以读促写5 人际关系 -【智乐星中考·命题研究】2025年重庆中考英语以读促写（人教版）

英语 2025重庆 1 2 以读促写五　人际关系 3 【主题阅读】 　　I went through some difficult times, dealing with the pressures of growing up. I found it hard to communicate with my mother. Relations between us became difficult. 　　One day, I stayed in my room all day. Even though my mother called me, I still ignored her. When I came out of my room at night, I saw all the pain, anger and disappointment on my mother’s face. Amazingly enough, it felt like all the anger inside me went away from my body. We agreed to have breakfast together the next morning. It was a turning point in both of our lives and our relationship. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 4 　　We decided to go to a restaurant. On our way to the table, I noticed my mother had two notebooks. I asked her what they were for. She explained to me that sometimes it was easier to write down our feelings rather than talk about them. We would write down our feelings in the form of a letter. It could be as long or as short as we wanted. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 5 　　Our first topic was “why I’m so angry”. I wrote a half page, and my mom wrote nearly three pages. I watched tears run down her face as she wrote. After we finished writing, we exchanged our notebooks. When we finished reading, we discussed our feelings. Our talk helped me realize so many things I had never thought of before, not only about my mother but also about other people. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 6 　　My mother and I continue to use our notebooks as a way of communicating our anger and worries, and our happiness as well. We know that no matter how we feel about each other, our notebooks are a safe place to express our feelings. We have come to an agreement that at the end of each letter we write, “I love you. ” 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 7 　　阅读短文, 按要求回答下列问题。 1. What did the writer see on her mother’s face when she came out of her room at night? ____________________________________________________________  2. Do you think it’s a useful way to communicate with your parents in the form of letters? Why or why not? _____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________ She saw all the pain, anger and disappointment on her mother’s face. Yes, I do. Because I think it can help us communicate better with each other. /No, I don’t. Because I think it’s a waste of time to write letters. (答案不唯一, 言之有理即可)   主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 8 3. 请将画线句子翻译成汉语。 ______________________  4. 请给文章拟一个恰当的标题。 ____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ 我看到她边写边流泪。 Love in letters/A good way to show love/A good way to communicate with my mother(答案不唯一, 言之有理即可)   主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 9 【框架结构】 根据主题阅读的文章内容, 完成下列问题。 【Step 1】细审题意 1. 文体: 叙述事情, 文体为 _______; 2. 人称: 叙述作者的经历, 应以 _________为主; 3. 时态: 本文主要讲述了作者和妈妈吵架并通过笔记本进行沟通直到相 互理解的经历, 主要使用 _________时态; 4. 要点: ①作者与妈妈发生矛盾; ② ___________________; ③作者与妈妈相互理解。  记叙文 第一人称 一般过去 作者与妈妈解决矛盾 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 10 【Step 2】搭建框架 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 11 【积累提升】 ☞ 短语积累 1. no matter how 无论以何种方式 (主题阅读倒数第3行) 2. it is important to do sth. 做某事很重要 3. build a better relationship with. . . 和……建立更好的关系 4. take responsibility for 对……负责 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 12 ☞ 句式积累 1. I went through some difficult times, dealing with the pressures of growing up. 应对在成长过程中的压力时, 我经历了些困难时期。(主题阅读第1行) 2. I found it hard to communicate with my mother. 我发现很难和妈妈沟通。(主题阅读第2行) 3. She explained to me that sometimes it was easier to write down our feelings rather than talk about them. 她向我解释说, 有时候把我们的感受写下来比谈论它们更容易。(主题阅读第11行) 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 13 4.My problem is that I can’t get on with my family. 我的问题是我不能和家人和睦相处。(八下P27) 5.I don’t know if I should say anything to them about this. 我不知道我是否应该就这件事对他们说点儿什么。(八下P27) 6.Why don’t you talk about these feelings with your family? 你为什么不和你的家人谈谈这些感受呢?(八下P27) 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 14 ☞ 谚语积累 1. Keep good men company and you shall be of the number. 近朱者赤, 近墨者黑。 2. Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水。 3. Sincerity is the key to success. 精诚所至, 金石为开。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 15 ☞ 优化提升 1. I have a problem. I can’t communicate with my mother. (用表语从句升阶) ___________________________________________________  2. He made it better. He went through a long time. (用to do不定式作目的状语升阶) __________________________________________ My problem is that I can’t communicate with my mother. He went through a long time to make it better.   主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 16 【写作升级】 (2024北京通州一模)某英文网站青少年板块正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 分享你和父母之间发生的一个冲突, 你是如何恰当地处理的, 以及你从中得到的启示。词数80～120, 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 17 1. 提示词语: disagreement, spend, cell phone, shout, communicate 2. 提示问题: (1)What was the problem between your parents and you? (2)How did you deal with it? (3)What have you learned from it? _____________________________________________________________ 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 18 【Step 1】细审题意 1. 文体: 叙述事情, 文体为 _______; 2. 人称: 叙述与自己父母发生的一个冲突, 应以 _________为主; 3. 时态: 本文主题为分享和父母之间发生过的一个冲突, 主要使用 __________时态; 4. 要点: ①点明主题; ② _____________; ③ ___________; ④感悟。  记叙文 第一人称 一般过去 发生过的冲突 解决的方法 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 19 【Step 2】搭建框架 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 20 【Step 3】衔接成篇 _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 21 【Step 4】润色升级 　　I love my parents and they love me as well, but we can’t communicate well with each other, either. Sometimes we even make each other unhappy. 　　One day, I spent too much time on my cell phone because of talking about the school project with my classmates. My mom was angry and shouted at me because she thought I wasted my time. I knew she worried about me so I didn’t just close my door this time. I explained the reason and told her that I understood her worries. She said sorry to me because of her misunderstanding. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 22 　　From this experience, I have learned that it’s important to communicate with each other and understand each other. I realize that listening to others and expressing clearly can prevent misunderstandings. In addition, taking responsibility for my actions can help me build a better relationship with my parents. 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 23 首段but连接两个句子, 引入主题, 引出下文。 交替使用because of和because增强文章逻辑性和流畅度。 “积累提升”中it is important to do sth. , build a better relationship with. . . , take responsibility for短语及结构的运用使文章结尾层层递进, 在情感上得到了升华。 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 24 【实践运用】 　　(2024北京石景山一模)沟通是解决问题的重要途径之一。假设你是李华, 请给学校英文网站投稿, 描述一次你与他人通过沟通解决问题的经历, 并谈谈你的收获。词数80～120, 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 1. 提示词语: argue, phone, apologize, communicate, solve the problem 2. 提示问题: (1)How did you solve a problem by communicating with others? (2)What have you learned from that experience? 主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 25 __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 　　 It is common that teenagers argue with their parents sometimes. Once, I argued with my parents when I was using my phone to play games. My parents got angry and took my phone away. I was really upset.   主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 26 __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 　　 Knowing that they did so just for my own good, I finally picked up my courage and sat down with my parents. I told them I appreciated their help and apologized for playing with my phone for too long. I promised I would try to manage my time well. Surprisingly, my parents didn’t criticize me but gave me a big hug. They told me that I had learned to solve the problem and they were really proud of me. We were all happy that we worked out the problem by communicating with each other.   　　 From this experience, I have learned that good communication is the key to solving problems and building trust.   主题阅读 积累提升 题序 框架结构 写作升级 实践运用 27 本课件由我公司研发制作，拥有完整版权，为教师用书配套增值产品。仅供教师个人授课使用，切勿用于商业用途，未授权擅自用作商业用途者，一经发现，我公司将追究侵权者的法律责任！ 版权声明 28 $$