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专题07 应用文与读后续写
(一)
(内蒙古部分名校2023-2024高二下期末试题)
1.假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了迎接暑假的到来,你校上周开展了“安全过暑假”主题活动。请你写一篇关于该活动的报道并发布到校英文网站上,内容包括:
(1). 活动的目的;
(2). 活动的内容;
(3). 活动的反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A “Safe Summer Vacation” Campaign in Our School____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
16-year-old Benson was born in an ordinary family. His father worked at a factory, while his mother labored as a cleaner. Despite their modest means, Benson’s parents always struggled to provide him with the best they could. On his 10th birthday, they sent him something that would become a treasured possession: a convertible car (敞篷汽车) model. The toy gradually blew up a dream within him. He imagined that one day, through his own hard work, he could buy a real exquisite (精致的) car.
From a young age, Benson understood his parents’ devotion to supporting the family. Now at high school, he often helped out to ease their burden by taking on some chores after school. His parents appreciated his efforts, though they always reminded him to focus on his studies.
One day, Benson decided to bake cookies for his mother, intending to surprise her with a treat during her break at work. With a box of freshly baked cookies in hand, he made his way to the outdoor area where his mother worked. The sun was shining brightly, and Benson felt a sense of pride as he approached her.
When he arrived, they sat together on the grass, enjoying the cookies and each other’s company. They talked about his day at school and her experiences at work. As they chatted and laughed, a car, amazingly similar in design and color to Benson’s cherished model, pulled up in front of them. Benson couldn’t take his eyes off the car. He was fascinated and even walked closer to admire it. He longed to touch it but hesitated, feeling a mix of awe (敬畏) and fear.
Suddenly, the car’s roof began to retract (缩回), revealing a man in the driver’s seat. Wearing sunglasses and a serious expression, the man had observed all about Benson, obviously. Embarrassed, Benson quickly retreated to his mother’s side.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The man then stepped out of the car and walked towards Benson and his mother.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After experiencing the ride, Benson and his mother got off the car, still excited.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(二)
(内蒙古呼伦贝尔市满洲里市第一中学2022-2023高二下期末试题)
假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。
【写作要求】
1.结合实际,可适当发挥,使内容充实、行文连贯;
2.120词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua,president of the Student Union.I'm honored to give a talk here.The summer vacation is drawing near.I'd like to remind you it is important______________________________________
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Thank you for your listening!
(三)
(内蒙古赤峰市2023-2024高二下期末试题)
1.假定你是某国际学校的校学生会主席,你校将举行“校园汉服秀”活动,请你代表学校在开幕式上用英语致开幕辞。具体内容如下:
(1)、表达欢迎;
(2)、简介内容;
(3)、预祝活动成功。
请注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇: Campus Hanfu Show 校园汉服秀
Dear friends,
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2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The box of crayons was filled with an assortment of colors. On a gloomy rainy day, they quarreled because every color in the box thought it was the most important.
The blue colors, from the very light to the very deep, grouped together and said, “We are the most important. Without us, there would be no clear sky above, no water in the oceans, no bluebirds singing about happiness, or beautiful bluebells swaying gently in the garden. That is why blue is the most important color.”
The green crayons disagreed. From shades of the pales t moss to vivid chartreuse, they insisted green was the most important. “Without us, there would be no grass in the parks, no plants to grow food, no leaves on the trees, no Statue of Liberty! So naturally, green is the most important color.”
The reds and oranges got fired up. “Without us,” they argued, “there would be no excitement! We are the shades you see when molten lava erupts from the volcano. We are the gentle beauty of romantic sunsets at dusk and the inspiring morning sunrises taking your breath away! There is no doubt that we are the most important.”
The brown and black shades had their say. “We are darker and more plain, to be sure,” they agreed. “But we are the colors of the earth. Without the brown and black soil, you couldn’t grow crops. Surely without us, you couldn’t build a home to live in nor have wood for your fireplace!”
“Don’t forget us!” The pinks, purples and yellows piped up. “We are the colors of wild imagination! Without us there would be no unicorns(独角兽)or princesses or sweet daydreams. We are the bright hues of happiness, of cotton candy, of dollhouses. We are the most important because children need us!” The other crayons did not know what to do. For a moment, they all fell silent.
请注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then the color gray broke the silence.
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Following her words, they looked outside and found that the rain had stopped.
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(四)
(内蒙古鄂尔多斯西四旗2022-2023高二下期末试题)
假定你是李华。昨天你在放学途中遇到一个年轻人在路边对一名晕倒的老人进行急救。请你给校英语报的好人好事专栏写一封信投稿,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.事情的经过;
3.你的感想。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(五)
(内蒙古自治区巴彦淖尔市2023-2024高二下期末联考试题)
假定你是李华,你校英语社团正在招聘学习部长(Academic Director)。请你给负责该社团的外教Chris写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的相关经历和优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
That year, I was 16 years old and my father had just passed away in that cold late autumn. There were no Thanksgiving celebrating plans in my family that year. To make ends meet, my mother worked two jobs as a cleaning lady, and I had a part-time job in the downtown. It was the Thanksgiving night and it was raining and blowing. The shops were closed and the streets were decorated with the colorful lamps for the grant festival. My shift at work was over and I waited for the bus alone in the station.
The wind blew my thin coat and threatened to tear my worn-out hand-knit hat that my mother had knitted for me years ago. Wearing a pair of discolored pants, I shivered against the cold wind, deep in thought about how my father’s death led to my family heart broken and how my mother and I struggled to work to support our family.
