话题3 社会服务与人际沟通-【学海风暴·PK中考】2025江西中考英语备考话题写作

open up a new world to me. 写作练兵 I think my free time is better used because I do what I 主题：自我介绍 want to do and I balance study and entertainment. 体裁：记叙文 DIn brief,I arrange my time properly and benefit from 人称：第一人称 the Double Reduction policy. 时态：一般现在时、一般将来时 写作练兵 要点：1.自己的优点和缺点 主题：购物习惯 2.在未来生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我， 休裁：记叙文 成为更好的自己 人称：第一人称 范文： 时态：一般现在时 Me in the mirror 要点：1.介绍你的购物习惯，包括下面几项信息：what, Looking at myself in the mirror.I know I am an with whom,how often,where,when outgoing girl.I like to make friends and I'm always ready 2.当你想买昂贵的东西的时候，你会怎么做 to help them.So I'm very popular in my school.But I 3.对网购的看法及原因 have a big problem.I'm less interested in my lessons and 范文： I can't concentrate in class.In my spare time,I spend too I'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi.On much time on computer games,so I don't get good weekends,I like shopping.There is a big supermarket in grades,which makes my parents disappointed. my town and there are a lot of things in it.So I often go When I go to senior high school,I hope to get along there with my mother to buy some school things,food well with my classmates and try to make more friends.I and drinks on weekends. hope we can help each other and learn from each other.I Sometimes I want to buy something expensive-an will make a good study resolution and try my best to go MP4 player,but I can't afford it now.So I am planning to for it.I decide to have a healthier lifestyle.I'll spend more do part-time jobs in my spare time,especially in summer time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. vacation.Then I can make money for an MP4 player. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks I like shopping online,because things are much carefully.What's more,I will read more books and master cheaper and it can save my time.Walking to the shop is a good learning methods.I hope to make great progress and waste of time. I love shopping,because it's really relaxing. make my parents proud. 话题2人物介绍 话题3社会服务与人际沟通 ⊙话题素材储备 ⊙话题素材储备 佳句运用 佳句运用 1.She is more careful than I am/me. 1.I can get on well with my new classmates. 2.I'm good at English so it is easy for me to express my 2.The two groups agreed to cooperate with each other. ideas clearly in English. 3.Though it is difficult for you to do this,you should tell 3.She used to be short,but look how tall she is now! them the truth. 4.She seemed neither surprised nor worried. 4.Why don't you be more polite to others? 5.I'm the sort of student who is willing to communicate 5.You have to be ready to change a little if you want and does well in English. them to change. 6.I know Jack is friendly because he is always ready to 6.Teamwork is required in order to achieve these aims. help others. 7.We should keep our hearts open so that we can make ⊙话题作文导练 more friends. 典例精析 ⊙话题作文导练 DWang Yaping is a 42-year-old woman who was born in 典例精析 a small village in Shandong Province. Dget on well with others;brings you good luck and 2As we all know,she loves our motherland very much makes others feel warm and is proud of China. 2When I was in Grade 6,a new student came to our 3To achieve her astronaut dream.she always overcomes class. the difficulties in training and never gives up. He did badly in schoolwork. DI will work for my country like her.I will run every day When I learnt this,each time I met him,I gave him a to have a strong body big smile. 5Im going to make a weekly plan and study hard to 5We became good friends and he did better and better in improve myself his study. What's more,no matter how hard it is,I'll stick to my He said it was my smile that made him more confident dream！ and outgoing. 40 己025江西英语 DSmiles are so important to our life,so let's try to smile 人称：第一人称、第三人称 more. 时态：一般现在时为主 (8If we smile to life,life will smile back to us. 要点：1，介绍端午节（包括重要性、日期，粽子及龙舟赛） 写作练兵 2.介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神 主题：友善待人、快乐生活 3.说明如何发扬爱国主义精神 体裁：记叙文 范文： 人称：第一人称 Duanwu Festival-A celebration of patriotism 时态：一般现在时为主 Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat 要点：1.你对友善行为的认识和理解 Festival.It is one of the most important and traditional 2.你平时做过哪些友善的事情 festivals in China.It falls on the lunar May fifth.People 3.