Unit 3 Fascinating Parks Using Language 写作课件-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册

UNIT 3 FASCINATING PARKS 本单元主题涉及“旅游”，属于人与自然的主题语境。命制读后续写时，多以旅游遇险类为主，前文一般会描写主人公出行去到自然环境中游玩，然后在游玩过程中遇险或迷路，作为下文续写的伏笔。续写部分往往是关于在他人的帮助下如何成功走出困境和感情或意义的升华。这种形式的命题旨在引导学生学会多元交流，培养处理问题解决问题的能力，使学生意识到沉着冷静处理问题的重要性。 [命题导向] 写作课件——教考衔接 续 写 读 主题——旅游 后 3 构建语义场 01 4 1. to one’s delight/joy　　　　 令人高兴的是 2. can’t wait to do 等不及要去做…… 3. tremble with excitement 激动地发抖 4. take one’s breath away 令人惊叹 5. one’s eyes sparkle/dance/shine/twinkle with excitement 眼里闪烁着激动的光芒 外出游玩 6. On the journey to the lake, a wave of excitement/thrill spread through my body. 在去湖边的路上，一股兴奋/激动的情绪在我的身体里蔓延开来。 7. As it was the first time that we had a picnic in the open air, our faces were flushed with happiness. 由于这是我们第一次在户外野餐，我们高兴得脸红了。 8. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we danced in excitement. 呼吸着新鲜的空气，闻着美味的食物，我们兴奋地手舞足蹈。 外出游玩 1. sit on pins and needles 如坐针毡 2. (have) butterflies in stomach 忐忑不安 3. be seized with panic 惊慌失措 4. like ants on a hot pan 像热锅上的蚂蚁 5. one’s heart in one’s mouth 心提到嗓子眼 6. one’s heart beat wildly with fear 心吓得怦怦跳 途中遇险或迷路 7. pace restlessly up and down 不安地踱来踱去 8. feel one’s throat tight and one’s mouth dry 感到喉咙发紧，嘴发干 9. I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees weak. 我感到很害怕，嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。 10. His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled. 他的心狂跳着，两腿发抖。 途中遇险或迷路 1. to one’s relief 使某人宽慰的是 2. thanks to timely help 幸亏及时相助 3. breathe a sigh of relief/gasp with relief 松了一口气 4. feel a surge of relief 如释重负 5. Tears of appreciation welling up in her eyes, she thanked the driver for his help, but he just smiled warmly. 当她感谢司机的帮助时，感激的泪水涌上了她的眼睛，但他只是热情地笑了笑。 他人相助脱险 6. When I heard this, a mixture of warmth and relief welled up in my deep heart. 当我听到这句话时，一种温暖和宽慰的感觉涌上了我的内心深处。 7. I felt a wave of warmth flooded into my heart, tears flowing down my cheeks without control. 我感到一股暖流涌上心头，泪水不由自主地顺着脸颊流了下来。 他人相助脱险 1. Frightened and tired as I was, I congratulated myself on returning safe and sound. My brother and I harvested a meaningful exploration and really spent a brand new weekend. 尽管我感到害怕和疲惫，但我还是庆幸自己平安无恙地回来了。我哥哥和我进行了一次有意义的探索，并真正度过了一个全新的周末。 2. With the sun rising over the horizon, John’s face was lit up with gratitude. 随着太阳从地平线上升起，约翰的脸上充满了感激之情。 美好结局 依据提示补全下列语段 语境片段训练 02 12 Early before the summer vacation, we have planned our journey to Dunhuang and booked our accommodations on the Internet. The moment we arrived at the hotel, we immediately unloaded the luggage and ①  (迫不及待地想去探索这座城市)．We paid a visit to the incredible Mogao Grottoes, ②  (它令人惊奇的景色很快就让我们叹为观止)．③  (最让我们兴奋的是) was the exceptional artistic skill exhibited in the murals and sculptures. ④  (我们的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒), walking in Mogao Grottoes is just like wandering into a fairy tale. Thinking of the great wisdom and techniques reflected in it, ⑤  (我激动得泪水夺眶而出)． couldn’t wait to explore the city whose amazing sight soon took our breath away What excited us most Our eyes shining with excitement tears of thrill welled up in my eyes (兴奋→激动) 1 出游及感受 13 2 遇险、迷路 (紧张→恐惧) After a big argument with her husband, despite still travelling, Jane ①  (向一片森林走去). At night, Jane, extremely frightened by the darkness, was thrown into panic, ②  (吓得双手发抖). ③  (心怦怦直跳), she attempted to force herself to keep calm by recalling the sweet moment. But just at that moment, a cat jumped out of the woods, which made her ④  (吓得僵住了)． headed for a forest her hands shaking with fear With her heart beating wildly freeze with terror 14 With mountains wrapped in mist, we headed off, enjoying the surrounding beauty, but ①  (风暴迅速袭来), quickly interrupting our pleasant morning trip. The wind picked up and thunder rolled. My husband stopped fishing to start the motor, but in vain. It was at that time that ②   (一位刚好经过的渔夫设法帮我们) back to the harbor and ③  (一股暖流涌上了我们的心头). ④ (被他所做的一切深深地感动), I thanked him again and again ⑤  (眼泪顺着脸颊流下来). My husband held his hand, saying with gratitude, “⑥  (我们对你感激不尽).” storms moved in fast a fisherman who happened to pass by managed to help us a warm current welled up in our hearts Deeply moved/touched by what he had done with tears rolling down my cheeks We can't thank you enough (宽慰→感激) 3 他人相助脱险 15 根据提示构思、续写语段 续写构思训练 03 16 前情概述：在我的童年时代，我对大自然非常着迷，甚至在花园里丰富多彩的花丛中玩也能成为我的一天。我们的房子紧挨着树林，树林一直引起我极大的好奇，想知道里面有什么。但是妈妈总是提醒我不能独自进入森林。 17 场景1：然而，一天早上，好奇心战胜了我。我独自一人走进森林，我被森林里的一切所吸引，越走越远，然后发现迷路了，我害怕极了。 (重点描写森林美景和如何迷路) However,curiosity got the better of me one morning. • • 18 场景2：我听到了妈妈的声音，我跑过去激动地抱住她。她安慰并鼓励我，让我感受到她的陪伴。 (注意动作描写和对话描写) “Kate？” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. 19 I gathered my courage and decided to take a chance. Hardly had I entered the woods when I was totally attracted by the sight. The wandering clouds, the blooming flowers and the tall trees all kept me fascinated. At the sight of a beautiful butterfly, I tiptoed along the path, bent over, cupped my hands gently and danced with it down the track. Time flew and before I knew it, I was deep in the woods, unable to find the way out. With a feeling of horror totally holding me in its power, I squatted down under a tree, tears rolling down my cheeks. However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. 【参考范文】 20 Hearing my mom’s voice, I yelled back, rushed towards her direction and threw my arms around her. Noticing my misty eyes, she patted me on the shoulders and checked whether I got hurt. Choked with emotion, I whispered, “I am OK, Mom. I will never go into the woods without your company and permission.” Shooting me an approving look, she added, “Next time you want to come, keep me informed!” Wiping tears from my muddy face, she repeated the reminders, which weren’t boring any more, but wise and affectionate, and were implanted in my life forever. “Kate?” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. 21 Thank you for your listening and watching 感谢您的观看 22 $$