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专题09应用文写作
编者按:2025年北京十区高三一模分类整理,
深度解析,排版整齐。
(一)
(2025年·海淀·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。世界读书日即将到来,你的外国好友Jm正在开展主题为“信息时代
中学生如何阅读“的项目式学习,他发来邮件对你进行访谈。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1,信息时代对阅读的影响:
2.你的阅读方式和理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(2025年·西城·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你们学校的网站看到你们学校组织了“我的年度
词(My Word of the Year)”的学生活动,发来邮件询问你的年度词。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.你的年度词是什么:
2.你选该词的理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(2025年·东城·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友im打算参加“我眼中的孔子(Confucius in My Eyes)”
全球原创作品征集活动,来信询问你的建议。请用英语给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.提出建议:
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
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(四)
(2025年·朝阳·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校正在举办以“美丽校园”为主题的原创作品征集活动,交换生Jm
打算参加,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.建议创作内容:
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(2025年·丰台·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的外国好友m打算在学校举办的世界非物质文化遗产展示周
(World Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibition Week)中介绍中国非物质文化遗产,发来邮件询问你的建议。
请你用英文给他回信,内容包括:
1.你推荐的非物质文化遗产:
2.简要说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Jim
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(2025年·石景山·一模)
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友im要参加学校举办的世界智慧城市”(Global Smart
Cy)展示活动。他打算介绍北京,聚焦智慧北京的亮点,向你寻求相关建议、请你用英文回复,内容包括:
1建议内容:
2说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
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(七)
(2025年·房山·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与本校外国交换生Jm准备组队参加学校举办的主题为
“Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture"的创意大赛。请你用英文给Jim发一封邮件,内容包括:
1,分享你的创意设计:
2.询问Jim的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(2025年·门头沟·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jm因使用AI工具完成写作作业而受到批评。他写信
询问你对这件事的看法,请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1你的看法:
2你的建议和理由。
注意:
1词数100左右:
2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Li Hua
(九)
(2025年·平谷·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的朋友Jm打算暑假到中国旅游,他对中国的科技发展很感兴趣,
发米邮件请你推荐一座能深度体验中国最新科技发展的城市。请给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐城市:
2.推荐理由:
3表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
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(十)
(2025年·顺义·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。中国电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》(简称《哪吒2》)在全球放映,你的英
国笔友J看过之后非常喜欢,发来邮件请你推荐另外一部中国电影。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1,电影的内容:
2推荐的理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题09 应用文写作
编者按:2025年北京十区高三一模分类整理,深度解析,排版整齐。
(一)
(2025年·海淀·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。世界读书日即将到来,你的外国好友Jim正在开展主题为“信息时代中学生如何阅读”的项目式学习,他发来邮件对你进行访谈。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 信息时代对阅读的影响;
2. 你的阅读方式和理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Thank you for inviting me to share my thoughts on reading in the information age.
The digital age reshapes reading profoundly. While e-books and online articles offer instant access to global knowledge, fragmented information and digital distractions hinder deep reading.
To adapt, I blend digital and traditional methods. For quick updates, I read e-books on my phone for convenience. Yet, for serious learning, I choose paper books — they boost focus and memory without screen interruptions. I also allocate daily screen-free reading time to avoid distractions.
This hybrid strategy balances efficiency with thoughtful engagement. Hope it aids your project!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份,给外国好友Jim回复一封邮件,谈谈信息时代对阅读的影响以及自己的阅读方式和理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提供:offer→ provide
深刻地:profoundly→ deeply
获得:access→ gain
分配:allocate→ assign
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:The digital age reshapes reading profoundly.
拓展句:It is the digital age that reshapes reading profoundly.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】While e-books and online articles offer instant access to global knowledge, fragmented information and digital distractions hinder deep reading. (运用了While引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Hope it aids your project! (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
(二)
(2025年·西城·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你们学校的网站看到你们学校组织了“我的年度词(My Word of the Year)”的学生活动,发来邮件询问你的年度词。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 你的年度词是什么;
2. 你选该词的理由。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear from you and share my “Word of the Year”—“Resilience”.
