考点清单04 书面表达话题指导和梳理【知识清单】-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末考点大串讲（仁爱科普版）

考点清单04 书面表达话题指导和梳理 写作技巧： 1.审题：这里的审题包括审文体（记叙文、说明文、议论文）、要求（注意要点中的要求以及人称）、时态（中考书面表达往往有三种时态）、内容（需要写什么方面的内容） 2.布局：中考最流行的结构就是总分总式。因为“观点——要点——总结”这种结构让人一目了然，但是要说明一点，“总分总”，不一定是三段，这里的“分”可以是两段、三段或者更多，根据写作需要来安排。 3.略写：学生在阅读写作要求后，应该划出写作要点，并且要在空白处做简略地写出要点中单词、短语和句型，当然也要简略写出一些隐性的要点和省略号部分的内容。 4.串联：通过句型、句子结构、时态等工具把略写的内容串联起来，构成文章内容。 5.美化：经过上面的操作，只能得到基础的分数，所以要给文章进行美化。短文要有体现突出色彩的东西，比如：从句、固定句型和副词，同时文章应该蕴含一定量的连词，以此来体现文章的连贯性和行文的流畅性。 6.检查：到这里，行文基本完整，但是为了文章完美，应该仔细检查。这里的检查包括：检查要点是否遗漏，检查人称、单词、短语、句型和时态是否有错或者不符合规范的地方。 合理布局一般为三段式 开始部分——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分——对全文的总结和概括。 写作技巧 一如何开篇 技巧1：主旨设问更给力 I think it's very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it's good for our health and study. I think it's very important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it's good for living. I think it's very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it's the most-widely used language in the world. 技巧2：从我们到我 Different people have different _____, but / and I have / prefer _____ 二如何写正文 句型变化： 变化原则1：表达观点要“自我” In my opinion, we should pay much more attention on the weak subjects! 变化原则2：两句之间要过渡 I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drugstore was closed that day. 变化原则3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型 普通级句型 The environment is bad. 比较级句型 The environment is getting worse and worse. The environment is getting much worse than before. 最高级句型 I have never seen the worse environment. 变化原则4：表达作用多用it句式 Reading is a good way to relax myself. Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English. 变化原则5：增强情感转感叹 How beneficial it is for us to read! How important it is for students to do sports. 变化原则6：事情到感情句型 I was very happy that I got an A in English last term. It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term. 变化原则7：形容词句型升级 It was an unusual experience in my life. It was one of the most unusual experience in my life. 变化原则8：活用there be结合定从 Many reasons made me like reading. There are many reasons why I enjoy reading 词汇变化： 变化原则1：make更有feel I made a progress in English. I feel proud. It makes me feel proud to make a progress in English. 变化原则2：连词不再用and 增补 not only…but also…, as well as… 进阶 what's more / worse , furthermore 转折 while, however 变化原则3：喜欢不再like 用be fond of, enjoy, be crazy about 变化原则4：提出措施尽量不用should 用suppose, had better, have no choice but, it's our duty to 三如何结尾 1.各种号召——事不宜迟 Don't put it off. 2.各种越来越——多多益善 the+比较级+主谓，the +比较级+主谓 越…就越… The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be. 3. 名言警句 学习类 Practice makes perfect. 运动类 Rome was not built in a day. 环保类 Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. 爱好类 Interest is the best teacher. 常用句型 1.It's important (necessary) for sb.+to do sth.做某事对某人来说…… 2.It's no use/no good doing sth .做某事没有用处/没有好处。 3.There is no need to do sth.没必要做某事。 4.There is no point in doing sth.做某事毫无意义 5.What about + doing sth? How about + doing sth? ……怎么样？ 6.The reason why + (表示结果句子) is that + (表示原因句子) ……的原因是…… 7.That is why + (表示结果句子) 那就是……的原因。 8.That is because + (表示原因句子) 那是因为…… 9.It is said/reported that + (事件陈述句子) 据说/据报道…… 10.There is no doubt that + (事件陈述句子) 毫无疑问…… 11.It goes without saying that + (事件陈述句子) 不言而喻/毫无疑问…… 12.As is known to all, + (事件陈述句子) 众所周知，…… 13.It is generally/publicly known/considered that… 众所周知…… 14.As we all know, + (事件陈述句子) 据我们所知，…… 15.It's time to do sth./It's time for sth.是该做某事的时候了。 16.It's better/best to do sth.最好做某事。 17.It takes sb.some time to do sth.某人花多少时间做某事。 18.sth.costs.some mony.某物花了某人多少钱。 19.sb.spends some time/money(in)doing sth.某人花多少时间/金钱。 20.sb.pays some money for sth.某人为某物付了多少钱。 21.Among various kinds of …, + (陈述句子)/= Of all the …, + (陈述句子) 在各种……之中，…… 22.In my opinion, + (观点陈述句子) = As far as I am concerned, + (观点陈述句子) 就我的看法……；我认为…… 八下话题必备 Unit 5 Topic 1【话题写作】 请从下面描述心情的词中选择一个，以“I Feel        These Days”为题，写一篇小短文。 要求：1. 可选词汇为：lonely, upset, happy, unhappy, angry, disappointed, excited, frightened，worried    2. 意思连贯、通顺，词数在60—80之间。    3. 适当发挥，注意写出为什么、怎么样以及后来怎么样等。 