Continuation Writing动作描写 作业设计 -2025届高三英语复习牛津译林版（2020）

2025年“湘道杯”大赛 作业设计 牛津译林版（2020）高三英语复习 读后续写微技能——动作描写 How to describe actions more vividly? 参赛人：何凤姣 学校名称：道县第二中学 How to describe actions more vividly? ----------动作描写巩固练习 一．动作积累 写出下列动作的英文表达 1. 挑眉 __________________________ 2.皱眉 __________________________ 3. 吃惊地瞪大眼睛 __________________________ 4.泪水涌动 _________________________ 5.深呼吸 ________________________ 6.强颜欢笑 ________________________ 7.发出尖锐的惊呼声 ________________________ 8.轻轻拍我的肩 _________________________ 9.双臂抱在胸前 _________________________ 10.对我竖起大拇指 _________________________ 11.拍手，鼓掌 _________________________ 12. 松开紧握的双拳_________________________ 13.跺脚 __________________________ 14.来回踱步 __________________________ 15.心脏剧烈跳动 ______________________________ 二．句式仿写 1. 走路（Walking） 原句1 She walked slowly, her head down, lost in thought. 她低着头慢慢走着，沉浸在自己的思绪中。 仿写1他快步走着，眼睛扫视着前方的街道。_________________________________________________________________ 原句2 She tiptoed quietly, trying not to wake anyone. 她踮着脚尖，尽量不吵醒任何人。 仿写2 他愤怒地跺着脚，发出很大的声响。______________________________________________________________ 2. 坐下（Sitting） 原句1 He sat down gently, placing his hands on his knees. 他轻轻地坐下，双手放在膝盖上。 仿写1她猛地坐下，气得满脸通红。__________________________________________________________________ 原句2 He slumped into the chair, exhausted from the long day. 他瘫坐在椅子上，一整天的疲惫让他筋疲力尽。 仿写2 她坐得笔直，身体因紧张而僵硬。__________________________________________________________ 3. 站起（Standing up） 原句1 She stood up slowly, stretching her arms above her head. 她慢慢地站起来，双臂伸向头顶。 仿写1 他迅速站起来，眼睛因惊讶而睁得大大的。___________________________________________________________ 原句2 He rose to his feet gracefully, like a dancer. 他优雅地起身，像一个舞者一样。 仿写2 她费力地站起来，双腿因虚弱而颤抖。 _____________________________________________________________ 4. 手势（Gesturing） 原句1 He waved his hand, signaling for us to come closer. 他挥了挥手，示意我们靠近一些。 仿写1 她指着窗户，表情严肃。_____________________________________________________________________ 原句2 He clapped his hands together, signaling the end of the meeting. 他双手一拍，示意会议结束。 仿写2 她双臂交叉，摇头表示不赞成。_________________________________________________________________ 5. 跑步（Running） 原句1 He ran as fast as he could, his heart pounding in his chest. 他跑得飞快，心脏在胸腔里剧烈跳动。 仿写1 她冲向终点线，脸上满是决心。________________________________________________________________ 原句2 He sprinted across the field, his feet kicking up dust. 他飞快地跑过田野，双脚扬起尘土。 仿写2 她慢跑着，呼吸急促。_______________________________________________________________ 6. 微笑（Smiling） 原句1 She smiled warmly, her eyes twinkling with kindness. 她微笑着，眼神中闪烁着善意。 仿写1他羞涩地笑了笑，脸颊变得粉红。_____________________________________________________________________ 原句2 He grinned widely, showing his white teeth.他咧嘴一笑，露出洁白的牙齿。 仿写2 她紧张地笑了笑，咬着下嘴唇。__________________________________________________________________ 7. 倾听（Listening） 原句1 He leaned forward, listening intently to the speaker. 他向前倾身，专注地听着演讲者的话。 仿写1 她慢慢点头，仔细听着指示。_____________________________________________________________________ 原句2 He cupped his hand behind his ear, trying to hear better. 他用手掌托住耳朵，试图听得更清楚。 仿写2 她歪着头，听着轻柔的音乐。____________________________________________________________________ 8. 拿起/放下（Picking up / Putting down） 原句1 He picked up the book gently, as if it were a precious treasure. 他轻轻地拿起那本书，仿佛它是一件珍贵的宝藏。 仿写1 她慢慢地放下电话，脸上满是失望。 _________________________________________________________________ 原句2 He lifted the heavy box with a grunt, struggling to keep it steady. 他哼了一声，费力地搬起那个沉重的箱子，努力保持平衡。 仿写2她不小心把笔掉在地上，双手因紧张而颤抖。 ___________________________________________________________________ 9. 看（Looking） 原句1 He looked up at the sky, his eyes wide with wonder. 他抬头望向天空，眼睛里满是惊奇。 仿写1 她低头看着自己的脚，感到有些尴尬。 __________________________________________________________________ 原句2 He stared at the painting, lost in admiration.他盯着那幅画，沉浸在钦佩之中。 仿写2 她看了一眼时钟，脸上露出不耐烦的表情。 _________________________________________________________________ 10. 哭（Crying） 原句1 She cried silently, tears streaming down her face. 她默默地哭泣，泪水顺着脸颊流下。 