2026届高考英语一轮复习：读后续写1 课件

高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 lesson 1 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 读后续写题型即提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文 选材特点 (1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内; (2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 评分时,应从内容、语言(词汇、语法)和结构三个方面考虑 1.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容: (1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度; (2)内容的丰富性(细节描写:外貌、心理、语言、动作、表情、环境); (3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性; (4)上下文的连贯性(注意与前文内容以及所给出句子的上下文连贯)。 2.注意: (1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右; (2)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 3.评分时还应注意: (1)词数少于120的,酌情扣分。 (2)书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分(高考阅卷平均每篇作文10s) 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 复习回顾:遇到一篇读后续写,我们需要读哪些要素呢?我们可以从哪些角度进行思考呢? 人物 情节 环境 主旨 内容 语法 结构 有谁? 人物身份?人物关系? 叙述视角? 人物描写? problem? solution? 自然环境 人文环境 (即故事背景) 季节 天气 ... 时间 地点 ... 体现了什么情感特质/道理 关键词呼应 使用连词 是否符合逻辑? 词 句 n. adv. (句中、句首) adj. v.(谓语动词) prep.(with) 非谓语动词 时态 语态 主谓一致 (外貌、语言、动作、心理、神态) 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 复习回顾:遇到一篇读后续写,我们需要读哪些要素呢?我们可以从哪些角度进行思考呢? 人物 情节 环境 主旨 内容 语法 结构 problem? solution? 自然环境 人文环境 (即故事背景) 季节 天气 ... 时间 地点 ... 体现了什么情感特质/道理 关键词呼应 使用连词 是否符合逻辑? 词 句 n. adv. (句中、句首) adj. v.(谓语动词) prep.(with) 非谓语动词 时态 语态 主谓一致 作主语/宾语 作定语 作状语 并列句 主从复合句 倒装句 强调句 虚拟语气 状从 定从 宾从 表从 同位从 主从 有谁? 人物身份?人物关系? 叙述视角? 人物描写? (外貌、语言、动作、心理、神态) 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 情景导入:观看视频,思考故事接下来会发生什么 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 情景导入:从人物和情节两个要素,归纳视频的写作要点 人物 David Julie (夫妻) Jennifer(秘书) (poor) 情节 problem solution? (需要续写的内容) 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 情景导入:观看原文的结尾,归纳视频的主旨(情感特质) 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 Julie stood in front of the mirror, her hands shaking slightly as she adjusted David's tie. The suit, which was too big for her, made her look a bit comical, but the determined look in her eyes betrayed her resolve. Her phone buzzed, and a text from Jennifer, David's secretary, lit up the screen: "Everything's set." On the other side of the city, David was standing in a long line outside the church, waiting for free breakfast. His shirt cuffs were frayed, and his hands trembled as he tried to smooth them out. To keep up the appearance of a successful businessman, he had secretly sold off family heirlooms to pay Jennifer's salary. When David returned home that day, he noticed his grandfather's precious watch was missing. Julie, acting nonchalant, suggested he might have misplaced it while washing his hands. But David's suspicion was piqued. That night, after David fell asleep, Julie slipped out of the house. David woke up in the middle of the night to an empty bed. Checking his tracking app, he was shocked to see Julie's location was at his office. Panicking, he quickly put on his last decent suit and rushed there. Peering through the office window, David was stunned. There was Julie, wearing his clothes and a mask, presenting their business plan to a group of investors in fluent Korean. Jennifer stood guard outside the door, and when she saw David, she put a finger to her lips, signaling him to be quiet. "She's been doing this for you every night," Jennifer whispered. Paragraph 1 David stood outside the door, watching her chatting with the investors. Paragraph 2 Three days later, the office elevator doors opened to reveal a group of well-dressed people. They were the investors, coming to officially start the cooperation. 牛刀小试:根据所给的句子,完成续写 (注意这里的改编情节,没有说是在线上还是在线下) 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 第一篇习作:加强学生进行心理描写的意识 作文书写要求: 1、整齐>美观 2、使用0.5mm黑色水笔书写 3、尽量避免书写错误,错误单词不要涂黑!一条横线划掉后重新书写在旁边 4、写满横线格 写大纲: P1: 1. (根据P1段落第一句话)进行心理、动作、自然环境描写 2. ; 3. ; 4. ; 5. (根据P2段落第一句话)进行心理、动作、语言描写等 P2: 1. (根据P2段落第一句话)进行心理、动作、自然环境描写 2. ; 3. ; 4. 结局(紧贴文章基调,解决需求) ; 5. 