This year has been filled with challenges, from heavy academic pressure to personal setbacks. However, I’ve learned that resilience helps me bounce back from difficulties. When facing tough exams, I didn’t give up but studied harder. When dealing with interpersonal conflicts, I stayed calm and found solutions.
Resilience is like a strong rope that supports me through tough times. It makes me believe that I can overcome anything with perseverance.
What’s your word of the year?
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Jim写封邮件,说明你的年度词是什么以及你选该词的理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled→excited
压力:pressure→stress
然而:however→nevertheless
处理:deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This year has been filled with challenges, from heavy academic pressure to personal setbacks.
拓展句:This year has been filled with challenges, which varied from heavy academic pressure to personal setbacks.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Resilience is like a strong rope that supports me through tough times. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It makes me believe that I can overcome anything with perseverance. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(三)
(2025年·东城·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim打算参加“我眼中的孔子(Confucius in My Eyes)”全球原创作品征集活动,来信询问你的建议。请用英语给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Glad to receive your email. What an exciting activity! Here is my idea.
I'm thinking you can make a short animation film. The film will focus on your understanding of Confucius' philosophy. You can show how his ideas, like kindness,influence us teenagers to share, help each other, and build warm friendships, making school life more enjoyable. Even better, you can start a “kindness challenge” to encourage friends to do something nice every day and record their good deeds.
The fresh perspective will help people realize the everlasting value of Confucius'ideas.I am sure it will make a great entry. Good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国好友Jim打算参加“我眼中的孔子(Confucius in My Eyes)”全球原创作品征集活动,来信询问建议。请考生用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
令人兴奋的:exciting→thrilling
影响:influence→affect
帮助:help→assist
鼓励:encourage→motivate
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I'm thinking you can make a short animation film The film will focus on your understanding of Confucius' philosophy.
拓展句:I'm thinking you can make a short animation film, which will focus on your understanding of Confucius' philosophy..
【点睛】
[高分句型1] You can show how his ideas, like kindness, influence us teenagers to share, help each other, and build warm friendships, making school life more enjoyable. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I am sure it will make a great entry. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
(四)
(2025年·朝阳·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校正在举办以“美丽校园”为主题的原创作品征集活动,交换生Jim打算参加,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 建议创作内容;
2. 就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Excited about your plan to participate in “The Beauty of Campus” activity! I’m eager to share my suggestions about what to create.
I believe it would be a wonderful idea to shoot a video highlighting the heartfelt bonds between students and teachers. You can capture footage of bustling offices where teachers diligently help students with their academic challenges. To add a more heartwarming touch you could interview students and incorporate their appreciation for teachers’ guidance, support, and the positive impact they’ve had on their lives into the video. Their honest remarks would not only beautifully show the dynamic campus life, but also portray the beauty of character.
What do you think of my ideas? Feel free to ask me any questions during your shooting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考试给交换生Jim回封邮件,就他所询问的有关学校正在举办的以“美丽校园”为主题的原创作品征集活动的创作内容提出建议,并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
参加:participate in→take part in
渴望的:eager→longing
突出、强调:highlight→emphasize
联系:bond→connection
影响:impact→influence
充满活力的:dynamic→energetic
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换:
原句:I believe it would be a wonderful idea to shoot a video highlighting the heartfelt bonds between students and teachers.
拓展句:I believe it would be a wonderful idea to shoot a video that highlights the heartfelt bonds between students and teachers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You can capture footage of bustling offices where teachers diligently help students with their academic challenges.(运用了以关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】To add a more heartwarming touch, you could interview students and incorporate their appreciation for teachers’ guidance, support, and the positive impact they’ve had on their lives into the video.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和省略了关系代词的限制性定语从句。)
(五)
(2025年·丰台·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的外国好友Jim打算在学校举办的世界非物质文化遗产展示周(World Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibition Week)中介绍中国非物质文化遗产,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回信,内容包括:
1. 你推荐的非物质文化遗产;
2. 简要说明理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re introducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the World Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibition Week. I’d highly recommend Chinese paper-cutting.
Paper-cutting, with a history spanning over 1,500 years, is a traditional folk art in China. It involves cutting intricate designs from paper using scissors or knives. Not only does it showcase the remarkable craftsmanship of Chinese artisans, but it also carries profound cultural meanings, often symbolizing good luck, happiness, and prosperity. It’s a wonderful way to experience the charm of Chinese culture firsthand.
