2025年中考英语专项写作复习之---Writing Steps 课件

PPT模板下载:/moban/ 行业PPT模板:/hangye/ 节日PPT模板:/jieri/ PPT素材下载:/sucai/ PPT背景图片:/beijing/ PPT图表下载:/tubiao/ 优秀PPT下载:/xiazai/ PPT教程: /powerpoint/ Word教程: /word/ Excel教程:/excel/ 资料下载:/ziliao/ PPT课件下载:/kejian/ 范文下载:/fanwen/ 试卷下载:/shiti/ 教案下载:/jiaoan/ 中考专项写作复习之-Writing Steps 2分 15分 8分 15分 0分 15分 15分 15分 How can we write a good composition(作文)? Writing Steps 审 Step1 学习生活中有许多烦恼会使人产生压力。为了更好地发现并解决同学们存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure,Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一篇发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法;与同学分享。内容包括: 1.同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; 2.我的压力是什么; 3:我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数:100左右(已给出部分不计入)。 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world Task Step1 Theme (主旨):_ Genre(文体):_ Tense(时态):_ Person(人称):_ speech Less Pressure,Better life 一般现在时, first person,third person 审题 experience 一般过去时 Writing Steps 审 列 Step1 Step2 Step2 列 1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; 2. 我的压力是什么; 3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 relations with friends\ parents too much homework after-school classes exams put on weight talk with friends\ parents listen to music exercise communication 列要点 brainstorming Writing Steps 审 列 扩 Step1 Step2 Step3 扩 扩句子 Step3 words sentences too much homework Some students say that they have too much homework to do. listen to music I always worry about the exams. exams To shut off my brain, I prefer listening to music Make your sentences 扩 扩句子 Step3 words sentences Make your sentences Suggestions Make good use of your textbook. Topic Related units (课本链接) Wonderful examples(典句诵读) Excellent imitations(仿句演练) Grade 7 B Unit 6 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time! Grade 8 A Unit 2 Why don't you talk to your parents? Grade 9 Unit 9 It's important to have good habits. Related units (课本链接) Grade 7 B Unit 6 Reading Wonderful examples(典句诵读) ① ② ④ ③ ①Students these days often have a lot of worries. ② Unless we talk to someone,we'll certainly feel worse. ③It is best not to run away from our problems, We should always try to solve them. ④In English, we say that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you're halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it! A. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; B. 我的压力是什么; C. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 ① ③ ② ④ Wonderful examples(典句诵读) 读) Grade 8 A Unit 2 Reading ⑤.My problem is that I can't get on with my family. A. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; B. 我的压力是什么; C. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 ⑤ Wonderful examples(典句诵读) Grade 8 A Unit 2 Reading ⑥ ⑦ ⑧ ⑥These days, Chinese children are sometimes busier on weekends because they have to take so many after-school classes. ⑦People shouldn't push their kids so hard. ⑧Kids should have time to relax and think for themselves. A. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; B. 我的压力是什么; C. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 ⑥ ⑦ ⑧ Excellent imitations(仿句演练) People shouldn't push their kids so hard. 词组搭配: push sb hard 句型: A push(es) B so hard. 我的压力是父母逼得我太紧了。 My presure is that my parents push me so hard. Make a sentence: Excellent imitations(仿句演练) My problem is that I can't get on with my family. 词组搭配: get on with... 句型: sb's problem is that sb can't get on with.... 一些学生的压力是他们不能和同学友好相处。 Some students' presure is that they can't get on with their classmates. Make a sentence: Excellent imitations(仿句演练) In English, we say that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you're halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it! 所以仅通过和别人谈论它你就已经在减压(relieve pressure)的中途了。 So you're halfway to relieving pressure just by talking to someone about it. Make a sentence: Suggestions 扩 扩句子 Make your sentences Make good use of your textbook. Take notes while doing after-class reading and try to recite (背诵)them. Writing Steps 审 列 扩 Step1 Step2 Step3 添 Step4 1.Some students can't get on well with their classmates others may worry about their exams. 2.My parents want me to be the top student in class. they send me to all kinds of after- classes at weekends. 添 妙用关联词 Step4 while So 21 本资料来自于资源最齐全的21世纪教育网www.21cnjy.com 1.Some students can't get on well with their classmates while others may worry about their exams. Also, there are still quite a few students who complain about the endless homework. choose the topic sentence 2.My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after- classes at weekends. A.I'm always under pressure, too. 添 添主题句 B.Students in our class are under too much pressure. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. conclution(结论) 添 添结论 Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my parents and told them I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. Writing Steps 审 列 扩 Step1 Step2 Step3 连 Step5 添 Step4 学校生活 要点提示 素材串联 开头:点明主题 说明现状,点明主题(stress) 正文:发言内容 1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; 2. 我的压力是什么; 3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 结尾:得出结论 呼应主题Less Pressure,Better Life. Pressure is a serious problem in today's world topic scentence example 1 example 2... topic scentence example 1 your experience conclution 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 连 Pressure is a serious problem in today's world ……………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ………………………………………………… ……………………………………………… greeting closing body speech topic scentence example 1 example 2.. topic scentence example 1 your experience conclution Hello, boys and girls! That's all. Thank you! The layout of the speech Writing Steps 审 列 扩 Step1 Step2 Step3 查 Step6 添 Step4 连 Step5 1. 包括所有要求内容,叙事完整明白; 2. 语言结构丰富; 3.表达清楚,行文规范; 4.语言基本无误; 5.书写规范; 6.词数符合要求。 查 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 write your passage. (5mins) Group 1 : 1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么 Group 2: 2. 我的压力是什么 Group 3: 3. 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 Write now topic scentence example 1 example 2.. topic scentence example 1 your experience conclution Writing Steps 审 列 扩 Step1 Step2 Step3 查 Step6 添 Step4 连 Step5 Writing step by step,you will finally succeed! Study hard step by step,you will finally succeed! Keep moving! Homework 英语在我们的生活学习中越来越重要。为了更好地发现并解决同学们学习英语中存在的问题,你们班特意开展了一次以To be a good English learner”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一篇发言稿,谈谈你的一些学习的好办法;与同学分享。内容包括: 1.同学们中学习英语普遍存在的问题是什么; 2.我的问题是什么; 3:我是如何成功解决我的问题的。 注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数:100左右(已给出部分不计入)。 To be a good English learner Hello, boys and girls! English is becoming more and more important in our daily life ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... 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