Unit 5 Amazing nature单元话题满分范文必背-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（外研版2024）

Unit 5 Amazing nature 单元话题满分范文必背 基础范文背诵 1．为了鼓励青少年亲近大自然、走进大自然，某青少年英文网站举办了主题为“Nature”的征文比赛。假如你是李明，请你根据以下的要点提示写一篇英文短文投稿。 要点： 1．走进大自然的经历及感受； 2．走进大自然的好处(放松身心，……)； 3．呼吁人们走进大自然。 注意： 1．短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数70～80。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．请以 “How to Protect Water” 为题写一篇短文，词数80—120左右。应包括以下信息点： 1. 水对人类很重要，我们的生活离不开水。 2. 目前水污染严重，可饮用水正在减少。 3. 我们应如何保护水资源? (1) 不要浪费水； (2) 循环利用水； (3) …… How to Protect Water As we all know, water is important to us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．黄河是中华民族的母亲河，保护黄河是事关中华民族伟大复兴和永续发展的千秋大计。你校英文报拟发布保护黄河的倡议书。请你根据以下思维导图用英文介绍一下黄河并倡导大家共护母亲河。 要求：1.需包含上述要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The English School Newspaper 4．假如你是Helen，学校将组织一次以“Animals’ Friend”为主题的英语演讲比赛，并选择优胜者为学生会会员。请你根据思维导图写一篇演讲稿，申请加入学生会。 参考词汇：湿地wetland；学生会the Students’ Union 要求： 1.内容齐全，涵盖所有要点； 2.字迹清晰，卷面整洁； 3.语言流畅，表达正确； 4.至少添加一条自己的观点； 5.词数：不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello! Everyone! I’m Helen. I want to join the Students’ Union and do something to protect animals. I’m glad to make a speech here. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．树木为人类提供木材，为动物提供食物和居住的场所，树木还能影响环境和气候。但是在有些地方，人们砍伐太多树木。请根据以下提示信息用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家一起保护树木。 内容提示：（1）阐述树木的重要性；（2）提出保护树木的建议（两至三点）。 写作要求：（1）文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：provide提供；wood木材；cut down砍倒；one-off一次性的；chopsticks           筷子；waste paper浪费纸张；plant trees种树 Trees are very important to people and animals. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是李华，植树节来临，请你写一封倡议书，号召大家多种树、爱护树、禁止砍伐树木。倡议书中要指出植物的益处，如：提供食物和药品，释放氧气，给动物和人类家园等等。要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺。2.80词左右。 参考词汇：Tree Planting Day植树节________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．黄河是我们的母亲河，保护黄河是事关中华民族伟大复兴的千秋大计。你校英文报拟发布保护黄河的倡议书。请你根据以下思维导图，用英文介绍一下黄河并倡导大家共护母亲河。 要求：(1)包含上述要点，可适当发挥； (2)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁； (3)不少于80词。 Protect the Yellow River Dear students, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇拔高练 9．假设你是李华，学校正在举办“自然保护周”活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，分享你在大熊猫国家公园的见闻和感悟，动植物是我们的好朋友，并号召大家共同保护自然。内容要点： 国家公园中看到的动植物 ……(请补充) 动植物的重要性 1.树木净化空气 2.……(请补充) 保护动植物的措施 1.不乱砍树木 2. ……(请补充) 号召大家共同保护自然 ……(请补充) 注意： (1)要求包括所有要点； (2)词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予以评分。 Hello everyone, Today, I want to share my trip to The Giant Panda National Park. ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s protect nature together! Thank you! 10．假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生Tim想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封80词左右的邮件，向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。                   语篇类型：应用文； 时态：一般现在时； 人称：第三人称； 内容提示： ◆长度：约505千米； ◆深度：约6千米 (最深处) ； ◆美誉：植物博物馆 the plant museum；动物王国 the animal kingdom； ◆最佳旅游时间：春、夏 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Haoyu 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 5 Amazing nature 单元话题满分范文必背 基础范文背诵 1．为了鼓励青少年亲近大自然、走进大自然，某青少年英文网站举办了主题为“Nature”的征文比赛。假如你是李明，请你根据以下的要点提示写一篇英文短文投稿。 要点： 1．走进大自然的经历及感受； 2．走进大自然的好处(放松身心，……)； 3．呼吁人们走进大自然。 注意： 1．短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数70～80。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life. I still remember the time when I went hiking with my family. We got up early to see the sunrise. At first, I walked without difficulties. Later, I felt tired and wanted to give up but my dad kept encouraging me. Finally, I reached the top of the mountain and saw the sun shining in the sky. I was amazed by the beauty of nature. Getting close to nature is good for us students. It helps us learn more about plants and animals. We can also relax after a week’s study. Let’s get close to nature together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己走进大自然的经历及感受； 第二步，介绍走进大自然的好处； 第三步，呼吁人们走进大自然。 [亮点词汇] ①at first起初 ②give up放弃 ③get close to接近 [高分句型] ①I still remember the time when I went hiking with my family.