A bus approached as I thought these things. Fortunately, a seat on the bus was unoccupied and I took it with delight, placing my feet on the perfect spot close to the heater. I cherished the small comfort of the warmth as it seeped (渗透) through the bottom of my wet feet.
Then a gentleman, perhaps in his 60s, appeared from somewhere in the back of the bus. He wore a hat and a fine woolen scarf. Then he stopped and sat down next to me, placing a shopping bag between us. Through the transparent shopping bag under my nose, I vaguely saw a box with chocolate printed on it, a box with a music box printed on it, and a clothing-type thing. These must be the gifts for a certain girl and I also wished to get such gifts. When he noticed my stare, I looked away immediately and curled up to keep warm, or rather, to hide my embarrassment.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then the gentleman took the initiative to break the silence and started talking to me.
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He was nearly off the bus when suddenly I found he forgot his shopping bag.
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(六)
(内蒙古包头铁路第一中学2022-2023高二下期末市级联考试题)
假定你班近期将组织学生前去参观当地有名的民俗文化村(folk culture village)。请你用英语给外教Richard 写一封邮件,邀请他一同前往。
内容包括:
1. 集合时间、地点及交通方式; 2. 活动内容
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯
Dear Richard:
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Yours
Li Hua
(七)
(内蒙古赤峰市2022-2023高二下期末试题)
你校在世界湿地日(World Wetlands Day)请湿地保护专家做了一场专题讲座。请给校英文报写篇报道介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.活动过程;
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(八)
(内蒙古集宁一中2023-2024高二下期末联考试卷)
1.假定你是李华,你校下周五将举办中医针灸(acupuncture)的讲座。你的英国朋友Jack对传统中医很感兴趣,请写封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
(1).写邮件的目的;
(2).讲座的相关信息(时间、地点、主要内容等);
(3).期待回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was just another busy day until I met the boy on the bus. He was not a passenger like me. He was, what we call a street child, an 8-10-year-old kid with a worn T-shirt. These poorly dressed kids were seen almost everywhere in Dhaka city. But what was special about that boy was his face. There was “something” in him that caught my attention. That was an angelic(天使般的)baby face with little care.
He got straight into the bus as it stopped at a traffic light. The bus helper shouted at him in the first place. But instead of talking back, the boy kept silent and started handing out a piece of paper to all the passengers. What was written in the paper was, in short, that his father died a couple of years ago. His mother worked at houses. He badly needed money to help his family, so he wished someone warm-hearted to buy chocolates from him.
This was nothing new to people who took a bus every day and I was no different. I had my earphones on, listening to some relaxing music to kill time. When he came to me to get the paper back, I casually gave him some money. Thankfully it brought some smiles on his face. He was about to give me ten chocolates in return for the money I gave to him when I stopped him.
“I don’t like chocolates, brother. So there is no need of chocolates. You can have the money,” I said.
All of a sudden, the smile on his face disappeared.
“I’m not a beggar. Please take the chocolate, or take your money back.”
His straight answer greatly surprised me. I even felt he was slightly angry. I had given money to many kids before, without taking their chocolates. But this time something seemed different. I realized his angelic baby face was not the only thing special about him.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The boy put ten chocolates on my seat and got off the bus.
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Having got the boy’s name, I decided to help him.
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(九)
(内蒙古通辽市第一中学2023-2024高二下期末试题)
1.你校将于本周末举办主题为“绿色环保、拥抱自然”的八公里远足活动,作为负责人,请你写一则通知发布在你校英文网站通知栏,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.表达期待。
参考词汇:拥抱自然 Embrace Nature
远足 hike
注意:
1.写作词数为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落形状语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once in the summer holidays, a brother and a sister, Sammy and Marie, visited their grandparents on their farm. Sammy took his slingshot (弹弓) to play in the woods. He practiced hard for many days but all his efforts were in vain. No matter how much he tried, he could never hit the target.
At lunchtime, Grandma called out, ”Sammy, it’s lunchtime!” Getting a little disappointed, he headed back for the lunch. While walking back, Sammy noticed his grandma’s pet. It was a cute, little duck. Out of excitement he took his slingshot and aimed at the duck. This time, his shot hit the target and it hit the poor duck on its head and killed it. He was shocked and frightened at the same time.
In the extreme fear, he hid the dead duck in the pile of woods. Marie, his younger sister, had seen it all from the window but she decided not to confront him.
The next day, Grandma said, “Marie, let’s wash the dishes.” Hearing this, Marie immediately said, “But Grandma, Sammy told me he wanted to help you do the household chores.” As soon as she said this, she turned to Sammy and whispered, “Remember the duck?” Sammy got anxious, knowing that his sister knew his secret about the duck. If he did not obey her, she would tell their grandparents about it. So without uttering a single word, he did the dishes. Later, in the evening, Grandpa asked if the children wanted to go for fishing. On hearing this, Grandma said, ”I am sorry but I need Marie to stay with me and help make a supper.” Marie turned to Grandma and said, “Well, that’s all right. Sammy told me he wanted to help you." She again whispered to Sammy, “Remember the duck?” Hearing this, Sammy couldn’t say a word, just standing there angrily. So Marie went with her grandfather for fishing and poor Sammy had to stay with his grandma.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After Marie took advantage of Sammy several times, he finally could not stand it any longer.
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Later that day, Marie went back from fishing with her grandfather.
