内容正文:
四川省宜宾市第六中学校 胡孝刚
2024年浙江1月高考
提纲应用作文
Learning Goals:
学会逐词逐句审题,不偏题不漏点;
熟悉文章体裁格式,合理展开写作思路;
学会1+1=1形式展开主体要点;
罗列提纲句子,体现主次安排;
学会添加时间、地点、过渡词和个人看法;
学会使用恰当词汇和复杂语法句式。
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Activity 1: 逐词逐句审题,不偏不漏
recommend/ introduce sth to sb
recommend/ introduce sb sth
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
体裁格式:
题材内容:
投稿征文
1. 活动介绍 2. 观点陈述
特殊提醒:
1. 标题 2. 编造具体课间开展活动名称
Activity 1: 逐词逐句审题,不偏不漏
recommend/ introduce sth to sb
recommend/ introduce sb sth
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动; 2. 说明推荐理由。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
简单叙述 + 引出话题 (3句3分)
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(2句3分)
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢(2句3分)
陈述理由 + 理由1/拓展 + 理由2/拓展 (5句6分)
Activity 2: 合理展开写作,不混不乱
开篇:
主体:
结尾:
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1. 介绍这项运动; 2. 说明推荐理由。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
简单叙述 + 引出话题 (3句3分)
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢(2句3分)
陈述理由 + 理由1/拓展 + 理由2/拓展 (5句6分)
1. 越来越在意健康 2. 课件活动成为焦点 3. 推荐“Stand & Dance”
4. 适合教室内学生 5. 随音乐舞动
6. 很多好处 + 7. 简单易学/8. 花时少 + 9. 少要求/10.原地能舞
10.采用我的建议 11. 每人可站而舞
Activity 2: 合理展开写作,不混不乱
开篇:
主体:
结尾:
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(2句3分)
Activity 3: 正确英语句子表达,不错不误
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
简单叙述 + 引出话题 (3句3分)
1. 越来越在意健康
2. 课件活动成为焦点
3. 推荐“Stand & Dance”
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
简单叙述 + 引出话题 (3句3分)
1. 越来越在意健康
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
2. 课件活动成为焦点
3. 推荐“Stand & Dance”
①Nowadays, we are caring more about our health and for students how to exercise between classes becomes a focus in the society.
②Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
介绍活动(基本信息:目的、适合对象、具体操作)(2句3分)
4. 适合教室内学生
5. 随音乐舞动
③We just dance along music at our seats and it is suitable for students in the classrooms.
①Nowadays, we are caring more about our health and for students how to exercise between classes becomes a focus in the society.
②Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
③We just dance along music at our seats and it is suitable for students in the classrooms.
陈述理由 + 理由1/拓展 + 理由2/拓展 (5句6分)
总述: 6. 很多好处
④Here are some reasons for it.
①Nowadays, we are caring more about our health and for students how to exercise between classes becomes a focus in the society.
②Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
⑤At first, it is easy and it takes a short time for us to learn to dance.
陈述理由 + 理由1/拓展 + 理由2/拓展 (5句6分)
理由1/拓展1: 7. 简单易学/8. 花时少
③We just dance along music at our seats and it is suitable for students in the classrooms.
④Here are some reasons for it.
①Nowadays, we are caring more about our health and for students how to exercise between classes becomes a focus in the society.
②Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
陈述理由 + 理由1/拓展 + 理由2/拓展 (5句6分)
理由2/拓展2: 9. 少要求/10.原地能舞
⑥What’s more, it doesn’t need any facilities. Stand at the seats and we can do exercise.
⑤At first, it is easy and it takes a short time for us to learn to dance.
③We just dance along music at our seats and it is suitable for students in the classrooms.
④Here are some reasons for it.
①Nowadays, we are caring more about our health and for students how to exercise between classes becomes a focus in the society.
②Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢(2句3分)
期待/号召: 10.采用我的建议
⑦Therefore, I do hope that you can take my advice.
⑥What’s more, it doesn’t need any facilities. Stand at the seats and we can do exercise.
⑤At first, it is easy and it takes a short time for us to learn to dance.
③We just dance along music at our seats and it is suitable for students in the classrooms.
④Here are some reasons for it.
①Nowadays, we are caring more about our health and for students how to exercise between classes becomes a focus in the society.
②Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
⑧And everyone can stand up to exercise.(107 words)
期待/号召(提出建议) + 感谢(2句3分)
期待/号召: 11. 每人可站而舞
⑦Therefore, I do hope that you can take my advice.
⑥What’s more, it doesn’t need any facilities. Stand at the seats and we can do exercise.
⑤At first, it is easy and it takes a short time for us to learn to dance.
③We just dance along music at our seats and it is suitable for students in the classrooms.
④Here are some reasons for it.
①Nowadays, we are caring more about our health and for students how to exercise between classes becomes a focus in the society.
②Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Activity 4: 适当添加时地个过,规范工整
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Nowadays, ... Here, I’d like to recommend “Stand & Dance” to all of us.
Here are some reasons for it. At first, ... What’s more, ...
Therefore, I do hope that you can take my advice. And everyone can stand up to exercise.
Activity 5: 熟悉体裁格式,把握写作思路
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