(when引导的定语从句) 2．请以 “How to Protect Water” 为题写一篇短文，词数80—120左右。应包括以下信息点： 1. 水对人类很重要，我们的生活离不开水。 2. 目前水污染严重，可饮用水正在减少。 3. 我们应如何保护水资源? (1) 不要浪费水； (2) 循环利用水； (3) …… How to Protect Water As we all know, water is important to us. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Protect Water As we all know, water is important to us. We use water to wash things, cook food and make machines. People can’t live without water. But some people don’t seem to care about it. Therefore, water pollution is getting more and more serious. There is less and less drinkable water on Earth. So we should do something to protect water. First, don’t leave the tap running when we don’t need to use water. Second, try to reuse water. When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. Third, we can have a shower instead of a bath. I believe if everyone try to save water, the world will be better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作时要包含所给出的写作要点，必要时可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍水对人类的重要性和目前的水污染情况； 第二步，介绍我们应如何保护水资源； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①use...to do 用……去做某事 ②care about 在乎 ③less and less 越来越少 ④try to do 尽力做某事 ⑤instead of 代替 [高分句型] ①So we should do something to protect water. (to do不定式作目的状语) ②When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. (when引导时间状语从句) ③I believe if everyone try to save water, the world will be better and better. (if引导条件状语从句) 3．黄河是中华民族的母亲河，保护黄河是事关中华民族伟大复兴和永续发展的千秋大计。你校英文报拟发布保护黄河的倡议书。请你根据以下思维导图用英文介绍一下黄河并倡导大家共护母亲河。 要求：1.需包含上述要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The English School Newspaper 【答案】例文： Dear students, The Yellow River is known as China’s “mother river”. It’s 5,464 kilometres long. It is the second longest river in our country and runs through many cities. However, the Yellow River is in a poor situation. The water and soil loss is very serious. The water is dirty. So it’s important for us to protect it. First of all, we should stop fishing. Second, our government must do something to protect our mother river. Third, we should plant more trees on both sides of the river. And we should never throw rubbish into the river. Let’s work together and protect our beautiful “mother river”! The English School Newspaper 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作句式已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“黄河被称为是母亲河”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“现实、现况、方式”几个方面详细的描写。 第三步，书写结语。表达“让我们共同努力保护我们的母亲”，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①second第二 ②water and soil loss水土流失 ③serious严重的 [高分句型] ①So it’s important for us to protect it. ( It is+形容词for sb. to do sth.句型) 4．假如你是Helen，学校将组织一次以“Animals’ Friend”为主题的英语演讲比赛，并选择优胜者为学生会会员。请你根据思维导图写一篇演讲稿，申请加入学生会。 参考词汇：湿地wetland；学生会the Students’ Union 要求： 1.内容齐全，涵盖所有要点； 2.字迹清晰，卷面整洁； 3.语言流畅，表达正确； 4.至少添加一条自己的观点； 5.词数：不少于70词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello! Everyone! I’m Helen. I want to join the Students’ Union and do something to protect animals. I’m glad to make a speech here. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello! Everyone! I’m Helen. I want to join the Students’ Union and do something to protect animals. I’m glad to make a speech here. I’m kind to animals and I like nature. I helped raise money for Save China’s Pandas last year. I counted the numbers of the birds in the wetlands. I find the number is becoming smaller and smaller. Animals are our best friends. We should protect them. Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. If I can join the Students’ Union, I’ll let more people know the importance of protecting animals. I hope our world will be a better place for both people and animals. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：表达加入学生会以保护动物的意愿，阐述自身经历及保护动物的观点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头进行自我介绍，表明想加入学生会保护动物的意愿，并引出演讲； 第二步，中间阐述自己善待动物、热爱自然的特点，列举自己为保护动物做过的事，强调动物是人类的朋友，应予以保护； 第三步，结尾说明若加入学生会会让更多人了解保护动物的重要性，表达希望世界变得更美好的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①raise money筹集资金 ②count the numbers统计数量 ③importance重要性 [高分句型] ①Protecting animals is protecting ourselves.