Unit 8 Our Clothes 单元写作指导-2024-2025学年八年级英语下期易错易混考点精讲精练（仁爱版）

Unit8 Our Clothes单元写作指导 ★话题命题角度 话题通常有以下命题角度：介绍自己喜欢或参与的娱乐活动、体育活动等；谈论文学作品或文化现象。 好 句 背 诵 ＞话题佳句记背 休闲活动 1.We can do some sports such as going running every morning and playing basketball with friends. 我们可以做一些运动，如每天早上去跑步以及和朋友打篮球。 2.It’s a good way to relax by using the Internet or watching game shows， but we think the best way to relax is through exercise. 上网或者看游戏类节目是一个很好的放松方式，但是我们认为最好的放松方式是锻炼。 3.The song can bring me back to the happy days when I was in primary school. 这首歌能让我回想起小学时的快乐时光。 4.When he feels tired， he prefers listening to rock music to cheer him up. 当他感到疲倦时，他更喜欢听摇滚乐来让自己振作起来。 电影文学作品 1.I like watching Mulan very much. The movie shows her love for her family， friends and country. 我很喜欢看《花木兰》。这部电影展现了她对她的家人、朋友和国家的爱。 2.He was like a common man， but he always tried to face any danger. 他像一个普通人，但他总是尽力去面对任何危险。 3.She dresses up like a boy and takes her father’s place to fight in the army. 她打扮成男孩模样替父从军打仗。 4.The movie shows parents’ great love for their kids and tells us to value the love around us. 这部电影展现了父母对孩子伟大的爱，并且告诉我们要珍惜我们周围的爱。 意义内涵 1.This story reminds us that you can never know what’s possible unless you try to make it happen. 这个故事提醒我们，除非你去努力实现，否则你永远不知道可能会发生什么。 仿写1：这个故事提醒我们，除非我们能遵守诺言，否则不要做出承诺。 　The story reminds us that we should never make a promise unless we can keep it.　 2.The story is trying to show us that anything is possible if you work hard！ 这个故事试图告诉我们：如果你努力工作，一切皆有可能！ 仿写2：这个电影试图告诉我们，如果我们永不言弃，一切皆有可能。 　The movie is trying to tell us that anything is possible if we never give up.　 3.There are many sides to a story and many ways to understand it. 一个故事有很多面，而且理解它的方式也有很多种。 4.Country music reminds us that the best things in life are free－laughter， friends， family， and the beauty of nature and the countryside. 乡村音乐提醒我们生活中最美好的东西都是免费的－－欢笑、朋友、家庭、自然景色的美丽和乡村。 5.You need not only talent but also hard work to become a successful football player. 要成为一名成功的足球运动员，你不仅需要天赋而且需要勤奋。 6.Some of the challenges were so dangerous that they almost lost their lives. However， no matter how hard the situation was， they never gave up until last by fighting together. 有一些挑战太危险了，他们差点儿丢了性命。然而，无论境遇如何艰难，他们一起战斗直到最后，绝不放弃。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 Without reading， the mind will stop. Of all the books I have read， I like Journey to the West best. 没有阅读，思想就会停止。在我读过的书里，我最喜欢《西游记》。 中间段 In this story， Tang Xuanzang and his team realized their dreams after a long and hard journey. On their way， they had to face lots of challenges. 在这个故事中，唐玄奘和他的队伍在经历了漫长又艰辛的旅程后，实现了他们的梦想。在路上，他们不得不面对许多挑战。 结尾段 I learned a lot from the book—especially teamwork plays an important role in the work. Now I can do my best to work for my dreams like them. 我从这本书中学到很多－－尤其是团队合作在工作中起到的重要作用。现在我像他们一样用尽全力为我的梦想努力。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 2.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。 3.Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。 4.You reap what you sow. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。 5.Reading is a journey through the mind. 阅读是一次心灵之旅。 　　假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I Love 　　　　”为题征稿，请你根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 1.要点：1）热爱的主题； 2）热爱的理由； 3）适当的感悟。 2.要求：1）请补全标题； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右。 I Love 　　　 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：介绍热爱的事情，说明理由并发表感悟； 2.人称：第一人称； 3.时态：介绍自己现在热爱的事情用一般现在时；描述过去的事件说明热爱的理由用一般过去时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 I Love Taking Pictures Everyone has hobbies， and so do I. One of my hobbies that I’d like to share is taking pictures.　(亮点点评：that引导的定语从句)　 When I was a child，　(亮点点评：when引导的时间状语从句)　 my father took me to an art exhibition. There were 　(亮点点评：there be句型)　wonderful pictures taken by some top photographers. I was deeply attracted by 　(亮点点评：被动语态)　the beauty of the pictures and decided to learn to take such amazing pictures. I joined a photograph club and practiced taking pictures. Then I found it was great fun. Now I have taken nearly 500 pictures and some of them have been chosen by the school magazine. Taking those pictures not only 　(亮点点评：动名词作主语)　makes me relaxed but also 　(亮点点评：使用not only... but also...)　allows me to discover the beauty of people and things around me. 1．