考题猜想05 书面表达【期末易错10题】-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末考点大串讲（冀教版）

专题05 书面表达10题 (1) 城市的发展日新月异，但变化也带来了机遇与挑战。请以“Changes in My City”为题，写一篇短文，描述城市过去与现在的不同，并讨论这些变化的影响。   提示：   1. 描述城市过去的样貌（如建筑、交通、生活方式）；   2. 描述现在的变化（如高楼大厦、地铁系统、环境污染）；   3. 列举变化带来的好处与问题；   4. 提出你对未来城市发展的建议。   要求： 1. 作文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；   2. 词数80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数；   3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。   Changes in My City My city has experienced great changes in recent years. Let me tell you what it was like before and what it is like now.   I hope our city can develop wisely and keep its unique culture.   (2) 肖伟在大家的帮助下最终康复。他给所有帮助他的人写了一封感谢信。根据要点提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。 要点： 1. 感谢大家的帮助和鼓励。 2. 自己将继续乐观生活，努力学习，长大成为一名医生，帮助更多患病的孩子。 3. 今后，将积极参加志愿者活动， 帮助有困难的人。 Dear all, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Xiao Wei (3) 为鼓励中学生用英语讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，某英语报杜正在举办以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Story”为题的征文活动，请你根据下面要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿。(文中不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息) 要点提示：描述故事内容；故事带给你的影响和启发。 要求：1、条理清晰，有表明自己观点的句子。 2、书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。 3、不能出现真实的人名、地名。 My Favorite Traditional Chinese Story There are many famous stories in Chinese culture…_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (4) 随着科技的发展和电子产品的普及，快餐文化（fast-food culture）日渐盛行，人们真正静下来读书的时间越来越少。请就此话题写一篇文章鼓励大家多读书。 内容要点： （1）人们阅读匮乏的具体原因（至少两点）； （2）你认为阅读的重要性（至少两点）； （3）介绍你最近读的书（包括内容概要、感想等）。 要求： （1）文章必须包括所有要点； （2）行文连贯，表达清楚，书写规范； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； （4）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Nowadays, with the development of science and technology and e-products, and the popularity of fast-food culture, many of us spend less and less time reading quietly. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (5) 家乡是每个人心中最温暖的地方。你的家乡有哪些独特的风土人情？假如你叫王芳，请以“My Hometown”为题，写一篇短文向外国朋友介绍你的家乡，吸引他们来参观。   提示：   1. 家乡的地理位置和气候特点；   2. 著名景点或特色活动 (至少两项)；   3. 传统美食或节日；   4. 你对家乡的情感。   要求：   1. 作文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；   2. 词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；   3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。   My Hometown My hometown is a small but beautiful place. Let me tell you more about it.  Welcome to my hometown! You will love it here!   (6) 假如你是李华，最近收到来自在外地生活多年的表弟刘伟的电子邮件，想了解一下家乡近些年的变化以及李华的课余生活，请根据表格中的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1. 过去污染严重，现在政府采取行动改善了这种情况，经常见到蓝天； 2. 人们搬进了新的公寓，开阔的空地上建造了新的公园； 3. 出行很便捷，可以乘坐公交、出租车…… 课余活动 喜欢读书；每周花6小时左右阅读小说，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书 有很多好处……；闲暇时间喜欢旅行…… 个人感受 …… 注意： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3. 90词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Liu Wei, I’m very happy to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come back to our hometown for a visit some day. Yours, Li Hua (7) 假如你是张华，你的英国好友 Alan和家人暑假将来富阳旅游，请根据以下信息，写一封邮件，为他们推荐一处合适的富阳打卡点。 We love nature. We’re interested in Chinese history and culture. We also want to try some local food. Longmen Town ● Sun Quan, a famous emperor ● many kinds of local food ● ticket: 80 yuan each ● … Huang Gongwang’s Retreat (隐居地) ● Huang Gongwang, a famous artist ● lots of local restaurants ● enter for free ● … 注意： 1. 邮件需包含所选地方至少3点信息。可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数80左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Alan, Glad to know that you are coming to my city soon. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hua (8) 同学们一定听过《如愿》这首歌，其中的一句歌词“山河无恙，烟火寻常”描绘了中国的盛世景象。城市的发展如同一部生动的历史长卷，每一条街道、每一座建筑都是一页篇章，记载着人们的辛勤耕耘和智慧创新。用脚步丈量大地宽广，用心感受中国的温暖怀抱。假定你是李辉，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 内容包括： 1.推荐一座值得游玩的城市及原因。 2.介绍该城市2-3处著名景点，描述这些景点的独特之处和游客的游玩活动。 介绍当地的特色美食…… 3.表达期待。 注意： （1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David, I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua (9) 传承中国文化，讲好中国故事是新一代青少年的责任。