（动名词短语作主语） ②If I can join the Students’ Union, I’ll let more people know the importance of protecting animals.（if引导条件状语从句） 5．树木为人类提供木材，为动物提供食物和居住的场所，树木还能影响环境和气候。但是在有些地方，人们砍伐太多树木。请根据以下提示信息用英语写一篇短文，倡议大家一起保护树木。 内容提示：（1）阐述树木的重要性；（2）提出保护树木的建议（两至三点）。 写作要求：（1）文中须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； （3）词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：provide提供；wood木材；cut down砍倒；one-off一次性的；chopsticks           筷子；waste paper浪费纸张；plant trees种树 Trees are very important to people and animals. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Trees are very important to people and animals. They provide wood for people. They are home to animals and they also provide food for animals. Trees are also important to the environment and the climate. But in some places, people cut down too many trees. That’s too bad. We must protect trees. We should not use one-off cups or chopsticks. We should not waste paper. And we should plant more trees and look after trees well. If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：仔细审题，不要遗漏要点，并进一步做出补充，并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用，使前后过渡自然，行文流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点名主题，阐述树木的重要性； 第二步，列举保护树木的原因，即树木对我们非常重要，进而列举保护树木的建议； 第三步，进行总结，鼓励大家一起行动起来。 [亮点词汇] ①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力 ②provide sth. for sb.向某人提供某物 ③cut down砍倒 [亮点句型] If everyone tries his best, we are sure to make a difference.（if引导的条件状语从句） 6．“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. But the environment pollution is a bit serious these days. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment. First, we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. Second, let’s walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health. Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when they go shopping. We should stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution. Fourth but not last, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the right dustbin every day. How important it is for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference. Let’s take action now! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先说保护环境的重要性。 第二步，再具体写出保护环境的措施。 第三步，最后总结和呼吁大家保护环境。 [亮点词汇] ①environment pollution环境污染 ②take the bus乘坐公共汽 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when they go shopping.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②How important it is for us to protect the environment!（感叹句） 7．假如你是李华，植树节来临，请你写一封倡议书，号召大家多种树、爱护树、禁止砍伐树木。倡议书中要指出植物的益处，如：提供食物和药品，释放氧气，给动物和人类家园等等。要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺。2.80词左右。 参考词汇：Tree Planting Day植树节________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear friends,      Tree Planting Day is coming. Let’s take actions to plant and protect trees! Trees are important to us. Firstly, they provide food and medicine for humans. Secondly, they produce oxygen and make the air fresher. Moreover, trees offer homes to animals and beautify our environment. Sadly, some people cut down trees, so that it harms nature. We should stop this and care for trees instead. Let’s plant more trees and protect them together! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，号召大家多种树，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，提出让我们采取行动来种植和保护树木。 第二步，具体阐述植树的益处； 第三步，最后作小结。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍倒 ②care for关心 ③take actions采取行动 [高分句型] Let’s plant more trees and protect them together!（祈使句） 8．黄河是我们的母亲河，保护黄河是事关中华民族伟大复兴的千秋大计。你校英文报拟发布保护黄河的倡议书。请你根据以下思维导图，用英文介绍一下黄河并倡导大家共护母亲河。 要求：(1)包含上述要点，可适当发挥； (2)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁； (3)不少于80词。 