我们生命中的许多物件，大都蕴藏了一些珍贵的情感和记忆。学校即将开展“一器一物，遇见旧时光”英语故事分享会。请你介绍一件对你而言有意义的物品，讲讲你和它之间的故事。 要点： 1. What is the thing? 2. Tell the story of you and the thing. 3. Why do you think it is meaningful? 注意： 1. 短文应包括以上三个要点，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：80—100；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Each of us has many unforgettable objects that have special meanings. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．在你的童年生活中，一定有许多东西给你留下了美好的回忆。请你根据下边表格里的提示内容，以“My Favorite Birthday Gift”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的生日礼物。可适当发挥。 最喜欢的礼物 一辆自行车 特征 蓝色，色彩斑斓的车轮，使用自如 来源 13岁时爸爸送的生日礼物，你拥有它很久了 意义 回忆童年，带来欢乐，锻炼身体 要求：1.语言连贯，语法正确，书写工整；2.字数在80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．近年来，汉服在国内越来越受欢迎。假如你是李菲——汉服爱好者， 你的加拿大朋友Jane对此很感兴趣。请你根据提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向她介绍汉服 (Han Costume) 及你喜欢汉服的原因。词数80左右。 由棉，丝绸等制成，有各种不同的装饰 汉族的传统服装，代表中华文化 有四千多年的历史， 不同的朝代，汉服款式也不一样 不同于西式服装，影响其它亚洲国家的服装 参考词汇： 汉族：Han nationality 注意： 1. 内容必须包含提示的所有要点；可适当发挥；注意语言的多样性； 2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整清、书写规范； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名。 Dear Jane, How are you these days? I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Fei 4．每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My favorite _______”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。 要点：1. What does it look like? 2. What is it made of? 3. Why do you like it? 要求：1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等； 3. 词数：100词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你校报社正在举办以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood”为主题的征文比赛，请你根据导图提示写一篇短文向报社投稿，描述一件你童年最喜欢的物品。 What is it? Favorite thing How did you get it? What does it look like? Why is it special? How long have you had it? Feeling 要求： 1. 参考信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Everyone has a sweet and happy childhood. There must be something you like best during that time. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．搜搜你的房间，看看有没有从童年开始就一直陪伴着你的东西呢？也许是一本书，也许是一个玩具……请以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood”为题写一篇文章，描述一件你最喜欢的物品。 提示： 1. What’s your favorite thing from childhood? 2. How long have you had it? How did you get it? 3. Why is it so special to you? 要求： 1. 短文应语句通顺，条理清楚， 行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 80左右词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Favorite Thing from Childhood My favorite thing from childhood is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．为了培养学生的阅读兴趣，你校开展了“书香进校园，阅读伴成长”的活动。请你结合下面的提示，以“The best book I have ever read”为题，介绍你读过的最喜欢的一本书。 What’s the name of the book? Who wrote it? When and who bought it for you? Why do you like it? How many times have you read it? 要求： 1. 内容包括所有提示信息，并适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范； 3. 词数不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 The best book I have ever read The best book I have ever read is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Changing Leisure Activities 提示：不同时代的孩子有不同的休闲娱乐活动。父辈们以前的休闲活动有看露天电影、滚铁环、跳绳等，你的休闲娱乐活动有哪些？请以“Changing Leisure Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的休闲娱乐活动与父辈们相比，有什么优缺点？ 参考词汇： watch movies in the open air, roll iron rings, jump ropes. 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．八年级的生活即将结束，也许你早已不玩玩具了，但在课本的Unit 10 中提到了人们对玩具的一些眷恋之情。你是否有同感呢？请你回忆一下你对过去的哪个玩具有深刻的记忆，用英文写一篇短文，介绍一下它吧！内容包括： 1. 你最喜欢的玩具是什么； 2. 你怎么得到它的； 3. 你为什么喜欢它。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 I have had many toys like other kids. But _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．童年是人生中最美好的一段时光。尽管我们已告别童年，但童年中总有那么一件你最爱的并能给你带来甜美回忆的物品值得我们珍藏。假设你叫李华，是一名八年级学生，你的学校校刊正在举行“美好童年”的征文比赛。请以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，你拥有它有多长时间了，是怎样得到它的，以及你喜欢它的原因。 要求：1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚； 3. 