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1.(23-24八年级下·天津河北·期末)推荐自己 1
2.(23-24八年级下·天津和平·期末)介绍夏令营 3
3.(23-24八年级下·天津河西·期末)帮他人解决这些问题 5
4.(23-24八年级下·天津红桥·期末)介绍中国传统节日——端午节 7
5.(23-24八年级下·天津·期末)一篇日记 9
6.(23-24八年级下·天津西青·期末)介绍自己的爱好 10
7.(23-24八年级下·天津南开·期末)夏令营中的一些活动和收获 12
8.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)推荐一处中国的旅游景点 14
9.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)介绍学校的假期对外汉语课程 16
10.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)International Day of Friendship 17
11.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)An unforgettable experience 19
12.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)给交换生代表Mark写一封邮件 21
13.(23-24八年级下·浙江温州·期末)最优暑假计划 23
14.(23-24八年级下·浙江温州·期末)分享你学习 Hobbies之后的所获与所思 25
15.(23-24八年级下·浙江金华·期末)One Thing I’m Proud of 26
16.(23-24八年级下·浙江金华·期末)家乡变化 28
17.(23-24八年级下·安徽淮南·期末)Reading Has Really Changed Me 30
18.(23-24八年级下·安徽安庆·期末)真实的自我 31
1.(23-24八年级下·天津河北·期末)
假如你是李华, 你校英语校刊要招聘学生记者, 你想要加入。请你用英语给校报的负责人王老师写一封电子邮件推荐自己。
内容要点:
(1) 你和师生相处融洽, 在学校交了很多朋友。
(2) 你擅长英语, 在伦敦参加过暑期英语课程。
(3) 你还喜欢英语写作, 写作给你带来快乐和成功。
(4) 你多次参加英语比赛, 并获得过一等奖。
(5) 你希望 ……
要求:
(1) 词数: 70~90 词。
(2) 邮件格式 、开头及结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply (答复).
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’m glad to know that you’re looking for the student reporters. I think I’m the right person. I get along well with teachers and students and I make many friends in school. I am good at English and took a summer English course in London. I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success. I have taken part in many English contests and won the first prize. I like sports, too. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. I hope to be a student reporter for the English school newspaper.
I’m looking forward to your early reply (答复).
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为一般现在时;
③提示:写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己在学校的人际关系,与师生相处融洽;
第二步,介绍自己的英语能力和对英语的态度;
第三步,表达想要当选学生记者的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with 与……相处融洽
②be good at 擅长……
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I get along well with teachers and students and I make many friends in school.(and连接的并列句)
②I also like English writing, which brings me happiness and success.(which引导的定语从句)
③If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.(if引导的状语从句)
2.(23-24八年级下·天津和平·期末)
假如你是李华,这个暑假你的笔友Tony要来中国参加夏令营,请你根据表格内容做介绍。
时间
7月10日,共7天
地点
北京
内容
北京大学
每天早8点—11点上课,学习汉语日常用语,学习中国历史和文化
北京电台
走进录音室,亲自体验做主持人
故宫
游玩,拍照留念
住宿
家庭寄宿或酒店
意义
1.建立深厚友谊;2.自拟一条
Dear Tony,
It’s great to hear from you. I heard that
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Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
It’s great to hear from you. I heard that you planned to take part in a summer camp in China. So I found one for you. Let me share something about the camp with you.
The camp will start on July 10th and last seven days in Beijing. The campers can choose to live with a Chinese family or stay at a hotel. There are several activities during the camp. First, the campers will have classes from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m. every day at Peking University. They can learn something about Chinese everyday expressions, Chinese history and culture. Then, they will visit Radio Beijing and they can even have a special experience of being a host. Besides, they are going to visit the Palace Museum where they can take some photos. Because of the summer camp, the campers will develop good friendship with each other and broaden their horizons.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要是一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意需自拟一条参加这个夏令营的意义,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍夏令营的时间、地点及住宿;
第二步,描述夏令营的活动内容;
第三步,说明参加夏令营的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②from…to…从……到……
③take some photos拍一些照片
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I heard that you planned to take part in a summer camp in China.(that引导的宾语从句)
②Besides, they are going to visit the Palace Museum where they can take some photos.(where引导的定语从句)
3.(23-24八年级下·天津河西·期末)
假设你是李玲,你的好友李大伟在邮件中诉说,他刚转到了一所新学校,面对陌生的环境,他感到很不适应。请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件,帮他解决这些问题。如,待人友善,多交朋友,乐于助人,面带微笑……(发表自己观点),可适当增加内容。词数80个左右。
Dear Li Ling,
I have a problem in the new school. I often feel lonely and worried. I have no close friends and I don’t know how to get along well with my classmates. What should I do? Yours,
Li Dawei
Dear Li Dawei,
Glad to receive your letter.