I believe your presentation will be a great success. Good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】作文本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国好友Jim打算在学校举办的世界非物质文化遗产展示周中介绍中国非物质文化遗产,要求考生按照要求用英文给他提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled → excited
推荐:recommend → nominate
展现:showcase → show
非凡的:remarkable → extraordinary
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m thrilled to hear that you’re introducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the World Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibition Week.
拓展句:Hearing that you’re introducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the World Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibition Week, I’m thrilled.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 I’m thrilled to hear that you’re introducing Chinese intangible cultural heritage at the World Intangible Cultural Heritage Exhibition Week.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only does it showcase the remarkable craftsmanship of Chinese artisans, but it also carries profound cultural meanings, often symbolizing good luck, happiness, and prosperity.(运用了not only位于句首的部分倒装句和现在分词作状语)
(六)
(2025年·石景山·一模)
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim要参加学校举办的“世界智慧城市”(Global Smart City)展示活动。他打算介绍北京,聚焦智慧北京的亮点,向你寻求相关建议、请你用英文回复,内容包括:
1.建议内容;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Learning that you are going to introduce Beijing at the “Global Smart City” Exhibition, I’m glad to share what I know with you.
First, Beijing focuses on technological innovation, leading to the booming development of smart tourism, smart healthcare, smart manufacturing, etc. People can easily enjoy all kinds of services provided by artificial intelligence. For example, people can visit the Forbidden City on their own with the Wechat guide and learn about its history, which is really fantastic. Besides, more and more subways are built to make our travel convenient.
Hope my advice can be helpful to you. If you need more information, do feel free to ask me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim回信,关于对方要参加的“世界智慧城市”(Global Smart City)展示活动给出建议,并说明理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
开心的:glad → pleased
集中精力:focus on → concentrate on
提供:provide → offer
此外:besides → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, Beijing focuses on technological innovation, leading to the booming development of smart tourism, smart healthcare, smart manufacturing, etc.
拓展句:First, Beijing focuses on technological innovation, which leads to the booming development of smart tourism, smart healthcare, smart manufacturing, etc.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】For example, people can visit the Forbidden City on their own with the Wechat guide and learn about its history, which is really fantastic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you need more information, do feel free to ask me.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(七)
(2025年·房山·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与本校外国交换生 Jim准备组队参加学校举办的主题为“Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture”的创意大赛。请你用英文给 Jim发一封邮件,内容包括:
1.分享你的创意设计;
2.询问Jim的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to team up with you for the “Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture” creativity contest. My idea is to design an interactive app that combines AR technology with traditional Chinese paper-cutting art. Users can scan real paper-cuttings with their phones, and the app will bring them to life through 3D animations, telling stories related to the patterns.
I believe this can not only showcase the beauty of Chinese paper-cutting but also make it more engaging for modern audiences. However, I’m not sure about the technical feasibility and user experience. What do you think of this idea? Do you have any suggestions to improve it?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给 Jim发一封邮件,分享你的创意设计以及询问Jim的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
合作:team up with→cooperate with
展示:showcase→display
建议:suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Users can scan real paper-cuttings with their phones, and the app will bring them to life through 3D animations, telling stories related to the patterns.
拓展句:Users can scan real paper-cuttings with their phones, and the app will bring them to life through 3D animations, which tell stories related to the patterns.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】My idea is to design an interactive app that combines AR technology with traditional Chinese paper-cutting art. (运用了that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe this can not only showcase the beauty of Chinese paper-cutting but also make it more engaging for modern audiences. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
(八)
(2025年·门头沟·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim因使用AI工具完成写作作业而受到批评。他写信询问你对这件事的看法,请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1 你的看法;
2.你的建议和理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m truly sorry to hear about your experience. It’s understandable to feel upset when your efforts are questioned, but let’s try to see this from another perspective.
First, sincerely apologize to your teacher and clarify your intentions, which shows maturity and helps rebuild trust. Explain that you aimed to save time but now realize the importance of independent practice. Second, use AI as a “helper,” not a “doer.” For example, let it check grammar, but always write the content in your own words. By balancing efficiency with effort, you’ll grow academically while staying honest.