80词左右。 My favorite ________ in childhood _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 11．假如你是李华，英语课上老师请同学们分享自己最喜爱的物品，你最喜欢的是一支钢笔，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，用英语写篇短文，描述一下你和这支钢笔的故事。 a birthday gift                    write with the pen                remind me of sweet from Grandma                                                    memories with Grandma 注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数70左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My name is Li Hua. My favorite thing is a pen. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit8 Our Clothes单元写作指导 ★话题命题角度 话题通常有以下命题角度：介绍自己喜欢或参与的娱乐活动、体育活动等；谈论文学作品或文化现象。 好 句 背 诵 ＞话题佳句记背 休闲活动 1.We can do some sports such as going running every morning and playing basketball with friends. 我们可以做一些运动，如每天早上去跑步以及和朋友打篮球。 2.It’s a good way to relax by using the Internet or watching game shows， but we think the best way to relax is through exercise. 上网或者看游戏类节目是一个很好的放松方式，但是我们认为最好的放松方式是锻炼。 3.The song can bring me back to the happy days when I was in primary school. 这首歌能让我回想起小学时的快乐时光。 4.When he feels tired， he prefers listening to rock music to cheer him up. 当他感到疲倦时，他更喜欢听摇滚乐来让自己振作起来。 电影文学作品 1.I like watching Mulan very much. The movie shows her love for her family， friends and country. 我很喜欢看《花木兰》。这部电影展现了她对她的家人、朋友和国家的爱。 2.He was like a common man， but he always tried to face any danger. 他像一个普通人，但他总是尽力去面对任何危险。 3.She dresses up like a boy and takes her father’s place to fight in the army. 她打扮成男孩模样替父从军打仗。 4.The movie shows parents’ great love for their kids and tells us to value the love around us. 这部电影展现了父母对孩子伟大的爱，并且告诉我们要珍惜我们周围的爱。 意义内涵 1.This story reminds us that you can never know what’s possible unless you try to make it happen. 这个故事提醒我们，除非你去努力实现，否则你永远不知道可能会发生什么。 仿写1：这个故事提醒我们，除非我们能遵守诺言，否则不要做出承诺。 　The story reminds us that we should never make a promise unless we can keep it.　 2.The story is trying to show us that anything is possible if you work hard！ 这个故事试图告诉我们：如果你努力工作，一切皆有可能！ 仿写2：这个电影试图告诉我们，如果我们永不言弃，一切皆有可能。 　The movie is trying to tell us that anything is possible if we never give up.　 3.There are many sides to a story and many ways to understand it. 一个故事有很多面，而且理解它的方式也有很多种。 4.Country music reminds us that the best things in life are free－laughter， friends， family， and the beauty of nature and the countryside. 乡村音乐提醒我们生活中最美好的东西都是免费的－－欢笑、朋友、家庭、自然景色的美丽和乡村。 5.You need not only talent but also hard work to become a successful football player. 要成为一名成功的足球运动员，你不仅需要天赋而且需要勤奋。 6.Some of the challenges were so dangerous that they almost lost their lives. However， no matter how hard the situation was， they never gave up until last by fighting together. 有一些挑战太危险了，他们差点儿丢了性命。然而，无论境遇如何艰难，他们一起战斗直到最后，绝不放弃。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 Without reading， the mind will stop. Of all the books I have read， I like Journey to the West best. 没有阅读，思想就会停止。在我读过的书里，我最喜欢《西游记》。 中间段 In this story， Tang Xuanzang and his team realized their dreams after a long and hard journey. On their way， they had to face lots of challenges. 在这个故事中，唐玄奘和他的队伍在经历了漫长又艰辛的旅程后，实现了他们的梦想。在路上，他们不得不面对许多挑战。 结尾段 I learned a lot from the book—especially teamwork plays an important role in the work. Now I can do my best to work for my dreams like them. 我从这本书中学到很多－－尤其是团队合作在工作中起到的重要作用。现在我像他们一样用尽全力为我的梦想努力。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 2.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。 3.Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。 4.You reap what you sow. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。 5.Reading is a journey through the mind. 阅读是一次心灵之旅。 　　假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I Love 　　　　”为题征稿，请你根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 1.要点：1）热爱的主题； 2）热爱的理由； 3）适当的感悟。 2.要求：1）请补全标题； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右。 I Love 　　　 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：介绍热爱的事情，说明理由并发表感悟； 2.人称：第一人称； 3.