你校开展以“我最喜欢的中国传统故事”为主题的传统文化宣讲周活动。请你写一篇英文发言稿，分享你的故事。 内容包括： * your understanding of Chinese traditional stories * one of your favorite traditional stories * its influence on you 要求： 1. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (10) 家乡是每个人成长的地方，随着时间推移，家乡的面貌也在不断变化。请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇短文，对比家乡过去与现在的不同，并谈谈你的感受。   提示：   1. 描述家乡过去的基础设施（如房屋、道路、自然环境等）；   2. 描述现在的变化（如新建的设施、交通改善、环境问题等）；   3. 分析变化的原因（如政策支持、经济发展等）；   4. 表达你对这些变化的看法（积极或消极）。   要求：   1. 要点齐全并适当发挥；   2. 全文不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；   3. 使用过去时态和现在时态。   参考词汇：   1. narrow roads 狭窄的道路；   2. modern facilities 现代化设施；   3. environment protection 环境保护；   4. development n. 发展。   Changes in My Hometown Dear classmates,   I’m Li Wei from Class 8. My hometown has changed a lot over the past ten years. Let me share the differences between the past and now.   These changes make life more convenient, but we should also protect our traditions. Let’s work together for a better hometown!   Li Wei   / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题05 书面表达10题 (1) 城市的发展日新月异，但变化也带来了机遇与挑战。请以“Changes in My City”为题，写一篇短文，描述城市过去与现在的不同，并讨论这些变化的影响。   提示：   1. 描述城市过去的样貌（如建筑、交通、生活方式）；   2. 描述现在的变化（如高楼大厦、地铁系统、环境污染）；   3. 列举变化带来的好处与问题；   4. 提出你对未来城市发展的建议。   要求： 1. 作文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；   2. 词数80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数；   3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。   Changes in My City My city has experienced great changes in recent years. Let me tell you what it was like before and what it is like now.   _______________________________________________________________________________________ I hope our city can develop wisely and keep its unique culture.   【答案】例文：   Changes in My City My city has experienced great changes in recent years. Let me tell you what it was like before and what it is like now.   Twenty years ago, there were only a few buses, and traffic jams were common. Most people lived in low houses. The air was fresh. Now, skyscrapers fill the city center, and a subway system makes traveling fast. However, the air pollution is getting worse because of too many cars.   These changes bring both good and bad effects. Life is faster and more modern, but the environment is suffering. In my opinion, we should plant more trees and use public transportation more often. I hope our city can develop wisely and keep its unique culture. 【解析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、描述城市过去的样貌以及现在的变化； 第三步、列举变化带来的好处与问题，提出自己对未来城市发展的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①a few几个 ②because of因为 ③both…and既……又 [高分句型] ①Let me tell you what it was like before and what it is like now.(what引导宾语从句) (2) 肖伟在大家的帮助下最终康复。他给所有帮助他的人写了一封感谢信。根据要点提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。 要点： 1. 感谢大家的帮助和鼓励。 2. 自己将继续乐观生活，努力学习，长大成为一名医生，帮助更多患病的孩子。 3. 今后，将积极参加志愿者活动， 帮助有困难的人。 Dear all, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Xiao Wei 【答案】例文： Dear all, Thank you for what you have done for me. I can’t get well without your help and encouragement. Now, I’ve decided to stay optimistic. I have been back to school and I will try my best to catch up with my classmates. In order to help more sick children, I have made up my mind to be a doctor when I grow up. From now on, I will take an active part in some volunteering activities to help people in need. I hope we can work together to make our society better and better. Best wishes, Xiao Wei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，感谢大家的帮助和鼓励； 第二步，根据提示，介绍自己的意愿以及打算； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth.决定做某事 ②make up my mind下决心 ③take an active part in积极参与 [高分句型] ①In order to help more sick children, I have made up my mind to be a doctor when I grow up. (when引导的时间状语从句) (3) 为鼓励中学生用英语讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，某英语报杜正在举办以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Story”为题的征文活动，请你根据下面要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿。(文中不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息) 要点提示：描述故事内容；故事带给你的影响和启发。 