内容正文:
Unit 2 Hobbies
同步写作课讲义-译林版2024七年级上册
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⭐话题解读⭐
)
U2的话题是“兴趣爱好”,属于“人与自我:生活与学习”主题群中“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”子主题。本单元的主题句为:“爱好给我们的生活带来乐趣。”重点强调引导学生关注有益的兴趣爱好对于个人生活和成长的积极影响,帮助学生认识到兴趣爱好对于知识学习、人际交往、人生目标制订的重要性,鼓励学生培养丰富有益的兴趣爱好,并以爱好为引领,促进学生积极与同伴交往,合理规划课余活动,选择行为榜样,树立个人理想。
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⭐写作任务⭐
)
本单元的写作任务主要是介绍自己和他人的兴趣爱好,要求学生能够运用本单元所学核心词汇、语篇内容和语法知识介绍个人爱好、参与的具体活动、相关领域的榜样,阐述爱好的成因,以爱好为引领,树立职业理想。
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⭐审题指导⭐
)
本单元主要话题是介绍自己和他人的兴趣爱好。
在撰写文章时,首先要明确文章的主题,是介绍自己的兴趣爱好,还是他人的兴趣爱好。写作时确定好时态、人称、顺序、开头和结尾等;如果是介绍自己的兴趣爱好,可以用第一人称和一般现在时,描述最吸引你的活动或事物,详细描绘这些兴趣是如何影响你的日常生活,以及它们如何塑造了你的个性和价值观。如果文章主题是介绍他人的兴趣爱好,要用第三人称和一般现在时,描述朋友或家人如何投入他们的兴趣爱好,如他们每周花多少时间进行这些活动,在其中获得了哪些乐趣和成就感以及这些兴趣爱好对他们生活的影响,比如是否帮助他们结交新朋友,或者提升了他们的技能水平等等。
无论介绍自己还是他人,都应注意细节描写,使读者能够身临其境地感受到这些兴趣爱好的魅力。通过生动的细节描写,文章将更加引人入胜,读者也更容易产生共鸣。
最后,同学们写作时要注意书写认真,保证卷面整洁美观,确保段落内容表达条理清晰,注意人称和时态的运用,写完后认真检查,检查内容有无遗漏,时态、语态是否妥当,单词的拼写是否正确,主谓是否一致,句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等,尽量减少错误。
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⭐写作框架⭐
)
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What is your
(his)
favourite hobby?
你
(
他
)
最喜欢的爱好是什么?
)
(
How often do you
(does he)
do it?
你
/
他
多久做一次这个爱好?
)
(
General information
一般信息
)
(
When do you
(does he)
do it?
你
(
他
)
什么时候做这个爱好?
)
(
Why do you
(does he)
like it?
你
(
他
)
为什么喜欢这个爱好?
)
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Hobbies
爱好
)
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Role models related to the hobby
与爱好相关的榜样
) (
Who is your
(his)
role model?
你
(
他
)
的榜样是谁?
)
(
How can your
(his)
hobby help you
(him)
?
你
(
他
)
的爱好如何帮助你
(
他
)
?
)
(
Meaning of the hobby
爱好的意义
)
(
写作模板
)
(原创)兴趣在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好,在某种程度上,兴趣反应一个人的能力和愿望。作为中学生,兴趣在学习中有着重要的意义。根据表格中的内容,写一篇题为"My Favourite Hobby"的短文。
My Favourite Hobby
(我最喜欢的爱好)
Introduction to my hobby: Playing the guitar
(介绍我最喜欢的爱好: 弹吉他)
how often(频率)
how long(时长)
how it makes me feel(给我的感觉)
Learning and progress
(学习和进步)
easy to learn(简单易学)
can play lots of simple songs
(可以演奏很多简单的歌曲)
Who to play with(与谁一起弹):friends and cousin Steven(朋友和表弟史蒂文。)
Goal for the future(未来的目标): To be a great guitar player(成为一名优秀的吉他手。)
注意:
(1)内容要点供选择使用;
(2)词数 80词左右。
My Favourite Hobby
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⭐参考范文⭐
)
My favourite hobby is playing the guitar. I play it almost every day. Some days, I only play for a few minutes, but most days I spend about an hour practising. I always feel calm and relaxed after playing the guitar.