参考范文： I Feel Unhappy These Days    Last Sunday, Lin Tao and I went to the gym. When we did exercise, I fell down on the ground. I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising. So we had to go back. Because I was hurt, I couldn’t walk, and we had to take a bus. When I got off the bus, I fell down once again. Oh, my God! In the end, I had to go to the hospital. The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. My classmates came to visit me, and they brought me some flowers. They also helped me with my study. Their coming pleased me, and now I am feeling much better. Unit 5 Topic 2【话题写作】  每个人都不可能没有烦恼。当你有烦恼时, 请试着控制你的情绪, 因为情绪可以影响你生活中的很多方面。所以生活中我们应当相信自己, 笑对人生, 多与父母、朋友沟通。请展开你丰富的联想，写一篇短文。要求：意思连贯、通顺，词数在60—80之间。 提示词语：feel happy, mirror, the best, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express, feelings, talk with ... 参考范文： Nobody can be happy all the time. When you become unhappy, you should try to control your feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects. Here are some ways to make you feel better.    (1)Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, “I’m the best in the world. I can do anything.”    (2)Do something for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need.    (3)Smile when you get up in the morning and believe you will have a nice day.    (4)Write down your thoughts, dreams or anything you want. Writing always helps you express your feelings.    (5)Stay with your family. You may talk with your parents, relatives, friends and so on.  Unit 5 Topic 3【话题写作】 我们知道，天气会影响人们的情绪。原准备的一场球赛，一次野餐，会因为一场大雨而泡汤，那时你的心情如何？如果阴雨连绵长达数日，突然天空放晴，那时你心情又是如何？所以关注天气预报已成为人们生活的一部分。请你根据以上内容，适当发挥，不要直接翻译，写一篇短文。 要求: 1. 意思连贯，语言通顺。    2. 可参考词汇：directly or indirectly(直接或间接地)；arrange(安排)；based on(根据)；besides(而且)；indoors(室内)参考范文：     Weather affects all of us in one way or another, directly or indirectly. For example, good weather makes people happy. Bad weather makes people sad or sick. Besides, on a fine day, one can go out for a walk or play a game in the open air. On a rainy day, however, he can only stay indoors. In a word, weather is a part of life for all of us.    The first thing that many people do after getting up is to see what the weather is like. With a knowledge of the weather, people can arrange(安排) work and life of the day. If it is fine, he may decide to go on a picnic. If it is cloudy, he will have to take an umbrella. One plans his activities very well based on it. Unit 6 Topic 1【话题写作】 为自己设计一个旅行计划，要包括下列问题： 1. 想去哪？为什么？ 2. 想在那儿待几天？ 3. 怎么去？ 4. 打算什么时候开始旅行？ 5. 在这次旅行期间，打算做些什么？ 要求：意思连贯、通顺，词数在60—80之间。 提示词语：countryside, air, food and vegetables, environment, fresh,quiet, poor, give, the schoolthings... 参考范文： A Plan for a Trip    Tomorrow morning, I'd like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good. The air there is fresh, and I can enjoy a quiet life. The food and vegetables are good, too. I'm going to stay in the countryside for a week. I plan to go there by bike. In this way, I can take exercise as well. When I go there, I'll take some schoolthings, like books, pens, pencils and soon. I decide to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I'll try my best to help them with their study. I think I'll be very tired but I'll enjoy myself. Unit 6 Topic 2【话题作文】 根据以下中文提示，以“Travel”为题写一篇60—80词的短文。    1. 当你对工作或学习感到厌烦时，可以选择旅行。休闲的同时也可以领略大自然的美丽风光，呼吸新鲜空气，结交新朋友，散心等。    2. 有时旅行会有烦恼，如天气多变、被雨淋湿等。    3. 出发前应充分了解天气情况，最好结伴同行，可以互相照应，以免发生意外。    除以上需要注意的几点外，你还可根据你的理解自由发挥。     提示词语：be tired of doing sth., enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe, prepare yourself, companion, cause accident ... 参考范文： Travel Travel is a very good activity. When you are tired of working or studying, or when you have time, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe fresh air, make some new friends, relax yourself and so on.But sometimes it may cause trouble. The weather often changes. You may get wet in the rain and may have a cold. You should prepare yourself carefully before your trip. You should know something about the weather. You’d better find a companion so that you can help each other to avoid accidents. In this way, you’ll have a wonderful trip.  Unit 6 Topic 3【话题写作】 随着人口的增长和家庭轿车的普及，交通安全问题已成为千家万户关注的焦点。作为初中生的你是怎样去上学的呢？围绕下面的几点要求展开思考，写一篇60—80词的短文。 1. 乘什么交通工具去上学？是公交车，小汽车还是自行车？ 2. 乘车时应注意哪些交通规则？ 要求：结构完整，条理清晰，语言通顺。 参考范文: Do you like riding a bike? I like it very much. I am a student in a middle school. I often go to school by bike, because it is good for our body. It makes us healthy and saves energy. But we must obey the traffic rules. We should ride a bike slowly and ride it on the right-hand side of the road. If the traffic lights are red, we must stop. Now let’s leave cars and buses, and just cycle.  