要求：1、条理清晰，有表明自己观点的句子。 2、书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。 3、不能出现真实的人名、地名。 My Favorite Traditional Chinese Story There are many famous stories in Chinese culture…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Traditional Chinese Story There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yu Gong moves the mountains best. Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明故事名称； 第二步，叙述故事情节； 第三步，总结故事寓意。 [亮点词汇] ①like...best最喜欢 ②once upon a time以前 ③keep doing继续做 [高分句型] ①Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away. (so...that结果状语从句) ②The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. (that引导宾语从句) (4) 随着科技的发展和电子产品的普及，快餐文化（fast-food culture）日渐盛行，人们真正静下来读书的时间越来越少。请就此话题写一篇文章鼓励大家多读书。 内容要点： （1）人们阅读匮乏的具体原因（至少两点）； （2）你认为阅读的重要性（至少两点）； （3）介绍你最近读的书（包括内容概要、感想等）。 要求： （1）文章必须包括所有要点； （2）行文连贯，表达清楚，书写规范； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； （4）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Nowadays, with the development of science and technology and e-products, and the popularity of fast-food culture, many of us spend less and less time reading quietly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Nowadays, with the development of science and technology and the popularity of e-products and fast-food culture, many of us spend less and less time reading quietly. There are some reasons for this. Firstly, people are busy with their work and study, and they don’t have much time to read. Secondly, there are many distractions, such as smartphones and computers, which make it difficult for people to focus on reading. I think reading is very important. Firstly, reading can broaden our horizons and increase our knowledge. Secondly, reading can improve our language skills and thinking ability. Thirdly, reading can relax us and reduce our stress. Recently, I read a book called “To Kill a Mockingbird”. It is a novel about racial inequality and justice. The book tells the story of a young girl named Scout and her father Atticus, who is a lawyer. Atticus defends a black man who is accused of raping a white woman. Through this story, I learned that we should treat everyone equally and fight for justice. I was deeply moved by the book and it made me think a lot. In conclusion, I hope everyone can read more books and enjoy the benefits of reading. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要漏写，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述人们阅读匮乏的具体原因； 第二步，说明阅读的重要性； 第三步，介绍自己最近读的书，包括内容概要、感想等。 [亮点词汇] ①be busy with忙于 ②focus on专注于 ③be accused of 被指控 ④In conclusion总之 [高分句型] ①Secondly, there are many distractions, such as smartphones and computers, which make it difficult for people to focus on reading.（定语从句） ②I think reading is very important.（宾语从句） (5) 家乡是每个人心中最温暖的地方。你的家乡有哪些独特的风土人情？假如你叫王芳，请以“My Hometown”为题，写一篇短文向外国朋友介绍你的家乡，吸引他们来参观。   提示：   1. 家乡的地理位置和气候特点；   2. 著名景点或特色活动 (至少两项)；   3. 传统美食或节日；   4. 你对家乡的情感。   要求：   1. 作文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；   2. 词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；   3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。   My Hometown My hometown is a small but beautiful place. Let me tell you more about it.  _____________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my hometown! You will love it here!   【答案】例文   My Hometown My hometown is a small but beautiful place. Let me tell you more about it.   It is located in the south of China, surrounded by green hills. The weather is warm in winter and cool in summer. The most famous spot is a thousand-year-old temple. Every spring, we hold a lantern festival when people dance and sing. Don’t miss our traditional food—sticky rice cakes! They are sweet and soft. I grew up here, and I am proud of its friendly people and peaceful life. Welcome to my hometown! You will love it here! 【解析】 ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总起介绍家乡，表明家乡虽小但很美，并引出下文对家乡的具体描述； 第二步，主要从家乡的地理位置、气候特点、著名景点以及传统节日等方面进行具体描述，展现家乡的自然环境和文化特色； 第三步，重点介绍家乡的传统美食，同时表达了对家乡友好的人民和宁静生活的自豪之情； 第四步，发出邀请，欢迎读者到家乡来。