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Kind Regards,
Li Ling
【答案】例文
Dear Li Dawei,
Glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you said you felt lonely and worried. I am glad to share some of my advice.
First, you should be friendly to others. Whether you are at school or not, try to make friends with your classmates. Second, you should try to help them when they are in trouble. Third, please remember to give everyone a smile every day. In fact, everyone likes a smiling face. If so, you will be happy and have more friends. I hope you can enjoy yourself.
Kind Regards,
Li Ling
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己的建议;
第三步,表达自己的希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share分享
②be friendly to sb.对某人友好
③in trouble处于困境
④remember to do sth.记得做某事
⑤enjoy oneself感到愉快
[高分句型]
I hope you can enjoy yourself.(省略that的宾语从句)
4.(23-24八年级下·天津红桥·期末)
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封电子邮件,向他介绍中国传统节日——端午节以及今年你是如何度过的。
1.端午节是中国最传统的节日之一。
2.中国人自从战国时期就庆祝端午节。
3.端午节这一天,家家户户都吃粽子、纪念诗人屈原。
4.今年妈妈教我包粽子。
5.爸爸带我们观看海河上的龙舟比赛。
参考词汇:战国时期the Warring States Period;龙舟赛boat races;海河the Haihe River
要求:1.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
2.词数:60个左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.书写工整占1分。
Dear Peter,
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is also known as the Duanyang Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to see you soon. I’ll make zongzi for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is also known as the Duanyang Festival. It is one of the most traditional festivals in China. Chinese people have celebrated the festival since the Warring States Period. On the day of Dragon Boat Festival, every family eats zongzi in order to remember the great poet Qu Yuan.
We buy zongzi every year. However, this year, my mother taught me how to make zongzi. I found that I was good at making it. What’s more, my father drove us to the HaiheRiver to watch boat races. We had a good time.
I hope to see you soon. I’ll make zongzi for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态: 本文以一般在时和一般过去时为主,其他时态为辅;
③提示:以李华的身份给笔友Peter用英文写一封电子邮件,向他介绍中国传统节日-端午节以及你是如何度过的。提示要点要齐全,行文连贯,符合英文表达习惯,可适当发挥,注意要书写工整。
[写作步骤]
第一步, 引言:文章开始于对龙舟节的介绍,包括日期、别称、历史背景以及传统习俗。
第二步, 主体:文章接着转向个人经历,讲述了作者家庭如何庆祝这个节日。
第三步, 结尾:文章以对未来见面的期望和对朋友的承诺结束。
[亮点词汇]
① be known as作为……而出名
② in order to do sth为了做某事
③ be good at擅长
④ have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
① It is one of the most traditional festivals in China. (形容词最高级)
②I found that I was good at making it. (that引导的宾语从句)
5.(23-24八年级下·天津·期末)
假如你是大明,在五一假期你和同学王鹏去了蓟州爬山,感受很多,请你用英语写一篇日记。内容要点如下:
(1)上午八点在公交站集合,乘车出发;
(2)穿着舒适的衣服,带了充足的食物和水;
(3)观美景、拍照片、在山顶野餐;
(4)下午四点返回,累但很快乐;
(5)你认为……
要求:
(1)词数:80~100 个;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,表达清楚,可适当发挥。
May 1st, 2024, Wednesday, Sunny
Today was a fine day.
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【答案】例文
May 1st, 2024, Wednesday, Sunny
Today was a fine day. My classmate Wang Peng and I went to Jizhou to climb a mountain. We met at the bus station at 8 am and took a bus there. In order to concentrate on the climb, we all wore comfortable clothes and brought plenty of food and water. On the way up the mountain, we saw a lot of beautiful scenery and took many photos at the same time. Finally we had a picnic on the top of the mountain.
We came back at 4:00 p.m. We were very tired but happy.