Unit 7 Topic 1【话题写作】 根据中文和英文提示词写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词需全都用上，词数在60—80之间。假如你叫刘辉，是仁爱国际学校的学生。美食节过后，你和同学们积极清理现场，捡废纸，拾塑料瓶，再卖到回收中心，然后给贫困地区儿童捐款。 提示词语：废纸 waste paper；塑料瓶 plastic bottle；回收中心 a recycling center；捐钱 donate the money；贫困地区 poor areas 参考范文：     My name is Liu Hui. I’m a student in Ren’ai International School. I know some children in poor areas need money for school. So my friends and I decided to collect waste paper and plastic bottles after the food festival. After we cleaned the playground of our school, we sold all the waste paper and plastic bottles to a recycling center, and then donated the money to the children in poor areas. Although we felt very tired on that day, we were very happy! Unit 7 Topic 2【话题写作】 你的美国笔友想学做一道中国菜，这有一个食谱，试着向你的朋友介绍一下做法，词数在40—50之间。原料：豆芽(bean sprouts)，盐。步骤：首先把锅放在火上。然后在锅里倒一些油，油热了之后，放入豆芽、盐，翻炒(stir fry)一两分钟。最后将豆芽盛入盘子里。 参考范文：    Now let me show you how to make fried bean sprouts.First, put the pan over the fire. And then pour some oil into it. When the oil is hot, put the bean sprouts into the pan. Add some salt. Stir fry them for one or two minutes. Finally, put the bean sprouts on the plate. Unit 7 Topic 3【话题写作】     汤姆和迈克常到学校附近的三家快餐店吃饭，他们做了一个调查，结果如下。请根据表格中所提供的信息写一篇短文，词数在60—80之间。 RestaurantsPriceQualityServiceHam$1.5/hamburgerbetternot friendlyBilly$2/hamburgergoodfriendlyPizza$10/hamburgerbestmore friendly 提示词语：lower, than, better, the highest, the most friendly … 优秀范文：     Tom and Mike did a survey among three restaurants. This is what they told us. The price of the hamburger in Ham is lower than that in Billy, but its quality is better than Billy’s. And Ham’s service isn’t as friendly as Billy’s. The price of the hamburger in Pizza is the highest, but its quality is the best and the service is the most friendly of the three.  Unit 8 Topic 1【话题写作】 根据汉语提示完成一篇短文，词数在60—80之间。上周，比尔和妈妈一起去购物。他们买了围巾，棉风衣和皮鞋，后来又一起吃了日本寿司。比尔和妈妈度过了愉快的一天。 参考范文：     Bill’s mother likes going shopping a lot. Last Sunday she went shopping with Bill. First, they saw a beautiful scarf, so they bought it. Then they went to the Men’s Clothing Section. Bill’s mother chose a cotton windbreaker for Bill. The windbreaker made Bill look more handsome. Then they went to the Shoes and Hats Section. There they bought a pair of leather shoes for Bill’s father. After that, they went to eat Japanese sushi. They felt very tired, but they were very happy.  Unit 8 Topic 2【话题写作】     根据提示，写一篇短文，词数在50个词左右。    提示：上周末你和张明乘飞机去了北京，天气很好，你们在那待了两天。第一天，你们去了天安门广场，然后参观了一些名胜古迹，你们玩得很愉快。第二天你们乘车去了长城，照了许多照片，那儿有许多人，你们遇到了一个迷路的小孩并帮他找到了他母亲。     提示词：fly to, weather, fine, Tian’anmen Square (天安门广场), by bus, take photos, lose one’s way, help 范文：     Last weekend, I flew to Beijing with Zhang Ming. The weather was fine. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went to the Tian’anmen Square, and then visited some places of interest. We had a good time. The next day we went to the Great Wall by bus. We took some photos. There were many people there and a little boy lost his way. We helped him to find his mother. We had a happy day! Unit 8 Topic 3【话题写作】     你所在的地区要举办一届服装节，你要负责传统服装的介绍。中国的服装有着悠久的历史，最具代表性的有唐装、旗袍……请你对自己熟悉的传统服装作个介绍，词数在60—80之间。 参考范文： Ladies and gentlemen,    It’s my honor to introduce Chinese traditional costumes to you. First, let’s look at the Tang costume. The Tang costume stands for Chinese history and fashion culture. It has a long history. It became known to other countries during the Han and Tang dynasties. People can wear it on casual or formal occasions. It expresses both the wearer’s personal style andChina’s rich traditional culture. Now let’s see another Chinese traditional costume—cheongsam. People usually call the cheongsam “qipao” in most parts ofChina. It came into history in the Qing dynasty and began to become popular in the 1920s. Now more and more people like it. Many foreign women like it, too.    That’s all. Thank you for listening.  期末优秀范文必备 1．假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，你校上周开展了以“Keeping Safe Online”为主题的宣传活动。请你根据下列提示写一篇英文报道，介绍活动情况及同学们的感受。词数80左右。 