Unit 6 写作- 2024-2025学年人教版七年级英语下册

Unit 6 Rain or Shine Writing 【写作主题】 描述某一天气状况下人的活动 【主题分析】 本单元写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群,涉及子主题“天气与日常生活”。常见的写作任务是介绍某时或某地的天气状况,以及在不同的天气状况下人们正在进行的活动,或者是介绍某地的天气预报。体裁多为记叙文或应用文。 【写作训练】 根据下面表格中的信息，以“Different Places,Different Weather”为题写一篇英文短文，介绍不同的人物在不同的天气下进行的各种活动。 Name Place Weather Activity John Moscow snowy and cold making snowmen Li Hua Beijing sunny and warm having a picnic Mary New York rainy and windy playing the guitar 要求: 1.短文须包含图片提示内容，可适当发撵伤 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 ( Where are they from? )3.不少于80词。 ( What are they doing? )第一步【审题立意】 ( How's the weather? )Different Places, Different Weather ( How do they feel? ) 1. 人称:____________为主，若以他人视角写作，则用对应的_______________。 2. 时态:________________ 3. 要点:文中需要描述三个不同人物在不同城市小还同天气下所做的活动。 4. 写作思路:开篇引出话题;正文详细描述表格中不同地点的天气以及不同人物正在进行的活动;最后回归主题。 第二步 【谋篇布局】 Beginning(开头)自我介绍，引入主题 1.Good morning, boys and girls. I'm... 2.I'd like to tell you the weather in different places and what they are doing. Body(正文)介绍不同人物在各自城市进行的不同活动 1.---What's the weather like in...?/How's the weather in...?.--It's sunny/cloudy/rainy. 2.The temperature is about... 3.Now he/she is... 4.At the moment. he/she is... Ending(结尾)描述他们的感受，回归主题 1.They're all having a good time. 2.Can you tell me what you are doing now? 3.They are all happy and relaxed. 第三步【词汇积累】 介绍天气 晴天的________ 有风的________有雾的________wet 潮湿的________强风_____ ______ 多云的________ 下雪的________ 暖和的________炎热的________暴风雨的________ 干燥的________下雨的________ 大雨_____ ______ 冷的________浓雾_____ ______ 室内活动 看电视_____ ______ 做家务_____ ______ 弹钢琴_____ _____ ______ 做饭______ 做瑜伽_____ ______ 做运动_____ ______ 去散步_____ _____ ______ 爬山_____ _____ ______ 去钓鱼_____ ______ 看电影_____ ______ 做作业_____ ______弹吉他_____ _____ ______拉小提琴_____ _____ ______ 画画_____ ______下象棋_____ ______骑自行车_____ _____ ______ 堆雪人_____ _____ ______ 打篮球_____ ______ 第四步【句型积累】 1. 我有三个好朋友。他们住在不同的地方。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2.约翰住在莫斯科。那里的天气是下雪且冰冻般寒冷的。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3.约翰正在和他的朋友们一起堆雪人。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 4.李华住在北京。那里是阳光明媚且温暖的。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 5.此刻，他正在公园进行野餐。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 6.玛丽住在纽约。那里是下雨且多风的。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 7.她正在她的卧室里弹吉他。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 8.当下雨时，她总是弹吉他。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 9.他们都玩得很开心。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 第五步【范文赏析】 Different places,Different weather I have three good friends. They come from different places. The weather in their cities is different as well. Now I'd like to tell you something about the weather in their cities. John lives in Moscow, the capital of Russia. The weather there is snowy, so it's freezing outside.He is making a snowman with his friends. Li Hua lives in Beijing, and it’s sunny and warm there. At the moment, he is having a picnic in the park.It seems that he really enjoys himself in such a sunny day. Mary lives in New York. It rains heavily and the wind blows strongly. She is playing the guitar in her bedroom when it's raining. They all enjoy themselves no matter how the weather is. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$