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专题07 应用文与读后续写
(一)
(内蒙古部分名校2023-2024高二下期末试题)
1.假定你是校学生会主席李华,为了迎接暑假的到来,你校上周开展了“安全过暑假”主题活动。请你写一篇关于该活动的报道并发布到校英文网站上,内容包括:
(1). 活动的目的;
(2). 活动的内容;
(3). 活动的反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A “Safe Summer Vacation” Campaign in Our School____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 A “Safe Summer Vacation” Campaign in Our School
A campaign whose theme was “Safe Summer Vacation” was successfully conducted in our school hall last Friday, aiming to ensure that we students are well equipped with safety knowledge before the upcoming summer break.
The campaign consisted of informative sessions and interactive activities. To begin with, some experts were invited to deliver speeches on personal safety, water safety, and road safety. Additionally, practical demonstrations on emergency response were organized, which were both engaging and enlightening.
Students showed a keen interest in the sessions, actively participating and asking insightful questions. After the activity, students expressed that they had been armed with safety knowledge to get more prepared and confident in handling emergencies during their summer break.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇关于学校开展的“安全过暑假”主题活动的报道并发布到校英文网站上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
执行,实施:conduct→carry out
确保:ensure→make sure
由……组成:consist of→be made up of
此外:additionally→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The campaign consisted of informative sessions and interactive activities
拓展句:The campaign, which consisted of informative sessions and interactive activities, is unforgettable.
【点睛】[高分句型1] A campaign whose theme was “Safe Summer Vacation” was successfully conducted in our school hall last Friday, aiming to ensure that we students are well equipped with safety knowledge before the upcoming summer break. (运用了whose引导限制性定语从句,that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, practical demonstrations on emergency response were organized, which were both engaging and enlightening. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
16-year-old Benson was born in an ordinary family. His father worked at a factory, while his mother labored as a cleaner. Despite their modest means, Benson’s parents always struggled to provide him with the best they could. On his 10th birthday, they sent him something that would become a treasured possession: a convertible car (敞篷汽车) model. The toy gradually blew up a dream within him. He imagined that one day, through his own hard work, he could buy a real exquisite (精致的) car.
From a young age, Benson understood his parents’ devotion to supporting the family. Now at high school, he often helped out to ease their burden by taking on some chores after school. His parents appreciated his efforts, though they always reminded him to focus on his studies.
One day, Benson decided to bake cookies for his mother, intending to surprise her with a treat during her break at work. With a box of freshly baked cookies in hand, he made his way to the outdoor area where his mother worked. The sun was shining brightly, and Benson felt a sense of pride as he approached her.
When he arrived, they sat together on the grass, enjoying the cookies and each other’s company. They talked about his day at school and her experiences at work. As they chatted and laughed, a car, amazingly similar in design and color to Benson’s cherished model, pulled up in front of them. Benson couldn’t take his eyes off the car. He was fascinated and even walked closer to admire it. He longed to touch it but hesitated, feeling a mix of awe (敬畏) and fear.
Suddenly, the car’s roof began to retract (缩回), revealing a man in the driver’s seat. Wearing sunglasses and a serious expression, the man had observed all about Benson, obviously. Embarrassed, Benson quickly retreated to his mother’s side.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The man then stepped out of the car and walked towards Benson and his mother.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
After experiencing the ride, Benson and his mother got off the car, still excited.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The man then stepped out of the car and walked towards Benson and his mother. He removed his sunglasses, asking with a kind smile, “Would you like to experience what it’s like to sit in a convertible?” Benson and his mother exchanged surprised glances. Encouraged by the man’s friendly tone, they cautiously approached the car. Benson’s heart raced with excitement as he and his mother settled into the luxurious seats. The man started the engine and took them on a short drive around the neighborhood. The wind in their hair and the thrill of the ride filled them with joy. For Benson, it was a moment of pure excitement, a glimpse into a dream he hoped to one day realize.
After experiencing the ride, Benson and his mother got off the car, still excited. They expressed their genuine gratitude towards the man. He smiled warmly, sharing stories of his own journey and the hard work it took to achieve his dream of owing the car. He said, “Keep studying hard, boy. Work towards your dreams, and one day, you might find yourself driving a car like this. ”His words deeply touched Benson’s heart. This unexpected experience left a significant impact on Benson. It wasn’t just about the car ride, but about the kindness and encouragement a stranger had shown him. Benson felt more determined than ever to pursue his dreams.
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开。讲述了Benson出生在一个普通的家庭,父母虽然经济不宽裕,但总是尽力给他最好的。一个敞篷汽车模型激发了他对精致汽车的梦想,并促使他努力学习,希望通过自己的努力实现这个梦想。同时,Benson也理解并感激父母的辛勤付出,主动帮助分担家务。他与母亲之间的温馨互动,如为母亲烤制饼干并送到工作地,进一步体现了他们之间的深厚情感。后来Benson看到一辆与他心爱的模型相似的真实车辆时产生了激动与敬畏之情,却因车主注视而感到尴尬。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“然后,这名男子走下车,走向Benson和他的母亲。”可知,第一段可描写那名男子邀请Benson和母亲一起坐他的车兜风的经历。
②由第二段首句内容“经历了这段旅程后,Benson和他的妈妈下了车,仍然很兴奋。”可知,第二段可描写Benson和妈妈表达了感谢以及那个人通过叙述自己的故事鼓励Benson追求自己的梦想的过程。
2.续写线索:邀请坐车兜风——兜风过程——表达感谢——分享经历——鼓励Benson追求梦想
3.词汇激活
行为类
实现:realize/achieve
表达:express/convey
对……有影响:leave an impact on/have an influence on
追求:pursue/go in for
情绪类
使感动:touch/move
感谢:gratitude/appreciation
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Benson’s heart raced with excitement as he and his mother settled into the luxurious seats.(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]
It wasn’t just about the car ride, but about the kindness and encouragement a stranger had shown him.(运用了省略了that的定语从句)
(二)
(内蒙古呼伦贝尔市满洲里市第一中学2022-2023高二下期末试题)
假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。
【写作要求】
1.结合实际,可适当发挥,使内容充实、行文连贯;
2.120词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua,president of the Student Union.I'm honored to give a talk here.The summer vacation is drawing near.I'd like to remind you it is important______________________________________
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Thank you for your listening!
