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Module 8模块话题写作指导
一、话题分析
本模块以"Sports life"为话题,谈论了运动比赛与运动员刘翔。运动与健康是常见的作文话题。该话题的命题形式很多,一般以叙述性或介绍性的文章为主,如介绍一种运动、一场比赛、一名体育明星等。通过本模块的学习,学生应能够描写自己喜欢的一种运动、一场比赛、一名体育明星或作一次有关体育的调查报告,并且指出喜欢的原因、运动带来的好处等,学生可以尝试用被动语态的句子来描写。
二、素材积累
1. 常用词汇
player 运动员,参赛选手
train 训练
team 队
exercise 锻炼
ability 能力
be born in 出生在某地
high jump 跳高
break the record 打破纪录
keep the record 保持纪录
suffer from...受(某种病痛)的折磨
first place 第一名,冠军
courage 勇气
take pride in...对......感到自豪
2. 经典句型
(1) encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
(2) continue to do sth. 继续做某事
(3) stop sb. (from) doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
(4) so... that...如此......以至于......
(5) It is a pity that...很遗憾......
三、写作模板
______(所介绍的人物)is a famous player. She/He was born in ______(出生地点)。When she/he was ______(年龄)years old, she/he started ______(开始训练的项目)。Though she/he was young, she/he trained very hard and made great progress. At the age of ______(年龄),she/he ______(在这个年龄取得的成绩)。
______(所介绍的人物)won her/his first medal at ______(在哪次运动会上)。In ______(时间),she/he became famous all over the world.
四、范文必背与名师点评
范文必背
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep healthy, but also help to train a person's character. What's more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do exercise whenever we want. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping and playing basketball. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!
名师点评
①本句用动词短语作主语,用 not only... but also 说明了做运动的好处。
五、优秀范文欣赏
(一)
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
Spud Webb was born in 1963 in the USA. He was short then, but he had a big dream—to play basketball in the NBA. He was fighting for his dream since his childhood. As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn't lose heart or give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he was able to take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulty in my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
对我影响最大的是斯普特·韦伯。
斯普特·韦伯1963年出生于美国。那时他个子不高,但他有一个远大的梦想——在NBA打篮球。他从小就为自己的梦想而奋斗。俗话说:"有志者,事竟成。"1985年,他成了一名NBA球员。
是什么让斯普特·韦伯成功的?首先,他没有失去信心或放弃,即使当他因为他的身高被拒绝在球队打篮球时。其次,他能够抓住每一个机会。
斯普特·韦伯对我影响很大。当我在日常生活中遇到困难时,他的精神激励着我继续前进,鼓励我接受新的挑战。
(二)
Dear friends,
I'm very glad to be here to say something about sports and health. I love sports. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I like it because it's exciting and good for my health. I usually play basketball with my best friends on the playground after school. I also enjoy playing pingpong and swimming.
I am stronger than before because I keep on taking exercise almost every day. "Keeping doing sports an hour a day, you can work healthily for fifty years and live a happy life all the time." So I hope all of us can take an active part in sports, and also I wish everybody good health.
That's all. Thank you!
Yours,
Tony
亲爱的朋友们,
我很高兴能在这里讲一些关于运动和健康的事情。我喜欢运动。我最喜欢的运动是打篮球。我喜欢它,因为它令人兴奋,对我的健康有好处。放学后我通常和我最好的朋友在操场上打篮球。我也喜欢打乒乓球和游泳。
我比以前更强壮了,因为我几乎每天都坚持锻炼。"坚持每天运动一小时,你可以健康工作五十年,一直过着幸福的生活。"所以我希望我们大家都能积极参加体育运动,也祝大家身体健康。
这是所有。谢谢你们!
你的,
托尼
六、写作练习
"生命在于运动。""运动兴,民族兴。"全民运动在中国蔚然兴起。假如你们学校的英语社团正在举办题为"Sports"的征文比赛。请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点:
1. 你做过的运动;
2. 你最喜欢的运动;
3. 你喜欢的理由;
4. 你的建议......
注意事项:
1. 短文词数:80左右;短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容,但可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
Sports
Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China. I have done sports for a long time. I have ever tried swimming, skating, running, jogging and so on. Among them I like jogging best. Why? That's because jogging is cheaper than many sports. Just get some comfortable sports clothes and good running shoes. I usually go jogging in the park. There, I not only take exercise but also enjoy fresh air and then I feel healthier and healthier. I think jogging is the best of all the sports. Believe me, and then try it!
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