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up 长大 ②be proud of 为……感到自豪 [高分句型] ①Every spring, we hold a lantern festival when people dance and sing. (where引导的限制性定语从句) ②Don’t miss our traditional food—sticky rice cakes! (祈使句的否定形式) (6) 假如你是李华，最近收到来自在外地生活多年的表弟刘伟的电子邮件，想了解一下家乡近些年的变化以及李华的课余生活，请根据表格中的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1. 过去污染严重，现在政府采取行动改善了这种情况，经常见到蓝天； 2. 人们搬进了新的公寓，开阔的空地上建造了新的公园； 3. 出行很便捷，可以乘坐公交、出租车…… 课余活动 喜欢读书；每周花6小时左右阅读小说，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书 有很多好处……；闲暇时间喜欢旅行…… 个人感受 …… 注意： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3. 90词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Liu Wei, I’m very happy to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come back to our hometown for a visit some day. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Liu Wei, I’m very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about the changes in our hometown and my after-school life. Great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the pollution here was very serious. Now the government has taken action to improve the situation. We can often see the blue sky. People have moved into new flats. New parks have been built on the open spaces. It’s very convenient to travel here. We can take a bus or a taxi. As for my after-school life, I enjoy reading books. I spend about six hours reading novels every week. I mainly borrow books from the library. I think reading has many advantages. In my free time, I also like travelling. I hope you can come back to our hometown for a visit some day. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出家乡的变化和自己的课余生活； 第二步，具体阐述家乡发生的变化； 第三步，介绍自己的课余活动。 [亮点词汇] ①take action采取行动 ②spend+时间+(in) doing sth.花费时间做某事 ③in my free time在空闲时间 [高分句型] ①Great changes have taken place in our hometown. (现在完成时) ②I think reading has many advantages. (宾语从句) (7) 假如你是张华，你的英国好友 Alan和家人暑假将来富阳旅游，请根据以下信息，写一封邮件，为他们推荐一处合适的富阳打卡点。 We love nature. We’re interested in Chinese history and culture. We also want to try some local food. Longmen Town ● Sun Quan, a famous emperor ● many kinds of local food ● ticket: 80 yuan each ● … Huang Gongwang’s Retreat (隐居地) ● Huang Gongwang, a famous artist ● lots of local restaurants ● enter for free ● … 注意： 1. 邮件需包含所选地方至少3点信息。可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数80左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Alan, Glad to know that you are coming to my city soon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Alan, Glad to know that you are coming to our city soon. I know you’re interested in Chinese history and culture. So I think Longmen Town is a good choice for you. You can learn a lot about Sun Quan, a famous emperor in ancient China who played an important role in Chinese history. Also, it’s a wonderful place with beautiful and quiet environment. As for local food, there are many different kinds. For example, you can enjoy Longmen beef which was loved by Sun Quan. But if you want to go there, you need to buy tickets. They’re 80 yuan each. Hope you can have a good time in Fuyang! Yours, Zhang Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引入主题； 第二步，详细介绍其中一个景点的特色； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色 ③as for至于 ④have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①You can learn a lot about Sun Quan, a famous emperor in ancient China who played an important role in Chinese history. (定语从句) ②But if you want to go there, you need to buy tickets. (if引导的条件状语从句) (8) 同学们一定听过《如愿》这首歌，其中的一句歌词“山河无恙，烟火寻常”描绘了中国的盛世景象。城市的发展如同一部生动的历史长卷，每一条街道、每一座建筑都是一页篇章，记载着人们的辛勤耕耘和智慧创新。用脚步丈量大地宽广，用心感受中国的温暖怀抱。假定你是李辉，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 内容包括： 1.推荐一座值得游玩的城市及原因。 2.介绍该城市2-3处著名景点，描述这些景点的独特之处和游客的游玩活动。 介绍当地的特色美食…… 3.表达期待。 注意： （1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David, I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear David, I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history. There are three famous places you must visit. The Great Wall is very long and beautiful. You will feel excited when you walk on it. The Forbidden City has many old palaces. Summer Palace is perfect to take a walk by the lake. Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here! I can’t wait to see you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：应用文(电子邮件) ②时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时表期待 ③提示：需包含城市推荐、3个景点介绍和美食推荐 [写作步骤] 第一步，推荐北京及历史原因； 第二步，介绍3个景点：长城、故宫、颐和园； 第三步，推荐烤鸭； 第四步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①best choice 最佳选择 ②famous places 著名景点 ③delicious food 美味食物 ④take a walk 散步 [高分句型] ①I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history.（because引导原因状语从句） ②You will feel excited when you walk on it.（when引导时间状语从句） ③Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here!（祈使句的否定形式） (9) 传承中国文化，讲好中国故事是新一代青少年的责任。你校开展以“我最喜欢的中国传统故事”为主题的传统文化宣讲周活动。请你写一篇英文发言稿，分享你的故事。 内容包括： * your understanding of Chinese traditional stories * one of your favorite traditional stories * its influence on you 要求： 1. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数100左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear teachers and classmates, Chinese traditional stories are like shining stars in our culture. They carry our values, wisdom, and history, helping us understand who we are and where we come from. One of my favorite stories is The Monkey King. It tells the exciting journey of Sun Wukong, who overcomes countless challenges with his magical powers and bravery. What I love most is that he never gives up, no matter how difficult the situation is. This story has greatly influenced me. Whenever I face challenges, I think of Sun Wukong and find the courage to keep going. It also makes me proud of our rich culture and inspires me to share it with the world. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文化价值引入，强调中国传统故事的文化意义； 第二步，介绍故事的核心情节，并表达个人喜爱的原因； 第三步，说明故事如何塑造自己的品格与文化认同； 第四步，简洁致谢，结束演讲。 [亮点词汇] ①give up 放弃 ②come from 来自 [高分句型] ①Whenever I face challenges, I think of Sun Wukong and find the courage to keep going. (whenever引导的时间状语从句) ②It tells the exciting journey of Sun Wukong, who overcomes countless challenges with his magical powers and bravery. (who引导的非限制性定语从句) (10) 家乡是每个人成长的地方，随着时间推移，家乡的面貌也在不断变化。请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇短文，对比家乡过去与现在的不同，并谈谈你的感受。   提示：   1. 描述家乡过去的基础设施（如房屋、道路、自然环境等）；   2. 描述现在的变化（如新建的设施、交通改善、环境问题等）；   3. 分析变化的原因（如政策支持、经济发展等）；   4. 表达你对这些变化的看法（积极或消极）。   要求：   1. 要点齐全并适当发挥；   2. 全文不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；   3. 使用过去时态和现在时态。   参考词汇：   1. narrow roads 狭窄的道路；   2. modern facilities 现代化设施；   3. environment protection 环境保护；   4. development n. 发展。   Changes in My Hometown Dear classmates,   I’m Li Wei from Class 8. My hometown has changed a lot over the past ten years. Let me share the differences between the past and now.   These changes make life more convenient, but we should also protect our traditions. Let’s work together for a better hometown!   Li Wei   【答案】例文： Changes in My Hometown Dear classmates,   I’m Li Wei from Class 8. My hometown has changed a lot over the past ten years. Let me share the differences between the past and now.   In the past, the roads were narrow and full of mud when it rained. Most houses were small and old. People used to ride bicycles or walk to work. Now, wide roads connect every village, and tall buildings stand everywhere. The government built a new park where children can play safely. However, some forests were cut down to make space for factories. These changes come from the government’s support and economic development. I feel happy about the convenient life, but I miss the green fields and clear rivers. I hope we can protect nature while developing. These changes make life more convenient, but we should also protect our traditions. Let’s work together for a better hometown!   Li Wei 【解析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、描述家乡过去的基础设施以及现在的变化； 第三步、分析变化的原因以及表达自己对这些变化的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①full of充满 ②used to do sth.过去常常做某事 ③cut down砍倒（树木） ④come from来自 [高分句型] ①The government built a new park where children can play safely.(where引导定语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$