The guitar is easy to learn, unlike some other instruments. I can already play lots of simple songs. That makes me feel happy and proud.
Some of my friends play the guitar too. At the weekend, we often meet up and play together. We make such beautiful music! I also play with my cousin Steven sometimes. He is very good at the guitar. He teaches me old Chinese songs. I love them!
My plan is to keep practising the guitar every day. I hope to be a great guitar player one day!
(
⭐素材宝库⭐
)
(
词汇积累
)
※Hobby-related: 与爱好相关的:
piano钢琴, jogging慢跑, painting绘画, paper-cutting剪纸, reading阅读, swimming游泳, science科学, listening to music听音乐, drawing素描, cooking烹饪, dancing跳舞, robot机器人, geography地理,
ping-pong乒乓球, basketball篮球, volleyball排球, football足球, …etc……等等。
※Describe the hobby of doing something: 描述爱好做某事
love (doing) sth喜欢做某事
enjoy (doing) sth享受做某事
like to do sth/(doing) sth喜欢做某事/(做某事)
a fan of … 是......的粉丝
be interested in ... 对......感兴趣
※Analyze the benefits of hobbies: 分析爱好的益处
learn a lot from ... 从……中学到很多。
help ... keep fit 帮助……保持健康。
make me feel happy/good/great 让我感到快乐/好/棒。
※Describe the hobby activities you take part in: 阐述参与的爱好活动
read all kinds of books 阅读各类书籍
go swimming every week 每周游泳一次
visit science museums 参观科学博物馆
take things apart and learn how they work 拆解物品并学习其工作原理
help fix things 参与物品修理
go on the internet 上网搜索
find answers to his endless questions 寻找他无穷无尽的问题的答案
meet once a week 每周聚会一次
share ideas about ... 分享关于……的想法
introduce ... to each other 相互介绍……
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句型积累
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※Describe own/others’ hobby: 描述自己或他人的爱好
What are your hobbies? 你有什么爱好?
Do you have any hobbies? 你有什么爱好吗?
My / His / Her favourite hobby is ... 我/他/她最喜欢的爱好是……
I am interested in ... 我对……感兴趣。
He/ She is interested in ... 他/她对……感兴趣。
I like/love/enjoy... 我喜欢/热爱/享受……
He/ She likes/loves/enjoys... 他/她喜欢/热爱/享受……
I / He/ She often ... 我/他/她经常……
Every week/day, I / He/ She... 每周/每天,我/他/她……
I play/go/do ... after school. 放学后我会……(玩/去/做……)
It makes me feel happy/good/great. 这让我感到快乐/满足/很棒。
It is great fun (for sb). 对某人来说非常有趣。
※Role models related to the hobby: 与爱好相关的榜样
My favourite … is ... 我最喜欢的……是……
...is/was a master of … ……是/曾是……的大师
※Meaning of the hobby: 爱好的意义
My ... skills can help me a lot. 我的……技能能给我很大帮助。
... can help make my dream come true.……有助于实现我的梦想。
※Describe the ideals related to hobbies: 阐述与爱好相关的理想
…want to be/become ... 想成为……
My dream is to ... 我的梦想是……
I hope my dream can come true.我希望我的梦想能够实现。
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谚语名句
)
1. Hobbies are the key to happiness. 爱好是幸福的关键。
2. Hobbies keep us young and healthy. 爱好使我们保持年轻和健康。
3. Hobbies are the best way to relieve stress. 爱好是缓解压力的最佳方式。
4. Interest is the best teacher. 兴趣是最好的老师。
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⭐写作拓展⭐
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考情分析
)
近三年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024年
江苏省宿迁市
“How to Be a Good Youth” 如何做一名新时代好少年。
提纲类
辽宁铁岭·期末
“My favorite movie”
提纲类
2023年
贵州贵阳·统考二模
“My Hobbies Make Me ________”
提纲类
广西·中考真题
“My favourite art course”
