读后续写emma的科学梦想与挑战(中午)课件-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项
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以2024学年第一学期浙江省精诚联盟适应性联考:Emma的科学家梦想与挑战为例
Continuation Writing:
Design the Plot Based on 5W1H & CAF
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By the end of this lesson, you will be able to :
1. summarize the main idea and plots of the story based on 5W1H
2. design the plots based on CAF
3. develop a never-giving-up attitude towards challenges in life
Learning Objectives
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Step1 Free talk: What is your dream?
Dreams
Answer: My dream is to do...
I dream of /about...
be a teacher
be brave
go to Beijing
get into the right college
...
What qualities are needed to realize your dream?
Qualities
...
persistence
adaptability
self-discipline
creativity
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
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Who: Emma
Where: in a small town in Iowa
When: this year;One evening, a week before the science fair
Step2 Summarize the plots based on 5W1H.
What:Emma lost all data when her laptop crashed.
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
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Ending
Emotions
Emotions
Emotions
Emotions
Falling
Climax
Development
Beginning
determined,
hopeful,
eager to
prove herself
panicked,
desperate,
helpless
determined, adaptable
spent months preparing her project
her laptop crashed and all data got lost
decided to start over
Step2 Summarize plots based on 5W1H.
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
How
P1: Taking a deep breath, Emma decided to start over.
P2: After the fair, the winners were to be announced.
Design plots
Assignment
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Emotions
Emotions
Emotions
Emotions
Climax
Development
Beginning
determined,
hopeful,
eager to
prove herself
panicked,
desperate,
helpless
determined, adaptable
spent months preparing her project
her laptop crashed and all data got lost
decided to start over
Main idea: although Emma encoutered challengs during preparing the science fair, she decided to never give up and start over.
Step3 Summarize the main idea and the theme.
The theme:
A. Hardwork & perseverance
B. Kindness & love
C. Teamwork & unity
How
Ending
Falling
P1: Taking a deep breath, Emma decided to start over.
P2: After the fair, the winners were to be announced.
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
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Para.1 Taking a deep breath, Emma decided to start over.
Step4 Raise questions based on CAF.
Para.2 After the fair, the winners were to be announced.
Q1: How did Emma feel? What did she do?
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
Who: Emma;
her parents;
the technician; Mr.Reycnold
Where: in a small town in Iowa;
her home
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
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Para.1 Taking a deep breath, Emma decided to start over.
Step4 Raise questions based on CAF.
Para.2 After the fair, the winners were to be announced.
CAF
C: characters
A: actions
F: feelings
Q1: How did Emma feel? What did she do?
Q2:How did they feel? What did her parents do?
Did Emma participate in the science fair in time?
Q3: What did she do at the fair?
Q4: How did she feel ?
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
Step5 Complete the following table based on the question chain.
Para.1 Characters Emma Emma’s parents Mr.Reynolds
At first Actions /
Feelings /
At least Actions / /
Feelings / /
Q1: How did Emma feel?
What did she do?
calm
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
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used her laptop
opened her handwritten notes
reorganized the scattered papers
recalled the data and the experiments
Q1: What did she do?
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
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Step5 Complete the following table based on the question chain.
Para.1 Characters Emma Emma’s parents Mr.Reynolds
At first Actions /
Feelings /
At least Actions / /
Feelings / /
opened her handwritten notes,
reorganized the scattered papers
recalled the data and the experiments
calm
worried
encouraged her
stood by her project
presented her findings
stressed out but full of passion
Q2: How did they feel?
What did her parents do?
Q3: What did she do at the fair?
Q4: How did she feel ?
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
Para.1 Two lines
1.Emma’s pecific actions for restarting
2.Her parents comforted her
3.Emma finished the project before the fair.
4.Eamma presented at the fair
helpless→calm→stressed out but passionate
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Para.2 After the fair, the winners were to be announced.
Step6 Group work: Raise questions based on CAF and compelet the form.
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
Para.2 Characters Emma Emma’s parents Mr.Reynolds Environment
At first Actions / /
/
Feelings / /
At least Actions / /
Feelings / /
Q1: What did Emma do while waiting ?
Q1: How did she feel?
Q4: What did Mr.Reynolds do?
Q2: How did Emma react to the result?
Q3:How did she feel?
held her breath
worried
jump to the air
proud of her efforts
thumped up
Step6 Group work: Raise questions based on CAFE and compelet the form.
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
Para.2 Two lines
1.Emma’s pecific actions for waiting
2.Her reactions to the first prize
3.Mr.Reynolds reactions to her
4.Eamma’reflection
worried→proud
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Never give up
&
persevering in adversity
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
Assignment:
1. Complete the assessment
2. Polish up your writing after class.
3. Practice CAF in more reading materials.
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
Thanks
Reflection
Lead-in
Basic element
Main idea and theme
Presentation
Design plots
Assignment
名词+-y 后缀变为形容词
taste→tasty 可口的;
ease→easy 容易的;
noise→noisy 吵闹的;
ice→icy 结冰的
wealth→wealthy 富有的;
health→healthy 健康的
mess→messy 杂乱的
hunger→hungry 饥饿的
anger→angry 生气的
sun→sunny 晴朗的
fog→foggy 有雾的
guilt→guilty 内疚的;
thirst→thirsty 渴的;渴望的;
dirt→dirty 脏的
dust→dusty 布满尘土的;
mist→misty 有雾的
frost→frosty 结霜的;
salt→salty 咸的
greed→greedy 贪吃的;贪婪的
wind→windy 有风的
cloud→cloudy 多云的
snow→snowy 有雪的
storm→stormy 暴风雨的
sleep→sleepy 困的
creep→creepy 令人毛骨悚然的
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