升华 (体现主旨) ; 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 Paragraph 1 David stood outside the door, watching her chatting with the investors. Paragraph 2 Three days later, the office elevator doors opened to reveal a group of well-dressed people. They were the investors, coming to officially start the cooperation. David难以置信、心情复杂 (心理) investors很欣赏这对夫妻的实力,决定三天后来投资(与后文呼应) Julie安慰David,鼓励一起努力(语言) investors从电梯里走出来,夫妻共同迎接(动作) 会议里探讨business plan 主旨升华:夫妻同心,其利断金 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 David stood outside the door, watching her chatting with the investors. He couldn't believe Julie had seen through his disguise all along—— he was on the verge of bankruptcy. His mind was in turmoil. On one hand, he felt grateful and relieved that their financial situation had been turned around thanks to Julie's help. On the other hand, he was consumed by self-reproach and guilt. As a man, he had failed so miserably in business that he couldn't provide his wife with the ideal life. Upon the meeting's conclusion, the investors exited the room and told David, "After hearing your business plan, we admire the love and capability of your couple. We will invite you for formal cooperation in three days." Julie then stepped closer to David, her eyes brimming with love and understanding. "For better, for worse, for rich or for poor, I will always be your reliable support. Everything will work out, let's make this work." Three days later, the office elevator doors opened to reveal a group of investors who came to officially start the cooperation. David and Julie stood side by side, greeting them with confident smiles. During the meeting, Julie presented their future plans first, and David added his insights from time to time. The investors were deeply impressed by their teamwork and detailed strategy. After the meeting, the lead investor declared, "We are delighted to partner with such a harmonious and capable couple. Your joint efforts will surely lead to great success." David and Julie exchanged a glance, their eyes filled with hope and happiness. The true value of a couple lies in one supporting the other when either feels tired or helpless. Love is a dance for two, requiring mutual cooperation. 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 David stood outside the door, watching her chatting with the investors. He couldn't believe Julie had seen through his disguise all along—— he was on the verge of bankruptcy. His mind was in turmoil. On one hand, he felt grateful and relieved that their financial situation had been turned around thanks to Julie's help. On the other hand, he was consumed by self-reproach and guilt. As a man, he had failed so miserably in business that he couldn't provide his wife with the ideal life. Upon the meeting's conclusion, the investors exited the room and told David, "After hearing your business plan, we admire the love and capability of your couple. We will invite you for formal cooperation in three days." Julie then stepped closer to David, her eyes brimming with love and understanding. "For better, for worse, for rich or for poor, I will always be your reliable support. Everything will work out, let's make this work." Three days later, the office elevator doors opened to reveal a group of investors who came to officially start the cooperation. David and Julie stood side by side, greeting them with confident smiles. During the meeting, Julie presented their future plans first, and David added his insights from time to time. The investors were deeply impressed by their teamwork and detailed strategy. After the meeting, the lead investor declared, "We are delighted to partner with such a harmonious and capable couple. Your joint efforts will surely lead to great success." David and Julie exchanged a glance, their eyes filled with hope and happiness. The true value of a couple lies in one supporting the other when either feels tired or helpless. Love is a dance for two, requiring mutual cooperation. David站在门外,看着她与投资者们交谈甚欢。他简直不敢相信,原来Julie早就看穿了他的伪装——他几乎濒临破产。他内心一片混乱。一方面,他感激又庆幸,多亏了Julie的帮助,他们的财务状况才得以好转。另一方面,他自责又愧疚。作为一个男人,他在生意上如此一事无成,没能让妻子过上她理想的生活。会议结束后,投资者们走出房间,对David说:“听了你们的商业计划后,我们很钦佩你们这对夫妻之间的感情以及你们的能力。三天后,我们会邀请你们来正式开展合作。” 接着,Julie朝David走近了些,眼中满是爱意与理解。