你的美好愿望 all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races 范文： are held in many places to remember a great ancient It's our duty to show kindness to others around us.I patriotic poet-Qu Yuan. think everyone should be kind to each other.When Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country,which showed us someone is in trouble,we should give a hand politely.In the spirit of patriotism.People's dragon boat racing is in my community,I try my best to help the neighbors and honor of Qu Yuan. take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer.At As a teenager,I believe it is our duty and responsibility school,I get on well with my classmates and help them to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. with their lessons.I also send my books and clothes to First,by working hard and pursuing excellence in our the children who live in poor areas.I'm very proud I have studies,we can make a significant impact on the made many friends by helping others in need.I believe development of our country.Second,by dedicating ourselves our society will become better and better if everyone to protecting the earth,we also can be a better person and it shows kindness to each other. is good for our country. 话题4中华优秀传统文化 话题5校园生活 ○话题素材储备 ⊙话题素材储备 佳句运用 1.If you are interested in reading,what kind of books 佳句运用 1.The more you read,the more you will know about the would you like to choose? 2.Zhang Haidi is a writer who is disabled. world. 2.Good readers always connect what they have learned 3.To prepare breakfast for us,my mother always gets up with their real life. early in the morning. 4.He became interested in Chinese culture. 3.That is all the information that I know. 5.In Chinese culture,red is seen as a symbol of good 4.She worked hard so that everything would be ready in luck. time. 6.They hand down the custom from generation to 5.Learning is not only interesting but also useful. generation to keep their duties. 6.The key to his success is his logical mind. ○话题作文导练 7.I will always remember the days when we studied in 典例精析 junior high school. DI've got a plan for you which may help you learn about ⊙话题作文导练 Chinese culture. 典例精析 22It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink.Tea DI think my English revision classes were useful but is one of the most popular drinks in China tiring. 3you are going to visit a big tea farm where you can In class,my English teacher organized different kinds learn about tea processing of activities to help us review what we had learnt, Dyou are going to a tea house after dinner where you can Sometimes she explained how to use the key words and watch a tea art performance sentence patterns. 5You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress DWith the teacher's help,we practiced listening,reading who will show you how a cup of tea is made with tea and writing in class. sets. GBut we often did exercises and had exams,which made while listening to pieces of traditional folk music me stressed out. 写作练兵 We can play games and have role-play conversations. 主题：中国传统节日 DIt's a good idea to have discussions with my partners in 体裁：说明文 English. 参考答案 41话题3 社会服务与人际沟通 (2017江西) 话题素材储备 词汇储备 写作角度 词汇储备 communicate交流；沟通 greet和…打招呼；迎接 share分享；共享 help帮助；援助 introduce介绍：引见 conversation交谈；谈话 introduction介绍 discussion讨论；商量 excuse原谅；宽恕 reply回答：答复 together共同：在一起 explain解释；说明 request要求；请求 trust相信；信任 express表示：表达 人际交往 argue争吵 understand理解 warm-hearted热心的 make friends with sb.与某人交朋友 stay in touch with sb.与某人保持联系 be friendly to sb.对某人友好 with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下 shake hands握手 smile at sb.对某人笑 share same interests有相同的爱好 get along/on well with.与…相处得好 help帮助 ofer主动提出 society社会 warmth温暖 prepare准备 organize组织 charity慈善 kindness善良 in need困雉中的 set up建立 tell stories讲故事 社会服务 care for关心 free time空闲时间 cheer up振作起来 be ready to准备好… listen to倾听 be willing to愿意… old people's home敏老院 volunteer activity志愿活动 make a difference影响：有作用 have difficulty in doing sth..在做某事上有困难 佳句运用 佳句 佳句仿写 1.My problem is that I can't get on well 1.我能和我的新同学相处得好。 with others. 2.Through the two months'study,I 2.这两个组同意相互协作。 got to know how to cooperate with others and learn to be independent. 3.虽然这对你来说很困难，但是你应该告诉他们真相。 3.Although he's your best friend,you should still tell him that copying others'homework is wrong. 4.为什么不对其他人更礼貌一些呢？ 4.Why don't you sit down and communicate with your brother? 5.如果你想让他们改变，你必须准备稍作改变。 5.I am always ready to help others when they are in trouble. 6.Learn to praise the people around us 6.要达到这些目标需要齐心协力。 in order to get a good relationship with them. 360.2D25江西 英语 续表 佳句 佳句仿写 7.You should call him so that you can 7,我们应该敞开心扉，这样我们才能交到更多的朋友。 say you're sorry. 谚语： 1.Respect yourself,or no one will respect you.要人尊敬，必须自重. 2.Do as you would be done by.己所不欲，勿施于人. 3.Helping others is helping ourselves..