【答案】I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. I'm honored to give a talk here. The summer vacation is drawing near: I'd like to remind you it is important to stick to a healthy lifestyle. Here are some tips for you.
Firstly, please make sure you don't abandon the good habit of keeping early hours. Early risers tend to be healthier and achieve more. Moreover, a balanced diet is beneficial to health. It is suggested that we never skip meals. Nor should we allow ourselves to be addicted to junk food. Always make conscious choices when it comes to food because we are, to some extent, what we eat. Finally, we should limit the time we spend on screen-based activities and take an active part in sports instead.
Follow the tips above, and you will live a fulling and healthy life. Wish you happiness in the coming summer vacation!
Thank vou for vour listening!
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。
【详解】假如你是校学生会主席李华,在周一的集会上要作一次英文演讲,主题是假期健康生活,从作息、饮食和活动安排等方面呼吁同学们在假期里坚持健康的生活习惯。分析可知,应该以第一人称为主,一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。It is suggested that we never skip meals.主语从句的运用。Nor should we allow ourselves to be addicted to junk food.部分倒装的运用。
(三)
(内蒙古赤峰市2023-2024高二下期末试题)
1.假定你是某国际学校的校学生会主席,你校将举行“校园汉服秀”活动,请你代表学校在开幕式上用英语致开幕辞。具体内容如下:
(1)、表达欢迎;
(2)、简介内容;
(3)、预祝活动成功。
请注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇: Campus Hanfu Show 校园汉服秀
Dear friends,
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【答案】Sample 1
Dear friends,
At the very beginning, I’d like to extend our warmest welcome to your active engagement in this “Campus Hanfu Show”.
As is universally acknowledged, Hanfu is the characteristic clothing for the Han ethnic group for more than three millennia. To promote our better understanding of it, an authoritative expert in this field is invited to give us a wonderful lecture regarding its origin, development and its far-reaching influence. Afterwards, a Q&A session will be followed for us to interact with the professor. Apart from that, as the highlight of the activity, everyone can experience the unparalleled appeal of Hanfu in person by trying it on or even designing Hanfu, which will undoubtedly bring us a strong sense of national identity.
I bet you are bound to have a pleasant and rewarding time here. Wish this event a resounding success!
Sample 2
Dear friends,
It’s great honor to represent my school to deliver the opening speech.
First, I would like to extend a warm welcome to your arrival and participation in this “Campus Hanfu Show”. As we know, as one of traditional costumes in China, Hanfu not only carries rich cultural connotation but also has far-reaching historical significance. Therefore, we invite a famous professor in this field to make a wonderful lecture about its origin and development, hoping you can have a better understanding of Hanfu and Chinese culture. Besides, during this activity, you can also experience the charm of Hanfu by trying it on and taking photos and I believe you will have a pleasant time.
Finally, wish this event a success and may you be happy once again!
Sample 3
Dear friends,
Welcome to attend Campus Hanfu Show!
As we all know, Hanfu is the traditional costume of the Han nationality, which has a long and splendid history. Therefore, the purpose of this activity is to let students have a good knowledge of Hanfu, and jointly inherit and carry forward the traditional Chinese culture. Here, various style s of Hanfu designed by students will be displayed. Trying it on helps you immerse yourselves in it. I believe your participation will inject new vitality and strength into the ancient Chinese culture.
Finally, I wish this event a complete success. May you have fun here!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为学校将举行的“校园汉服秀”活动写一篇英语开幕辞,具体内容如下:1、表达欢迎;2、简介内容;3、预祝活动成功。
【详解】1.词汇积累
促进:promote→boost
影响:influence→impact
无与伦比的:unparalleled→unrivalled
令人愉快的:pleasant→enjoyable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To promote our better understanding of it, an authoritative expert in this field is invited to give us a wonderful lecture regarding its origin, development and its far-reaching influence.
拓展句:To promote our better understanding of it, we have invited an authoritative expert in this field to give us a wonderful lecture, which will cover its origin, development, and its far-reaching influence.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is universally acknowledged, Hanfu is the characteristic clothing for the Han ethnic group for more than three millennia. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Apart from that, as the highlight of the activity, everyone can experience the unparalleled appeal of Hanfu in person by trying it on or even designing Hanfu, which will undoubtedly bring us a strong sense of national identity. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The box of crayons was filled with an assortment of colors. On a gloomy rainy day, they quarreled because every color in the box thought it was the most important.
The blue colors, from the very light to the very deep, grouped together and said, “We are the most important. Without us, there would be no clear sky above, no water in the oceans, no bluebirds singing about happiness, or beautiful bluebells swaying gently in the garden. That is why blue is the most important color.”
The green crayons disagreed. From shades of the pales t moss to vivid chartreuse, they insisted green was the most important. “Without us, there would be no grass in the parks, no plants to grow food, no leaves on the trees, no Statue of Liberty! So naturally, green is the most important color.”
The reds and oranges got fired up. “Without us,” they argued, “there would be no excitement! We are the shades you see when molten lava erupts from the volcano. We are the gentle beauty of romantic sunsets at dusk and the inspiring morning sunrises taking your breath away! There is no doubt that we are the most important.”