“无论境遇好坏,贫穷富有,我永远都是你可靠的后盾。一切都会顺利的,我们一起努力把这件事做好。” 三天后,办公室的电梯门打开,出现了一群前来正式开启合作的投资者。David和Julie并肩而立,面带自信的微笑迎接他们。在会议期间,Julie首先展示了他们未来的计划,David不时地补充自己的见解。投资者们对他们的团队合作精神以及详尽的策略印象深刻。会议结束后,首席投资者说道:“我们很高兴能与这样一对和谐且有能力的夫妻合作。你们的共同努力必定会带来巨大的成功。” David和Julie对视了一眼,他们的眼中充满了希望与幸福。夫妻的真正价值在于,当其中一方感到疲惫或无助时,另一方能够给予支持和鼓励。爱情就像是一场双人舞,需要彼此相互配合 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 2025高二上衡水大联考 Upon learning I had been exchanged to Bethlehem Catholic High School in America, I was excited. After much effort, I was ready for a fantastic experience, expecting to be the most popular girl with my lively personality and outstanding academic performance. However, the reality was totally different from what I had thought. My arrival in a foreign country was met with language barriers, cultural shock and a completely different lifestyle.Besides, the academic challenges were huge, and the combination of all these factors made it incredibly difficult for me to make friends. In contrast, Maisy, a Brazilian student, effortlessly adapted, her cheerful laughter and warm smile drawing classmates to her. She seemed to light up every room she entered, always surrounded by admirers. I longed to connect with her but was held back by my lack of courage and fear of rejection. I often wondered how she broke through the barriers and got on so well with others. One day, when a costume ball was announced, I was excited and saw it as an opportunity to stand out. I chose a Zorro costume, aiming to appear attractive. Besides, I practiced my dance moves, anticipating the night when I could shine with grace and confidence. The big day finally came. I arrived at the venue full of expectations. The atmosphere was electric, but I was unprepared for the sight of everyone paired with dance partners, their laughter and conversations creating a symphony of joy that seemed to exclude me. I stood there,feeling like an outsider in my own story. As the music started and couples filled the dance floor, I found myself standing alone in the corner. My practiced moves were forgotten, and my confidence weakened with each passing moment. 巩固练习: 加强“心理描写”的意识 P1 It was at that moment that I felt Maisy's eyes on me P2 The costume ball provided a good opportunity for our friendship 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 P1 It was at that moment that I felt Maisy's eyes on me P2 The costume ball provided a good opportunity for our friendship 人物 我和Maisy(人物关系:I longed to connect with her but was held back by my lack of courage and fear of rejection) 情节 环境 Problem: ①language barriers, cultural shock , a completely different lifestyle, academic challenges ②I was unprepared for the sight of everyone paired with dance partners foreign country(异国他乡之处) -感到孤独、想交朋友 why? 我忐忑不安-我难以置信-我重拾信心 Maisy看着我-Maisy邀请我-两人一起走上舞台 两个不是很熟的人,有了共同的经历,活动结束后会干什么? -加对方的联系方式 -成为朋友 -language barriers, cultural shock 总结: 异国他乡之处,我并不孤独 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 It was at that moment that I felt Maisy's eyes on me. She walked towards me and asked gently, "Dance together?" wearing a big smile on her face. Initially, I was struck with disbelief. The thought that someone as popular as Maisy would single me out for a dance seemed like a dream. However, soon after, a wave/flood of surprise and relief washed over me/overwhelmed me/surged in my heart. "Really? Let's go to the centre to dance together!" I said, with my voice tinged with excitement. Hand in hand, we stepped onto the dance floor. At that moment, it was as if all the self-doubt and awkwardness that plagued me melted away. The laughter and conversation around us seemingly created an atmosphere, which really welcomed me, who shone with newfound confidence. We danced gracefully at the ball and our happiness filled the whole room. The costume ball provided a good opportunity for our friendship. We exchanged our phone numbers finally and became good friends. Language barriers and cultural differences, once perceived as solid walls, melted in the glow of shared joy and mutual respect. From then on, the moment I recalled the scene that Maisy invited me to dance together, I couldn't hold back my tears. I knew, I was no longer alone in this area. This experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my life. Nothing would be able to erase the wonderful memory, and I will cherish them forever. 