读后续写：乔西的生日蛋糕故事 讲义-宁夏北方民族大学附属中学2024-2025学年高一下学期第一次月考英语试题

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The Birthday Cake

Josie was a girl who loved to bake. She always helped her uncle at his bakery. Mostly she carried ingredients from the refrigerator to the large work table. Sometimes Uncle Dave let Josie stir (搅拌) the cake batter (面糊) with a wooden spoon.

Josie wanted to learn to bake a cake on her own. She asked if Uncle Dave would show her how Her mother’s birthday was only two days away. If Josie made a cake all by herself, it would be a wonderful surprise.

On Saturday morning, Josie arrived at the bakery just as it was closing. The bakery always closed early on the weekend so Uncle Dave could walk his dogs. “Ready, Josie?” Uncle Dave asked “Ready!” Josie answered.

First, Uncle Dave had Josie get all the ingredients (原料) and line them up on the work table. Then he showed her how to measure flour and sugar so that she had the exact right amount. She added these ingredients to a large mixing bowl. Next, Uncle Dave tapped an egg on the side of the bowl to crack it. “Be careful not to get any bits of shell in the bowl,” he said.

Josie tapped her egg very gently on the bowl. It didn’t crack. She tried again, and this time the shell came apart. She pulled the egg apart over the bowl and watched the yellow egg yolk drop into the flour.

Now it was time to stir. “This is fun!” said Josie.

When the batter was ready, Uncle Dave helped Josie pour it into the cake pan. He gave Josie oven mitts (烤箱手套) and showed her how to put the pan in the oven without burning her hands.

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While the cake baked, Josie and Uncle Dave wiped off the table and washed all

the dishes.

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On her mother’s birthday, Josie put the cake before her mom secretly.

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乔西的生日蛋糕故事续写

续写分析

第一段分析（While the cake baked, Josie and Uncle Dave wiped off the table and washed all the dishes.）

此段承接前文 Josie 在 Uncle Dave 指导下完成蛋糕面糊制作并放入烤箱的情节。“wiped off the table”“washed all the dishes” 展现 Josie 和 Uncle Dave 在等待蛋糕烤制时的有条不紊，体现 Josie 学习烘焙过程中的参与感与责任感 。通过 “Josie peeked through the oven window”“bounced on her toes” 等动作描写，生动刻画 Josie 既期待又紧张的心情。当发现蛋糕边缘变焦时，“hand flew to her mouth”“teary - eyed” 等神态和动作，将她的焦急与自责展现得淋漓尽致。Uncle Dave 的安慰和建议，不仅推动情节发展，也凸显他的耐心与引导者角色，为后文蛋糕的 “变身” 埋下伏笔，使故事在波折中更具吸引力 。

第二段分析（On her mother’s birthday, Josie put the cake before her mom secretly.）

该段以 “secretly” 一词营造悬念，引发读者兴趣。“covered with a shiny red cloth” 增添神秘感，同时暗示蛋糕可能的变化。当妈妈揭开布时，“gasps of surprise”“sparkling eyes” 从侧面表现蛋糕的特别。Josie 对蛋糕创意来源的解释，既展现她的机灵与孝心，也呼应上文 Uncle Dave 的建议，使情节前后呼应。妈妈的感动话语 “the most beautiful cake”“a masterpiece”，不仅肯定了 Josie 的努力，更升华了亲情主题。结尾 “blowing out the candles together” 的温馨画面，为故事画上圆满句号，传递出爱与创造力的力量 。

故事线

愿望萌生：热爱烘焙的 Josie 希望在妈妈生日时独自制作蛋糕给她惊喜，于是向 Uncle Dave 求助，Uncle Dave 答应教她 。

学习制作：周六早上 Josie 来到面包店，在 Uncle Dave 指导下，她准备好原料，学习测量面粉和糖，小心地将鸡蛋打入碗中，然后搅拌面糊，最后在 Uncle Dave 帮助下将面糊倒入烤盘并放入烤箱 。

遇到波折：蛋糕烤制时，Josie 和 Uncle Dave 清理厨房，Josie 多次查看烤箱。当发现蛋糕边缘变焦时，她十分焦急，Uncle Dave 安慰她并建议将变焦部分做成特别装饰 。

创意变身：Josie 和 Uncle Dave 将蛋糕边缘变焦部分削掉，用彩色糖霜覆盖，在蛋糕顶部用果酱画出漂亮花朵，并用巧克力写上 “Happy Birthday”，蛋糕变得更加特别 。

惊喜呈现：妈妈生日时，Josie 将蛋糕秘密放在妈妈面前，妈妈看到特别的蛋糕十分惊喜和感动，一家人一起吹灭蜡烛，度过温馨时刻 。

短语

line up：排列；使排成一行

measure flour：量面粉

crack an egg：打鸡蛋

egg yolk：蛋黄

oven mitts：烤箱手套

wipe off：擦掉

peek through：透过…… 偷看

bounce on one's toes：踮着脚尖跳

hand flew to one's mouth：手迅速捂住嘴

teary - eyed：含泪的

slice off：切掉

cover with：用…… 覆盖

colorful icing：彩色糖霜

blow out the candles：吹灭蜡烛

a masterpiece：一件杰作

主旨升华句

在烘焙的世界里，意外并非失败，而是创意的火花。就像生活中的不如意，