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学科网函组卷网 写作 1,假定你是李华，最近你参加了主题为“体验职业，发现自己，启迪未来”的职业体验日实践活动， 请你给英国朋友Chis写一封邮件分享你的这次经历。内容包括： 1,活动情况（包括具体体验的职业）： 2.活动感悟 注意：写作词数应为80左右：请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris Yours LiHua 第1页共1页 写作 1. 假定你是李华，最近你参加了主题为“体验职业，发现自己，启迪未来”的职业体验日实践活动，请你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享你的这次经历。内容包括： 1. 活动情况（包括具体体验的职业）； 2. 活动感悟 注意： 写作词数应为 80 左右； 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】示范一 Dear Chris, How’s everything going? I’m writing to share with you my unforgettable career experience day themed “Experience Careers, Discover Yourself, and Illuminate the Future”. The event was held in a local hospital. I chose to experience being a pharmacist. I learned how to dispense medications accurately and communicate with patients about dosage instructions. It was challenging as I had to be extremely careful. This experience taught me the importance of precision and patience. Also, I found my interest in the medical field, which will surely influence my future career choices. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 示范二 Dear Chris, Hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to tell you about the career-exploration activity I took part in recently. The activity took place in a publishing house. I worked as an editorial assistant. My tasks included proofreading articles and communicating with authors. Sometimes, tight deadlines made me stressed, but I managed to finish the work on time. From this experience, I not only improved my writing and communication skills but also discovered my passion for the publishing industry. It has definitely given me a clearer direction for my future. Write back soon! Yours, Li Hua 示范三 Dear Chris, Hello! I’m eager to share my experience of the career-experience day with you. It was held in a design studio. I experienced being a graphic designer. I helped create some simple posters under the guidance of professional designers. Understanding clients’ needs and making creative designs was not easy. This activity made me realize that creativity and attention to detail are crucial in design. Moreover, I’m more certain about my love for design, which will inspire me to study harder. Can’t wait to hear your stories Yours, Li Hua 示范四 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you my career experience day. A few days ago, I had my career experience day. Determined to be a doctor, I chose to experience how a doctor works. Sitting beside the doctor, I noticed how patients behaved in front of a doctor. Some patients felt extremely worried. Some hadn’t taken their health seriously and delayed seeing doctors, thus making things worse. The doctor listened carefully and patiently, explaining everything expertly to relieve the patients’ worries. The career experience day saw the hardships and also the significance as a doctor. The doctor’s good example will mentally, physically, and spiritually prepare me for my dream career. At the same time, the patients’ worries reaffirm my belief that health is more important than wealth. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享自己参加“体验职业，发现自己，启迪未来”活动的经历，包括活动情况以及活动感悟。 【详解】1.词汇积累 难忘的：unforgettable →memorable 活动：event→activity 准确地：accurately→ precisely 重要性：importance→significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to share with you my unforgettable career experience day themed “Experience Careers, Discover Yourself, and Illuminate the Future”. 拓展句：I’m writing to share with you my career experience day, which is unforgettable and themed “Experience Careers, Discover Yourself, and Illuminate the Future”. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It was challenging as I had to be extremely careful. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】Also, I found my interest in the medical field, which will surely influence my future career choices. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 第1页/共1页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$