内容正文:
江西2025版
旧中考
铭文文化
话题写作提升
话题三
人物介绍(2022江西)
话题写作导练
话题分析
分析江西近十年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“人物介绍”这一话题,2022年以“向航天英
雄王亚平学习”为主题进行考查,介绍王亚平的个人信息,并谈谈如何向她学习。
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典例精析
第1步审题
(2022江西)学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲
一②定立题:向航天英雄孟亚
活动,请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个
平学习
人信息,再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质
r②定体裁:说文
(personality),最后说说你打算如何向她学习
③定时态,一般现在时,一
般将来时
写作要点
具体内容
-④定人称:第一人称,第三
Age:42
人称
1. Personal information
·Birthplace:a small village in Shandong
Province
定要点:
·Hobby:sports
“.孟亚平个人基奉信患
2. Personality
根据完形填空B篇概括(不得照搬原文)
b亚三高人培特征
“.你向录亚平学习的计划
3. Your
plans
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要求:
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名
3.词数80~120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数
Hello,everyone! It's my
honor to introduce an astronaut hero-Wang Yaping.
Thank
you!
第2步
列提纲,谋布后
写作框架
要点
写句子
It's my honor to introduce an astronaut hero-
开篇:点明主题
引出航天英雄
Wang Yaping.
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Wang
Yaping
is a 42-year-old
woman who
介绍王亚平的
个人信息
正文:
介绍王亚平
To
, she always
的个人信息、优秀
介绍王亚平的
the
difficulties in training
overcomes
and
品质以及“我”的学
优秀品质
never
习计划
In the future. I will
like her. I will
我”的学习计划
Also, I'm going to
无论多么艰难
What's more,
结尾:升华主题
“我”都会坚持
梦想
第3步
巧用好词佳句
普通作文
Hello,
honor
everyone! It's
my
to
introduce an astronaut hero-Wang
Yaping.
Wang
Yaping is a 42-year-old woman. She
born in a small village
in
was
Shandong
Province. Doing sports is her hobby and she
exercises every day.
She
loves
our
motherland
China
very
much. To achieve her dream, she always
overcomes the difficulties in training and never
gives up.
I will work for my country like her. I will
body. I'm
day to have a strong
run every
going
to make a weekly plan and study hard to
improve myself. No matter how hard it is, I'll
have my dream!
Thank you!
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高分范文
everyone! It's my
Hello.
honor
to
introduce an astronaut hero-Wang Yaping.
· Wang Yaping is. a 42-year-old woman
who was born in a small village in Shandong
Doing sports is her hobby
Province.
and she
exercises every day.
As we all know, she loves our motherland
very 1
much and is proud of China. To achieve
she
always
her
dream.
overcomes
the
difficulties in training and never gives up.
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e Wang is an example to us. In the future,1
will work for my country
like her. I will run
every
day to have a strong 1
body. Also, I'm
going to make a weekly plan and study hard to
improve myself. eWhat's more, no matter how
hard it is,I will stick to my dream!
Thank
s you!
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