If you want to climb mountains too, I think safety is the most important thing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇日记;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍天气情况;
第二步,具体介绍爬山的时间,注意事项以及过程;
第三步,最后表达自己的感受以及自己认为重要的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①plenty of许多
②took photos拍照
③at the same time同时
④on the top of在……上
[高分句型]
If you want to climb mountains too, I think safety is the most important thing.(条件状语从句)
6.(23-24八年级下·天津西青·期末)
假如你是八年级的学生李华,请你以李华的口吻,根据以下表格内容写一篇文章向学校英文报投稿介绍自己的爱好。
时间
爱好
小时候
和爷爷用收音机听相声
后来
妈妈每天开车送我上学,喜欢在车里听流行音乐, 尤其喜欢主持人的声音
这学期
利用闲暇时间练习主持技能, 成为校广播站主持人 ___________________
广播在我成长中的作用……(1~2条)
要求:
(1) 词数:80词左右。
(2) 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:相声 crosstalk ; 广播站 radio station ; 主持人 presenter
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to share my interest in radio as I grow up. When I was very young,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’m very happy to share my interest in radio as I grow up. When I was very young, I used to listen to crosstalk on the radio with my grandpa. Then my mum drove me to school and I often liked to listen to pop music in the car. I liked the presenters on the radio especially their voices. In this term, my interests in radio grow. I usually spend some of my free time practicing the skills of being a presenter and my hard work makes me become the presenter of the radio station in our school.
Listening to radio has brought me a lot of pleasure and being a presenter makes me learn a lot of knowledge. I hope every student can enjoy a meaningful hobby in life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:根据实际情况灵活运用时态;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,介绍小时候的爱好;接着介绍后来的爱好;然后介绍这学期的爱好;
第二步,讲述广播在自己的成长中的作用,并表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do 过去常常做某事
② spend time doing 花费时间做某事
③ a lot of 许多
[高分句型]
① Listening to radio has brought me a lot of pleasure and being a presenter makes me learn a lot of knowledge. (动名词作主语)
② I hope every student can enjoy a meaningful hobby in life. (宾语从句)
7.(23-24八年级下·天津南开·期末)
假如你是一位美国学生Mike,来到了北京参加为期一周的夏令营活动。请结合下列表格的要点提示,给在美国的奶奶写一封电子邮件,表述在夏令营中的一些活动和收获,并补充一个其他的收获。
要点提示:
活动
1. 与中国家庭同住,学习汉语。
2. 游览了几处名胜,例如:世界闻名的古建筑—故宫。
3. 在许多地方品尝当地美食。
收获
1. 了解中国历史和文化。
2. 如何与他人和谐相处。
3. (补充一个其他的收获)
要求:
(1)词数:60~80个。
(2)短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文:
Dear grandma,
Long time no see. I miss you very much. How is everything going? Last week, I came to Beijing to participate in a week-long summer camp. Next, I’d like to tell you something about my summer camp.
There were many interesting activities. First of all, I lived with a Chinese family in China and learned some Chinese. Then, I visited several places of interest, such as the Palace Museum, a world-famous ancient building. Moreover, I tasted local food in many places.
The experience not only made me understand the history and culture of China, but also taught me how to live in harmony with others. Most importantly, I also made some friends from China. What a wonderful experience!
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图是为了介绍自己在夏令营中的一些活动和收获;
第二步,描述在夏令营中的一些活动;
第三步,介绍自己在夏令营中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in参加
②places of interest名胜古迹
③in harmony with和谐相处
[高分句型]
①The experience not only made me understand the history and culture of China, but also taught me how to live in harmony with others. (not only…but also句型)
②What a wonderful experience! (感叹句)
8.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack打算暑假来中国游玩,体验中国文化。请你写一封邮件向他推荐一处中国的旅游景点,并向他提几点来中国旅游需要注意的事项。
内容提示:
1.表达欢迎。
2.推荐一处中国的旅游景点。
3.注意事项。
要求:1.词数80—100。
2.中心突出,语义连贯,书写规范。
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know that you’re coming to China. I’m writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome. I’d like to tell you something about Dalian. Dalian is famous for its beautiful beaches. The weather here in summer is fine. There is an International Beer Festival every summer and you can try seafood and beer here. I think the best time to visit Dalian is in summer. It’s a good idea to relax yourself on the beach in the sun. You’d better take your swimming clothes because you might want to go swimming in the sea. Sometimes it rains a lot, so bring an umbrella with you.
