Module9 思维导图法写毕业留言（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module 9 外研版三起六年级下册 思维导图法写毕业留言 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 开头引入离别情境 回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 送上祝福与表达想念 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 4 01 写作方法指引 开头-引入离别情境 中间-回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 毕业赠言 结尾-送上祝福与表达想念 检查-书信格式 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 5 01 写作方法指引-示例 Dear Daming, We're leaving primary school. I really remember when we played games during the break. It was so cool. You always let me play my favorite games with you. Thanks for sharing your snacks with me when I was hungry. That made me so happy. I hope you can be happy every day and get good grades. I'm sad to leave, but I know we'll be great in the future. I'll miss you. Yours, Sam Dear Daming, We're leaving primary school. I really remember when we played games during the break. It was so cool. You always let me play my favorite games with you. Thanks for sharing your snacks with me when I was hungry. That made me so happy. I hope you can be happy every day and get good grades. I'm sad to leave, but I know we'll be great in the future. I'll miss you. Yours, Sam 开头引入离别情境 Dear Daming, We're leaving primary school. I really remember when we played games during the break. It was so cool. You always let me play my favorite games with you. Thanks for sharing your snacks with me when I was hungry. That made me so happy. I hope you can be happy every day and get good grades. I'm sad to leave, but I know we'll be great in the future. I'll miss you. Yours, Sam 回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 Dear Daming, We're leaving primary school. I really remember when we played games during the break. It was so cool. You always let me play my favorite games with you. Thanks for sharing your snacks with me when I was hungry. That made me so happy. I hope you can be happy every day and get good grades. I'm sad to leave, but I know we'll be great in the future. I'll miss you. Yours, Sam 送上祝福与表达想念 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.开头引入离别情境 参考词汇： 与毕业相关：graduate（毕业）；primary school（小学）；leave（离开） 表达情感：sad（难过的）；reluctant（不舍的）；excited（兴奋的） 参考句型： We're going to graduate from primary school soon. 我们很快就要小学毕业了。 The time to leave primary school is coming, and I feel… 离开小学的时刻即将到来，我感到… 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 参考词汇： 活动类：play football（踢足球）；perform a play（表演节目）；have a picnic（野餐）；join a competition（参加比赛） 帮助类：help（帮助）；lend sth. to sb.（把某物借给某人）；cheer sb. on（为某人加油）；tutor sb.（辅导某人） 参考句型： I'll never forget when we ____ together. （我永远不会忘记我们一起____的时候。） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 参考句型： You helped me a lot by ____. （你通过____帮了我很多。） Remember when we ____? It was so much fun. （还记得我们____的时候吗？那太有趣了。 ） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.送上祝福与表达想念 参考词汇： 祝福类：good luck（好运）；success（成功）；happiness（幸福）；health（健康） 想念类：miss（想念） 参考句型： Good luck for the future! （祝你未来好运！） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 11 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.送上祝福与表达想念 参考句型： Best wishes for your future. I hope you . 为你的未来送上最美好的祝愿。我希望你。 I'll miss you. 我会想念你的。 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 12 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 假如你是 Tina，马上就要小学毕业了，给你的好朋友大明写一下毕业留言吧! 要求： 文章不少于 70 词； 语法无误； 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 参考句型： We're leaving primary school. I'll always remember when we ____. Thanks for ____. It helped me a lot. I wish you ____. Though I'm ____ to leave, I'm also excited for ____. 参考词汇： leave（离开）；primary school（小学）；remember（记得）；thanks（感谢）；help（帮助）；wish（祝愿）；reluctant（不舍的）；new journey（新旅程） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 15 Dear Bella, We're leaving primary school. I'll always remember when we performed a play together. It was so much fun. Thanks for lending me your stationery when I forgot mine. It helped me a lot. I wish you success in your studies and happiness every day. Though I'm reluctant to leave, I'm also excited for our new journey. Our friendship will never change. Yours, Tina 范文1： 开头引入离别情境 回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 送上祝福与表达想念 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 16 模拟写作提升2 即将小学毕业，给你最要好的同学写一篇毕业留言，回答以下问题： What’s your most unforgettable memory with this classmate in primary school? How did this classmate help you? What do you wish for this classmate’s future? How do you feel about parting? 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 17 参考句型： We're going to say goodbye to primary school. I remember ____ very well. You helped me when I ____. Best wishes for your future. I hope ____. I feel ____ to say goodbye, but I know ____. 参考词汇： say goodbye（说再见）；primary school（小学）；remember（记得）；help（帮助）；wish（祝愿）；future（未来）；sad（难过的）；new start（新开始） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 18 Dear Andy We're going to say goodbye to primary school. I remember the time we played football together on the playground very well. You helped me when I fell and got hurt. You took me to the school doctor. Best wishes for your future. I hope you can keep playing football and be healthy. I feel a bit sad to say goodbye, but I know it's a new start for us. I'll always remember our friendship. Yours, Anna 范文2： 开头引入离别情境 回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 送上祝福与表达想念 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 19 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 观察下方图片，假设你是图中即将毕业的学生，给你最好的朋友写一篇毕业留言。 要求: 文章不少于70词； 语法无误; 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 真题写作练习-四川成都 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 21 参考句型： We're going to leave primary school soon. I'll never forget our time together. You're my best friend. You always _____. Thank you for _____. Good luck for the future! I'll miss you. 参考词汇： primary school（小学）；friend（朋友）；help（帮助）；laugh（欢笑）；miss（想念）；luck（运气）；future（未来） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 22 Dear Amy We're going to leave primary school soon. I'm really sad about it. I'll never forget our time together. You're my best friend. You always made me laugh when I was unhappy. Thank you for being with me through these years. Good luck for the future! I hope everything goes well for you. I'll miss you so much. Yours, Lulu 范文3： 开头引入离别情境 回忆相处时光与对方的帮助 送上祝福与表达想念 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 23 Thank you! $$