读后续写--从旧衣到新装：一场爱的接力 讲义-四川省江油中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期中检测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。

Nupur walked along the road with a sad look on her face. Tomorrow was her friend Neeta's birthday but she did not have anything nice to wear to the party. Her father's small factory had closed down and there was hardly any money left at home to buy a new dress.

Nupur decided to wear an old dress that had been her favorite for many years but was a little too short for her now. “I will ask the tailor to lengthen it,” Nupur said to herself. The tailor however refused to do so. "I don’t take such work right now since the orders have started pouring

in and my hands are full."

Nupur left holding the bag with the dress in it and thought, “What am I to do?” Suddenly she saw a lady get out of the car and walk towards the bank. The lady opened her handbag to take out some papers but her wallet fell to the ground. Unaware of it, the lady went into the bank. Nupur ran and picked up the wallet. There were so many people in the bank that she decided to wait on the steps.

After a long time the lady came out. Nupur handed her the wallet that she had dropped. The lady could not believe it. The little girl had been waiting for her for so long, just to give back the wallet. The lady looked at the contents and everything was just the way she had left it. She looked at the girl's old and dirty clothes. "What is your name and where are you going? Can I drop you home?" The lady asked. Nupur told the lady that she was going home. She also said that she had been to the tailor to get a dress tailored to wear for her friend's birthday party but the tailor had refused to do so and that her father was jobless.

注意:

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

The lady looked at the dress with visible dirty spots.________________________________

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In the evening, Nupur went to the lady's home to get her old dress back.________________

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一、续写分析​

第一段续写分析

第一段以女士注视 Nupur 带脏污的裙子为起点，可从情感触动与行动展开。女士被 Nupur 拾金不昧的品质打动，同时对她的困境心生怜悯。她可能主动提出帮助 Nupur 改造裙子，利用自己的人脉联系裁缝加急处理，或者凭借自身的手工技艺亲自修改。在对话中，女士会进一步了解 Nupur 的家庭状况，给予安慰与鼓励，传递善良与温暖的力量。例如，女士带 Nupur 到裁缝店，与裁缝沟通时强调 Nupur 的诚实品质，说服裁缝优先处理；或者女士带 Nupur 回家，找出针线，一边缝补裙子一边分享自己克服困难的经历，让 Nupur 明白困境只是暂时的 ，这些情节既能展现人物间的情感交流，又能推动故事发展，为后文埋下伏笔。​

第二段续写分析

第二段从 Nupur 晚上去女士家取裙子展开。当 Nupur 到达时，她会惊讶地发现裙子不仅被精心修改得合身，还可能添加了漂亮的装饰，焕然一新。女士会借此机会鼓励 Nupur 不要因家庭暂时的困难而自卑，要保持善良和积极的心态。同时，女士或许会送给 Nupur 一份额外的小礼物，如发卡或手链，作为对她美好品德的奖励。在后续的生日派对上，Nupur 穿着新裙子自信登场，收获朋友们的赞美，而她也会将这份善良传递给他人，如帮助派对上遇到困难的小朋友。整个段落通过 Nupur 的经历，展现善良带来的美好回报，以及人与人之间善意传递的温暖力量，深化故事主旨。​

二、故事线​

拾金不昧引发善意：Nupur 归还钱包，女士被其诚实打动，主动帮助她解决生日裙难题。​

裙子改造的波折与惊喜：从裁缝拒绝到女士帮忙改造，裙子从破旧到焕然一新的过程。​

情感交流与成长：Nupur 与女士的对话中，得到鼓励，学会积极面对家庭困境。​

善意的传递：Nupur 穿着新裙子参加生日派对，将善良传递给身边的人。​

困境中的希望：Nupur 家庭虽困难，但因自身的善良收获温暖，对未来充满希望。

三、短语​

pour in（大量涌入）​

pick up（捡起）​

be unaware of（未意识到）​

hand back（归还）​

look at...with pity（怜悯地看着……）​

make ends meet（收支相抵）​

be full of gratitude（充满感激）​

give sb. a hand（帮助某人）​

cheer sb. up（使某人振作）​

transform into（转变为）​

brighten up（使变亮；使愉快）​

pass on（传递）​

face difficulties bravely（勇敢面对困难）​

hold on to hope（坚守希望）​

overcome hardship（克服困难）​

四、主旨升华句​

A small act of honesty can light up someone's life and bring unexpected kindness.（一个小小的诚实举动可以照亮他人的生活，带来意想不到的善意。）​

In the face of adversity, kindness and integrity are the most precious treasures that can lead us out of the darkness.（在逆境中，善良和正直是最珍贵的宝藏，能引领我们走出黑暗。）​

When we selflessly help others, we not only warm their hearts but also create a cycle of love that enriches our own lives.（当我们无私地帮助他人时，不仅温暖了他们的心，还创造了一个爱的循环，丰富了我们自己的生活。）​

Even in the toughest times, a glimmer of hope can shine through if we stay true to our good nature.（即使在最艰难的时刻，如果我们保持善良的本性，希望的曙光也会照亮前路。）​

True beauty lies not in expensive clothes but in the goodness of the heart, which can make ordinary things extraordinary.（真正的美不在于昂贵的衣服，而在于内心的善良，它能让平凡变得非凡。）​

五、写作示范​

示范一​

Nupur walked along the road with a sad look on her face. Tomorrow was her friend Neeta's birthday but she did not have anything nice to wear to the party. Her father's small