I hope you have a fantastic time exploring China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示欢迎;
第二步,介绍大连的景观,美食和旅行注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②relax yourself放松自己
③had better do sth.最好做某事
[高分句型]
①You’d better take your swimming clothes because you might want to go swimming in the sea. (原因状语从句)
②I hope you have a fantastic time exploring China! (宾语从句)
9.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)
随着汉语在国际交往中的广泛应用,越来越多的外国人对学习汉语表现出浓厚兴趣。假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tony想利用暑假到中国学习汉语。请你写一封邮件,向他介绍学校的假期对外汉语课程。内容包括:
1. 对Tony表示欢迎;
2. 介绍课程安排;
▶课程时间:7月16日—8月16日
▶课程内容:汉语课程;课外活动……
▶课程特点:教师优秀;活动丰富;小班授课……
3. 向Tony提出建议。
注意事项:
1. 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不得出现真实的姓名或校名。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China for Chinese study.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China for Chinese study. The course runs from July 16 to August 16. You will mainly study Chinese language courses, extracurricular activities and live with a Chinese family to put what you have learned into practice. The teachers are excellent and the activities are very rich. All classes are small. You will read classic Chinese story books here. Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese. First, you should spend more time learning Chinese by watching Chinese TV programs and listening to tapes. Second, reading more Chinese books is a good way to improve Chinese.
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对Tony表示欢迎以及介绍课程安排;
第二步,向Tony提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①put sth into practice把某事投入实践
②spend time doing花费时间做
[高分句型]
You will mainly study Chinese language courses, extracurricular activities and live with a Chinese family to put what you have learned into practice.(宾语从句)
10.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)
每年的7月30日是“International Day of Friendship”,值此佳季,你校 English Club 即将开展以“朋友”为主题的短视频分享活动。假如你是李辉,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,为你的短视频配文。
内容包括:
(1)你对朋友的定义;
(2)你的一段经历;
(3)你的感悟。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 80词;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Most of us have some friends. So do I. I think that a good friend will never let you down and always help you when you are in trouble. I’m so lucky to have such a good friend who have helped me a lot. His name is Tom. One day, I did so badly in a math test that I could’t help crying. When he saw this, he came to cheer me up and encouraged me. Besides, he taught me how to learn math. With his guidance and help, I made progress soon in my math. I can always remember how he taught me math patiently. Day by day, we shared happiness and sadness together and became best friends.
Although friends may have difficult time, we are always there to help and support each other. I am thankful that I can make friends with Tom because he makes me a better person in my growth. I hope that our friendship will last forever.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要有遗漏,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“大多数人都有朋友。我也一样。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——朋友的定义、经历、感悟等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble处于困境中
②could’t help crying禁不住哭
③cheer me up为我加油
[高分句型]
①When he saw this, he came to cheer me up and encouraged me. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope that our friendship will last forever. (宾语从句)
11.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)
一次经历就是一笔财富,它或许会影响你的生活方式,或许会改变你的人生态度。你校校刊正在开展以“An unforgettable experience”为主题的征文活动。请你积极参与,分享你难忘的经历和感受。
内容包括:
(1) What is it?
(2) How did it change your life?
注意:
(1) 词数为80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
An unforgettable experience
The important moment in my life was when I participated in a volunteer trip to a poor area. It was an unforgettable experience that transformed me deeply.
Before this trip, I lived a rich life, unaware of the hardships faced by others. However, seeing the difficulties of the villagers taught me the value of pity. I realized that every person, regardless of their background, should get the same opportunities. This experience taught me to become more active. It has changed my perspective on life, making me more appreciative of what I have and determined to contribute positively to society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己最难忘的经历是什么;
第二步,具体介绍这次经历以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in 参加
②unaware of 不知道
③the value of ……的价值
④regardless of 不管
[高分句型]
①The important moment in my life was when I participated in a volunteer trip to a poor area.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②It was an unforgettable experience that transformed me deeply.(that引导的定语从句)
③It has changed my perspective on life, making me more appreciative of what I have and determined to contribute positively to society.(what引导的宾语从句)
12.(23-24八年级下·辽宁大连·期末)
假定你是李辉,来自英国的交换生即将在暑假期间到你校学习汉语课程,作为学生代表,请你给交换生代表Mark写一封邮件。
内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 告知课程相关信息;
3. 提出学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数为80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mark,
I’m the student representative, Li Hui.
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I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
I’m the student representative, Li Hui. Welcome to our school. I’m glad to tell you something about the courses for the summer holiday.