时态：介绍自己现在热爱的事情用一般现在时；描述过去的事件说明热爱的理由用一般过去时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 I Love Taking Pictures Everyone has hobbies， and so do I. One of my hobbies that I’d like to share is taking pictures.　(亮点点评：that引导的定语从句)　 When I was a child，　(亮点点评：when引导的时间状语从句)　 my father took me to an art exhibition. There were 　(亮点点评：there be句型)　wonderful pictures taken by some top photographers. I was deeply attracted by 　(亮点点评：被动语态)　the beauty of the pictures and decided to learn to take such amazing pictures. I joined a photograph club and practiced taking pictures. Then I found it was great fun. Now I have taken nearly 500 pictures and some of them have been chosen by the school magazine. Taking those pictures not only 　(亮点点评：动名词作主语)　makes me relaxed but also 　(亮点点评：使用not only... but also...)　allows me to discover the beauty of people and things around me. 1．我们生命中的许多物件，大都蕴藏了一些珍贵的情感和记忆。学校即将开展“一器一物，遇见旧时光”英语故事分享会。请你介绍一件对你而言有意义的物品，讲讲你和它之间的故事。 要点： 1. What is the thing? 2. Tell the story of you and the thing. 3. Why do you think it is meaningful? 注意： 1. 短文应包括以上三个要点，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：80—100；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Each of us has many unforgettable objects that have special meanings. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Each of us has many unforgettable objects that have special meanings. I have also got such a meaningful present—a set of wonderful bookmarks. When my parents visited Nanjing, they bought me a set of bookmarks. And they were like my friends when I was in primary school. They “enjoyed” lots of good books together with me. You may wonder why this set of bookmarks means so much to me. I wasn’t a good reader before. To help me develop good reading habits, my parents bought the bookmarks to remind me to read on and finish the books. With the bookmarks and my parents’ help. I came to enjoy reading. Toady I still keep the set of bookmarks and I’ll continue taking good care of them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍一件对你而言有意义的物品； 第二步，讲讲你和它之间的故事； 第三步，说明你认为它有意义的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①a set of一套 ②means so much to sb.对某人来说意义重大 ③remind sb. to do sth.提醒某人去做某事 ④continue doing sth.继续做某事 ⑤take good care of好好照顾 [高分句型] ①When my parents visited Nanjing, they bought me a set of bookmarks.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②You may wonder why this set of bookmarks means so much to me.（why引导的宾语从句） 2．在你的童年生活中，一定有许多东西给你留下了美好的回忆。请你根据下边表格里的提示内容，以“My Favorite Birthday Gift”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的生日礼物。可适当发挥。 最喜欢的礼物 一辆自行车 特征 蓝色，色彩斑斓的车轮，使用自如 来源 13岁时爸爸送的生日礼物，你拥有它很久了 意义 回忆童年，带来欢乐，锻炼身体 要求：1.语言连贯，语法正确，书写工整；2.字数在80词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Birthday Gift I have received many birthday gifts, but I like my bike best. I have had this bike since my thirteenth birthday. My father gave it to me as a birthday gift. It is blue and has two colorful wheels. On weekends, I ride my bike to hang out with my friends. Riding bikes can keep me healthy. It brings me a lot of fun. Sometimes my friends and I have a competition. It is meaningful to me. Now it is still with me. Every time I see it, it reminds me of my childhood. What’s your favorite birthday gift? What do you think of it? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的最喜欢的生日礼物； 第二步，介绍礼物的来源、特征和意义； 第三步，书写结尾，询问对方最喜欢的生日礼物。 [亮点词汇] ①hang out with和某人出去逛街 ②reminds me of my childhood使我想起我的童年 [高分句型] Riding bikes can make me keep healthy. (动名词作主语) 3．近年来，汉服在国内越来越受欢迎。假如你是李菲——汉服爱好者， 你的加拿大朋友Jane对此很感兴趣。请你根据提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向她介绍汉服 (Han Costume) 及你喜欢汉服的原因。词数80左右。 由棉，丝绸等制成，有各种不同的装饰 汉族的传统服装，代表中华文化 有四千多年的历史， 不同的朝代，汉服款式也不一样 不同于西式服装，影响其它亚洲国家的服装 参考词汇： 汉族：Han nationality 注意： 1. 内容必须包含提示的所有要点；可适当发挥；注意语言的多样性； 2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整清、书写规范； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名。 