提纲类
2022年
吉林·中考真题
My Hobby
提纲类
四川眉山·统考一模
写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好。
提纲类
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变式提升训练
)
(1)
(2023·贵州贵阳·统考二模)爱因斯坦说:“兴趣是最好的老师”,有人喜欢唱歌、有人喜欢跳舞、有人喜欢绘画、有人喜欢踢球……兴趣爱好让人快乐、令人放松,不同的兴趣爱好带给每个人不同的感受。近日育才中学广播站正在举行英语征文比赛,请你以“My Hobbies Make Me ________”为题,写一篇约80词的征文。
要求:
1.征文须包含思维导图中所有信息;
2.重点谈谈你的收获及感悟;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
My Hobbies Make Me ________ Hobbies
Reasons
Feeling
…
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(2)
(2022·四川眉山·统考一模)假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友John写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好。
内容包括:
1.介绍爱好(读书);
2.喜欢的原因(获得知识knowledge,有趣故事,愉悦……);
3.读书经历(例:童年:Journey to the West...,现在:Harry Potter...);
4.个人的感受(读书就像和一个有趣的人交流……)。
注意:
1.词数100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.根据内容提示,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校信息。
Dear John,
How’s everything going It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
So, how about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(3)
(2024九年级上·辽宁铁岭·期末)某英文报社正在征稿,题目是“My favorite movie”。假如你叫李华,请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一部电影:
1. What kind of movie is it?
2. What’s the movie about?
3. Why do you like the movie?
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
(4)
(2023浙江省宁波市期中考试) 每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好,因为人的年龄,所受的教育等不同,人与人之间的兴趣爱好有很大的区别。在某种程度上,兴趣反应一个人的能力和愿望。兴趣在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。作为中学生,兴趣在学习中有着重要的意义。根据表格中的内容,写一篇题为 "My Hobbies" 的短文。
Hobbies
The first hobby & Reasons
The second hobby & Reasons
注意:
1)内容要点供选择使用;
2)词数 80词左右。
My Hobbies
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
(5)
(2023·广西·统考中考真题)艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等);
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等);
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:art course(艺术课),painting(n.绘画),calligraphy(n.书法),drama(n.戏剧)
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school.
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Unit 2 Hobbies
同步写作课讲义-译林版2024七年级上册
(
⭐话题解读⭐
)
U2的话题是“兴趣爱好”,属于“人与自我:生活与学习”主题群中“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”子主题。本单元的主题句为:“爱好给我们的生活带来乐趣。”重点强调引导学生关注有益的兴趣爱好对于个人生活和成长的积极影响,帮助学生认识到兴趣爱好对于知识学习、人际交往、人生目标制订的重要性,鼓励学生培养丰富有益的兴趣爱好,并以爱好为引领,促进学生积极与同伴交往,合理规划课余活动,选择行为榜样,树立个人理想。
(
⭐写作任务⭐
)
本单元的写作任务主要是介绍自己和他人的兴趣爱好,要求学生能够运用本单元所学核心词汇、语篇内容和语法知识介绍个人爱好、参与的具体活动、相关领域的榜样,阐述爱好的成因,以爱好为引领,树立职业理想。
(
⭐审题指导⭐
)
本单元主要话题是介绍自己和他人的兴趣爱好。
在撰写文章时,首先要明确文章的主题,是介绍自己的兴趣爱好,还是他人的兴趣爱好。写作时确定好时态、人称、顺序、开头和结尾等;如果是介绍自己的兴趣爱好,可以用第一人称和一般现在时,描述最吸引你的活动或事物,详细描绘这些兴趣是如何影响你的日常生活,以及它们如何塑造了你的个性和价值观。如果文章主题是介绍他人的兴趣爱好,要用第三人称和一般现在时,描述朋友或家人如何投入他们的兴趣爱好,如他们每周花多少时间进行这些活动,在其中获得了哪些乐趣和成就感以及这些兴趣爱好对他们生活的影响,比如是否帮助他们结交新朋友,或者提升了他们的技能水平等等。
无论介绍自己还是他人,都应注意细节描写,使读者能够身临其境地感受到这些兴趣爱好的魅力。通过生动的细节描写,文章将更加引人入胜,读者也更容易产生共鸣。
最后,同学们写作时要注意书写认真,保证卷面整洁美观,确保段落内容表达条理清晰,注意人称和时态的运用,写完后认真检查,检查内容有无遗漏,时态、语态是否妥当,单词的拼写是否正确,主谓是否一致,句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等,尽量减少错误。
(
⭐写作框架⭐
)
(
What is your(his) favourite hobby?