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 It was at that moment that I felt Maisy's eyes on me. She walked towards me and asked gently, "Dance together?" wearing a big smile on her face. Initially, I was struck with disbelief. The thought that someone as popular as Maisy would single me out for a dance seemed like a dream. However, soon after, a wave/flood of surprise and relief washed over me/overwhelmed me/surged in my heart. "Really? Let's go to the centre to dance together!" I said, with my voice tinged with excitement. Hand in hand, we stepped onto the dance floor. At that moment, it was as if all the self-doubt and awkwardness that plagued me melted away. The laughter and conversation around us seemingly created an atmosphere, which really welcomed me, who shone with newfound confidence. We danced gracefully at the ball and our happiness filled the whole room. The costume ball provided a good opportunity for our friendship. We exchanged our phone numbers finally and became good friends. Language barriers and cultural differences, once perceived as solid walls, melted in the glow of shared joy and mutual respect. From then on, the moment I recalled the scene that Maisy invited me to dance together, I couldn't hold back my tears. I knew, I was no longer alone in this area. This experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my life. Nothing would be able to erase the wonderful memory, and I will cherish them forever. 就在那一刻,我感觉到Maisy的目光落在我身上。她面带灿烂笑容,朝我走来,温柔地问道:“一起跳舞吗?”起初,我简直不敢相信。像Maisy这么受欢迎的人居然单单挑中我一起跳舞,这感觉就像做梦一样。然而,没过多久,一阵惊喜与释然涌上心头。“真的吗?那我们去舞池中央跳吧!”我说道,声音中带着兴奋。我们手牵着手,步入舞池。就在那一刻,仿佛所有一直困扰着我的自我怀疑和局促不安都烟消云散了。环绕在我们周围的欢声笑语和交谈声似乎营造出一种很欢迎我的氛围,而我闪耀着新生的自信。我们在舞会上优雅地跳舞,整个房间都洋溢着我们的快乐。 这场化装舞会为我们的友谊提供了绝佳契机。最后我们交换了电话号码,成为了好朋友。语言障碍和文化差异,曾经被视为坚不可摧的高墙,在共享的欢乐和相互尊重的光辉中逐渐消融。从那时起,每当我回想起Maisy邀请我共舞的场景,都不禁热泪盈眶。我知道,在这里,我不再孤单。这段经历就像一朵永不凋零的花,在我生命的长河中绽放。没有什么能够抹去这些美好的回忆,我会永远珍视它们。 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter. This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice. One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight in shining armor.” He was smiling and responding in pride, looking back at her as if to say, “You got that right.” The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy eight children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.” The ticket lady gave the price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lips began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say?” The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didn’t have enough money. How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus? Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them. Paragraph 1 Seeing what was going on, Paragraph 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. 经典篇目: 帮助他人 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 人物 情节 两家人,在马戏团门口买票 另外一家人对于今晚的马戏团表演十分期待,但是钱不够,陷入了进退两难的境地 problem Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them. Paragraph 1 Seeing what was going on, Paragraph 2 That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. 谁可能来解决这个problem?- My father and I 怎么帮? 直接把钱给他? -人家一家十口人都在这,未必有些太伤自尊 -委婉、巧妙地把钱给到对方手里 我们没去看马戏团,回家了,我们可以续写什么内容?-心理、语言描写 主旨:帮助他人 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 Seeing what was going on , my father silently reached into his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill that was intended for our own tickets, and dropped it on the ground. And then he pulled the father ' s clothes and said ," Sir , it must be your money ." The father caught sight of it , a look of surprise and confusion appearing on his face . Wearing a smile , my father picked up the money , put it into the man ' s hand and smiled at him as if to say ," Take it to buy the tickets ."The man bit his lower lip to keep it from trembling , tears filling his eyes , and he opened his mouth as if