Dear Jane, How are you these days? I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Fei 【答案】例文 Dear Jane, How are you these days? I know you are interested in the Han costume in China. Now, let me tell you something about it. Hanfu is made of cotton, silk and so on. It has all kinds of different decorations. It is a traditional costume of the Han nationality and represents Chinese culture. It has a history of more than 4,000 years, and the styles of Hanfu are different in different dynasties. It is different from Western clothing and influences the clothing of other Asian countries. Hanfu becomes popular because the government is developing traditional culture. Period dramas have also helped develop the public’s interest in traditional Chinese clothes. In modern China, people in different fields are interested in wearing Hanfu: from history lovers to students and even young workers. Yours, Li Fei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节；注意邮件书写格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明文章主题； 第二步，详细阐述汉服的款式、意义及影响等； 第三步，介绍汉服被人喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……制成 ②all kinds of各种各样的 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①It has a history of more than 4,000 years, and the styles of Hanfu are different in different dynasties.（并列复合句） ②Hanfu becomes popular because the government is developing traditional culture.（原因状语从句） 4．每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My favorite _______”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。 要点：1. What does it look like? 2. What is it made of? 3. Why do you like it? 要求：1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等； 3. 词数：100词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite dress I have many clothes, but I like a dress best among my clothes. It is a black dress. It is made of cotton. And it’s very comfortable to wear. I like it so much that I often wear it to school. I like it because it’s a special gift from my mother. She sent it to me last year for my 20th birthday. She made it by herself for months. It doesn’t have fancy designs or flowers on it, but it fits me very much. The color makes me look slimmer. Everyone says it looks great on me. What’s more, it also makes me remember the love from my mom. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给问题中包含的关键信息，写短文介绍自己最喜爱的衣服。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用衣服类的名词补全标题； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的衣服是哪一件，长什么样； 第三步，介绍这件衣服的材料； 第四步，介绍喜欢它的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①like ... best 最喜欢 ②send sth. to sb. 将某物通过邮寄、电子邮件等方式发送给某人 ③very much 非常 [高分句型] ①I have many clothes, but I like a dress best among my clothes.（but连接表转折关系的并列句） ②I like it because it’s a special gift from my mother.（because引导原因状语从句） 5．假设你校报社正在举办以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood”为主题的征文比赛，请你根据导图提示写一篇短文向报社投稿，描述一件你童年最喜欢的物品。 What is it? Favorite thing How did you get it? What does it look like? Why is it special? How long have you had it? Feeling 要求： 1. 参考信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Everyone has a sweet and happy childhood. There must be something you like best during that time. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Everyone has a sweet and happy childhood. There must be something you like best during that time. My favorite thing from childhood is a book named Harry Potter. The book was beautifully packaged. I have had this book since I was 13 years old. It was given to me as a birthday gift by my mother. I like the story of Harry Potter. I like to read it in my spare time. From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. I also know people should help, understand and love each other. I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己最喜欢的物品是什么； 第二步，介绍物品的样子，拥有多久了以及是如何得到的； 第三步，介绍它的特别之处并表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s spare time在某人空闲时间 ②be full of充满 ③grow up成长 [高分句型] ①I have had this book since I was 13 years old. (since引导的时间状语从句) ②I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love. (宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句) 6．搜搜你的房间，看看有没有从童年开始就一直陪伴着你的东西呢？也许是一本书，也许是一个玩具……请以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood”为题写一篇文章，描述一件你最喜欢的物品。 