The brown and black shades had their say. “We are darker and more plain, to be sure,” they agreed. “But we are the colors of the earth. Without the brown and black soil, you couldn’t grow crops. Surely without us, you couldn’t build a home to live in nor have wood for your fireplace!”
“Don’t forget us!” The pinks, purples and yellows piped up. “We are the colors of wild imagination! Without us there would be no unicorns(独角兽)or princesses or sweet daydreams. We are the bright hues of happiness, of cotton candy, of dollhouses. We are the most important because children need us!” The other crayons did not know what to do. For a moment, they all fell silent.
请注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then the color gray broke the silence.
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Following her words, they looked outside and found that the rain had stopped.
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【答案】
Then the color gray broke the silence. “You know,” she said in a low voice, “I’m kind of smoky and faded which makes me far from the most vivid color in the box. Sure, I am not the blue of the sea, the green of the hills, the red in the sunrise, the brown of a mighty oak, the black of the fertile earth, or the purple of childhood dreams.” She continued, “But I’m the color of the steels which represent the backbone of industry!” She paused to look at the crayons. “But I firmly believe we are the same! Please look there! See?”
Following her words, they looked outside and found that the rain had stopped. Surprised and delighted, they saw a beautiful rainbow appearing in the sky. They couldn’t help but praise, “How beautiful!” All of a sudden they found themselves in the rainbow. The color gray said sincerely to others, “The world is a rainbow, without all the colors, you are nothing. We are only important together. Everything sacred in the world shines with different colors. It’s you, me and of course, us! Our diversity is our strength. Together, we are everything!”
【导语】本文以故事为线索展开,讲述了一盒蜡笔里装满了各种颜色,在一个阴雨天它们因哪个颜色是世界上最重要的颜色而吵架,蓝色、绿色、红色、橙色、棕色、黑色、粉红色、紫色和黄色纷纷为自己辩说,无法达成一致,陷入沉默。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然后灰色打破了沉默。”可知,第一段可描写灰色对比其它颜色说自己的不足,但自己的颜色也有其作用,最后表明观点说:她认为所有颜色都是一样重要的。
②由第二段首句内容“听了她的话,他们向外看去,发现雨已经停了。”可知,第二段可描写所有颜色看到天空的彩虹,发现自己的颜色置于彩虹中,灰色说世界就像彩虹,哪个颜色都不能缺席,只有所有颜色共同合作,世界才会美丽。
2.续写线索:灰色打破沉默——灰色对比其它颜色说自己的不足——灰色肯定自己的优点——认为所有颜色都一样——雨停了——所有颜色发现自己的颜色置于彩虹中——灰色发表哲理性感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①继续说:continue/go on speaking
②代表:represent/stand for
③看见:see/catch sight of
情绪类
①惊讶的:surprised/amazed
②高兴的:delighted/glad
【点睛】[高分句型1] But I’m the color of the steels which represent the backbone of industry! (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] But I firmly believe we are the same! (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
(四)
(内蒙古鄂尔多斯西四旗2022-2023高二下期末试题)
假定你是李华。昨天你在放学途中遇到一个年轻人在路边对一名晕倒的老人进行急救。请你给校英语报的好人好事专栏写一封信投稿,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.事情的经过;
3.你的感想。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Editor,
Yesterday, I came across an emergency where a young man performed first aid on an old man on the roadside.
At about 6 pm, I was walking home with my classmate when we found there were many people crowding in front. Feeling curious, we walked forward only to find an old man lying on the ground. Just at that time, a young man rushed forward and began to give first aid to the old man. After a while, the old man recovered and opened his eyes. Seeing that, everyone else clapped their hands. Then an ambulance arrived and rushed the old man to the hospital. The doctors praised the young man for his quick and proper action.
I think he has set a good example to us that we should learn some first aid knowledge to help those who need it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校英语报好人好事投稿讲述在放学途中遇到一个年轻人在路边对一名晕倒的老人进行急救的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发现:found→noticed
路边:roadside→wayside
恢复:recovered→restored
赞扬:praised→compliment
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:At about 6 pm, I was walking home with my classmate when we found there were many people crowding in front.
同义句:At approximately 6 pm, while walking home with my classmate, we noticed a large crowd gathering ahead.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yesterday, I came across an emergency where a young man performed first aid on an old man on the roadside. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】At about 6 pm, I was walking home with my classmate when we found there were many people crowding in front. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
(五)
(内蒙古自治区巴彦淖尔市2023-2024高二下期末联考试题)
假定你是李华,你校英语社团正在招聘学习部长(Academic Director)。请你给负责该社团的外教Chris写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的相关经历和优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr Chris,
I’m writing to apply for the position of Academic Director in our school’s English Club. I believe my experience and skills make me well-suited for this role.
Firstly, I’ve been an active member of the English Club for the past years, participating in various activities. This involvement has not only improved my language skills but also given me a deep understanding of how the club operates. Additionally, my effective communication skills and ability to work collaboratively will be advantageous for the position.
I’m confident that my dedication will allow me to enhance the learning experience of our members. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my application with you in more detail. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校英语社团正在招聘学习部长(Academic Director)。请考生给负责该社团的外教Chris写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
提高:improve→promote
职位:position→post
能力:ability→capability
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Firstly, I’ve been an active member of the English Club for the past years, participating in various activities.
