暑假作业14 书面表达-【暑假分层作业】2025年八年级英语暑假培优练（牛津译林版）

限时练习：40min 完成时间： 月 日 天气： 作业14 书面表达 写作要求 1、写好句子： 1) 熟悉并掌握形成完整句子的基本框架结构。我们知道，单词、语法是学习、掌握和运用语言的基础，然而只靠它们拼凑句子是远远不够的，耗时费力不说，拼凑出来的也多是汉语式的英语，很不地道。因此，平时必须牢记所学过的“固定搭配”及“词组句型”，并会活用。 写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。 2)一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。 3)句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。 2、组句成文： 一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。 1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如： 并列关系：and, as well as, also… 递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more… 转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite, instead of, in the end… 时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as … 比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand… 总结： in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking… 进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as … 因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore… 2) 内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。 3) 要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。 4) 注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查： 写作步骤 一、认真审题 看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求。审题时要看清文字说明、图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇，字数要求等等。如果是几幅图要将几幅图结合起来看，才能弄清人物关系和故事情节。还要审文体，确定格式，确定人称，确定主体时态。 二、列出要点 要点是给分的一个重要因素，为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要在看清看懂所有文字、图画、参考词汇的基础上，在草稿纸上将各个要点逐条列出。 三、写出词句 用英语写出各个要点的关键词语或句型，并用地道的英语句子将各个要点逐一表达出来。 四、连句成文 根据各个要点之间的关系，使用恰当的关联词语，将各个句子连接成通顺流畅的短文。并注意以下几点：避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 五、细心检查 短文写好后还要细心检一篇，看是否正确无误。你可主要检查：(1) 人称是否用错，并注意人称代词的主格和宾格形式是否有错；(2) 动词的时态形式是否准确无误，特别注意查看一般现在时主语是第三人称单数时谓语动词是否加了(e)s；(3) 名词的复数形式；(4) 单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否有错；(5) 格式是否有错。 六、誊入试卷 经检查，准确无误后，才誊入试卷。要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷时正值天气炎热，老师工作量之大，时间紧迫，书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关，同学们务必注意。 二层必刷：巩固提升+能力培优 （1） 目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题，根据下列提示用英语写一封100词左右的倡议书。要点提示如下： （1）保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾； （2）不在公共场所大声喧哗，图书馆保持安静； （3）遵守交通规则，总是排队； （4）举止有礼，互帮互助； （5）…… 写作要求： （1）可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； （2）语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑正确； （3）词数100字左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 注意事项：文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear schoolmates, Our school is trying to be a better place for all of us. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something for it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s start from ourselves! The Students’ Union June 13th, 2024 （2） 现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。 内容包括： 1. 列举自己身边的环境问题及原因、危害。(不少于两点） 2. 你是怎样从身边小事做起，介绍怎样做到“低碳生活”的。（不少于两点） 3. 号召更多的人加入“低碳生活”中来。（不少于两点） 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数100个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 八1班的同学将举行演讲比赛，演讲的主题是一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化。假设你是Daniel，请准备90字左右的演讲稿参加比赛，具体内容如下： 成长与变化 学习 以前很少阅读，现在花时间读书，因为读书使我放松 环保 意识到环保的重要性，知道如何保护环境，举2例 礼仪 排队等车；在公交车上给老人让座 爱心 零花钱捐给贫困地区儿童 展望未来 越来越好…… 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数：90词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Hello, everyone. I’m Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! （4） 文明是一座城市最温暖的底色。作为全国文明城市，启东正在加快步伐，向“文明高地”攀登。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇演讲稿，以参加暑期“How to be a civilized middle school student?”为主题的演讲比赛。内容应包含以下要点： ▷礼仪修养：遵守交通规则，公共场合举止文明…… ▷关爱他人：参加志愿者活动…… ▷环境保护：节约能源……； 减少污染…… ▷暑假计划：按时完成作业；读书……旅行…… 注意： 1. 词数90词左右。(文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。) 2. 省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear classmates, The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Qidong more civilized. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday! （5） 仁者爱人，乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9月5日是国际慈善日，你校为了宣传慈善。打算在假期以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华，打算参加此项活动，谈谈你的慈善认知和规划，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下： 1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce? 2. What can you do for this charity? 3. Why do we need to help people in need? （参考慈善机构：Project Hope, ORBIS, Oxfam, UNICEF, WWF） 注意事项： 1.演讲稿须包括所给提示内容，可作适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.词数不少于90个，演讲稿的标题与开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数： 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4.演讲稿内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） 最近，校英语报发起了关于“如何成为一名合格的中学生？”的讨论，请即将进入初三的你谈一谈，你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下： 平时 1.培养良好的阅读习惯，提高自己； 2.保护环境，步行或骑自行车上学； 3.举止文明……(自由发挥1-2句) 空余时间 1.关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示技能的机会； 2.欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然的重要性。 总结 ……(1-2句) 要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified (合格的) middle school student, I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 近期你参加了学校组织的题为“What can we do for our city”主题演讲比赛，请根据以下材料写一篇英文演讲稿。 在学校 1. 走路或骑车上学，代替家长用小轿车接送 2. 尽可能多地再利用使用过的书本 3.…… 在日常生活中 1. 购物时使用布袋子(cloth bag)，不使用塑料袋 2. 节约用水，保护水源 3. 垃圾分类，循环利用 4. …… 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥； 3. 词数：100词左右（开头不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。 What can we do for our city? Dear teachers and students, The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city?” As students, we can do something to help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thanks for listening. （8） 暑期临近，学校正开展“我劳动、我快乐”的主题活动。假定你是李华，结合以下表格提示，给你的外国笔友Tom写一封邮件，介绍你的假期家务劳动规划。词数80左右。 What chores I can do make the bed, clean the rooms, … What skills I will learn do some cooking, … What lesson we can learn live by ourselves,… 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺、行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Tom, How is everything going? To help my parents and learn some new skills. I plan to do some housework this summer vacation. Here is my housework plan. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （9） “恰同学少年，风华正茂；书生意气，挥斥方遒。”为践行国家教育部提出的“五育并举”，培养“德、智、体、美、劳”全面发展的时代新人，学校开展争当“五星少年”的活动。假如你是李平，请你写一份自荐报告。你已得到德智体三颗星，请说明理由。如严于律己，友爱互助；努力学习，多读书，有进步；健康饮食，身强体壮等等。还有美劳两颗星你仍需努力，你将怎么做。如你准备学习一门艺术，并将学会做家务等。 要求： 1.根据思维导图提示，可适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 3.词数100字左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) How to Become a Five-Star Student I’m Li Ping, I want to be a five-star student. Here is my report. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （10） 在成长过程中，你会遇到一些烦恼吗？在遇到烦恼的时候，你向谁求助呢？有的人会与父母亲交流，向他们寻求帮助；有的人会向老师求助。我们的老朋友李华最近也遇到了一些烦心事，上周她写信向Teens英语报的Dr. House求助。假设你是Dr. House，请根据李华信中的内容写一封回信。 To: Doctor House From: Li Hua Dear Dr. House, Every day after school, I like keeping diaries. But my parents say it is a waste of time. They say it will take away my study time. They want me to spend more time on study and help them with chores. So we often argue. I feel sad and lonely. What should I do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 回复需要包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关新信息。 Dear Li Hua, It’s not easy being a child, and it’s normal to have these feelings. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope things are going well with you! Dr. House 1．（2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项： 1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 2．（2024·江苏淮安·中考真题）假如你是李华，你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆，现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点，用英语写一封自荐信。 你的优势 热爱阅读，乐于助人，做事细心 工作设想 鼓励居民多读书，每周推荐一本好书，…… 志愿工作的意义 ……从对他人和对自己两方面进行阐述 参考词汇：志愿工作 voluntary work 注意： 1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Sir/Madam. My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I will be thankful if I get the chance. 7 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 限时练习：40min 完成时间： 月 日 天气： 作业14 书面表达 写作要求 1、写好句子： 1) 熟悉并掌握形成完整句子的基本框架结构。我们知道，单词、语法是学习、掌握和运用语言的基础，然而只靠它们拼凑句子是远远不够的，耗时费力不说，拼凑出来的也多是汉语式的英语，很不地道。因此，平时必须牢记所学过的“固定搭配”及“词组句型”，并会活用。 写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。 2)一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。 3)句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。 2、组句成文： 一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。 1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如： 并列关系：and, as well as, also… 递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more… 转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite, instead of, in the end… 时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as … 比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand… 总结： in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking… 进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as … 因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore… 2) 内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。 3) 要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。 4) 注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查： 写作步骤 一、认真审题 看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求。审题时要看清文字说明、图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇，字数要求等等。如果是几幅图要将几幅图结合起来看，才能弄清人物关系和故事情节。还要审文体，确定格式，确定人称，确定主体时态。 二、列出要点 要点是给分的一个重要因素，为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要在看清看懂所有文字、图画、参考词汇的基础上，在草稿纸上将各个要点逐条列出。 三、写出词句 用英语写出各个要点的关键词语或句型，并用地道的英语句子将各个要点逐一表达出来。 四、连句成文 根据各个要点之间的关系，使用恰当的关联词语，将各个句子连接成通顺流畅的短文。并注意以下几点：避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 五、细心检查 短文写好后还要细心检一篇，看是否正确无误。你可主要检查：(1) 人称是否用错，并注意人称代词的主格和宾格形式是否有错；(2) 动词的时态形式是否准确无误，特别注意查看一般现在时主语是第三人称单数时谓语动词是否加了(e)s；(3) 名词的复数形式；(4) 单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否有错；(5) 格式是否有错。 