Module9 思维导图法介绍上周的生活（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module 9 外研版三起五年级下册 思维导图法介绍上周的生活 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 引入话题 具体活动描述 4 01 写作方法指引 开头-介绍引入话题 中间-介绍具体的活动 上周活动 结尾-表达感受和心情 检查-检查时态 和书信格式 5 01 写作方法指引-示例 Dear John, Last weekend, I went to the park. I went there with my family. We went there by car. When we got there, we flew a kite on the grass. Then I rode my bike around the park. It was so much fun! After that, we took a walk along the path. We saw many beautiful flowers. I felt really happy. It was a wonderful weekend. Love, Jim Dear John, Last weekend, I went to the park. I went there with my family. We went there by car. When we got there, we flew a kite on the grass. Then I rode my bike around the park. It was so much fun! After that, we took a walk along the path. We saw many beautiful flowers. I felt really happy. It was a wonderful weekend. Love, Jim 引入话题 Dear John, Last weekend, I went to the park. I went there with my family. We went there by car. When we got there, we flew a kite on the grass. Then I rode my bike around the park. It was so much fun! After that, we took a walk along the path. We saw many beautiful flowers. I felt really happy. It was a wonderful weekend. Love, Jim 具体活动描述 Dear John, Last weekend, I went to the park. I went there with my family. We went there by car. When we got there, we flew a kite on the grass. Then I rode my bike around the park. It was so much fun! After that, we took a walk along the path. We saw many beautiful flowers. I felt really happy. It was a wonderful weekend. Love, Jim 结尾感受表达 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.引入话题 参考词汇：last weekend（上周末）；dear（亲爱的）；friend（朋友）；write to（写信给） 参考句型： Last weekend, I went to a park. Last weekend was great. 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.具体活动描述(和谁一起，怎么去的，以及在那里做了什么） 参考词汇： 地点：park（公园）；zoo（动物园）；cinema（电影院）；museum（博物馆）；beach（海滩）；library（图书馆）；supermarket（超市） 同行人员：family（家人）；friend（朋友）；classmate（同学）；parent（父 / 母）；teacher（老师） 出行方式：by bus（乘公交车）；by bike（骑自行车）；by car（乘汽车）；on foot（步行） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.具体活动描述(去了哪里，和谁一起，怎么去的，以及在那里做了什么） 参考词汇： 活动：play football（踢足球）；see a film（看电影）；take photos（拍照）；swim（游泳）；read books（读书）；buy things（买东西）；have a picnic（野餐） 参考句型： Last weekend, I went to ____ with ____.We went there by ____. When we got there, I ____.We also ____. 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.结尾感受表达 参考词汇：happy（开心的）；excited（兴奋的）；tired but happy（累但开心）；great（很棒的）；wonderful（精彩的）；unforgettable（难忘的） 参考句型： I felt really ____. It was a ____ weekend. We were very ____ and had a great time. 11 03基础知识精讲-语法 一般过去时 定义： 一般过去时用来表示过去某个时间发生的动作或存在的状态 。在本单元写作中，描述上周末的活动，都发生在过去，所以要用一般过去时。 规则动词的过去式变化： 一般情况下，在动词原形后直接加 - ed ，如 play - played ； 以不发音的 e 结尾的动词，直接加 - d ，如 live - lived ； 以 “辅音字母 + y” 结尾的动词，变 y 为 i ，再加 - ed ，如 study - studied ； 12 03基础知识精讲-语法 一般过去时 规则动词的过去式变化： 以一个辅音字母结尾的重读闭音节动词，双写词尾辅音字母，再加 - ed ，如 stop - stopped 。 不规则动词的过去式需要特殊记忆，如 go - went ；see - saw ；eat - ate ；take - took 等。 13 03基础知识精讲-语法 根据适当形式填空。 I ___________ (go) to the park last Sunday. She __________ (see) a film yesterday evening. They __________ (eat) hamburgers for lunch. We __________ (take) many photos in the zoo. went saw ate took 14 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 根据以下问题，写一篇短文描述制作风筝的过程。 要求: 1.句子通顺,思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 Where supermarket Who mum How by car What buy lots of food 16 参考句型： Last weekend, I went to _____. I went there with _____. I went there by _____. I _____. I was _____. 参考词汇： supermarket（超市）；garden（花园）；playground（操场）；teacher（老师）；neighbor（邻居）；taxi（出租车）；walk（走路）；buy things（买东西）；water the flowers（浇花）；run（跑步）；glad（高兴的）；relaxed（放松的） 17 Dear Susan, Last weekend, I went to the supermarket. I went there with my mum. We went there c. In the supermarket, we bought lots of food and drinks. I also bought a new toy. Then we had lunch in a small restaurant near the supermarket. The food was delicious. I was very glad to spend time with my mum. It was a nice weekend. Love, Bobo 范文1： 引入话题 具体活动描述 结尾感受表达 18 模拟写作提升2 想象一下上周末的经历，然后给你的朋友写一封信，回答以下问题：Where did you go last weekend? Who did you go with? How did you go there? What did you do there? How did you feel? 要求: 1.句子通顺,思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 19 参考句型： Last weekend, I went to _____. I went there with _____. I went there by _____. I _____. I felt _____. 参考词汇： beach（海滩）；library（图书馆）；restaurant（餐厅）；classmate（同学）；parent（父 / 母）；car（汽车）；train（火车）；swim（游泳）；read books（读书）；have dinner（吃晚餐）；happy（开心的）；excited（兴奋的） 20 Dear Lily, Last weekend, I went to the beach. I went there with my classmates. We went there by bus. When we arrived, we played volleyball on the beach. Then I swam in the sea. It was so cool! After that, we had a picnic. We ate sandwiches and fruits. I felt really excited. It was a great weekend. Love, Nana 范文2： 引入话题 具体活动描述 结尾感受表达 21 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 观察图片，假设你是图片中的主人公，给你的好朋友写一封信，说说上周末你做了什么。 要求: 1.句子通顺,思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 真题写作练习-四川成都 23 参考句型： Last weekend, I went to _____. I went there with _____.I _____. I _____. We _____. We were _____. 参考词汇： park（公园）；zoo（动物园）；cinema（电影院）；museum（博物馆）；friend（朋友）；family（家人）；bus（公交车）；bike（自行车）；see a film（看电影）；take photos（拍照）；play football（踢足球）；eat ice - cream（吃冰淇淋） 24 Dear Amy, Last weekend, I went to the zoo. I went there with my family. We went there by bus. When we got there, I saw many cute animals. I took lots of photos of the pandas. We also watched a monkey show. It was really funny. We ate some snacks in the zoo. We were very happy. Love, Lingling 范文3： 引入话题 具体活动描述 结尾感受表达 25 Thank you! $$