你(
他)
最喜欢的爱好是什么?
)
(
How often do you(does he) do it?
你
/他
多久做一次这个爱好?
)
(
General information
一般信息
)
(
When do you(does he) do it?
你(他
)
什么时候做这个爱好?
)
(
Why do you(does he) like it?
你(他
)
为什么喜欢这个爱好?
)
(
Hobbies爱好
)
(
Role models related to the hobby与爱好相关的榜样
) (
Who is your(his) role model?
你(他
)
的榜样是谁?
)
(
How can your(his) hobby help you(him)?
你(他
)
的爱好如何帮助你(
他)
?
)
(
Meaning of the hobby
爱好的意义
)
(
写作模板
)
(原创)兴趣在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好,在某种程度上,兴趣反应一个人的能力和愿望。作为中学生,兴趣在学习中有着重要的意义。根据表格中的内容,写一篇题为"My Favourite Hobby"的短文。
My Favourite Hobby
(我最喜欢的爱好)
Introduction to my hobby: Playing the guitar
(介绍我最喜欢的爱好: 弹吉他)
how often(频率)
how long(时长)
how it makes me feel(给我的感觉)
Learning and progress
(学习和进步)
easy to learn(简单易学)
can play lots of simple songs
(可以演奏很多简单的歌曲)
Who to play with(与谁一起弹):friends and cousin Steven(朋友和表弟史蒂文。)
Goal for the future(未来的目标): To be a great guitar player(成为一名优秀的吉他手。)
注意:
(1)内容要点供选择使用;
(2)词数 80词左右。
My Favourite Hobby
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
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⭐参考范文⭐
)
My favourite hobby is playing the guitar. I play it almost every day. Some days, I only play for a few minutes, but most days I spend about an hour practising. I always feel calm and relaxed after playing the guitar.
The guitar is easy to learn, unlike some other instruments. I can already play lots of simple songs. That makes me feel happy and proud.
Some of my friends play the guitar too. At the weekend, we often meet up and play together. We make such beautiful music! I also play with my cousin Steven sometimes. He is very good at the guitar. He teaches me old Chinese songs. I love them!
My plan is to keep practising the guitar every day. I hope to be a great guitar player one day!
[思路点拨]
1.要点提示:根据提示内容可以将文章分为四大部分:
第一部分:介绍我最喜欢的爱好---弹吉他(包括频率、时长、给我的感觉)。
第二部分:学习和进步:简单易学,可以演奏很多简单的歌曲。
第三部分:与朋友和表弟史蒂文一起弹。
第四部分:未来的目标:成为一名优秀的吉他手。
2.时态:一般现在时;
3.人称:第一人称。
[亮点词汇]
every day每天//a few minutes几分钟// about an hour大约一小时;
easy to learn容易学;
makes me feel happy and proud让我感到快乐和自豪;
too// also也;
meet up and play together碰面一起玩;
love them爱他们;
keep practicing继续练习;
be a great guitar player成为一名出色的吉他手;
feel calm and relaxed感到平静且放松;
feel happy and proud感到快乐和自豪;
[高分句型]
I play it almost every day.
I always feel calm and relaxed after playing the guitar. (Explain why you like your hobby.)
The guitar is easy to learn, unlike some other instruments.
Some of my friends play the guitar too.
At the weekend, we often meet up and play together.