This is a learning experience, not a failure. Stay confident and keep polishing your skills!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给Jim回复,他因为使用AI工具完成写作作业而受到批评。对此提出你的看法以及建议和理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
沮丧的:upset→frustrated
真诚地:sincerely→heartfeltly
打算:aim to→intend to
例如:for example→for instance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:By balancing efficiency with effort, you’ll grow academically while staying honest.
拓展句:If you can balance efficiency with effort, you’ll grow academically while staying honest.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It’s understandable to feel upset when your efforts are questioned, but let’s try to see this from another perspective.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】First, sincerely apologize to your teacher and clarify your intentions, which shows maturity and helps rebuild trust. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(九)
(2025年·平谷·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的朋友Jim打算暑假到中国旅游,他对中国的科技发展很感兴趣,发来邮件请你推荐一座能深度体验中国最新科技发展的城市。请给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐城市;
2. 推荐理由;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear you’re planning a trip to China this summer! Based on your interest in cutting-edge technology, I highly recommend Shenzhen as your top destination.
Shenzhen is China’s “Silicon Valley” and a global center for innovation. First, it’s home to tech giants like Huawei, Tencent, and DJI, where you can visit exhibition halls to witness futuristic inventions, from AI robots to 5G applications. Second, don’t miss the Shenzhen Science Museum, where interactive exhibits let you experience VR space exploration or program a mini robot! Besides, Shenzhen perfectly combines technology with daily life. You’ll even see drones delivering packages and cashless payments everywhere!
Wish you an inspiring journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以个人名义向朋友推荐一座能深度体验中国最新科技发展的城市,并解释推荐理由及表达美好祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled → excited
旅行:trip → tour
此外:besides → moreover
鼓舞人心的:inspiring → encouraging
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Based on your interest in cutting-edge technology, I highly recommend Shenzhen as your top destination.
拓展句:Since you are interested in cutting-edge technology, I highly recommend Shenzhen as your top destination.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to hear you’re planning a trip to China this summer! (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Second, don’t miss the Shenzhen Science Museum, where interactive exhibits let you experience VR space exploration or program a mini robot! (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
(十)
(2025年·顺义·一模)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。中国电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》(简称《哪吒2》)在全球放映,你的英国笔友Jim看过之后非常喜欢,发来邮件请你推荐另外一部中国电影。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.电影的内容;
2.推荐的理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
范文1:
Dear Jim,
Glad to hear you enjoyed Nezha 2. Now, I’d highly recommend Uproar in Heaven.
This film, produced in the 1960s, is based on the early chapters of the famous Chinese classic Journey to the West. It tells the story of Sun Wukong, the Monkey King, and his resistance against the Emperor in Heaven.
I recommend it because it’s a masterpiece of Chinese animation, showcasing traditional art forms like Peking Opera in its character design and movement. Plus, it offers a great introduction to one of China’s most famous fictitious figures and beloved stories! I believe it’s a visually wonderful and culturally significant film that’s sure to delight.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2:
Dear Jim,
I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed Nezha 2 and I'd like to recommend you another fantastic film deeply rooted in Chinese traditional culture: Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon.
This film, directed by Ang Lee, is a martial arts tale set in the Qing Dynasty. It tells a story of love, duty, and sacrifice. The film centers on a legendary sword, the Green Destiny, and the lives it touches.
I highly recommend it because it beautifully showcases traditional Chinese values like honor, faith, and respect for elders. The film's wonderful visuals, combined with its attractive story make it a truly unforgettable cinematic experience. It also provides insight into the world of martial arts spirit and explores the complexities of human relationships. Hope you can enjoy it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回信,推荐另外一部中国电影。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
喜欢:enjoy→be fond of
著名的:famous→well-known
展示:showcase→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This film, directed by Ang Lee, is a martial arts tale set in the Qing Dynasty.
拓展句:This film, which was directed by Ang Lee, is a martial arts tale set in the Qing Dynasty.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I recommend it because it’s a masterpiece of Chinese animation, showcasing traditional art forms like Peking Opera in its character design and movement.(运用了because引导原因状语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]I believe it’s a visually wonderful and culturally significant film that’s sure to delight.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句)
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