拓展句:Firstly, I’ve been an active member of the English Club for the past years, who participate in various activities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe my experience and skills make me well-suited for this role.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m confident that my dedication will allow me to enhance the learning experience of our members.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
That year, I was 16 years old and my father had just passed away in that cold late autumn. There were no Thanksgiving celebrating plans in my family that year. To make ends meet, my mother worked two jobs as a cleaning lady, and I had a part-time job in the downtown. It was the Thanksgiving night and it was raining and blowing. The shops were closed and the streets were decorated with the colorful lamps for the grant festival. My shift at work was over and I waited for the bus alone in the station.
The wind blew my thin coat and threatened to tear my worn-out hand-knit hat that my mother had knitted for me years ago. Wearing a pair of discolored pants, I shivered against the cold wind, deep in thought about how my father’s death led to my family heart broken and how my mother and I struggled to work to support our family.
A bus approached as I thought these things. Fortunately, a seat on the bus was unoccupied and I took it with delight, placing my feet on the perfect spot close to the heater. I cherished the small comfort of the warmth as it seeped (渗透) through the bottom of my wet feet.
Then a gentleman, perhaps in his 60s, appeared from somewhere in the back of the bus. He wore a hat and a fine woolen scarf. Then he stopped and sat down next to me, placing a shopping bag between us. Through the transparent shopping bag under my nose, I vaguely saw a box with chocolate printed on it, a box with a music box printed on it, and a clothing-type thing. These must be the gifts for a certain girl and I also wished to get such gifts. When he noticed my stare, I looked away immediately and curled up to keep warm, or rather, to hide my embarrassment.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then the gentleman took the initiative to break the silence and started talking to me.
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He was nearly off the bus when suddenly I found he forgot his shopping bag.
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【答案】参考范文:
Then the gentleman took the initiative to break the silence and started talking to me. He asked about my day, his eyes kind and sincere. At first, I hesitated to share with a stranger, but his warm smile and the festive spirit in the air encouraged me to open up. I told him about my father, the struggles of my working, and the quiet Thanksgiving we were having at home. He listened attentively, comforting me occasionally with uplifting and loving words. After quite a while, the bus stopped. The man pulled himself up, glanced at his bag and then said to me, “I get off here. Hope you a happy Thanksgiving.” Feeling inspired, I waved him goodbye.
He was nearly off the bus when suddenly I found he forgot his shopping bag. Before the bus doors shut, I rushed to the doors and called out to him, “Wait! You forgot your bag!” “I left it for you. Keep it, girl!” he responded, still with a warm smile. Then the bus doors closed behind him, and the gentleman faded away from my sight. Shocked and delighted, I returned to my seat to take the shopping bag, carefully unfolding it. There lived a box of chocolate, a bright tiny music box and a brand-new scarf. Recognizing the kindness of the gentleman, I felt a sense of hope for life.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,文章的主旨讲述了16岁的作者在感恩节夜晚独自等待公交车的经历。她的父亲刚刚去世,家里没有了过节的欢乐气氛。在等待过程中,一位好心的老绅士主动与她攀谈,给予她温暖和鼓励。当老绅士下车时,他故意留下了一个装有巧克力、小音乐盒和一条新围巾的购物袋给女孩。这份意外的礼物不仅温暖了作者的身心,也让她重新感受到了生活的希望。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然后这位先生主动打破沉默,开始和我说话。”可知,第一段可描写作者最终向这位陌生人敞开了心扉,陌生人用充满爱的话安慰和鼓励作者。
②由第二段首句内容“他快要下公共汽车时,我突然发现他忘了带购物袋。”可知,第二段可描写陌生人将购物袋中的礼物送给作者,这份意外的礼物让作者倍感温暖,重新感受生活的希望。
2.续写线索:
犹豫是否敞开心扉——陌生人认真倾听并安慰鼓励——陌生人下车祝愿作者节日快乐——陌生人留下礼物——意外礼物让作者倍感温暖——最终感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①激励:encourage/inspire
②.期望:hope/expect
③.冲向:rush to/run to
情绪类
①.震惊:shocked/astonished
②.高兴的:delighted/exhilarated
【点睛】[高分句型1]. He listened attentively, comforting me occasionally with uplifting and loving words. (运用了在分词作状语的结构)
[高分句型2]. Shocked and delighted, I returned to my seat to take the shopping bag, carefully unfolding it.(运用了形容词作状语和现在分词作状语)
(六)
(内蒙古包头铁路第一中学2022-2023高二下期末市级联考试题)
假定你班近期将组织学生前去参观当地有名的民俗文化村(folk culture village)。请你用英语给外教Richard 写一封邮件,邀请他一同前往。
内容包括:
1. 集合时间、地点及交通方式; 2. 活动内容
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯
Dear Richard:
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Richard:
I’m writing to invite you to pay a visit to a local folk culture village with us next Saturday. As scheduled, we’ll meet at the school gate at 8:00am and go there by bus half an hour later.
After arriving at the village, we’ll first have a taste of some delicious local dishes. After lunch, we’ll learn to make some local snacks and watch some folk performances. Then we’ll visit a few typical buildings. I believe it’ll be a great chance for you to explore Chinese folk culture.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给外教Richard写信邀请他去参观当地有名的民俗文化村。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参观:pay a visit→tour
如期:as scheduled→on schedule
品尝:have a taste of→sample
典型的:typical→representative
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:After arriving at the village, we’ll first have a taste of some delicious local dishes.