I also play with my cousin Steven sometimes.
My plan is to keep practising the guitar every day.
I hope to be a great guitar player one day!
(
⭐素材宝库⭐
)
(
词汇积累
)
※Hobby-related: 与爱好相关的:
piano钢琴, jogging慢跑, painting绘画, paper-cutting剪纸, reading阅读, swimming游泳, science科学, listening to music听音乐, drawing素描, cooking烹饪, dancing跳舞, robot机器人, geography地理,
ping-pong乒乓球, basketball篮球, volleyball排球, football足球, …etc……等等。
※Describe the hobby of doing something: 描述爱好做某事
love (doing) sth喜欢做某事
enjoy (doing) sth享受做某事
like to do sth/(doing) sth喜欢做某事/(做某事)
a fan of … 是......的粉丝
be interested in ... 对......感兴趣
※Analyze the benefits of hobbies: 分析爱好的益处
learn a lot from ... 从……中学到很多。
help ... keep fit 帮助……保持健康。
make me feel happy/good/great 让我感到快乐/好/棒。
※Describe the hobby activities you take part in: 阐述参与的爱好活动
read all kinds of books 阅读各类书籍
go swimming every week 每周游泳一次
visit science museums 参观科学博物馆
take things apart and learn how they work 拆解物品并学习其工作原理
help fix things 参与物品修理
go on the internet 上网搜索
find answers to his endless questions 寻找他无穷无尽的问题的答案
meet once a week 每周聚会一次
share ideas about ... 分享关于……的想法
introduce ... to each other 相互介绍……
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※Describe own/others’ hobby: 描述自己或他人的爱好
What are your hobbies? 你有什么爱好?
Do you have any hobbies? 你有什么爱好吗?
My / His / Her favourite hobby is ... 我/他/她最喜欢的爱好是……
I am interested in ... 我对……感兴趣。
He/ She is interested in ... 他/她对……感兴趣。
I like/love/enjoy... 我喜欢/热爱/享受……
He/ She likes/loves/enjoys... 他/她喜欢/热爱/享受……
I / He/ She often ... 我/他/她经常……
Every week/day, I / He/ She... 每周/每天,我/他/她……
I play/go/do ... after school. 放学后我会……(玩/去/做……)
It makes me feel happy/good/great. 这让我感到快乐/满足/很棒。
It is great fun (for sb). 对某人来说非常有趣。
※Role models related to the hobby: 与爱好相关的榜样
My favourite … is ... 我最喜欢的……是……
...is/was a master of … ……是/曾是……的大师
※Meaning of the hobby: 爱好的意义
My ... skills can help me a lot. 我的……技能能给我很大帮助。
... can help make my dream come true.……有助于实现我的梦想。
※Describe the ideals related to hobbies: 阐述与爱好相关的理想
…want to be/become ... 想成为……
My dream is to ... 我的梦想是……
I hope my dream can come true.我希望我的梦想能够实现。
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谚语名句
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1. Hobbies are the key to happiness. 爱好是幸福的关键。
2. Hobbies keep us young and healthy. 爱好使我们保持年轻和健康。
3. Hobbies are the best way to relieve stress. 爱好是缓解压力的最佳方式。
4. Interest is the best teacher. 兴趣是最好的老师。
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考情分析
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近三年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024年
江苏省宿迁市
“How to Be a Good Youth” 如何做一名新时代好少年。
提纲类
辽宁铁岭·期末
“My favorite movie”
提纲类
2023年
贵州贵阳·统考二模
“My Hobbies Make Me ________”
提纲类
广西·中考真题
“My favourite art course”
提纲类
2022年
吉林·中考真题
My Hobby
提纲类
四川眉山·统考一模
写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好。
提纲类
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变式提升训练
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(2023·贵州贵阳·统考二模)爱因斯坦说:“兴趣是最好的老师”,有人喜欢唱歌、有人喜欢跳舞、有人喜欢绘画、有人喜欢踢球……兴趣爱好让人快乐、令人放松,不同的兴趣爱好带给每个人不同的感受。近日育才中学广播站正在举行英语征文比赛,请你以“My Hobbies Make Me ________”为题,写一篇约80词的征文。
要求:
1.征文须包含思维导图中所有信息;
2.重点谈谈你的收获及感悟;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
My Hobbies Make Me ________ Hobbies
Reasons
Feeling
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【范文】
My Hobbies Make Me happy
As we all know, happiness is a feeling in our daily life. I always read in my spare time. I think it can not only improve my knowledge, but also broaden my mind.