We offer a range of courses, including Chinese, paper cutting, Peking Opera, pottery, and calligraphy. All these courses are taught by experienced teachers. The courses will be held during the morning hours, providing time for practice and questions. You’ll have the chance to learn from experienced teachers. After class, we’ll organize visits to cultural sites and workshops, giving you a deeper understanding of Chinese traditions. What’s more, you’ll meet new friends from around the world and share your cultural insights. Taking part in these courses will not only improve your skills but also enrich your cultural experiences. I’m sure you’ll enjoy them.
By the way, you’d better buy an English-Chinese dictionary. I think it’s helpful for you to learn Chinese. It’s a good idea to read some Chinese newspapers. It can improve your Chinese ability. We’re getting a little hot here, so you should bring some summer clothes. You should also take some cold medicine.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:文章应该包括三个方面的要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己;表示欢迎;引出话题:介绍暑期课程;
第二步,详细介绍暑期课程安排情况;
第三步,提出一些建议;
第四步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① learn from 向……学习
② what’s more 另外
[高分句型]
① Taking part in these courses will not only improve your skills but also enrich your cultural experiences. (动名词作主语)
② I think it’s helpful for you to learn Chinese. (宾语从句、it作形式主语)
13.(23-24八年级下·浙江温州·期末)
为了引导初中生合理安排假期生活,阳光学校Life Skill Club开展“最优暑假计划”评比,请结合海报内容选择至少三个方面,写一篇短文介绍你的暑假计划,并说明理由。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数要求90词左右;开头已给出,不计入总数。
My Summer Holiday Plan
Summer holiday is coming soon.
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【答案】
例文
My Summer Holiday Plan
Summer holiday is coming soon, here are my plans for my summer vacation.
Firstly, reading makes a full man. It’s of great benefit for us to read more books of different topics, which can not only make us relaxed but also open our eyes. Secondly, I will learn how to do the housework. It’s a good way to show my love to parents. Thirdly, I may volunteer to visit an old people’s home. I think the old people will be really happy if we spend time together with them. What’s more, I can also take up some hobbies. For example, I can have guitar lessons because I like music very much.
In a word, let’s make good use of the summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文主题,介绍有关度过一个有意义暑假的计划;
第二步,具体的内容。
第三步,结束语,好好利用暑假。
[亮点词汇]
①help with帮忙做
②spend time with sb与某人共度时光
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
①It’s of great benefit for us to read more books of different topics, which can not only make us relaxed but also open our eyes.(定语从句)
②It’s a good way to show my love to parents.(动词不定式作主语)
14.(23-24八年级下·浙江温州·期末)
为鼓励乐学善思,你的英语老师组织同学进行单元学习总结。请根据下图,写一篇学习报告,分享你学习Module 6 Hobbies之后的所获与所思。
参考词汇:content n. 内容;expression n. 词语;表达
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:90词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share something after completing Module 6.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share something after completing Module 6. I’ve learnt how to talk about hobbies with the new words and expressions, like My hobby is collecting fans.
I think the content of the module is helpful. I’ve got to know why hobbies are important. They can bring me pleasure and make me grow as a person.
However, it’s difficult to write about my hobby well. In order to improve it, I need to plan my article before writing. Also, using as well as or as a result correctly may help a lot.
In short, I’ve had a further understanding of hobbies after learning the module.
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇说明文,介绍方法策略;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:按照所给图的相关信息内容进行写作,介绍学习完Module 6 Hobbies之后的所获与所思,并谈谈自己的感受,可适当添加细节,突出写作的重点。注意开头已给出。
【写作步骤】第一步,结合文章开头的写作目的,直接开门见山介绍想要和同学们分享的内容;
第二步,正文部分,具体阐述学到了什么知识,这些知识带给我们什么好处;
第三步,结合学习内容的难点,谈论自己改进的措施和办法。
【亮点词汇】①bring me pleasure带来快乐
②as well as并且
③as a result结果
④In short简而言之
【高分句型】①I’ve learnt how to talk about hobbies with the new words and expressions. (how引导的宾语从句)
②However, it’s difficult to write about my hobby well. (it作形式主语)
15.(23-24八年级下·浙江金华·期末)
英文杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动, 请根据下图提示,结合自己的经历,分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。
注意:
1.短文必须包含图片中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数: 80—100;
3.作文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
One Thing I’m Proud of
One thing I am proud of is that
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【答案】参考例文:
One Thing I’m Proud of
One thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently in front of her house, looking rather lonely. After chatting with her, I knew that the old woman’s children were far away from her. I realized there were many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people. We sang songs and told jokes to them. I feel proud of myself that I gave comfort to those who needed most.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己引以为傲的事情;
第二步,介绍事情发生的时间以及自己做了什么;
第三步,介绍自己以此为傲的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①occur to 被想起
②feel proud of 感到自豪
[高分句型]
After chatting with her, I knew that the old woman’s children were far away from her.(that引导宾语从句)
16.(23-24八年级下·浙江金华·期末)
假定你是大明,你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意:
1.短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数:80~100(短文题目与首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
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【答案】例文
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. My classmates and I surfed the Internet in the library to collect information for it.
