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Unit 4 Eat Well
Section B 2a~2c
Welcome to Joy Restaurant!
Which of the set meals(套餐) do you want to order in Joy Restaurant?
A
B
C
D
E
F
Why do you choose(选择) it? Is it healthy?
Are you satisfied(满意) with the set meals in Joy Restaurant?
How can Joy Restaurant improve? Now watch a video.
Writing task: Write a post to share your eating habits.
How to write the post?
"Let’s see how Lisa shared her story on Joy Clinic’s website. Can we learn from her post?"
Read the post quickly, and summarize the main idea of each paragraph.
Para 1: ________________
Para 2: ______________
Good eating habits
Bad eating habits
Topic sentence tells the main idea of a paragraph.
主旨句表明一段话的大意。
Topic Sentence
Topic Sentence
What are the good eating habits of Lisa?
Para 1: Good eating habits
• eat three meals a day on time
• eat a lot of vegetables
• eat all kinds of vegetables
Can you match the advantages(好处)of these eating habits?
Good eating habits Results /Advantages
• eat three meals a day on time
• eat a lot of vegetables
• eat all kinds of vegetables
I usually _______________________________________________
because this helps me ____________________________________
A. Get many kinds of nutrients(营养)
B. Get vitamins to fight illness(疾病)
C. Focus on work or study easily
What are the bad eating habits of Lisa?
Para 1: Good eating habits
Para 2: Bad eating habits
• eat three meals a day on time
• eat a lot of vegetables
• eat all kinds of vegetables
• drink too many soft drinks
• don‘t drink enough water
Can you think of the disadvantages(坏处)of these eating habits?
Bad eating habits Results /Disdvantages ______________
I usually __________________________ because this can______________ So in the future, I would______________________________
Cause tooth problems
Cause many health problems
• drink too many soft drinks
• don‘t drink enough water
Drink water instead
Drink more water
Which word can be put into the blank “______”?
A. Advice B. 改进方法
Improvement
What are your eating habits? Think and write them down.
Good eating habits
Bad eating habits
______________________________
Advantage: ____________
2. ______________________________
Advantage: ____________
3. _____________________________
Advantage: ____________
_____________________________
Disadvantage: ___________________
2. _____________________________
Disadvantage: ____________________
Improvement:____________________
What is the content in yellow about?
Topic Sentence
Topic Sentence
Examples
Examples
Topic Sentence
+
Examples
Para 1: Good eating habits
Topic Sentence
+
Examples
+
Improvement
Improvement
Para 2: Bad eating habits
I have many good eating habits. For example,…
Good eating habits
Bad eating habits
Topic Sentence
Examples
Topic Sentence
Examples
Improvement
Advantages
+
Disadvantages
+
Is this a complete(完整的) structure of a post?
Which part is the beginning/body/ending?
Beginning
Body
Ending
Good eating habits
Bad eating habits
Topic Sentence
Examples
Topic Sentence
Examples
Improvement
Advantages
+
Disadvantages
+
The structure
Body
Beginning
Ending
My eating habits
How to write the beginning/ending part?
The structure
Body
Beginning
Ending
My eating habits
Self-introduction
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Writing purpose(写作目的)
Summary(总结)
Example:
Body
Beginning
Ending
My eating habits
Self-introduction
+
Writing purpose
Summary(总结)
Hello everyone! My name is … and I'm happy to share my eating habits with you today.
To sum up/In a word, it's important to keep a balanced meal and take care of your health. I hope this helps others start their healthy journey.
What useful expressions do you know to describe eating habits in the body part?
What useful expressions do you know to describe eating habits?
have fast food every week/day…
eat three meals a day
don’t have breakfast/supper/…
eat too many/much…
results?
Results(Advantage/Disadvantage):
make…put on weight
cause heart problems
give … energy
it is + easy + to feel sleep
find it hard to focus on…
/tooth problems
Improvement:
cook meals instead
make healthy balanced meals
why don’t you have…
improvement?
Eating habits:
Useful expressions:
Body
Beginning
Ending
The post of my eating habits
Hello everyone! My name is … and I'm happy to share my eating habits with you today.
To sum up/In a word, it's important to keep a balanced meal and take care of your health. I hope this helps others start their healthy journey.
Eating habits:
Results:
Improvement:
have fast food every week/day…,
eat three meals a day
don’t have breakfast/supper/…,
eat too many/much…
make…put on weight,
cause heart problems
give … energy,
it is + easy + to feel sleep,
find it hard to focus on…
cook meals instead,
make healthy balanced meals
why don’t you have…
Which text do you think is better? Why?
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day. I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables. They don’t eat them. I eat all kinds of vegetables.
I have some bad eating habits too. I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks. They taste so good! Soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty. It’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
Linking words
连接词
Use linking words to make your text logical.使用连接词让文章更有逻辑。
Do you know any other linking words?
表示并列的词:and, or, both…and…, either…or…
表示转折的词:but, however, though/although…
表示顺序的词:first, second, third, firstly, secondly, thirdly, next, finally, then, what’s more, besides,…
表示因果的词:because, since, so, therefore, as a result,…
表示总结的词:in a word, in short, all in all…
Now it’s your turn to write your own post of eating habits.
Hello, everyone. My name is _________. I’m glad to share my eating habits with you.
_________________________________________________________
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Evaluate your draft according to the checklist.
Criteria Very well Ok Needs work
Complete structure Have the beginning, body and ending
Have topic sentences in the body part
Rich content Advantages(好处)
Disadvantages(坏处)
Improvement(改进)
Accurate language Apply useful expressions
Use proper linking words
Handwriting Make sure a beautiful handwriting
Hello, everyone. My name is Tina. I’m glad to share my eating habits with you.
Here are my good habits. Firstly, I make sure to have three meals a day. This helps to keep my energy levels. What’s more, I also try to have a balanced diet with plenty of fruits and vegetables. This supports my overall health and well-being.
However, I also have some bad habits. I sometimes have fast food more than I should, and I often eat too much during meals. These habits lead to weight gain and cause me some heart problems. It becomes increasingly difficult for me to focus and feel sleepy easily. Therefore, in the future, I plan to cook more meals at home instead. By doing so, I hope to improve my health and avoid the bad results of my bad eating habits.
In a word, it's important to keep a balanced meal and take care of your health. I hope my experience can help others start their healthy journey.
Sample:
Food is life.
Behind meals, what you do is cooking.
三餐聚拢是烟火
During seasons, what you share is love.
四季摊开是人间
Eat well,live well
Must do
1. Polish(打磨) your writing.
2. Preview Project.
Choose to do
1. Talk to your classmates or friends about their eating habits and record a video of the conversation.
2. Design and recommend a healthy set meal diet for Joy Restaurant, briefly introduce the dishes and explain the benefits of the set meal.
Homework
Thanks for listening!
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