话题7 和谐家庭与社区生活-【学海风暴·PK中考】2025江西中考英语备考话题写作

话题7 和谐家庭与社区生活 (2015江西) 话题素材储备 词汇储备 写作角度 词汇储备 granddaughter(外)孙女 grandfather/grandpa(外)祖父；爷爷：外公：姥爷 grandmother/,grandma(外)祖母：奶奶；外婆；姥姥 aunt姑母：姨母；伯母：婶母：舅母 brother兄：弟 couple(尤指)夫妻；两人；两件事物 grandparent祖父（母）：外祖父（母） husband丈夫 家人与 mom(=mum)妈妈 mother母亲：妈妈 亲友 cousin堂兄（弟、姊、妹）：表兄（弟、姊、妹） dad爸爸 daughter女儿 parent父（母）亲 relative亲属；亲戚 sister姐：妹 son儿子 family家；家庭 father父亲；爸爸 friend朋友 uncle舅父：叔父；伯父；姑父；姨父 wife妻子；太太 bathroom浴室；洗手间 bedroom卧室 kitchen厨房 study书房 block街区；大楼 community社区 yard院子 garden花园 housewarming乔迁聚会 Iive生活；居住 wake醒来；叫醒 sleep觉 家庭与 walk步行：散步 make friends with sb.与某人交朋友 社区生活 share sth.with sb.与某人分享某物 spend.with sb../(in)doing sth..和某人共度…/花费时间做某事 keep in touch with与…保持联系 be ready to help others乐于助人 drop by顺便访问 make a difference有影响：起作用 play a role in在…中起作用 adult adj,成年的：成人的n,成人：成年动物 baby婴儿 其他人与 boy男孩 child(pl.children)儿童 gentleman先生 人物称呼 girl女孩 kid小孩；年轻人 lady女士；女子 佳句运用 佳句 佳句仿写 1.My father works hard every 1.在做家务方面要给孩子们树立一个好榜样。 day.He sets a good example to us. 2.尽你的一份力，为你的家庭感到骄傲。 2.My parents take pride in/are proud of everything good I do. 3.There is no doubt that parents 3.毫无疑问，家庭对我们很重要。 have given us a lot since we 4.你只能尽自己最大的努力，不要试图做到完美，也不要期望别人做到 were born. 完美。 4.He is good at telling jokes and tries his best to make everyone happy. 380A。2D25江西 英语 续表 佳句 佳句仿写 5.如果你许下一个诺言，你就应该遵守它。 5.As long as he makes a promise, he will never break it. 6.他父亲教会了他责任感。 6.Family can bring us a sense of happiness. 7.谢谢你为我创造的生活。 7.Thank you for everything you have done for me. 8.父母是孩子的第一任老师。我从父母那里学到了很多。 8.What a great person he is!I have learned a lot from him. 谚语： L.Father's love is as high as a mountain..父爱如I山高。 2.Mother's love is as deep as the sea,母爱如海深。 3.Parents'love for their children is far-reaching..父母之爱子，则为之计深远. A.A friend in need is a friend indeed..患难见真情。 5.Friendship is like wine-the older,the better..友谊如美酒 越久越醇。 6.A faithful friend is hard to find..知音难觅。 7.A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难，失朋友易。 8.A good neighbor is better than a brother far away..远亲不如近邻。 「范文诵读] (-) (二) Dear John, In our English class,we have a discussion It's Father's Day today.It's a special day, about what we can do to make our home a isn't it? happier place.We share different ideas. I think we should do something to show Some say it's better to spend more time our love for our fathers on this special day.My with family.The more we get together,the father and I are good friends.Whenever I meet better we understand each other.Family with difficulties,he is always there,ready to members should share happiness and worries. help me. For example,when they are sad,we should try Today I will make a beautiful card for him.to cheer them up.Others believe it's important with my thanks and best wishes on it.Then I will to give small presents to our family on their help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his birthdays. favorite food in the evening.Besides,I'll play I think showing love for family is chess with him after dinner,for he likes it very necessary.If we help with housework,they much.I'm sure he'll be very happy. may feel warmer.Sometimes,even the smallest What's your plan for Father's Day?I'm thing like walking with family makes them looking forward to hearing from you. happier.Though we're young,we can do much Yours, to make a happier home. Li Hua 话题写作 381 话题作文导练 命题分析 分析江西近十年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“和谐家庭”这一主题在2015年以“Est, west,home's best'”为题进行了考查。 厂典例精析 第①步 审题 (2015江西)英文有句谚语“East,west,home's best..”。某英文 一0定主题：2ast,et,omed 报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短 best 文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员一②定体载：说明文 及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好 ③定人称：第一人款 提示： ④定时态：一般现在时.一 1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯； 般将来时 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名： ⑤定要点： 3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计人总词数。 4.居室及居住绿境 6,家庭成员及家庭成员之间 house/apartment home family 的关系 c地何让家更美好 rooms environmenl members relations What will you do to make your home better? East,west,home's best There is an old saying,"East,west,home's best."I live in 第2步 布局 写作框架 要点扩写，句子升格 引出谚语→There is an old saying,“East,west,home's best..” 介绍居室→我住在乡下的一所房子里。（介词短语作后置定语） 开篇：引出谚语， ① 介绍居室及 里面有一个大客厅，三个卧室，一个厨房和一个洗手间。（用介词短语开头增加 居住环境 句式多样性) ② 382A 2025江西 英语 续表 写作框架 要点扩写，句子升格 介绍居住→我的房子周围有一些树和花。空气真的很干净。我经常听到鸟儿在唱歌。 开篇：引出谚语， 环境 (hear sb.doing sth.) 