First of all, there are all kinds of stories in the book. Some interesting, some sad, some wonderful. I can always learn a lot from them. Second, reading books helps me do well in my study. Books are quite useful when I meet with difficulties.
In a word, reading has already become part of my life. Just as the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man.” I think doing more reading can really make me better.
[思路点拨]
1.要点提示: 本文是一篇话题作文;写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。注意写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
2.写作步骤
第一步,引出“我的爱好让我开心”的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。说明感兴趣的原因;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的感受。
3.时态:一般现在时;
4.人称:第一人称。
[亮点词汇]
as we all know众所周知
do well in擅长
as the saying goes俗话说
[高分句型]
1. Books are quite useful when I meet with difficulties. 当我遇到困难时,书籍非常有用。
(when引导的时间状语从句)
2. I think doing more reading can really make me better. 我认为多阅读确实能让我变得更好。
(宾语从句)
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(2022·四川眉山·统考一模)假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友John写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好。
内容包括:
1.介绍爱好(读书);
2.喜欢的原因(获得知识knowledge,有趣故事,愉悦……);
3.读书经历(例:童年:Journey to the West...,现在:Harry Potter...);
4.个人的感受(读书就像和一个有趣的人交流……)。
注意:
1.词数100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.根据内容提示,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校信息。
Dear John,
How’s everything going It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
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So, how about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear John,
How’s everything going It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
I like reading books very much, especially classic books. Here are some reasons. Firstly, I think reading books is a good way to get lots of knowledge. Secondly, there are interesting stories in books. Reading books gives me happiness.
When I was a child, I loved reading Journey to the West. I was interested in this story because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. Now, I enjoy reading Harry Potter. That’s a good novel. Harry Potter’s brave and fearless spirit is worth learning. I think reading a good book is just like talking to an interesting person.
So, how about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
[思路点拨]
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据所给的提示内容,给John写一封邮件,分享自己的兴趣爱好。内容应包括介绍爱好、喜欢的原因、读书经历以及个人的感受。
2. 写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时为主,写经历时需用一般过去时;描述细节时,细节应符合文章要求,不可随意减少,可以有适当的补充;描述时应注意逻辑,保证思路清晰。
[亮点词汇]
Firstly首先;
Secondly其次;
Because因为;
Now现在;
just like就像;
[高分句型]
1. Firstly, I think reading books is a good way to get lots of knowledge. 首先,我认为读书是获取大量知识的好方法。(Firstly表示顺序)
2. Reading books gives me happiness. 读书让我感到快乐。(说明喜欢读书的原因)
3. I was interested in this story because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never
gives up. 我对这个故事很感兴趣,因为机智的孙悟空始终坚持与邪恶势力斗争,帮助弱小,永不言弃。(because引导原因状语从句)
4. When I was a child, I loved reading Journey to the West. 我小时候特别喜欢读《西游记》。
(When引导时间状语从句)
5. I think reading a good book is just like talking to an interesting person. 我认为读一本好书就像与一位有趣的人交谈。(宾语从句)
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(2024九年级上·辽宁铁岭·期末)某英文报社正在征稿,题目是“My favorite movie”。假如你叫李华,请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的一部电影:
1. What kind of movie is it?
2. What’s the movie about?
3. Why do you like the movie?
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【范文】
My favorite movie
My name is Li Hua. I like movies very much. I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what a real friendship is and so on.
Zootopia is one of my favorite movies. It is a cartoon movie. The story is about a rabbit that joins the police and solves a difficult case with a fox.
