内容正文:
四川省宜宾市第六中学校 胡孝刚
提纲式应用文作文
2025年浙江1月高考
Learning Goals:
学会逐词逐句审题,不偏题不漏点;
熟悉文章体裁格式,合理展开写作思路;
学会1+1=1形式展开主体要点;
罗列提纲句子,体现主次安排;
学会添加时间、地点、过渡词和个人看法;
学会使用恰当词汇和复杂语法句式。
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1) 陈述看法; (2) 提出建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Activity 1: 逐词逐句审题,不偏不漏
film short videos
on campus
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1) 陈述看法; (2) 提出建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
体裁格式:
题材内容:
投稿征文
1. 活动介绍 2. 观点陈述
特殊提醒:
1. 标题 2. 编造具体课间开展活动名称
Activity 1: 逐词逐句审题,不偏不漏
film short videos
on campus
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动; 2. 说明推荐理由。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
现象陈述 + 揭露实质 (3句3分)
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(5句9分)
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢 (3句3句)
Activity 2: 合理展开写作,不混不乱
开篇:
主体:
结尾:
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动; 2. 说明推荐理由。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
现象陈述 + 揭露实质 (3句3分)
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(5句9分)
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢 (3句3句)
1. 手持手机/ 2. 拍视频 + 3. 同学越喜欢
4. 带来好外 + 5.丰富生活/ 6.放松心情 + 7. 发现美好/ 8. 记录生活
9.不浪费时间/ 10. 学业为重 + 感谢
Activity 2: 合理展开写作,不混不乱
开篇:
主体:
结尾:
现象陈述 + 揭露实质 (3句3分)
1.持手机;
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
2.拍视频;
3.很喜欢。
现象陈述 + 揭露实质 (3句3分)
1.持手机;
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
①Nowadays, on our campus more and more students are holding their phones and taking short videos everywhere.
②It shows that filming videos is popular among us students.
2.拍视频;
3.很喜欢。
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(5句9分)
总述: 4. 带来好外
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
①Nowadays, on our campus more and more students are holding their phones and taking short videos everywhere.
②It shows that filming videos is popular among us students.
③I do believe that it will bring us a lot of benefits and fun.
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(5句9分)
分述1/拓展1: 5.丰富生活/ 6.放松心情
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
①Nowadays, on our campus more and more students are holding their phones and taking short videos everywhere.
②It shows that filming videos is popular among us students.
③I do believe that it will bring us a lot of benefits and fun.
④At first, filming can relax our mind after a long time of work so that it can enrich our school life.
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(5句9分)
分述2/拓展2: 7. 发现美好/ 8. 记录生活
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
①Nowadays, on our campus more and more students are holding their phones and taking short videos everywhere.
②It shows that filming videos is popular among us students.
③I do believe that it will bring us a lot of benefits and fun.
④At first, filming can relax our mind after a long time of work so that it can enrich our school life.
⑤What’s more, noticing the great moments, we can keep track of our daily life.
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢 (3句3句)
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
①Nowadays, on our campus more and more students are holding their phones and taking short videos everywhere.
②It shows that filming videos is popular among us students.
③I do believe that it will bring us a lot of benefits and fun.
④At first, filming can relax our mind after a long time of work so that it can enrich our school life.
⑤What’s more, noticing the great moments, we can keep track of our daily life.
⑥However, putting school work first, we shouldn’t be addicted to filming and waste too much time every day.
提出建议: 9.不浪费时间/ 10. 学业为重
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢 (3句3句)
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
①Nowadays, on our campus more and more students are holding their phones and taking short videos everywhere.
②It shows that filming videos is popular among us students.
③I do believe that it will bring us a lot of benefits and fun.
④At first, filming can relax our mind after a long time of work so that it can enrich our school life.
⑤What’s more, noticing the great moments, we can keep track of our daily life.
⑥However, putting school work first, we shouldn’t be addicted to filming and waste too much time every day.
体裁格式: 11.感谢
⑦That’s all. ⑧Thank you for your listening.
Activity 4: 适当添加时地个过,规范工整
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Nowadays, on our campus more and more students ... It shows that ...
I do believe that it will bring us a lot of benefits and fun. At first, ... What’s more, ...
However, we shouldn’t … That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
Activity 5: 熟悉体裁格式,把握写作思路
You’d better do…
you are supposed to do…
you’d do…
It is a good idea to do…
It will be wonderful for you to do…
think + it + adj + for sb to do…
be too adj to …
What really counts is that …
Activity 6: 熟悉题材内容,适当联想积累
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