介绍居室及 ③ 居住环境 介绍家庭→我家有四口人。他们是我的父母，我妹妹和我。 正文：介绍家庭 成员及 ④ 成员及家庭成员 关系 我们乐于助人并且很友好。我们总是相处得很好。(get on well with) 之间的关系 ⊙ 如何让家→我很高兴我有一个幸福的家庭。 更美好 ⑥ I will do things.I can help do more housework and farm work,(用what引导宾 语从句升格) 结尾：如何让家 ⑦ 更美好 I'll study harder.I can make more money in the future..(用so that引导的目的 状语从句升格) ⑧ 在我们的努力下，我相信我的家会越来越好。（用wh短语作伴随状语》 0 第3步 谋篇 East,west,home's best There is an old saying,"East,west,home's best."I live in a house in the countryside.In it there's a big living room,three bedrooms,a kitchen and a washroom.Around my house there are some trees and flowers.The air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing. There are four people in my family.They're my parents,my sister and me.We're helpful and very friendly.And we always get on well with each other. I'm very glad I have a happy family.I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work.I'll study harder so that I can make more money in the future.With our effort,I'm sure my home will be better and better. 【亮点赏析】 ①文章结构清晰，第一段介绍了居室和居住环境，第二段介绍了家庭成员，第三段讲述了如 何让家变得更美好，正切书面表达的三个要点。 ②文章使用了一些常见的短语与句式结构，能够体现作者平时的英文积累。 话题写作 383 写作练原 (2024遂宁)今年5月第五届“中国好家风”全国启动仪式在北主题： 京隆重举行。传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现，为响 应号召，你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈，从我做起”的主题征文 体裁： 活动。请根据以下的结构图提示，结合自己的生活，写一篇词数80一 人称： 120的短文，向该专栏投稿。 时态： Love and respeel the clders 要点： Why How help/love... chores... share with... raise/educate. communicate with.. stay with... accompany sb.... Ending 注意： 1.文章开头已给出，不计人总词数： 2.文章应包含所给要点提示，可适当发挥； 3.文章语句通顺，行文连贯： 4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 参考词汇：virtue(n.美德)accompany(u.陪伴)raise(u.养 育)educate(u.教育) Love and respect the elders As we all know,respecting and caring for our elders is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. 384A。2D25江西英语8What's more.I like teachers who are always with a It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch smile. there. 写作练兵 DIn the afternoon,we can pick up the rubbish to protect 主题：阅读 the environment. 体裁：说明文 8Then we can go home at 4:30 p.m.We're sure to have 人称：第一人称为主 great fun. 时态：一般现在时 写作练兵 要点：1.读书的好处 主题：暑假志愿者服务活动 2.读什么书 体裁：说明文 3.如何读书 人称：第一人称 4.建议 时态：一般将来时为主 范文： 要点：1.活动项日（在城市图书馆帮忙，清扫城市公园，举 Reading-a lifelong journey 行慈善义卖，在医院做志愿者工作，拜访养老院) As we know,reading plays an important role in our 及活动计划 life.We can get knowledge and learn many skills from 2.参加志愿者服务活动的意义 books.Besides,we can develop interests through reading 范文： and make our life colourful. My volunteer work plan There are many kinds of books we can read,such as The summer holiday is coming.I am going to do great books,science books and even newspapers. some volunteer work. Magazines about study are also good choices for us. I will help to clean up the city parks.Of course,I We can read books in our free time,and it's a good will ask more people to join me.I will call up my friends idea to choose a quiet place to read books,like the and ask them to come.We will pick up the litter,the library.How about joining the Reading Club in our plastic bags and other waste things.I hope our city will school?While reading,it's necessary to take notes and be more beautiful.Besides,I am going to visit sick kids in write reviews.We can certainly share them with our hospital.I love children and enjoy getting along with friends in the club. them.I will sing for the kids to cheer them up.Not only In my opinion,reading is a lifelong journey.We can do I feel good about helping other people,but also I get to see the world in the books.Let's read together. spend time doing what I love to do. 话题6计划与安排 All in all,I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. ⊙话题素材储备 话题7和谐家庭与社区生活 佳句运用 ○话题素材储备 1.This boy hopes to be an astronaut in the future. 佳句运用 2.If (it is)possible,they should take part in some social 1.Set a good example to children in doing housework. activities. 2.Do your part and take pride in your family. 3.He says that he is going to take care of supper this 3.There is no doubt that family is very important to us. week. 4.You can just try your best;don't try to be perfect and 4.Our school decides to hold a cultural activity next don't expect others to be,either. Friday. 5.If you make a promise,you should keep it. 5.We are trying to hold some activities to make our 6.His father taught him a sense of responsibility. school life colorful. 