he wanted to say something but it didn ' t come out . That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets . On the way home, I asked my father, “Dad, why did you do that? We won’t be able to see the circus now.” My father smiled gently and replied, “The joy and excitement on those children’s faces are more valuable than any circus show. Helping others makes us truly rich inside.” Soon, the scene that the eight children were excitedly watching the clowns , elephants, and other acts kept flashing through my mind . Something essential changed inside me. At that moment, I looked at my father , who seemed to be a knight in shining armor .(此处为原文关键词呼应) 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 第二段 版本二 (常规主旨升华) That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets . On the way home, I asked my father, “Dad, why did you do that? We won’t be able to see the circus now.” My father smiled gently and replied, “The joy and excitement on those children’s faces are more valuable than any circus show. Helping others makes us truly rich inside.”I nodded, feeling a warmth spreading through my heart. From that day on, I understood the real meaning of kindness and generosity. Every time I think of that incident, I am reminded of the lesson my father taught me – the greatest happiness comes from bringing smiles to others’ faces. 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 It was a stormy night in July. The wind howled (呼啸) like a wild beast, and the rain poured down, hitting the windows with a deafening noise. The thunder crashed overhead and the lightning cut the sky, casting horrible shadows. I was held up(停顿) in the train station; my heart filled with a mixture of anxiety and desperation. My train had been cancelled without any notice due to the severe weather, and I had no idea how I was going to get home. I stood there, shaking uncontrollably in the cold. My clothes were completely wet, and my hair was dripping(滴水), sticking to my face. I crazily looked around for any sign of hope, but the station was almost deserted, and the few travellers seemed as helpless and lost as I was. Just when I was on the edge of complete hopelessness, a kind voice got through the darkness.“Hey, do you need a ride?” I turned to see a woman in a car, her face partly hidden in the weak light. Her name was Emily. I hurriedly explained my trouble to her, detailing the cancelled train and my worry about getting home safely in this terrifying storm. Without a moment ’s hesitation, she invited me into her car. As we set off through the stormy streets, the windshield wipers (雨刷器) working crazily to keep the view clear, I learned that she was on her way home from visiting a friend and happened to spot me at the station .“I couldn ’t just leave you there,”she said. But our journey was far from smooth. The roads were flooded in multiple areas, and Emily ’s car struggled to go ahead. At one point, we encountered a fallen tree blocking the road. Emily had to turn back and find another route, but every route seemed to lead to more challenges. Frustration built up inside her as she drove through the flooding streets, each turn feeling like a step further from her destination. 情节的跌宕起伏: 暴风雨之夜的求救 Paragraph 1: Then suddenly, to make matters worse, the car came to a shaking stop. Paragraph 2: The roadside assistance workers arrived after a seemingly endless wait. 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 Paragraph 1: Then suddenly, to make matters worse, the car came to a shaking stop. Paragraph 2: The roadside assistance workers arrived after a seemingly endless wait. 人物 情节 环境 我和Emily (人物关系:两个陌生人在车站偶遇) Problem: The roads were flooded in multiple areas, and Emily ’s car struggled to go ahead. At one point, we encountered a fallen tree blocking the road. Emily had to turn back and find another route, but every route seemed to lead to more challenges. severe weather:风雨交加、电闪雷鸣 + 道路崎岖、不好开车 发生了什么让车子shaking stop? 