主题13 身边的模范(课件PPT)-【星城中考】2025年中考英语讲义（长沙专用）

主题13　身边的模范 三、人物介绍类 2025中考 长沙 英语  1 考点综述 01 2 2 2 1 模 拟 写 作 以 读 促 写 目 录 3 以读促写 考点综述 01 4 Dear Headmaster, 　　I am happy to recommend Jenny 　1　 the 2024 Youth Star Award.  　　As president of the Students’ Union, Jenny 　2　(lead) successful projects like helping younger students and 　3　(raise) over 10,000 yuan for local shelters last year. She is always ready to help others. Jenny also 　4　. (do) well in her studies, especially in Science and Math. She is not only 阅 读 感 知 1. ________　2. ________　3. ________　4. ________ for led raising does 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 5 　5　(friend) but also patient 　6　 her classmates and she often helps them with their study. She sets a good example for all of 　7　(we). She volunteers at the local old people’s home and helps people in need 　8　. well.  　　Jenny is one of the 　9　(good)students and leaders. I think I can learn a lot from her. I 　10　(high) recommend her for the 2024 Youth Star Award.  Yours sincerely, David Community Service Coordinator Sunshine High School 5. ________ 　6. ________　7. ________　8. ________　9. ________　 10. ________ friendly with us as best highly 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 6 1. raise ... for ... 为……筹集 2. be ready to do sth. 乐意做某事 3. not only ... but also ... 不但……而且…… 4. set a good example for ... 给……树立了一个好榜样 5. learn ... from ... 从……中学到…… 读 后 提 炼 高频表达 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 7 1. I am happy to recommend Jenny 　1　 the 2024 Youth Star Award.  我很高兴推选珍妮获得2024年青年明星奖。 2. Jenny also 　4　 well in her studies, especially in Science and Math.  珍妮在学习方面也做得很好,尤其是在科学和数学方面。 高分句型 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 8 (2023·牡丹江) 榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学 校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中,荣获“新时代好少年”的称号。 作为校报记者,请你根据以下信息,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍他的 事迹,并呼吁大家向他学习。 写 作 练 兵 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 9 要求: 1. 内容全面,语言流畅,层次清晰,可适当发挥; 2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3. 至少含有两个复合句。 Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 10 Role models 主题作文训练单  第一步:审 体裁:________文　 时态:__________________________　 人称:第__________人称　 话题:___________  记叙 一般现在、一般过去时 一、三 模范人物 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 第二步:列 开 头 【表明写作意图】 基础版: Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you. 进阶版: ★ It’s a great honor for me to introduce Zhao Yu who won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. 我的创意表达: _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 12 第二步:列 开 头 【具体介绍赵宇的个人信息】 基础版: He has some hobbies. He likes playing ping-pong. 进阶版: ★ He has various kinds of hobbies and he has a great passion for ping-pong. 我的创意表达: _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________  首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 第二步:列 开 头 【事迹一】 基础版: Zhao Yu is very creative. Zhao Yu is helpful. Also, he is active. 进阶版: ★ Zhao Yu is not only creative and optimistic but also very helpful and active, joining in lots of school activities. 我的创意表达: _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 14 第二步:列 正 文 【事迹二】 基础版: He volunteer to help in the community. 进阶版: ★ When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community. 我的创意表达: _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 第二步:列 结 尾 【总结推荐理由并再次表明推荐意图】 基础版: Let’s learn from him. 进阶版: ★ All in all, I think we should learn from Zhao Yu to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others. 我的创意表达: _____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 16 第三步:连 　　Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you. 　　____________(首先), Zhao Yu is a 15-year-old boy. He is in Class Six, Grade Nine. He has some hobbies. He likes playing ping-pong. He thinks it’s relaxing. He is also good at playing the erhu.  　　__________(同时), Zhao Yu is very creative and he has invented some small things. He even won two prizes for his inventions. __________(此外), First of all Meanwhile What’s more 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 第三步:连 Zhao Yu is helpful. When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community. (复合句一)Also, he is active. He often takes part in many meaningful activities. Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him.(复合句二)  　　___________(总而言之), I think we should learn from Zhao Yu to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.  注意:可适当用表顺序的衔接词让我们的作文逻辑更加清晰。如:first of all/to begin with/at first首先,second(ly)/then/next/after that其次,meanwhile/at the same time同时,what’s more 此外, finally/in the end/at last最后, last but not least 最后但是同样重要的是, all in all 总而言之。 All in all 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 模拟写作 考点综述 02 19 (2024·长沙模拟)在你的成长经历中,谁对你的影响最大?请根据自己的实际情况,写一篇题为“The Person Who Influenced Me Most”的短文。 要求:1. 短文必须包含图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥; 2. 80词左右(标题和开头部分已给出,不计入总词数); 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 20 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Person Who Influenced Me Most 　　I have seen and learned from many people in my life. ______________ my mother is the person who influenced me most. 　　My mother is the most hard-working person in my family. She always gets up early in the morning and then prepares healthy breakfast for us. After sending me to school, she goes to work. She is an English teacher. She is strict with her students and she cares about them a lot. All her students love her very much. She loves her job very much and gets lots of prizes. She sets But among them, 首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 21 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ a good example for me. She often tells me that no gain without pain(一分耕耘一分收获). If I want to get good grades, I must study hard. Her words inspired me and helped me become a better student.   All in all, my mother is excellent. I should learn from her in many ways. I want to be a person like her in the future.   首页 目录 以读促写 模拟写作 22 本讲内容结束 $$