帮助别人就是帮助自己。 4.Many hands make light work.众人拾柴火焰高：人多好办事：人多力量大。 范文通读 (-) kindness,our world will be full of love. Should we help strangers? (二) Recently our class had a discussion about Encouragement plays an important role in whether we should help strangers.Different our life.Let me tell you one of my students have different opinions. experiences.When I was in primary school,I Some think we should try to help had trouble in speaking English.One afternoon strangers.Helping others is a virtue,and in the English class,my teacher asked me to helping others is helping ourselves.We may answer his question in English.I was so come across some trouble and need others'help nervous that I couldn't say out any words and some day.If everyone isn't willing to help others other students all laughed at me.My best friend just because they are strangers to them,it's hard Li Ming understood what I was going to imagine what our world will be like. through.He put his hand on my shoulder and However,some are afraid that helping told me,.“Come on.You can do that.”Tomy others can sometimes bring us trouble. surprise,I finally made it. Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even After class,I suddenly understood the have to pay the cost of kindness. power of encouragement.Encouraging words In my opinion,we should try our best to can really make people feel confident and help others when they are in need of help,but succeed in overcoming difficulties.Therefore, we should also protect ourselves from getting we should make good use of words to into trouble.If everyone gives a little encourage others. 话题作文导练 命题分杨] 分析江西近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“社会服务与人际交往”这一话题在2017 年以“Smiles'”为题进行了考查。 话题写作 361 典例待标] 第①步审题 (2017江西)微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报以“Smiles'”为 ①定主题：徽笑 题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短 ②定体裁：记叙文 文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事给子你的启示。 ③定人称：第一人称、第三 提示： 人称 1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯： ④定时态：一般过去时、一 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名： 般妮在时 3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 ⑤定要点： a.徽笑的力量 Power of smiles b,你的徽笑故事 (get on well.bring good luck..) Your own story aboul smiles 、c.故事给予你的启示 Smiles What you've learnt from the story Smiles A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. 第2步布局 写作框架 要点扩写，句子升格 微笑的内谪→A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings.It shows you are kind and friendly. 开篇：点明主题微笑的力量-→它帮助你与他人友好相处。它也带给你好运，并且使他人感到温暖。(gton 微笑 well with,make sb.do) ①It helps you It also 362.2025江西 英语 续表 写作框架 要点扩写，句子升格 新生的加入→I was in Grade6.A new student came to our class.(用when引导的时间状语 从句升格) ② 新生的表现→他学习很差。没人和他说话。他感觉很孤独。(do badly in) ③ No one talked with him.He felt very lonely. 正文：你的微笑 自己与新生→当我知道后，每次我碰到他，我都给他一个大大的微笑。(each time,abig 故事 的关系 smile) ④ Afterwards,he often asked me questions about study. 我们成了好朋友。他在学业上表现得越来越好。(better and better) ⑤ He said my smile made him more confident and outgoing.(用it was-+强调部 分十that的强调结构升格) ⑥ 要笑对人生→Smiles are so important to our life.L,et's try to smile more,.(用so作连词 升格) 结尾：微笑的 ⑦ 启示 We smile to life.Life will smile back to us.(用if引导的条件状语从句升格) ⑧ 第3步 谋篇 Smiles A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings.It shows you are kind and friendly. It helps you get on well with others.It also brings you good luck and makes others feel warm. When I was in Grade 6,a new student came to our class.He did badly in schoolwork.No one talked with him.He felt very lonely.When I learnt this,each time I met him,I gave him a big smile.Afterwards,he often asked me questions about study.We became good friends and he did better and better in his study.He said it was my smile that made him more confident and outgoing. 话题写作 363 Smiles are so important to our life,so let's try to smile more.If we smile to life,life will smile back to us. 【亮点赏析】 ①表时间的连接副词When”和“Afterwards'”串联了文段的时间线索，使故事逻辑清晰。 ②三处it均指代前文的主语a smile,使行文简洁明了。 ③时间状语从句、强调句、f引导的条件状语从句增加了句式的多样性，为文章锦上添花。 写作练] 某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活主题： 动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你对他人 提供善意帮助的经历。 体裁： 写作要点： 人称： What do you think of showing kindness to others? 时态： How do you help them kindly in your daily life? 要点： What do you dream about being kind to them? 要求： 1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥： 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息： 3.词数80~120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 It's our duty to show kindness to others around us. 364A。2D25江西英语