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话题6计划与安排(2023江西)
话题素材储备
词汇储备
写作角度
词汇储备
plan计划
decision决定;抉择
want想要;需要
decide决定;选定
purpose目的
future未来
take up开始做
make up one's mind下定决心
look forward to期望
人生规划
keep on坚持
enter a good university进入一所好大学
study hard努力学习
to be a pilot/,pianist成为一名飞行员/钢琴家
travel around the world周游世界
live a colorful school life过着丰富多彩的校园生活
make full preparations做充分的准备
活动计划
climb mountains爬山
go fishing去钓鱼
in one's spare/free time在某人的空闲时间
与安排
at weekends在周末
after school放学后
hold a party/meeting举行聚会/会议
on holiday在度假
have a good/great time玩得开心make a wish许愿
take part-time jobs做兼职go sightseeing去观光
the Dragon Boat Festival端午节
假日安排
make dumplings包饺子
lucky money压岁钱
dragon boat race赛龙舟
the Spring Festival/Chinese New Year春节
the Lantern Festival元宵节
enjoy oneself(in)doing sth.做某事乐在其中
佳句运用
佳句
佳句仿写
1.这个男孩希望将来成为一名宇航员。
1.I always dream of being a pilot in the
future.
2.如果可能的话,他们应该参加一些社会活动。
2.Second,I'll take part in all kinds of
activities,such as doing sports to keep
healthy.
3.他说这个星期的晚饭都由他负责。
3.Our class is going to have a party in our
classroom on the morning of June 26.
4.我们学校决定下周五举办一个文化活动
4.Mary decides to try out for a job at an
after-school reading program.
5.The sick children are often sad.Our class is
5.为了丰富校园生活,我们将会试着开展一些活动
trying to do something to cheer them up.
6.I plan to watch the news tonight because I
hope to find out what's going on around
6.我们计划下周举办一个脱口秀。
the world.
谚语:
l.A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
2.The longest journey begins with the first step.千里之行,始于足下。
3.Life without an aim is like sailing without a compass.生活没有目标,犹如航海没有罗盘。
4.A year's plan starts with spring,and a day's plan starts with morning..一年之计在于春,一日之计在于晨。
话题写作
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范文通读
(二)
My life in senior high school
If dreams die,life is like a broken-winged
My name is Li Hua.In three months,I'll
bird that can never fly.My dream is to be a
finish my junior high school and start a new
teacher who is popular with the students and
life in senior high school.
responsible.
To get a head start in senior high school,
There are many reasons why I want to be
I would like to take up some new hobbies such
a teacher.Above all,I am patient and willing
as dancing and singing first.I think it's cool to
to work with children.Moreover,I am quite
give a performance.Then in order to keep
good at speaking in public and I can share my
ideas with children freely.I believe these are
healthy,I'm going to keep on practicing
great advantages for me to become a teacher.
swimming in my spare time.It's known that
I will try my best to achieve my dream.Not
swimming is really a good way to exercise.
only will I study hard but also I am going to help
Besides,I will certainly make a study plan.To
my classmates with their homework.In this way,I
get higher grades,I will not only review my
can learn how to be a good teacher and make
lessons every day but also read more books to
myself understood.What's more,I would like to
increase my knowledge.What's more,I'll care
take part in some volunteer activities to keep
more about others in my life.I firmly believe
myself warm-hearted and diligent.
the world will become a wonderful place so
It is known that actions speak louder than
long as everyone can think more of others!
words.I will grasp every chance to improve myself
All in all,I truly look forward to my
and get all-round development.Only in this way
senior high school life.
can I realize my dream in the near future.
话题作文导练
命题分析
分析江西近10年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“计划与安排”这一主题在2023年以“户外
活动安排”为题材进行了考查。
「典例精析
第①步
审题
(2023江西)通过阅读理解A篇我们感受到户外活动的有趣。
①定主题:户外活动
本月底你校将举办一次户外活动,为了更好地开展这次活动,校英语
②定体载:应用文
社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华,请根据表格内容写一篇
一③突人称:第一人称
短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动,再说明理由,最后就活动安排提出
合理的建议),向社团投稿。
376A。2025江西英语
写作要点
参考句型
④定时态:一般现在时、一
1.What outdoor activity do you like?
We'd better...
般将来时
2.Why do you like it?
Maybe we can…
⑤定要点:
3.How do you arrange(安排)it?(when,
It'll be better if...
“.介绍自己喜欢的户外活动
6.说明理由
where,what to do...)
c,就话动安排提出合猩的
备注:如果出现地名,请以East
代替,例如:East
建议
Mountain...
要求:
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可
适当发挥:
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数80120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
第2步
布局
写作框架
要点扩写,句子升格
引出i话题→I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of
this month.
介绍自己→我喜欢和我的同学一起爬山。(用wth短语作伴随状语)
开篇:引出话题,喜欢的户①
介绍自己喜欢的
外活动
户外活动及理由说明理由→我们可以享受大自然的美丽。我们也可以在路上交朋友,互相帮助。(t山©
beauty of nature,on the way)
②
话题写作
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续表
写作框架
要点扩写,句子升格
提出建议→为了让活动更有趣,我希望在6月25日去东山。(make十sth.十aj.,hope to
do sth.)