参考词汇： bulletin board 公告栏 注意事项： ★必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； ★意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； ★请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Keeping Safe Online The activities of keeping safe online were a great success. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Keeping Safe Online The activities of keeping safe online were a great success. Last week, students from three grades took part in these activities at the school hall. The students in Grade 7 watched a video to learn about some information on keeping safe online. The students in Grade 8 made posters to spread how students can keep safe online, and showed them on our school bulletin board. The students in Grade 9 shared more knowledge with us by giving speeches about keeping safe online. All the students think the activities are very helpful. They not only help them learn a lot but know what to do when facing that. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头文章已给出； 第二步，简要概括活动主题，并根据提示提供时间和地点信息； 第三步，分年级描述具体活动内容； 第四步，结尾总结活动效果，表达学生感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②keep safe保持安全 ③not only...but...不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①The students in Grade 8 made posters to spread how students can keep safe online, and showed them on our school bulletin board.（how引导的宾语从句） ②All the students think the activities are very helpful.（省略that的宾语从句） 2．假如你是李华，你校将于周五上午举办 “中国传统美食节”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加。请你结合以下图示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他具体时间、地点、活动安排，以及活动的益处。词数70词左右。 Time:this Friday morning Place: dining hall Activities: make (dumplings, mooncakes); learn; cook by ourselves; taste; Benefits（益处）: develop good eating habits; enjoy food;… 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Food Day in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Food Day in our school. We will hold it in the dining hall this Friday morning. There will be many different kinds of activities, such as making dumplings and mooncakes. We can learn to cook some dishes and we can cook them by ourselves. I think the Food Festival can give us a way to develop good eating habits. Also, we can enjoy many kinds of delicious food, and make our school life more colorful. Come and have great fun with us during our next Food Festival. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件写作。要求结合图示，邀请交换生Peter参加学校举办的 “中国传统美食节”活动，告诉他具体时间、地点、活动安排，以及活动的益处。 2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；主题清晰，作为邀请，要首尾呼应，以突出写作意图；同时要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 3．假如你是李华，你校将于下周五开展“福州文化节”(Fuzhou Culture Festival) 的活动，你打算邀请你的外国好友Jim参加。请根据以下提示用英文给他写一封邀请信，介绍活动的情况，词数80左右。 要求： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，E-mail 的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。 Dear Jim, Here is good news for you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to see you there. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jim, Here is good news for you. Fuzhou Culture Festival will be held in our school next Friday. I’m happy to invite you to join us. Now let me tell you something more about it. Fuzhou Culture Festival will begin at 14:00 and end at 17:00 next Friday. It will be held on the school playground. On that day, you can experience a Min opera show, in which my classmates and teachers will act. Li Mei, a student from Class 1, Grade 9, will give a speech about the history of Fuzhou. I am sure you will be interested in the speech. It can help you to learn more about Fuzhou and Chinese culture. Meanwhile, there will be some activities about traditional clothing of Fuzhou, which can make you learn about the culture changes of Fuzhou. Besides, you can taste a lot of delicious traditional local food. It’s a good chance both to increase our understanding of Fuzhou culture and make new friends. I’m looking forward to seeing you there. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤］ 第一步，告诉外国朋友举办“福州文化节”的好消息，并邀请朋友Jim加入； 第二步，介绍“福州文化节”举办的时间和地点； 第三步，详细介绍文化节的活动内容； 第四步，表达这次活动的意义； [亮点词汇］ ①give a speech发表演讲 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型］ ①On that day, you can experience a Min opera show, in which my classmates and teachers will act. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②It will be held on the school playground. (一般将来时的被动语态) 4．厦门是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的风景、建筑、美食、非遗传承等，都有文化的印记。