提示： 1. What’s your favorite thing from childhood? 2. How long have you had it? How did you get it? 3. Why is it so special to you? 要求： 1. 短文应语句通顺，条理清楚， 行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 80左右词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Favorite Thing from Childhood My favorite thing from childhood is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Thing from Childhood My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. I was very excited about receiving the gift. I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. I think that I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother. The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night, I held my teddy bear to feel safe. This is the gift that made me very unforgettable. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干介绍一样从童年开始就一直陪伴在身边的东西，注意适当发挥，注意时态切换。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明“儿时最喜欢的物品”及它的来历； 第二步，讲述它之所以特殊的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be excited about 对……感到兴奋 ②be dressed in 穿着 ③remind of 提醒 [高分句型] ①I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color.（原因状语从句） ②This is the gift that made me very unforgettable.（定语从句） 7．为了培养学生的阅读兴趣，你校开展了“书香进校园，阅读伴成长”的活动。请你结合下面的提示，以“The best book I have ever read”为题，介绍你读过的最喜欢的一本书。 What’s the name of the book? Who wrote it? When and who bought it for you? Why do you like it? How many times have you read it? 要求： 1. 内容包括所有提示信息，并适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范； 3. 词数不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 The best book I have ever read The best book I have ever read is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The best book I have ever read The best book I have ever read is The Old and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. My dad gave it to me as a birthday gift last year. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the fish, and the sea as well. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat. It tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart. The spirit helps me overcome many difficulties. I have read this book no less than twice, and each time I gain new insights and feelings. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，直接表明喜欢的书籍的名字，作者以及什么时间谁买给自己的； 第二步，介绍书的主要内容和喜欢这本书的原因； 第三步，说明自己读过几次，并号召大家一起读。 [亮点词汇] ①on the way back 在回去的路上 ②fight against 与……作斗争 ③as long as 只要 [高分句型] ①This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. (定语从句和并列句) ②It tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.(宾语从句和状语从句) 8．Changing Leisure Activities 提示：不同时代的孩子有不同的休闲娱乐活动。父辈们以前的休闲活动有看露天电影、滚铁环、跳绳等，你的休闲娱乐活动有哪些？请以“Changing Leisure Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的休闲娱乐活动与父辈们相比，有什么优缺点？ 参考词汇： watch movies in the open air, roll iron rings, jump ropes. 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changing Leisure Activities Throughout the ages, the development of society has influenced people’s leisure activities, and their ways of change are also very interesting. I would like to tell you about the changes in the past few decades. In the past, people like my parents did a lot of sports activities in their free time to have fun. The main things they did were watching movies in open air, rolling iron rings and jump roping. However, nowadays people mainly stay at home in their free time. Due to the development of technology, teenagers like me often make watching TV, playing video games, and texting friends as their leisure activities. I think this is a bit bad because in the past, people could exercise and have fun in their free time, but now the activities people do can make them lazy and unhealthy. I hope the leisure activities that people do now will be healthier in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态过去的事情为“一般过去时”，现在的情况为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我的休闲活动与父辈的休闲活动不同以及它们的优点和缺点”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“古往今来，社会的发展影响着人们的休闲活动，他们的变化方式也很有趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“过去人们（如父母）的休闲活动与我现在的休闲活动的不同”重点介绍娱乐方式的变化； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望人们现在的休闲活动在未来会更健康。”