拓展句:After we arrive at the village, we’ll first have a taste of some delicious local dishes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As scheduled, we’ll meet at the school gate at 8:00am and go there by bus half an hour later.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】After arriving at the village, we’ll first have a taste of some delicious local dishes.(运用了动名词作宾语)
(七)
(内蒙古赤峰市2022-2023高二下期末试题)
你校在世界湿地日(World Wetlands Day)请湿地保护专家做了一场专题讲座。请给校英文报写篇报道介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.活动过程;
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
On World Wetland Day, an expert was invited to deliver a special lecture on wetland protection at our school. All the teachers and students were present.
Firstly, the expert explained to us the importance of wetlands and the protection of them. Then, he offered us some advice on how to protect wetlands. Finally, he answered the questions raised by some students.
The event turned out to be a great success. Not only has it enriched our school life, but it has also made us have a better understanding of wetlands and wetland protection.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校在世界湿地日那天邀请专家做专题讲座的情况进行报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
证明是:turn out to be→prove to be
参加,出席:be present→take part/be involved
重要性:importance→significance
建议:advice→suggestion
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句:On World Wetland Day, an expert was invited to give us a special lecture on wetland protection at our school. All the teachers and students were present.
拓展句:On World Wetland Day, an expert was invited to give us a special lecture on wetland protection at our school, in which all the teachers and students participated.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Then, he offered us some advice on how to protect wetlands.(运用了“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
[高分句型2]Not only has it enriched our school life, but it has also made us have a better understanding of wetlands and wetland protection.(运用了部分倒装)
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(内蒙古集宁一中2023-2024高二下期末联考试卷)
1.假定你是李华,你校下周五将举办中医针灸(acupuncture)的讲座。你的英国朋友Jack对传统中医很感兴趣,请写封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
(1).写邮件的目的;
(2).讲座的相关信息(时间、地点、主要内容等);
(3).期待回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
Knowing you are enthusiastic about traditional Chinese medical treatments, I’m writing to invite you to attend a lecture on acupuncture to be held in our school.
The lecture is to take place at 6:30 p.m. next Friday in the school hall, which will last two hours. Various aspects of acupuncture will be covered, ranging from its origin to its application in treating health problems.
It must be a golden chance to learn some medical skills and further explore Chinese culture. Looking forward to your reply. (87 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Jack写封信,邀请他参加下周五在学校举办的中医针灸(acupuncture)的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:chance→opportunity
出席:attend→be present
各种各样的:various→varieties of
对……感兴趣:be enthusiastic about→be interested in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Various aspects of acupuncture will be covered, ranging from its origin to its application in treating health problems.
拓展句:Various aspects of acupuncture will be covered, which range from its origin to its application in treating health problems.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you are enthusiastic about traditional Chinese medical treatments, I’m writing to invite you to attend a lecture on acupuncture to be held in our school.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】The lecture is to take place at 6:30 p.m. next Friday in the school hall, which will last two hours.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was just another busy day until I met the boy on the bus. He was not a passenger like me. He was, what we call a street child, an 8-10-year-old kid with a worn T-shirt. These poorly dressed kids were seen almost everywhere in Dhaka city. But what was special about that boy was his face. There was “something” in him that caught my attention. That was an angelic(天使般的)baby face with little care.
He got straight into the bus as it stopped at a traffic light. The bus helper shouted at him in the first place. But instead of talking back, the boy kept silent and started handing out a piece of paper to all the passengers. What was written in the paper was, in short, that his father died a couple of years ago. His mother worked at houses. He badly needed money to help his family, so he wished someone warm-hearted to buy chocolates from him.
This was nothing new to people who took a bus every day and I was no different. I had my earphones on, listening to some relaxing music to kill time. When he came to me to get the paper back, I casually gave him some money. Thankfully it brought some smiles on his face. He was about to give me ten chocolates in return for the money I gave to him when I stopped him.
“I don’t like chocolates, brother. So there is no need of chocolates. You can have the money,” I said.
All of a sudden, the smile on his face disappeared.
“I’m not a beggar. Please take the chocolate, or take your money back.”
His straight answer greatly surprised me. I even felt he was slightly angry. I had given money to many kids before, without taking their chocolates. But this time something seemed different. I realized his angelic baby face was not the only thing special about him.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The boy put ten chocolates on my seat and got off the bus.
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Having got the boy’s name, I decided to help him.
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【答案】 The boy put ten chocolates on my seat and got off the bus. Seeing his small figure disappear in the busy street, I felt at a loss. “I know the boy.” A voice flew through the frozen air and drew me back to life. Then a man told all of us that the boy was a top student in a primary school nearby, whose mother fell ill due to the heavy work. In order to raise some money for his mother, the boy had been selling chocolates for several weeks.
Having got the boy’s name, I decided to help him. I got off the bus at the next stop and took a taxi to his school. Upon arrival, I managed to find the headmaster and handed him $1000, asking him to secretly give the money to the boy who I met selling chocolates on the bus. The headmaster promised to make everything perfect and thanked me on behalf of the boy and his mother. Now, I knew I could go home without shame and regret.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者坐车时给钱给一个卖巧克力的男孩,但却不要巧克力。男孩执意将自己的巧克力给作者并说出让作者倍感意外的话,最终作者决定帮助男孩的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①.由第一段首句内容“男孩在我的座位上放了十块巧克力,然后下了车。”可知,第一段可描写男孩下车后作者的情绪变化以及因为这一幕而引发熟悉的人对男孩家庭情况的介绍。
②.由第二段首句内容“得知那个男孩的名字后,我决定帮助他。”可知,第二段可描写作者帮助男孩的过程。
2.续写线索:男孩下车——作者茫然——获知男孩情况——决定帮助他——帮助过程——获得感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.放置:put/ place
②.为某人筹集资金:raise money for sb./ collect money for sb.
