some areas that need improvement. For example,
__________(指出存在的问题1). To solve this problem, I think we should __________(提出建议1). Because __________(给出理由1). What’s more,(指出存在的问题 2). In my opinion, __________(提出建议2).
The reason for this __________(给出理由 2).
I hope my suggestions can be considered. Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
__________(写信人名字)
【范文示例】
在学校开展 “优化校园设施与资源,提升校园生活质量”的活动中,校长鼓励全校学生为改善校园环境和学习资源提出建议。假设你是八年级学生李华,请根据以下提示,写一封信给校长,阐述你对改进学校生活某些方面的想法和建议。
提示:1. 增加体育设施,丰富体育活动;
2. 增加图书馆藏书,满足阅读需求;
3. 增添图书馆电脑,方便网络查询。
要求:1. 涵盖所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺;
3. 词数 120 左右。
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通式一【答案】
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school need more sports facilities so we can have more chances to take
in different types of sports. Second, I think our school should open the library on weekends, because Many
students don’t have enough time to borrow books during weekdays because of busy classes. Moreover, we need
much more computers in the library so that we can search online information more easily.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and add more sports facilities and improve our library.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
通式二【答案】
Dear Headmaster,
I’m Li Minghua, a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m writing this letter to share some suggestions about
improving school facilities and resources.
Our school has many wonderful aspects, but there are still some areas that need improvement. For example,
the sports facilities are too limited. This makes many students seldom take outdorr exercise. To solve this problem, I think we should add more basketball courts and table tennis tables. Because more facilities will allow us to try different sports. What’s more, the library has neither have enough books nor enough computers. In my opinion, we should buy more new books on science, history, and literature. The reason for this is that various books can help us open our minds. Also, adding muc more computers in the library will make it easier for us to search for information online.
I hope my suggestions can be considered. Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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