求救 (和下文呼应) 我们得到救援,心里很感动 总结升华:帮助他人/收获友谊 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 Then suddenly, to make matters worse, the car came to a shaking stop. Seeing this made my heart sink . We were stuck in the middle of nowhere, with the storm showing no signs of weakening. Panic took hold of me, and I couldn’t help asking myself, “How would we survive this terrible situation?” Emily, though visibly concerned, remained calm and said in a firm tone, “we need to call for roadside assistance.” But unfortunately, they informed us that due to the widespread damage caused by the storm, it would take hours for them to reach us. We sat in the car with gloomy looks on our faces, and the silence was broken by the howling wind and the pouring rain at times. Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce, we didn't lose hope of surviving. The roadside assistance workers arrived after a seemingly endless wait. Not long afterwards, with their expertise/professional knowledge, we managed to get the car running again. We signed with relief and smiles shone on our faces. When we finally reached my house, I thanked Emily from the bottom of my heart and invited her to come into my house. I tried to give her some money for the costs of calling for roadside assistance, but she firmly refused. When the early sunlight streamed in and laughter lingered around us, “Let’s just be friends and enjoy this cup of coffee.” she said, with her eyes glittering a tinge of happiness. ①After all that happened, it eventually dawned on me that I had harvested a wonderful friendship. This experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my life. ②Not only did that experience test my courage and perseverance, but it also helped me to harvest a wonderful friendship. ③The precious companionship between me and Emily was like a beautiful melody, echoing in every corner of my house and enriching my heart with warmth of shared moments. 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 接着,突然更糟糕的是,车子剧烈摇晃着停了下来。看到这一幕,我的心沉了下去。我们被困在荒郊野外,暴风雨丝毫没有减弱的迹象。我陷入了恐慌,忍不住问自己:“我们要如何在这种糟糕的情况下生存下来?”Emily虽然明显很担忧,但她保持着冷静,语气坚定地说:“我们得打电话叫道路救援。”但不幸的是,他们通知我们,由于暴风雨造成了大面积的破坏,他们要几个小时才能赶到我们这里。我们坐在车里,脸上神情沮丧,寂静时不时被呼啸的风和倾盆大雨打破。尽管天气恶劣,风依然猛烈,但我们没有失去求生的希望。 在似乎无尽的等待后,道路救援人员终于到了。没过多久,凭借他们的专业知识,我们的车又能开动了。我们如释重负地松了口气,脸上露出了笑容。当我们最终到达我家时,我从心底感谢Emily,并邀请她进我家。我想给她一些钱,补偿她叫道路救援的费用,但她坚决拒绝了。当清晨的阳光洒进来,我们周围回荡着欢声笑语时,她眼睛闪烁着一丝幸福的光芒说:“我们就做朋友,一起享受这杯咖啡吧。”①经历了这一切后,我终于意识到我收获了一段美好的友谊。这次经历就像一朵永恒绽放的花朵,在我的生命长河中盛开。②那次经历不仅考验了我的勇气和毅力,还帮助我收获了一段美好的友谊。③我和Emily之间珍贵的情谊就像一段美妙的旋律,在我家的每个角落回荡,那些共同度过的温暖时光充盈着我的内心。 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 版本二(学生佳作) Then suddenly, to make matters worse, the car came to a shaking stop. A huge crash struck our ears. I looked around in panic, only to find that a tree had fallen on the top of the car. The tense atmosphere reached its peak — I could seemingly hear my heartbeat in my ears! Realising that we couldn't continue driving away, Emily contacted the roadside assistance workers and described our location and situation to them. Afterwards, we were immersed in a long waiting period — every minute felt like a century. The roadside assistance workers arrived after a seemingly endless wait. Nervousness and fear were replaced with hope in my heart. "Here." we waved our hands to them. Relief flooded through us as the workers led us to a nearby shelter. I turned to the workers and Emily, gratitude welling up inside me. "If it hadn't been for your help, I might have been in a quandary where I couldn't even go back home!" I said. Considering the severe weather condition, Emily and I decided to set off the next morning. When the sunlight fell on the floor, we went back home respectively. Having ridden this emotional rollercoaster, I learnt that helping people was what life was all about. 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 突然,更糟糕的是,车子剧烈摇晃着停了下来。一声巨大的撞击声传入我们耳中。我惊慌地环顾四周,发现一棵树倒在了车顶上。紧张的气氛达到了顶点——我似乎都能听到自己的心跳声!意识到我们无法继续开车离开后,Emily联系了道路救援人员,并向他们描述了我们的位置和情况。之后,我们陷入了漫长的等待——每一分钟都像是一个世纪那么漫长。 在似乎无尽的等待后,道路救援人员终于到了。我心中的紧张和恐惧被希望所取代。“这边。”我们向他们挥手。当救援人员把我们带到附近的一个避难所时,我们如释重负。我转向救援人员和Emily,心中涌起一股感激之情。“如果没有你们的帮助,我可能会陷入一个甚至回不了家的困境!”我说。考虑到恶劣的天气状况,Emily和我决定第二天早上再出发。当阳光洒在地面上时,我们各自回了家。经历了这场情绪的过山车后,我明白了帮助他人就是生活的意义所在。 高考英语一轮复习:读后续写 $$