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于厦门文化的系列推送，现就“Cultural Symbols of Xiamen (厦门文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号写一篇文章，推荐一个你眼中的厦门文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由，词数在80—100词左右。 要求： 1. 短文需包含上述要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 The Cultural Symbol of Xiamen in My Eyes I’m glad to know that we’re planning to introduce Xiamen through WeChat official accounts. I’d like to tell you the cultural symbol of Xiamen in my eyes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Cultural Symbol of Xiamen in My Eyes I’m glad to know that we’re planning to introduce Xiamen through WeChat official accounts. I’d like to tell you the cultural symbol of Xiamen in my eyes. In my opinion, Gulangyu Island is a cultural symbol of Xiamen. Gulangyu is famous for its well-preserved colonial architecture and beautiful natural scenery. The island is also known as the “Piano Island” because of its rich musical heritage. Walking through its streets, you can feel the blend of Chinese and Western cultures. This unique charm makes Gulangyu a must-visit place in Xiamen. I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图(开头已给出)； 第二步，具体介绍什么是厦门的文化标志，并叙述原因； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① In my opinion 在我看来 ② be known as 作为……而出名 ③ the blend of... ……的融合 [高分句型] ①Gulangyu is famous for its well-preserved colonial architecture and beautiful natural scenery.（并列结构） ②I hope my idea can be taken.（省略that的宾语从句） 5．你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假，请根据下图中的提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。 要求： 1. 短文必须包含图中的全部信息，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：80词左右（文章的开头不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it. First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits. I’ll eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. At the same time, I decide to keep exercising and get enough sleep every day. Second, I plan to take up some hobbies, like taking photos or playing the guitar. Besides, I’ll spend more time reading books to improve myself. If possible, I intend to travel with my friends. Last but not least, I going to help my parents with housework, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and so on. All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明写作主旨； 第二步，结合要点提示，具体介绍自己的暑期计划，并进行适当的补充； 第三步，书写结语，表达对暑期的期盼。 [亮点词汇] ①at the same time 同时 ②take up 开始从事 ③spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事 ④such as 例如 [高分句型] ①First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits.（it固定句型） ②If possible, I intend to travel with my friends.（if引导的条件句） 6．上周五，你校开展了一场为期三天的“土楼民俗文化之旅”研学活动，请你根据以下导图的内容写一篇英文短文，向学校英文报投稿，介绍本次研学的经历和感受。 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 A Study Trip to Tulou Last Friday, we had a three-day study trip to Tulou and enjoyed the folk culture there. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Study Trip to Tulou Last Friday, we had a three-day study trip to Tulou and enjoyed the folk culture there. Before the activity, our teacher made many rules for us. We have to wear school uniforms. We can’t bring phones or throw away litter. We met at the school gate in the morning, and then we spent an hour by bus. In the activity, we first watched Xiang Opera and Chinese costume show. Then we watched some dancers perform the dragon dances. Finally, we also experienced their diet there. Although we were tired, we were happy. Because we learn a lot of knowledge that is not available in books. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出研学活动； 第二步，具体阐述研学规则和活动内容； 第三步，书写结语。谈谈研学感受。 [亮点词汇] ①have to必须 ②throw away丢弃 ③a lot of许多 [高分句型] ①Although we were tired, we were happy. (Although引导的让步状语从句) ②Because we learn a lot of knowledge that is not available in books. (that引导的定语从句) 7．为了弘扬中华传统服饰文化，同时也为了迎接汉服节的到来，你校于上周五举办了“校园汉服日”活动。假如你是校英语报的一名小记者，请你根据以下表格写一篇短文，报道此次活动。报道内容必须包括以下表格中要点，可适当进行扩充。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 校园汉服日 Time 8:00 a. m. ~11:00 a. m., last Friday Place In the school hall Activities     Learning about history, styles and materials of hanfu Watching hanfu shows; Singing and dancing; Feeling ... 