③
因为有点远,我们最好早上七点半在校门口见面,然后坐公共汽车去那里。(用
since引导原因状语从句)
④
We can collect some historical stories about the famous mountain.We can share
正文:就活动
them together.(用so that引导的目的状语从句升格)
安排提出合理
⑤
的建议
It is nice.We can try some local food for lunch there..(用if引导的条件状语从
句升格)
⑥」
下午我们可以捡垃圾来保护环境。(pick up)
⑦
然后我们能下午四点半回家。我们一定会玩得很开心。(be sure to,have great
fun)
⑧
结尾:表达期待表达期待→Hope my suggestions help.
第3步
谋篇
Dear Sir,
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school at the end of this month.I
like climbing mountains with my classmates.We can enjoy the beauty of nature.We can also
make friends and help each other on the way.
To make the activity more interesting,I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th.Since it's
a little far,we'd better meet at the school gate at 7:30 a.m.and go there by bus.We can collect
some historical stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together.It'll be
nice if we can try some local food for lunch there.In the afternoon,we can pick up the rubbish to
protect the environment.Then we can go home at 4:30 p.m.We're sure to have great fun.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
378A2025江西英语
【亮点赏析】
①文章结构清晰,第一段介绍了自己喜欢的户外活动及喜欢的原因:第二段具体描述活动安
排;第三段表达自己的期待。
②句式多变,既有简单句,又有各种复合句:短语运用游刃有余,为文章添色不少。
③活动安排合理、科学。
厂写作练安门
让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,对其成长具有重主题:
要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑
假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以“My volunteer work
体裁:
plan”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并
人称:
谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。
时态:
Volunteer work
要点:
Help in the city library
OClean up the city parks
Hold a charity bazaar(义卖)◎Do volunteer work in a hospital
OVisit the old people's home ..
要求:
1.可选择表格中的1~2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目,语句通
顺,意思连贯:
2.词数80~120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等信息。
My volunteer work plan
The summer holiday is coming.
All in all,I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.
话题写作3798What's more.I like teachers who are always with a It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch
smile.
there.
写作练兵
DIn the afternoon,we can pick up the rubbish to protect
主题:阅读
the environment.
体裁:说明文
8Then we can go home at 4:30 p.m.We're sure to have
人称:第一人称为主
great fun.
时态:一般现在时
写作练兵
要点:1.读书的好处
主题:暑假志愿者服务活动
2.读什么书
体裁:说明文
3.如何读书
人称:第一人称
4.建议
时态:一般将来时为主
范文:
要点:1.活动项日(在城市图书馆帮忙,清扫城市公园,举
Reading-a lifelong journey
行慈善义卖,在医院做志愿者工作,拜访养老院)
As we know,reading plays an important role in our
及活动计划
life.We can get knowledge and learn many skills from
2.参加志愿者服务活动的意义
books.Besides,we can develop interests through reading
范文:
and make our life colourful.
My volunteer work plan
There are many kinds of books we can read,such as
The summer holiday is coming.I am going to do
great books,science books and even newspapers.
some volunteer work.
Magazines about study are also good choices for us.
I will help to clean up the city parks.Of course,I
We can read books in our free time,and it's a good
will ask more people to join me.I will call up my friends
idea to choose a quiet place to read books,like the
and ask them to come.We will pick up the litter,the
library.How about joining the Reading Club in our
plastic bags and other waste things.I hope our city will
school?While reading,it's necessary to take notes and
be more beautiful.Besides,I am going to visit sick kids in
write reviews.We can certainly share them with our
hospital.I love children and enjoy getting along with
friends in the club.
them.I will sing for the kids to cheer them up.Not only
In my opinion,reading is a lifelong journey.We can
do I feel good about helping other people,but also I get to
see the world in the books.Let's read together.
spend time doing what I love to do.
话题6计划与安排
All in all,I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.
⊙话题素材储备
话题7和谐家庭与社区生活
佳句运用
○话题素材储备
1.This boy hopes to be an astronaut in the future.
佳句运用
2.If (it is)possible,they should take part in some social
1.Set a good example to children in doing housework.
activities.
2.Do your part and take pride in your family.
3.He says that he is going to take care of supper this
3.There is no doubt that family is very important to us.
week.
4.You can just try your best;don't try to be perfect and
4.Our school decides to hold a cultural activity next
don't expect others to be,either.
Friday.
5.If you make a promise,you should keep it.
5.We are trying to hold some activities to make our
6.His father taught him a sense of responsibility.
school life colorful.
7.Thanks for the life you've created for me.
6.We plan to hold a talk show next week.
8.Parents are the first teachers for their children.And I
○话题作文导练
learned a lot from my parents.
典例精析
©话题作文导练
DI like climbing mountains with my classmates.
典例精析
2We can enjoy the beauty of nature.We can also make
(DI live in a house in the countryside.
friends and help each other on the way.
2 In it there's a big living room,three bedrooms,a
To make the activity more interesting,I hope to go to
kitchen and a washroom.
East Mountain on June 25th.
Around my house there are some trees and flowers.
DSince it's a little far,we'd better meet at the school
The air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing.
gate at 7:30 a.m.and go there by bus.
4There are four people in my family.They're my
5We can collect some historical stories about the famous
parents,my sister and me.
mountain so that we can share them together.
5We're helpful and very friendly.And we always get on
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