六、誊入试卷 经检查，准确无误后，才誊入试卷。要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷时正值天气炎热，老师工作量之大，时间紧迫，书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关，同学们务必注意。 二层必刷：巩固提升+能力培优 （1） 目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题，根据下列提示用英语写一封100词左右的倡议书。要点提示如下： （1）保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾； （2）不在公共场所大声喧哗，图书馆保持安静； （3）遵守交通规则，总是排队； （4）举止有礼，互帮互助； （5）…… 写作要求： （1）可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； （2）语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑正确； （3）词数100字左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 注意事项：文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear schoolmates, Our school is trying to be a better place for all of us. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something for it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s start from ourselves! The Students’ Union June 13th, 2024 【答案】例文： Dear schoolmates, Our school is trying to be a better place for all of us. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something for it. In order to make our school more beautiful, we must keep our classrooms clean and tidy. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. We should remember not to make too much noise in public places. We must keep quiet when we are in the library. It’s important for us to follow the traffic rules. Remember to wait in line at any time. We should behave politely and help each other. Everyone should save water and electricity. Wasting food is not allowed. Let’s start from ourselves! The Students’ Union June 13th, 2024 【知识点】方法/策略、社团/俱乐部、环境保护、文体活动、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，交代创建文明校园的重要性； 第二步，具体创建文明校园的方法。从“教室的整洁、不在公共场所大声喧哗、遵守交通规则、举止有礼”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，号召大家从自身做起。 [亮点词汇] ①manners行为，举止 ②in order to为了…… ③keep quiet 保持安静 [高分句型] ①We must keep quiet when we are in the library.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Wasting food is not allowed.（动名词作主语） （2） 现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。 内容包括： 1. 列举自己身边的环境问题及原因、危害。(不少于两点） 2. 你是怎样从身边小事做起，介绍怎样做到“低碳生活”的。（不少于两点） 3. 号召更多的人加入“低碳生活”中来。（不少于两点） 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数100个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Low­-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. We are facing many environmental problems now. For example, too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution. The waste water flowing into the river not only pollutes the environment but also does harm to people’s health. As students, we should do our part to live a lower-carbon life. First of all, we can walk or ride a bike instead of driving. It’s good for our health and it doesn’t cost anything. Second, we are expected to turn off the taps and lights when we don’t use them. Third, remember to go shopping with a reusable bag rather than plastic bags. In short, simple things in our daily life can make a big difference and lead to a better world and a happier life. Let’s take actions from now on. 【知识点】环境保护、方法/策略 【详解】[总体介绍] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍目前环境现状以及原因和危害； 第二步：讲述自己以及如何做到“低碳生活”； 第三步：号召人们践行“低碳生活”。 [亮点词汇] ①for example比如 ②do harm to对……有害 ③rather than而不是 [高分句型] ①The waste water flowing into the river not only pollutes the environment but also does harm to people’s health. （not only...but also句式） ②Second, we are expected to turn off the taps and lights when we don’t use them.（状语从句） （3） 八1班的同学将举行演讲比赛，演讲的主题是一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化。假设你是Daniel，请准备90字左右的演讲稿参加比赛，具体内容如下： 成长与变化 学习 以前很少阅读，现在花时间读书，因为读书使我放松 环保 意识到环保的重要性，知道如何保护环境，举2例 礼仪 排队等车；在公交车上给老人让座 爱心 零花钱捐给贫困地区儿童 展望未来 越来越好…… 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数：90词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Hello, everyone. I’m Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways. First, in the past I spent little time reading. Now I spend a lot of time reading. Because reading can help me relax. Second, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. Now I try to reduce air pollution by riding a bike. Also, I save energy by turning off the lights when leaving a room. Third, I always queue for my turn when waiting for a bus and I give my seat to the elderly. Fourth, I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas. I’m sure I can be better and better in Grade 9. Thanks for your listening! 【知识点】个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态： 时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，其他时态为辅； ③提示： 以Daniel的身份写一篇演讲稿，主题是一年来自己学习和生活生的成长与变化。文章必须包含表格中所有的要点内容，可适当发挥，但不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名，确保文章表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，符合英文表达习惯。 [写作步骤] 第一步， 引入演讲的主题； 第二步， 介绍自己的变化； 第三步， 对未来的展望与感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①make great progress取得很大的进步 ②the importance of……的重要性 ③by doing sth通过做某事 ④donate sth to sb.把某物捐赠给某人 [高分句型] ①I have realized the importance of protecting the environment.(省略that的宾语从句) ②Now I try to reduce air pollution by riding a bike.(by doing sth表方式状语) （4） 文明是一座城市最温暖的底色。作为全国文明城市，启东正在加快步伐，向“文明高地”攀登。值此暑假来临之际，请你写一篇演讲稿，以参加暑期“How to be a civilized middle school student?”为主题的演讲比赛。内容应包含以下要点： ▷礼仪修养：遵守交通规则，公共场合举止文明…… ▷关爱他人：参加志愿者活动…… ▷环境保护：节约能源……； 减少污染…… ▷暑假计划：按时完成作业；读书……旅行…… 注意： 1. 词数90词左右。(文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。) 2. 省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear classmates, The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Qidong more civilized. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday! 【答案】例文 Dear classmates, The summer holiday is coming soon! As middle school students, I think we can do something to make Qidong more civilized. First, we should always obey traffic rules when crossing the road. In public places, it is necessary to behave politely. For example, we must keep quiet in the library. Then, learning to care about others is also important. During the summer holiday, we can work as volunteers at the community centre and take part in charity activities. Why not save our pocket money and donate it to those in need? Moreover, we can save energy by turning off lights when we leave a room. Also, rubbish should be separated into different groups carefully. It’s wise of us to choose public transport because protecting the environment can help us live a green life. At last, as a middle school student, I plan to finish my homework on time and read more meaningful books in the next two months. Besides, I am going to travel to Beijing to learn more about the history and culture with my parents. Just as the saying goes, read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles. Let’s try our best to become civilized students. Wish you all have a happy and meaningful summer holiday! 【知识点】方法/策略、志愿服务、旅行、交通规则、环境保护、教育 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出如何做一名文明的中学生的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体从几个方面阐述如何成为一名文明的中学生； 第三步，书写结语。总结成为一名文明中学生的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①care about sb.关心某人 ②work as担任，以……身份而工作 ③take part in参加 ④plan to do sth.计划去做某事 [高分句型] ①Then, learning to care about others is also important. (动名词作主语) ②Why not save our pocket money and donate it to those in need? (why not特殊疑问句的省略句） ③Moreover, we can save energy by turning off lights when we leave a room. (when引导时间状语从句) ④It’s wise of us to choose public transport because protecting the environment can help us live a green life. (it作形式主语；because引导原因状语从句；动名词作从句中的主语) （5） 仁者爱人，乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9月5日是国际慈善日，你校为了宣传慈善。打算在假期以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华，打算参加此项活动，谈谈你的慈善认知和规划，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下： 1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce? 2. What can you do for this charity? 3. Why do we need to help people in need? （参考慈善机构：Project Hope, ORBIS, Oxfam, UNICEF, WWF） 注意事项： 1.演讲稿须包括所给提示内容，可作适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2.词数不少于90个，演讲稿的标题与开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数： 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4.演讲稿内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Willing Hands, Willing Hearts Kindness is catching. There’re many charities around the world. Among them, I want to talk about UNICEF. It helps build a better world for everyone, especially children all over the world. For example, it provides basic education for children in poor areas. I’m ready to help the children in need. I would like to send warm clothes and new books to them. I can also donate my pocket money. What’s more, I want to teach in mountain areas when I grow up. Little help can make a big difference. Helping others can make us feel better about our life. 【知识点】志愿服务 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍自己想要介绍的慈善机构； 第二步，具体阐述自己能为这个慈善机构做的事情； 第三步，最后讲述我们帮助他人的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①all over the world全世界 ②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物 ③be ready to do准备好做某事 [高分句型] ①What’s more, I want to teach in mountain areas when I grow up.（时间状语从句） ②Helping others can make us feel better about our life.（动名词作主语） （6） 最近，校英语报发起了关于“如何成为一名合格的中学生？”的讨论，请即将进入初三的你谈一谈，你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？提示如下： 平时 1.培养良好的阅读习惯，提高自己； 2.保护环境，步行或骑自行车上学； 3.举止文明……(自由发挥1-2句) 空余时间 1.关注残疾人，给他们向公众展示技能的机会； 2.欣赏大自然的美，理解保护大自然的重要性。 