注意事项： 1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，80词左右； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 To make more students know about Chinese hanfu culture, our school held a meaningful activity last Friday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 To make more students know about Chinese hanfu culture, our school held a meaningful activity last Friday. Let’s learn more about it. The activity was held in our school hall from 8:00 am to 11:00 am. First, by listening to a speech, students learned about the history, styles as well as the materials of hanfu. Then, the wonderful hanfu fashion show began. The costumes were so attractive that students watched with all their eyes. Great singing and dancing went afterwards. The activity ended with a game. The students enjoyed themselves so much that they all forgot to leave. In short, the activity not only helped students learn more about Chinese culture but also brought them great fun. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍学校举办的“校园汉服日”活动，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍“校园汉服日”活动的时间、地点以及具体的活动； 第三步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as和 ②end with以……结束 ③in short总之 [高分句型] The costumes were so attractive that students watched with all their eyes.(so...that引导的结果状语从句) 8．假定你是前进中学的学生李华，你校将举办一场为贫困儿童募捐的活动。请根据以下图文提示，给外教Jack写一封e-mail，邀请他参加活动。词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数 。 Dear Jack, How is it going? Our school will hold an activity for poor children this Sunday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, How is it going? Our school will hold an activity for poor children this Sunday. The activity will begin on the playground at 2:30 p.m. It will last for 3 hours. I do hope that you could come and join us. In the activity we plan to do three things on that day. First, we plan to put on a show, because it can spread love. Second, we’d like to make some Chinese food for sale, and we will cook fried rice and make dumplings. They are popular and easy to cook. Finally, we will collect some old books and toys to the children in need. It must be quite helpful and meaningful. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动的时间和地点； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容以及做这些活动的理由； 第三步，期待对方早日回复。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth.计划做某事 ②for sale出售 ③in need贫困的 [高分句型] ①I do hope that you could come and join us.(宾语从句) ②First, we plan to put on a show, because it can spread love.(原因状语从句) 9．上周你校开展了以“做自己情绪的主人”为主题的心理健康讲座（mental health lecture），请你结合以下信息，用英文写一篇短文向本校英语报投稿，分享讲座的内容和感受。 Time last Friday Place the school hall Contents (内容) listen to music, relax; talk to parents, get help; … Feeling (s) … 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示的信息，可适当拓展； 2. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名以及提示信息以外的地名。 In order to care for students’ spirits, our school held a mental health lecture. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In order to care for students’ spirits, our school held a mental health lecture. The lecture was held in the school hall last Friday. All students and teachers took part in it. The speaker told us many ways to stay healthy mentally. First, we can listen to music to relax ourselves. You know that we have much stress from study everyday. Listening to the music you like can make you feel happy. Second, we can talk to our parents to get help if we meet some difficulties at school. As we all know, parents have more life experiences so they know exactly how to deal with the problems properly. And they are those who love us most in the world, so they will try their best to help us. Third, doing sports everyday can not only make us feel good about ourselves but also make us healthy physically. Last but not least, writing diaries can make us feel better if we don’t want tell our problems to someone else. We talk to ourselves and come up with an idea about how to deal with them. In this way, we can be stronger and independent. After the lecture, I feel more confident about myself. I hope everyone can be the master of our emotions. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍讲座的目的； 第二步，介绍讲座的时间、地点和内容； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in 参加 ②as we all know 众所周知 ③not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①Second, we can talk to our parents to get help if we meet some difficulties at school. （条件状语从句） ②And they are those who love us most in the world, so they will try their best to help us. （定语从句） 10．