We also interviewed some people who know the past of our hometown. They all think highly of the better life now. Then we got together to design the poster. Some of us wrote the text while others drew pictures about the changes. With our hard work, the poster was finally completed. We posted it online so that more people could get to know the changes of our hometown.
Through this experience, I feel proud of my hometown. Hopefully, it will have a brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。承接所给开头,介绍制作海报的目的;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述制作海报的过程;
第三步,书写结语。表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①collect information收集信息
②think highly of高度评价……
③post online在网上发布
④get to know认识……
[高分句型]
①We also interviewed some people who know the past of our hometown.(who引导的定语从句)
②We posted it online so that more people could get to know the changes of our hometown.(so that引导的结果状语从句)
17.(23-24八年级下·安徽淮南·期末)
人的成长离不开书,读书让我们领悟到了人生的真谛,阅读使我们变化很大。英语课上,老师布置了一个写作任务,以 “Reading Has Really Changed Me” 为题,要求同学们根据以下提示信息和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,在下节课上展示。
提示: 1. What change(s) did reading bring to you?
2. How do you like the change(s)?
要求:1.习作内容包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯,语法要正确;
3.词数 100左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Reading Has Really Changed Me
Reading has really changed me. I love reading.
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【答案】例文:
Reading Has Really Changed Me
Reading has really changed me. I love reading.
I thought reading was meaningless when I was little. I didn’t like reading until my father bought me a book called One Hundred Thousand Whys at my primary school. I read it from the first page to the last page. It showed me that reading could be enjoyable. From the book, I learned a lot about science and since then I’ve had the habit of reading.
This change has meant a lot to me. For one thing, reading has become a very important part of my life and for another, every book I read teaches me something new. So I’ll keep reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:应用“现在完成时”和 “一般过去时”;
③提示:文章以阅读对自己的改变为主题,写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。在写作时应承接短文开头,适当运用连词,做到上、下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明阅读改变了自己,强调自己热爱阅读;
第二步,阐述了自己爱上阅读的契机,以及阅读对作者的重要性和积极影响;
第三步,结尾强调阅读对自己的意义,以及表示会继续阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①have the habit of 有……的习惯
②become a very important part of 成为非常重要的一部分
③keep doing sth. 继续做某事
[高分句型]
①I thought reading was meaningless when I was little.(省略that的宾语从句;when引导的时间状语从句)
②I didn’t like reading until my father bought me a book called One Hundred Thousand Whys at my primary school.(until引导的时间状语从句;过去分词作后置定语)
18.(23-24八年级下·安徽安庆·期末)
假如你叫李明,请以“真实的自我”为主题写一篇英文演讲稿,向同学们介绍一下自己。
要点如下:
1. 学习情况;
2. 每天看新闻;
3. 天天锻炼;
4. 未来梦想。
要求:
1. 短文要包括所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
3. 词数:80词左右 (开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about myself.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about myself.
I’m a diligent student and I always try my best in every subject. I believe that knowledge can change my life. Every day, I watch the news, which helps me know what’s going on around the world. Also, I exercise daily because I know that a healthy body is the foundation of everything. As for my dream, I aspire to be a journalist in the future so that I can tell more people’s stories. I will keep working hard to make it come true.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:本文用一般现在时;
③提示:向同学们介绍自己,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问好,说明要进行自我介绍,引出下文;
第二步,介绍自己的学习情况,日常,锻炼,以及梦想,注意细节充分,三观正确;
第三步,致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best 尽力
②around the world 世界各地
③the foundation of… ……的基础
[高分句型]
①I believe that knowledge can change my life.(宾语从句)
②Every day, I watch the news, which helps me know what’s going on around the world.(定语从句)
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