I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it. “If you don't try anything new, you'll never fail." These words from the movie influence me a lot. What's more, the theme song of the movie influences me a lot, too. Try Everything is a great song. I like listening to it.
[思路点拨]
1.要点提示: 根据问题提示可以将文章分为三大部分:
第一部分:开篇点题,介绍自己的姓名、最喜欢的电影等。
第二部分:介绍自己最喜欢的电影情况。
第三部分:介绍自己喜欢的原因及感受。
2. 时态:一般现在时;
3. 人称:第一人称。
[亮点词汇]
one of my favorite movies; a cartoon movie; If; influence me a lot;
[高分句型]
I like…movies very much.
I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what a real friendship is and so on.
Zootopia is one of my favorite movies.
The story is about a rabbit that joins the police and solves a difficult case with a fox.
I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it.
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(2023浙江省宁波市期中考试) 每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好,因为人的年龄,所受的教育等不同,人与人之间的兴趣爱好有很大的区别。在某种程度上,兴趣反应一个人的能力和愿望。兴趣在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。作为中学生,兴趣在学习中有着重要的意义。根据表格中的内容,写一篇题为 "My Hobbies" 的短文。
Hobbies
The first hobby & Reasons
The second hobby & Reasons
注意:
1)内容要点供选择使用;
2)词数 80词左右。
My Hobbies
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【范文】
My Hobbies
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. My hobbies are listening to music and playing basketball.
My first hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music especially the cartoon music. Though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it can also make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.
My second hobby is playing basketball. Playing basketball not only makes me healthy, but also makes me make a lot of friends. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball.
Do you like listening to music and playing basketball? If not, I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful.
[思路点拨]
1. 要点提示:根据提示内容可以将文章分为四大部分:
第一部分:引出话题,介绍我的爱好------听音乐和打篮球。
第二部分:第一个爱好------听音乐及喜欢听音乐的原因。
第三部分:第二个爱好------打篮球及喜欢打篮球的原因。
第四部分:以提问的方式吸引读者注意,然后给读者以希望。
2. 时态:一般现在时;
3. 人称:第一人称。
[亮点词汇]
lose myself in; 沉浸其中;
calm down; 冷静下来;
comfortable; 舒适;
happy; 快乐;
healthy; 健康;
make a lot of friends结交很多朋友
not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
1. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music especially the cartoon music. 当我还是个孩子的时候,我喜欢听音乐,尤其是卡通音乐。enjoy doing sth. 表示喜欢做某事。
2. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. 当我很累的时候,它能让我感到舒服。when引导一个时间状语从句。
3. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health. 听音乐让我保持愉快的心情,对我的健康也有益。
4. I hope you can have a try, and you will find them helpful. 我希望你能尝试一下,你会发现它们很有帮助。
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(2023·广西·统考中考真题)艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等);
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等);
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:art course(艺术课),painting(n.绘画),calligraphy(n.书法),drama(n.戏剧)
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school.
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【范文】
My favourite art course
Art courses are important in school. We have many art classes in our school, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and so on. However, my favorite art class is painting.
I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. Our school holds a painting competition on June 30 every year.
I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. With my crayons, I can paint a vibrant world and anything that catches my fancy. Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me.
[思路点拨]
1.要点提示: 本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;根据所给的要点提示,介绍最喜欢的一门艺术课,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
2.写作步骤:
第一步,引出话题,并点明自己最喜欢的艺术课是绘画;
第二步,具体介绍课程、活动的安排;
第三步,介绍自己喜欢绘画的原因。
3.时态:一般现在时;
4.人称:第一人称。
[亮点词汇]
such as比如;
from...to...从……到……;
allow sb to do允许某人做某事;
[高分句型]
1. I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. 我每周上三节课,上课时间为周一、周三和周四的下午4点至5点。(which引导的限制性定语从句)
2. I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. 我喜欢绘画,因为它能带给我快乐。(because引导的原因状语从句)
3. Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me. 此外,当言语无法表达时,绘画让我能够通过画面抒发情感。(when引导的时间状语从句)
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