仿写1 他擦了擦眼睛，努力忍住眼泪。 __________________________________________________________________ 原句2 She sobbed uncontrollably, her shoulders shaking.她失声痛哭，肩膀不停地颤抖。 仿写2 他吸了吸鼻子，试图掩饰自己的悲伤。____________________________________________________________________ 3． 实战演练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。（选自2025年高考全国1卷） My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault._________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.___________- _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一． 1..raise the eyebrow 2.wear a frown 3.widen the eyes in shock 4.with tears welling up in the eyes 5.take a deep breath 6.force a smile 7.let out a sharp cry of surprise 8.pat me gently on the shoulder 9.have your arms crossed in front of your chest 10.thumb up at me 11.clap the hands 12.open up the tightly clenched fists 13.stomp the feet 14.pace back and forth 15. heart pounds fiercely 二. 1. 走路（Walking） 仿写1. He walked briskly, his eyes scanning the street ahead. 仿写2 . He stomped his feet angrily, making loud noises. 2. 坐下（Sitting） 仿写1 She sat down abruptly, her face turning red with anger. 仿写2 She sat up straight, her back rigid with tension. 3. 站起（Standing up） 仿写1 He stood up quickly, his eyes wide with surprise. 仿写2 She struggled to stand up, her legs trembling with weakness. 4. 手势（Gesturing） 仿写1 She pointed to the window, her expression serious. 仿写2 She crossed her arms, shaking her head in disapproval. 5. 跑步（Running） 仿写1 She ran towards the finish line, her face determined. 仿写2 She jogged slowly, her breath coming in short gasps. 6. 微笑（Smiling） 仿写1 He smiled shyly, his cheeks turning pink. 仿写2 She smiled nervously, biting her lower lip. 7. 倾听（Listening） 仿写1 She nodded slowly, listening carefully to the instructions. 仿写2 She tilted her head, listening to the soft music. 8. 拿起/放下（Picking up / Putting down） 仿写1 She put down the phone slowly, her face filled with disappointment. 仿写2 She dropped the pen accidentally, her hands shaking with nerves. 9. 看（Looking） 仿写1 She looked down at her feet, feeling embarrassed. 仿写2 She glanced at the clock, her face showing impatience. 10. 哭（Crying） 仿写1 He wiped his eyes, trying to hold back the tears. 仿写2 He sniffled, trying to hide his sadness. 三． I realized it was me who was at fault .The dog wasn ' t just a pet for him ; it was his family . Reflecting on my brother ' s suffering and my thoughtless actions ,（现在分词作状语）how selfish I was to force him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood . The next few days ,overwhelmed with guilt and shame,（过去分词作状语） I felt like sitting on pins and needles. so, I was determined to visit him personally to improve our tense relationship . The moment I told my wife my plan , she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother ' s favorite biscuits . Driven by a desperate need to make things right ,（过去分词作状语） I grabbed my keys , jumped into the car and headed to my brother ' s home without a second thought .(动作链) With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Taking a deep breath ,（现在分词作状语） I gathered my courage to knock at the door, my hand trembling(独立主格结构) . I was unsure of what to expect. When my brother opened the door, he paused for a moment, then stepped aside, inviting me in.（动作链） As we sat together, I explained my feelings — how I had underestimated Toby’s importance and how sorry I was for my actions. My brother listened quietly, his expression softening gradually.(独立主格结构) With Toby ' s barks coming to my ears , (with 的复合结构） I knew I should make an apology to him . Touching Toby’s head gently, I bent down , saying , “I’m so sorry.”（动作链）Toby brushed my hand, his tail wagging joyfully(独立主格结构) , marking the repair of our relationship.（现在分词作状语） It was through this experience that I realized empathy , forgiveness and communication are the true bridges to strengthen bonds .(强调句) 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$