总结 ……(1-2句) 要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； (2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； (3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； (4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified (合格的) middle school student, I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do. First, we should have good reading habits to improve ourselves. Second, we should pay attention to protecting the environment. We had better go to school on foot or by bicycle. Third, we should learn about good table manners and behave politely. We should wait for everyone to finish before leaving the table. In our spare time, we should care about the disabled and give them a chance to show their skills to the public. Also, we should go out to enjoy the beauty of nature in order to understand the importance of protecting nature. In a word, if we follow the advice, we will make a big difference to ourselves. 【知识点】意见/建议、教育 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，有很多事情可以成为一个合格的中学生； 第二步，具体介绍要成为一名合格的中学生要做的事情； 第三步，最后总结并结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ① pay attention to注意 ② on foot步行 ③ in a word总之 [高分句型] ① I think we have a lot of things to do. (省略that的宾语从句) ② In a word, if we follow the advice, we will make a big difference to ourselves. (if引导的条件状语从句) （7） 近期你参加了学校组织的题为“What can we do for our city”主题演讲比赛，请根据以下材料写一篇英文演讲稿。 在学校 1. 走路或骑车上学，代替家长用小轿车接送 2. 尽可能多地再利用使用过的书本 3.…… 在日常生活中 1. 购物时使用布袋子(cloth bag)，不使用塑料袋 2. 节约用水，保护水源 3. 垃圾分类，循环利用 4. …… 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥； 3. 词数：100词左右（开头不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。 What can we do for our city? Dear teachers and students, The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city?” As students, we can do something to help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【答案】参考例文 What can we do for our city?Dear teachers and students,     The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city?” As students, we can do something to help. First of all, we should walk or ride to school when we study at school, instead of parents picking us up in cars. Second, we should reuse used books as much as possible. Finally, we must not waste food. In our daily life, we can do more. First, we use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we shop. Second, we must save water and protect water resources. Third, we need to sort and recycle waste.     If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇英文演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍演讲的话题； 第二步，介绍在学校和在日常生活中能够采取的措施； 第三步，鼓励大家行动起来并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②instead of而不是 ③pick up接载 ④recycle回收利用 ⑤take action采取行动 [高分句型] First, we use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we shop.(when引导时间状语从句) （8） 暑期临近，学校正开展“我劳动、我快乐”的主题活动。假定你是李华，结合以下表格提示，给你的外国笔友Tom写一封邮件，介绍你的假期家务劳动规划。词数80左右。 What chores I can do make the bed, clean the rooms, … What skills I will learn do some cooking, … What lesson we can learn live by ourselves,… 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺、行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Tom, How is everything going? To help my parents and learn some new skills. I plan to do some housework this summer vacation. Here is my housework plan. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, How is everything going? To help my parents and learn some new skills. I plan to do some housework this summer vacation. Here is my housework plan. First, I will make my bed after getting up and take out the trash after dinner every day. And then, I will clean the rooms every day to make them tidy. Also, I want to learn some new skills, such as doing some cooking, because I hope to cook for my family one day. If I can cook meals, my parents will not worry about me when they are busy. Doing housework will help us live by ourselves and make our lives better. Why not join us? I hope you can have a great summer vacation. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己将会做什么家务活； 第二步，介绍自己将会学到什么技能； 第三步，最后介绍自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ① want to do想要做 ② such as比如 ③ worry about担心 [高分句型] ①If I can cook meals, my parents will not worry about me when they are busy.（条件状语从句） ②Doing housework will help us live by ourselves and make our lives better.（动名词短语作主语） （9） “恰同学少年，风华正茂；书生意气，挥斥方遒。”为践行国家教育部提出的“五育并举”，培养“德、智、体、美、劳”全面发展的时代新人，学校开展争当“五星少年”的活动。假如你是李平，请你写一份自荐报告。你已得到德智体三颗星，请说明理由。如严于律己，友爱互助；努力学习，多读书，有进步；健康饮食，身强体壮等等。还有美劳两颗星你仍需努力，你将怎么做。如你准备学习一门艺术，并将学会做家务等。 要求： 1.根据思维导图提示，可适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 3.词数100字左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) How to Become a Five-Star Student I’m Li Ping, I want to be a five-star student. Here is my report. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Become a Five-Star Student I’m Li Ping, I want to be a five-star student. Here is my report. I have already got three stars. First, I think it’s important for me to study hard. Reading more books is very useful, too. I have made great progress and got good grades. Secondly, I am strict with myself, and I often help my classmates when they have troubles. Thirdly, I eat healthily and exercise often. I think it’s good for my body. But I will still work hard at another two stars. So I want to develop a hobby like drums. I have joined the school drum club. I think I will learn it well. I will also learn to do chores at home, especially keeping my room clean and tidy because my mother often says, “What a mess your room is!” I hope I can become a five-star student. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍自己所得到的德智体三颗星，并说明理由； 第三步，还有美劳两颗星仍需努力，介绍将怎么做。 [亮点词汇]   ①make great progress取得巨大进步   ②be strict with对……要求严格   ③be good for对……有好处   ④develop a hobby培养一种爱好 [高分句型]   ①First, I think it’s important for me to study hard.（宾语从句，动词不定式作主语） ②Reading more books is very useful, too.（动名词作主语） （10） 在成长过程中，你会遇到一些烦恼吗？在遇到烦恼的时候，你向谁求助呢？有的人会与父母亲交流，向他们寻求帮助；有的人会向老师求助。我们的老朋友李华最近也遇到了一些烦心事，上周她写信向Teens英语报的Dr. House求助。假设你是Dr. House，请根据李华信中的内容写一封回信。 To: Doctor House From: Li Hua Dear Dr. House, Every day after school, I like keeping diaries. But my parents say it is a waste of time. They say it will take away my study time. They want me to spend more time on study and help them with chores. So we often argue. I feel sad and lonely. What should I do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 注意： 1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 回复需要包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关新信息。 Dear Li Hua, It’s not easy being a child, and it’s normal to have these feelings. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope things are going well with you! Dr. House 【答案】例文 Dear Li Hua, It’s not easy being a child, and it’s normal to have these feelings. Here is some advice for you. Firstly, I understand your passion for keeping diaries. Try explaining to your parents that writing diaries helps you relax and even improve your learning abilities. You could suggest setting aside a specific time to write diaries. As for the chores, it’s great that your parents value your contribution. Perhaps you could work out a schedule together, where you choose certain days or hours to help them. Remember, communication is key. Sit down with your parents calmly and share your feelings. Lastly, don’t forget to seek support from friends or teachers if you continue to feel sad or lonely. Hope things are going well with you! Dr. House 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括来信中提到的两个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达理解与安慰，引出话题：提供一些建议； 第二步，针对来信中提到的两个方面的问题分别给出合理的建议； 第三步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①set aside 留出（时间） ②work out a schedule  制定一个时间表 [高分句型] ①As for the chores, it’s great that your parents value your contribution. (it作形式主语) ②Lastly, don’t forget to seek support from friends or teachers if you continue to feel sad or lonely. (if引导的条件状语从句) 1．（2024·江苏无锡·中考真题）传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日（时间、庆祝方式等）。注意事项： 1. 邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival. Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? Yours truly Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①put up couplets贴春联 ②set off the fireworks燃放烟花 [高分句型] ①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句) ②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．（2024·江苏淮安·中考真题）假如你是李华，你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆，现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点，用英语写一封自荐信。 你的优势 热爱阅读，乐于助人，做事细心 工作设想 鼓励居民多读书，每周推荐一本好书，…… 志愿工作的意义 ……从对他人和对自己两方面进行阐述 参考词汇：志愿工作 voluntary work 注意： 1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Sir/Madam. My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I will be thankful if I get the chance. 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community. I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and responsible in my work. If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. I will organize reading activities to encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good book every week to inspire their interest in reading. I also plan to set up a reading corner where residents can share their reading experiences. I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my own life. I will be thankful if I get the chance. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封自荐信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的优势； 第二步，介绍自己的工作设想； 第三步，介绍志愿工作的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①be willing to do sth.乐意做某事 ②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ③set up建立 [高分句型] ①If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②I also plan to set up a reading corner where residents can share their reading experiences. (where引导的定语从句) 7 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$