读后续写微技能 无灵主语 导学案-2025届高三英语二轮复习

写作微技能 - 无灵主语 新建区第三中学 万亚萍 Micro-skills of writing Inanimate Subjects In Continuation Writing Learning Objectives： 1. know and master the usage of Inanimate subjects. 2. understand and be aware of the differences between Chinese and English expressions on feelings 3. be able to judge, appreciate and create the expressions with inanimate subjects in writing. Summary of the original text: These three diary entries tell the thrilling and dangerous story of an Antarctic expedition. In the first diary entry on October 31, 1914, a 19 - year - old boy saw an ad for an Antarctic trip led by Sir Ernest Shackleton. He was very excited because it was his dream adventure. But Shackleton said no to him, thinking he was too young and not experienced enough. Not willing to give up, the boy secretly got on the ship, Endurance, and hid. Found three days later, he became a steward, serving 28 men three meals a day. He couldn't wait to share his future stories with others. The second entry, written on November 21, 1915, shows that the journey turned terrible. As the ship neared Antarctica, it got stuck in ice and was finally crushed. Before the ship sank, Shackleton calmly told everyone to save important things like small boats, food, and clothes. Surprisingly, he let Hussey keep his banjo, which helped cheer them up. Now living on the ice, they worried about the melting ice in spring. By May 20, 1916, things got even worse. The team was stuck on Elephant Island, crowded under a boat. Shackleton left to get help from South Georgia Island, 1,320 km away. The writer felt hopeless, knowing no navy ever came to Elephant Island and no one else knew they were there. These diaries show a journey from excitement to a fight for survival. Step I Lead-in: Appreciate & Find 1. After the advertisement in the newspaper caught his eye, a determination seized Perce Blackborow to join the Antarctic expedition （南极探险）led by Sir Ernest Shackleton. 2. Their voyage encountered difficulties, and the Endurance became trapped in the ice. 3. Soon after that, a boat party selected by Shackleton set off for South Georgia Island to get help. . “无灵主语”（Inanimate subject）句是指用无生命的事物做主语，用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语，因此这类句子常带有拟人化的修辞色彩。 Step II Introduction Guessing Game 1. Constant dropping wears a stone. 水滴石穿。 2. Every minute counts. 分秒必争。 3. Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜于雄辩。 4. Fortune knocks once at least at every man's door.人人都有好运的一天。 5. Time heals all wounds. 时间能治愈一切创伤。 6. Money makes the mare go. 有钱能使鬼推磨。 1. Activity 1: Change the following adjectives into nouns and use them as the subject. anxious 焦虑的 n.anxiety guilty内疚的 n.guilt panic 惊慌的 n.panic worried担忧的 n.worry despair 绝望的 n.despair angry生气的 n.anger hopeless绝望的 n.hopelessness depress 沮丧的 n.depression horrible恐惧的 n.horror stressful 有压力的 n.stress happy 高兴的 n.happiness sad 伤心的 n.sadness Summary 1： 当主语是情感状态名词类名词，如：happiness/joy/delight; excitement；gratitude, appreciation；fear, terror, fright, panic；puzzlement ；satisfaction；eagerness；admiration； ；nervousness, anxiety；disappointment; depression； despair等。 常见的谓语：well up in sb（涌入); grip sb(紧抓), overwhelm sb，strike sb, hit sb, catch sb, surround sb, come over sb(支配，影响), creep over sb（不知不觉地产生）, sweep over sb, , take possession of sb等。 常见谓语动词有 2. Activity 2 Choose animate verbs (有灵谓语）with their proper forms. slip break reveal swallow drive 1. The minutes slipped by quickly. 时间一分一分地溜走了。 2. The bitter weather had driven everyone indoors. 由于天气寒冷，大家都躲进了室内。 3. The cold Antarctic night had swallowed the hopes of the crew.南极寒冷的黑夜吞噬了船员们的希望。 4. Dawn finally broke, its pale light revealed how serious their trouble was.黎明终于破晓，那微弱的光线揭示了他们所处困境的严重程度。 Summary 2： 主语是表示时间/地点/场景类名词，如 dusk 黄昏；dawn 黎明；night；cold；silence 常见的谓语：swallow ； drive；reveal； break；slip... 常见谓语动词有： Activity 3 Rewrite the following sentences with inanimate subjects. 1. The crew was filled with despair when they saw the deserted island. The sight of the deserted island filled them with despair. 2.The crew on Elephant Island decided to catch seals（海豹）for food, and this changed their lives. The decision of the crew on Elephant Island to catch seals for food changed their lives. 3.When they thought of going home, they had the strength to accomplish the mission. The thought of going home gave them the strength to accomplish the mission. Summary 3： 主语是行为动作的名词类名词，如 sight看到；thought想法, glance一瞥, look看到, idea想法, feeling感受, walk走路等。 常见的谓语： signal；shatter摧毁；overwhelm 压倒；strike 打击侵袭；arouse 唤起；remind 想起；fill... with 充满...；change 改变；bring 带来等。 常见谓语动词有： Step III Practice 1. 找出下列短文中的“无灵主语”。 Life fell into a regular pattern. Staying alive took all our time and energy. Elephant Island offered no water, forcing us to find other ways to survive. We found that we could melt ice from the ocean and drink the water from it. But how could we make fire? There were no trees growing on Antarctica and no oil, so the only fuel we could use was animal fat. This gave off oily, black smoke, but it stayed burning even in strong winds.Fear of illness from changing temperatures kept us inside most of the time. The sweat could freeze very quickly. The smoky air from burning animal fat attacked our bodies, making us sick. 2. 用无灵主语句补充完整下列句子。 1. 狂风似乎都卷走了他们仅存希望的一小部分，只留下疑虑。(leave behind ) Wild winds (无灵主语)seemed to carry away (有灵动词）a slice of their remaining hope, leaving behind (有灵动词）only doubt. 2. 由于没有淡水供应，他们不得不融化从冰冻海面上采集来的冰块，这一过程十分累人，考验着他们的耐心与忍耐力。‌(loom like ) Without access to fresh water, they were forced to melt ice harvested from the frozen sea, a tiring process(无灵主语)that tested (有灵动语)their patience and endurance. 3. 刺骨的寒冷吞噬了他们，使他们举步维艰。 The freezing cold (无灵主语) swallowed (有灵动词）them, making it hard for them to move forward. 4. 就在他们感到绝望之际，地平线上出现了希望的曙光。 And then, just when despair (无灵主语) seized (有灵动词）them，hope appeared on the horizon. Step IV Self-assessment After the class, I will be able to... £ Understand the basic concept of inanimate subjects. £ Correctly identify inanimate subject sentences in reading. £Write inanimate subject sentences accurately £ Appropriately use inanimate subject to improve writing style. £ know the differences between Chinese and English expressions. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$