。 [亮点词汇] ① throughout the ages古往今来 ② stay at home呆在家里 [高分句型] ① I think this is a bit bad because in the past, people could exercise and have fun in their free time, but now the activities people do can make them lazy and unhealthy.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② I hope the leisure activities that people do now will be healthier in the future.（定语从句） 9．八年级的生活即将结束，也许你早已不玩玩具了，但在课本的Unit 10 中提到了人们对玩具的一些眷恋之情。你是否有同感呢？请你回忆一下你对过去的哪个玩具有深刻的记忆，用英文写一篇短文，介绍一下它吧！内容包括： 1. 你最喜欢的玩具是什么； 2. 你怎么得到它的； 3. 你为什么喜欢它。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 I have had many toys like other kids. But _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One Possible Version: I have had many toys like other kids. But my favorite toy is a brown-white toy bear. I have had it for two years. Two years ago, my father got a new job in another city so I had to go to a new school. I felt sad because I didn’t want to part with my classmates. One of my best friends named Mona gave the toy bear to me. She said although we couldn’t be together, the toy bear could stay with me instead of her. Whenever I miss my friends, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇给材料的记叙文写作，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”相结合； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题表明自己最喜欢的玩具是什么，来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述是怎么得到这个玩具的以及为什么喜欢它； [亮点词汇] ①part with与……分开 ②give...to...给某人某物 ③ instead of 代替 ④makes me feel happy and warm让我感到快乐和温暖 [高分句型] ① I felt sad because I didn’t want to part with my classmates. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②One of my best friends named Mona gave the toy bear to me.（named是过去分词作定语修饰名词friends） ③She said although we couldn’t be together, the toy bear could stay with me instead of her.（although引导的让步状语从句） ④Whenever I miss my friends, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） 10．童年是人生中最美好的一段时光。尽管我们已告别童年，但童年中总有那么一件你最爱的并能给你带来甜美回忆的物品值得我们珍藏。假设你叫李华，是一名八年级学生，你的学校校刊正在举行“美好童年”的征文比赛。请以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，你拥有它有多长时间了，是怎样得到它的，以及你喜欢它的原因。 要求：1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚； 3. 80词左右。 My favorite ________ in childhood _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】参考范文： My favorite gift in childhood Since I was born, I have received a good number of gifts. But the best one is a watch, which my dad gave me when I entered senior middle school. At that moment, my family are living a hard life. Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, my dad made every effort to earn money. Each time I see the watch, I think about my great dad. He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，拥有的时间，怎样得到的以及喜欢的原因。 2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍童年最喜欢的礼物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。 11．假如你是李华，英语课上老师请同学们分享自己最喜爱的物品，你最喜欢的是一支钢笔，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，用英语写篇短文，描述一下你和这支钢笔的故事。 a birthday gift                    write with the pen                remind me of sweet from Grandma                                                    memories with Grandma 注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数70左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My name is Li Hua. My favorite thing is a pen. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My name is Li Hua. My favorite thing is a pen. I have owned it for 5 years. It is a birthday gift from my grandma. It is black and gold. It looks a little bit expensive. I like it very much. I usually do my homework with the pen. Because I can use it comfortably. But I like to use it to write letters best. It looks quite beautiful. The pen always reminds me of sweet memories with my grandma. I’ll keep the pen carefully. 【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时应承接短文开头，然后介绍自己喜欢钢笔的原因，最后介绍自己会好好保存钢笔，可适当发挥。 2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍自己和钢笔的故事时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$