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《支点》七年级英语RJ版下册
Unit 7
A Day to Remember
单元
主题写作
话题分析
本单元以“学校旅行”为话题,围绕这一话
题谈论过去发生的事情,描述旅行期间的经历
以及表达自己的体会和感受。体现本单元话
题及考查语言综合运用能力的话题作文通常
为记录一次野餐、郊游、旅行等。
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素材积累
介绍特别的一天
开头句
1.Last Saturday,I went to a farm in the
countryside.
2.It was sunny yesterday.We went on a
school trip.
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中间句
1.We visited the science museum.
2.We saw many old things and learned a
lot about the history.
3.We began to climb the mountains.
4.We enjoyed the beautiful flowers and
the green grass.
5.We watched videos about the museum.
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结尾句
1.That was a very exciting trip for me.
2.I will never forget this trip because it
brought me many sweet memories.
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例题展示
同学们都参加过学校的郊游活动吧?请以
“My school trip'”为题,向学校英语报刊投稿,描述
你参加过的一次学校郊游活动,主要包括什么时
候去的、去了哪里、做了什么以及你的感受。
要求:
1.词数70左右:
2.以下所给参考词汇仅供选用。
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参考词汇:Xiangshan Park,climb the hill,
have a picnic
My school trip
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思路点拔
1.本文属于记叙文,写作时首先要审题:
2.根据提示发挥想象,交代清楚时间、地
点、人物、过程、结果等,要注意在叙述当天活
动的同时,还要写出自己的感受;
3.正确运用第一人称和一般过去时。
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写作模板
My classmates and I went
引出话题
on…two months ago.We
talked...
When we
got there,we
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began to…had a picnic
shared…enjoyed.
On the way home,I felt..
表达感受
>
We looked forward to...
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范文欣赏
My school trip
My classmates and I went on a school trip
to Xiangshan Park two months ago.We took
the bus there.We talked and laughed along the
way.
When we got there,we began to climb the
hill in groups.After we got to the top,we had
a picnic there.We shared food and drinks.We
enjoyed the beautiful flowers and the green
grass.We had a really good time.
On the way home,I felt a bit tired but I
was happy.We looked forward to another
school trip.
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