7.Thanks for the life you've created for me. 6.We plan to hold a talk show next week. 8.Parents are the first teachers for their children.And I ○话题作文导练 learned a lot from my parents. 典例精析 ©话题作文导练 DI like climbing mountains with my classmates. 典例精析 2We can enjoy the beauty of nature.We can also make (DI live in a house in the countryside. friends and help each other on the way. 2 In it there's a big living room,three bedrooms,a To make the activity more interesting,I hope to go to kitchen and a washroom. East Mountain on June 25th. Around my house there are some trees and flowers. DSince it's a little far,we'd better meet at the school The air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing. gate at 7:30 a.m.and go there by bus. 4There are four people in my family.They're my 5We can collect some historical stories about the famous parents,my sister and me. mountain so that we can share them together. 5We're helpful and very friendly.And we always get on 42 己025江西英语 well with each other. 3Secondly,more trees should be planted in our school so I'm very glad I have a happy family. that students can breathe fresh air when they play DI will do what I can to help do more housework and outside. farm work. Last but not least,we are supposed to choose to ride a BI'll study harder so that I can make more money in the bike instead of driving a car when we go somewhere future. near to help reduce pollution. With our effort,I'm sure my home will be better and 5To create a better future for ourselves and the next better. generation,we should do what we can to protect the 写作练兵 environment. 主题：孝敬长辈，从我做起 Let's do our part to take action from now on. 体裁：说明文 写作练兵 人称：第一人称为主 主题：动物保护 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时为主 体裁：应用文 要点：1.为什么要关爱和尊儆长辈 人称：第一人称、第三人称为主 2.如何关爱及尊敬长辈 时态：一般现在时 3.号召大家采取行动 要点：1.保护动物的原因 范文： 2.保护动物的方法 Love and respect the elders 3.呼吁大家一起行动起来 As we all know,respecting and caring for our elders 范文： is not only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. Dear schoolmates. Growing up.I've seen my grandparents'selfless love and Many wild animals are in danger.With the dedication to our family.They helped to look after me and development of the society,the air is polluted and the raise me so that my parents could focus on their work. water is not clean any more.Wild animals'living places Therefore,we should love and respect our elders. are polluted badly.At the same time,many people kill To achieve this.we can help our elders with their them for their fur.skin,teeth and meat. chores.Spending time communicating with our elders is As we all know,animals are our friends,so it's our important so that they don't feel lonely.It's also duty to proteet them.First,we should learn more about necessary to take them to do exercise,such as walking in wild animals.Second,we should not only plant more trees the park,to keep them healthy. but also stop wild animals from being killed.Besides,it is In conclusion,as everyone will grow old one day,it's necessary for us to set up a wild animal protection group important to take action now. to protect them. 话题8环保意识和行为 In a word,let's work together to protect the wild ○话题素材储备 animals. 佳句运用 Yours. 1.It is reported that high temperatures will last more Li Hui than 15 days. 真卷 2.Dangerous materials are harmful to people's health and the environment. 阶段性复习训练卷（一）》 3.We are supposed to use cloth bags instead of plastic ○听力材料 bags so that we can reduce pollution. A)请听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一小题，从题 4.If we try our best to recycle the waste,we can cut 中所给的AB、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段 down the pollution and improve our environment. 对话后，你都将有10秒钟的时间回答有关小题和阅读下 5.Everyone should play a part in saving the earth. 一小题。每段对话读两遍。 6.We should make a contribution to keeping our school 1.M:Will you be free on Sunday evening? clean and tidy. W:No.I'll have to meet my friend at the airport. ⊙话题作文导练 2.M:Tina,how does your mother go to work every day? 典例精析 W:She goes to work by car. DAs middle school students,we have the ability to make 3.W:Hurry up,or we will be late for the concert. a difference so we should play a part in helping save the M:Don't worry.It's only seven o'clock now. earth. 4.W:Do you like the walls that are painted blue? 2To protect the earth.first of all,we can not only save M:Yes.Some colors make us feel calm and peaceful. water but also reduce waste in our daily life. Blue is one of these colors. 参考答案 43