以读促写7 家乡变化 -【智乐星中考·命题研究】2025年重庆中考英语以读促写（人教版）

英语 2025重庆 1 2 以读促写七　家乡变化 3 【主题阅读】 　　Zhao Ming chose to leave his village and has worked in a car factory in a big city for almost 15 years. With a busy job, he doesn’t have time to go back to his village often. On a recent visit, he said, “It’s a shame that I had to leave my hometown. I’ve always wanted to move back. ” 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 4 Nowadays, Zhao Ming’s hometown is changing for the better. The government has built new roads and bridges. This has made traveling much easier. Because the new roads were built around his village, Zhao Ming’s wife opened an online shop two years ago. The shop now sells delicious food from his hometown and they’ve made a lot of money. Zhao Ming likes the new school in his village. “Now there’s a completely new school with a big library. Some city schools have also sent teachers to help out. ” 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 5 Zhao Ming considers such developments as important steps for his hometown. According to him, however, one thing will never change. “In my hometown, there is a big old tree across from the school. When I was young, my friends and I liked to play under that big tree. We had such a happy childhood. Our hometown has given us so many great memories. ” 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 6 根据短文内容, 用符合语义及语法规则的词填空, 每空一词。 1. Zhao Ming has been _____ from his village and worked in a big city for almost 15 years. 2. Zhao Ming misses his hometown, but he is busy with his job and doesn’t have time to ______ to his village often. 3. _______ to the new roads around his village, his wife’s online shop ___ been open for two years. away return Thanks has 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 7 4. In Zhao Ming’s opinion, one thing will never _______—the big old tree ________ his school. 5. Zhao Ming is especially happy about the developments in his hometown. His hometown is the place that holds all his great _________. change opposite memories 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 8 【框架结构】 根据主题阅读的文章内容, 完成下列问题。 【Step 1】细审题意 1. 文体: 叙述事情, 文体为 _______ ; 2. 人称: 叙述赵明的经历, 应以 _________为主; 3. 时态: 本文主题为家乡变化及童年回忆, 主要使用 _________时态; 4. 要点: ①讲述赵明的个人状况; ② ___________________; ③童年回忆及感悟。  记叙文 第三人称 现在完成 描述赵明家乡的变化 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 9 【Step 2】搭建框架 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 10 【积累提升】 ☞ 短语积累 1. on a recent visit 在最近一次逗留中 (主题阅读第3行) 2. be changing for the better 正在变得更好 (主题阅读第5行) 3. used to 曾经……; 过去…… 4. thanks to. . . 多亏了…… 5. change greatly 改变很大 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 11 6. in the past few years 近几年来 7. dirty and crowded 又脏又拥挤 8. clean and tidy 干净整洁 9. improve a lot 改善许多 10. very convenient to live here 住在这儿很方便 11. take place 发生 12. on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 一方面……另一方面…… 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 12 ☞ 句式积累 1. With a busy job, he doesn’t have time to go back to his village often. 由于工作繁忙, 他没有时间经常回村庄。(主题阅读第2行) 2. Zhao Ming considers such developments as important steps for his hometown. 赵明认为这样的发展对他的家乡来说是重要的步骤。(主题阅读倒数第5行) 3.Large hospitals and new schools have appeared. 大医院和新学校已经出现了。(八下P78) 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 13 4.It has become quite a symbol of the place. 它成了这个地方的标志。(八下P78) 5.Our hometown has given us so many great memories. 我们的家乡给了我们很多美好的回忆。 (八下P78) 6.Zhong Wei thinks these changes are necessary because things need to change in order to become better. 钟伟认为这些变化是有必要的, 因为事情为了变得更好需要改变。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 14 ☞ 谚语积累 1. East and west, home is the best. 金窝银窝, 不如自己的狗窝。 2. Home is where the heart is. 心之所在即为家。 3. As long as you leave your hometown, you will always be wandering. 只要离开了家乡, 你永远都是在流浪。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 15 ☞ 优化提升 1. There is a big tree in my school. I like to spend time under it on weekends. (用定语从句升阶) There is a big tree in my school, under ______I like to spend time on weekends. 2. It is still there and has become a symbol of the place. (用on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 升阶) ___________________________________________________________ _________________  which On the one hand, it is still there. On the other hand, it has become a symbol of the place. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 16 3. There is a big library in the place where I live. (用one great thing about. . . is that. . . 升阶) _______________________________________________________________ One great thing about the place where I live is that there is a big library. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 17 【写作升级】 为庆祝党的生日, 某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛, 其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明, 请你根据下面的要点提示, 写一篇以“My beautiful hometown”为题的英语短文投稿。 要求: 1. 80～120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 18 参考信息: 1. 过去的家乡(山、河流、垃圾……); 2. 现在的家乡(青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……); 3. …… My beautiful hometown My hometown is a beautiful place. ____________________________ 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 19 【Step 1】细审题意 1. 文体: 介绍家乡, 文体为 _______ ; 2. 人称: 介绍自己的家乡, 可使用的人称为 _________或 _________; 3. 时态: 本文主要介绍家乡的变化, 综合使用 _________和 _________时态; 4. 要点: ①引出话题; ② _______________; ③ _______________; ④感悟。  记叙文 第一人称 第三人称 一般过去 一般现在 介绍过去的家乡 介绍现在的家乡 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 20 【Step 2】搭建框架 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 21 【Step 3】衔接成篇 _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 22 【Step 4】润色升级 My beautiful hometown My hometown is a beautiful place. It has changed greatly. There used to be several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was also so much rubbish that people lived in a dirty environment. In a word, it was a poor and backward little town. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 23 But now, the mountains have turned green, the water is clean and the air is fresh. Birds are singing and flowers blossom everywhere. The most important thing is that the streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another. The life of the people has greatly improved. How beautiful my hometown is! We are still working hard to make it more beautiful. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 24 “积累提升”的change greatly及现在完成时态的运用, 使首段总结更直接明了。 used to, in a word, so. . . that引导结果状语从句等亮点的运用, 为文章内容增色。 表语从句的运用增强了语言流畅度, 起到了衔接作用。 感叹句和make it+adj. 在尾段的运用, 为整篇文章做了情感升华。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 25 【实践运用】 　　(2024济南模拟)生活在变化, 社会在进步, 我们的家乡也越来越好。你学校英语俱乐部本周日将在你的家乡举办“走进秀美乡村一日游”研学活动。请你以“Changes in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文, 届时介绍一下你的家乡。 提示: 1. 过去几年你家乡的变化; 2. 你的感想和对未来的展望。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 26 要求: 1. 80～120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 结构完整, 表达通顺, 语言规范, 书写清晰; 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 27 Changes in my hometown 　　I’m glad to hear that a study trip to my hometown will be organized this Sunday. ____________________________________________________  __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________   The past ten years witnessed great changes in my hometown. In the past, people lived in old and broken houses. But now lines of beautiful tall buildings can be seen everywhere. Besides, there are not only more private cars but also wider streets. The environment around my hometown also takes on a new look. All these surprising changes bring us much convenience and comfort. People are living a much richer and happier life than before. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 28 　　 __________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________  I am proud of the rapid development of our country. And I am sure that my hometown will be more and more liveable in the future. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 29 本课件由我公司研发制作，拥有完整版权，为教师用书配套增值产品。仅供教师个人授课使用，切勿用于商业用途，未授权擅自用作商业用途者，一经发现，我公司将追究侵权者的法律责任！ 版权声明 30 $$