初二的你，入团了吗？中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以How to Make Myself Better为题，谈谈你塑造更好自己的做法及意义。词数80左右。 How to make myself better healthy lifestyle (n. 生活方式) healthy eating habits, do more exercise, control feelings... good qualities (n. 品质) kind, helpful, polite,... others take part in activities, develop different hobbies… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I will try my best to make myself better. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure I will make myself better and better. 【答案】例文 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I will try my best to make myself better. First of all, it’s important to have a healthy lifestyle. I will eat healthily and do more exercise every day in order to keep healthy. It’s also necessary for me to learn how to control my feelings. What’s more, having good qualities is important as well. I should be kind, helpful and polite to other people. Besides, I will take part in more activities and develop different hobbies. It can make me grow as a person and help me learn new skills. What I do can develop myself fully. I’m sure I will make myself better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主旨，会尽最大的努力让自己更好； 第二步，从生活方式，个人品质等方面介绍如何让自己变得更好； 第三步，表达决心。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②in order to为了 ③what’s more而且 ④as well也 ⑤make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It’s also necessary for me to learn how to control my feelings.（it固定句型） ②What I do can develop myself fully.（what引导的主语从句） 11．假如你是李华，你的朋友Jane因为平时爱吃零食和肉类，并且不喜欢运动，导致身材矮胖。她现在很不开心，每天都很抑郁。请你根据她的问题及图表提示，给她写一封信，给她一些建议，让她重新振作起来。 写作要求： 1.80词左右，不包含已给出的句子； 2.意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范。 Dear Jane, I know that you have been upset recently and I’m worrying about you. Here I’ll have some good advice for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jane, I know that you have been upset recently and I’m worrying about you. Here I’ll have some good advice for you. I think you can do something to make a difference. First, you’d better stop eating junk food. Instead, fruit and vegetables are healthier. Milk and eggs are good for you, too. Second, it is necessary to do some sports. Exercise makes you fit and slim. Third, I think you are a pretty girl, if you wear dark color clothes and simple styles, you’ll look slimmer. Finally, enough sleep can keep you in a good spirit. So, go to bed early and don’t stay up late. I hope you’ll live a happy life! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，提出建议； 第二步，结合提示，从饮食、运动、衣服等方面给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①make a difference起作用 ②you’d better你最好 ③stay up熬夜 [高分句型] ①Second, it is necessary to do some sports.（it固定句型） ②Third, I think you are a pretty girl, if you wear dark color clothes and simple styles, you’ll look slimmer.（条件状语从句） 12．为了给“希望工程（Project Hope）”筹款，你校在上周六举办了一场募捐活动。请你根据下面图表的提示写一篇英语报道，向你校校刊的英文版投稿，词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 时间 上午8:00开始 地点 校操场 活动 1、时装秀：中国传统服装，很多人观看 2、美食节：炒饭、福州鱼丸等 3、义卖：旧书、玩具等 收获与感想 筹到很多钱，很有意义…… 参考词汇： fish ball 鱼丸 注意事项： 1) 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展； 2) 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3) 请勿在文中使用真实的校名和姓名。 Last Saturday our school held an activity to raise money for Project Hope. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last Saturday our school held an activity to raise money for Project Hope. It began at 8:00 am in the morning on the playground. First, we put on a fashion show. We wore some Chinese traditional clothes and many people came to watch it. Second, we held a food festival. We cooked some Chinese foods, such as fried rice, dumplings and Fuzhou fish balls. They are popular and sell well. Finally, we sold some old books, newspapers and toys. We raised a lot of money and we’ll give it to the children in need. This activity is meaningful and we all feel happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍募捐活动的时间和地点； 第二步，依次介绍学校募捐活动的具体活动，包括时装秀、美食节、义卖； 第三步，最后表达对于这次募捐活动的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①begin at 从……开始 ②put on 上演 ③give sth to sb. 把某物给某人 ④in need 有需要的 [高分句型] We raised a lot of money and we’ll give it to the children in need.（and并列句） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$