③.回家:go home/return home
情绪类
①.羞愧:shame/ abashment
②.懊悔:regret / remorse
【点睛】[高分句型1] Seeing his small figure disappear in the busy street, I felt at a loss.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
[高分句型2].. Then a man told all of us that the boy was a top student in a primary school nearby, whose mother fell ill due to the heavy work.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和whose引导的非限定性定语从句)
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(内蒙古通辽市第一中学2023-2024高二下期末试题)
1.你校将于本周末举办主题为“绿色环保、拥抱自然”的八公里远足活动,作为负责人,请你写一则通知发布在你校英文网站通知栏,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.表达期待。
参考词汇:拥抱自然 Embrace Nature
远足 hike
注意:
1.写作词数为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
【答案】
Notice
To get close to nature and strengthen our body, an eight-kilometer hike themed “Go Green, Embrace Nature” will take place this weekend.
Here are some relevant details about it. Teachers and students are required to gather at the school gate at 8:00 am on Saturday. As scheduled, all participants will walk along the Youth Road until the destination—the square at the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Talent shows related to the environment will be held in the square.
Please make full preparations in advance and be present on time!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校将于本周末举办主题为“绿色环保、拥抱自然”的八公里远足活动,按照要求写一则通知发布在学校英文网站通知栏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相关的:relevant→ related
要求:require→ demand
聚集:gather→ get together
安排:schedule→ arrange
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As scheduled, all participants will walk along the Youth Road until the destination—the square at the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
拓展句:It is scheduled that all participants will walk along the Youth Road until the destination—the square at the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To get close to nature and strengthen our body, an eight-kilometer hike themed “Go Green, Embrace Nature” will take place this weekend.(运用了不定式To get close to作状语)
【高分句型2】Talent shows related to the environment will be held in the square.(运用了一般将来时的被动语态)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落形状语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once in the summer holidays, a brother and a sister, Sammy and Marie, visited their grandparents on their farm. Sammy took his slingshot (弹弓) to play in the woods. He practiced hard for many days but all his efforts were in vain. No matter how much he tried, he could never hit the target.
At lunchtime, Grandma called out, ”Sammy, it’s lunchtime!” Getting a little disappointed, he headed back for the lunch. While walking back, Sammy noticed his grandma’s pet. It was a cute, little duck. Out of excitement he took his slingshot and aimed at the duck. This time, his shot hit the target and it hit the poor duck on its head and killed it. He was shocked and frightened at the same time.
In the extreme fear, he hid the dead duck in the pile of woods. Marie, his younger sister, had seen it all from the window but she decided not to confront him.
The next day, Grandma said, “Marie, let’s wash the dishes.” Hearing this, Marie immediately said, “But Grandma, Sammy told me he wanted to help you do the household chores.” As soon as she said this, she turned to Sammy and whispered, “Remember the duck?” Sammy got anxious, knowing that his sister knew his secret about the duck. If he did not obey her, she would tell their grandparents about it. So without uttering a single word, he did the dishes. Later, in the evening, Grandpa asked if the children wanted to go for fishing. On hearing this, Grandma said, ”I am sorry but I need Marie to stay with me and help make a supper.” Marie turned to Grandma and said, “Well, that’s all right. Sammy told me he wanted to help you." She again whispered to Sammy, “Remember the duck?” Hearing this, Sammy couldn’t say a word, just standing there angrily. So Marie went with her grandfather for fishing and poor Sammy had to stay with his grandma.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After Marie took advantage of Sammy several times, he finally could not stand it any longer.
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Later that day, Marie went back from fishing with her grandfather.
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【答案】 After Marie took advantage of Sammy several times, he finally could not stand it any longer. He came to Grandma and admitted that he had killed the duck. Grandma knelt down smiling, gave him a hug and said, “My dear child, I know. I was standing right near the window when it all happened. But because I love you, I forgave you. I was wondering how long you would let Marie take advantage of you and how long you would admit your mistake.” Sammy apologized to his grandma and hugged her once again.
Later that day Marie went back from fishing with her grandfather. Grandma called Marie to come to her and disclosed the whole truth, and meantime blamed her for taking advantage of her brother. Marie also felt ashamed and regretful, so she said sorry to Grandma and her brother, promising not to do so again. She would help with the chores at home and play with Sammy. Therefore, Sammy and Marie had wonderful summer holidays and both of them learned a lot from this trip. So it is important to admit your mistake, apologize and seek others’ forgiveness.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Sammy因为受不了 Marie 的威胁而选择向奶奶坦白,并获得奶奶的原谅,奶奶批评了Marie威胁哥哥的行为。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“在Marie占了Sammy几次便宜之后,他终于忍无可忍了。”可知,第一段可描写Sammy不愿再忍受 Marie 的威胁而纠结要不要向奶奶坦白,可描写Sammy 的心理活动,以及向奶奶坦白后奶奶的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚些时候,Marie和祖父一起钓鱼回来了。”可知,第二段可描写在 Marie 和爷爷钓鱼回来之后,奶奶因为 Marie 威胁 Sammy 而批评了她并表扬Sammy的诚实,兄妹俩之间的冲突消失,皆大欢喜,享受假期。
2.续写线索:Sammy无法忍受 Marie 的威胁——向奶奶坦白——批评Marie——兄妹冲突消失——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①承认:admit/ acknowledge
②.原谅:pardon/forgive
③.帮助:help/assist
情绪类
①.羞愧的:ashamed / abashed
②.后悔的:regretful / sorry
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I was standing right near the window when it all happened.(由连接词when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. But because I love you, I forgave you.(由because引导的原因状语从句)
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