Protect the Yellow River Dear students, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Protect the Yellow River Dear students, The Yellow River is known as China’s mother river. It’s 5,464 kilometres long. It is the second longest river in our country and runs through many cities. However, the Yellow River is in a poor situation. The water and soil loss is very serious. The water is badly polluted. Also, water shortages are even more worrying. So it’s important for us to protect it. Firstly, we should stop fishing. Secondly, our government must make laws to protect our mother river. Thirdly, we should plant more trees on both sides of the river because it can stay in good condition that way. And we should never throw rubbish into the river. Instead, we should pick up rubbish along the river to keep it clean. Let’s work together and protect our beautiful mother river! Together, we can make a big difference! The English School Newspaper 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述黄河的现状和保护措施； ③提示：根据提供的思维导图，要点包括黄河的介绍、存在的问题、保护黄河的举措，以及倡导大家共同参与保护黄河的行动。考生应注意全面覆盖这些要点，并适当发挥，使倡议书内容充实、有说服力。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开篇直接点明主题，即保护黄河的重要性，可以提及黄河作为中华民族的母亲河，其地位和意义； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍黄河；指出问题；倡导保护； 第三步，书写结语。呼吁全体同学共同行动起来。 [亮点词汇] ①be known as被称为 ②in a poor situation处于糟糕的状况 ③water and soil loss水土流失 ④make laws制定法律 ⑤make a big difference产生重大影响 [高分句型] ①The Yellow River is the second longest river in our country and runs through many cities. (运用序数词和并列结构) ②Firstly, we should stop fishing. Secondly, our government must make laws to protect our mother river. (运用“Firstly, Secondly…”的列举结构) ③We should plant more trees on both sides of the river because it can stay in good condition that way. (运用“because”引导的原因状语从句) 重难语篇拔高练 9．假设你是李华，学校正在举办“自然保护周”活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，分享你在大熊猫国家公园的见闻和感悟，动植物是我们的好朋友，并号召大家共同保护自然。内容要点： 国家公园中看到的动植物 ……(请补充) 动植物的重要性 1.树木净化空气 2.……(请补充) 保护动植物的措施 1.不乱砍树木 2. ……(请补充) 号召大家共同保护自然 ……(请补充) 注意： (1)要求包括所有要点； (2)词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予以评分。 Hello everyone, Today, I want to share my trip to The Giant Panda National Park. ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s protect nature together! Thank you! 【答案】例文 Hello everyone, Today, I want to share my trip to The Giant Panda National Park. I saw many giant pandas and bamboo forests there. I also found colorful birds and rare plants. Animals and plants are our best friends. Trees clean the air, and they provide homes for wildlife. For example, pandas depend on bamboo to live.   To protect them, we should not cut down trees or litter in nature. Also, we must stop hunting animals. Everyone can help. Let’s start by planting trees or saving water. Nature needs us all. Let’s protect nature together! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述在国家公园中看到的动植物及其重要性； 第三步，接着阐述保护动植物的一些措施； 第四步，书写结语，号召大家共同保护自然。 [亮点词汇] ①provide for提供 ②for example例如 ③depend on依赖 ④cut down砍倒 [高分句型] Let’s start by planting trees or saving water. (祈使句) 10．假设你是王浩宇，你们班的交换生Tim想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一封80词左右的邮件，向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——雅鲁藏布大峡谷。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。                   语篇类型：应用文； 时态：一般现在时； 人称：第三人称； 内容提示： ◆长度：约505千米； ◆深度：约6千米 (最深处) ； ◆美誉：植物博物馆 the plant museum；动物王国 the animal kingdom； ◆最佳旅游时间：春、夏 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Haoyu 【答案】例文 Dear Tim, I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon. It’s in Xizang, China. It is about 505 kilometers long. And it is the deepest canyon in the world. The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometers. As a place that all nature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants and animals. It’s called “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”. The best time to visit it is spring and summer. I’m sure you will have a great time there. Yours, Wang Haoyu 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。作者向朋友Tim介绍一处自然奇观； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。向朋友Tim详细介绍雅鲁藏布大峡谷的情况； 第三步，书写结语。希望朋友Tim能来参观雅鲁藏布大峡谷并玩得开心。 [亮点词汇] ①home to 是……的所在地/栖息地 ②the best time to do sth. 做某事的最佳时间 [高分句型] ①The deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometers. (形容词最高级) ②I’m sure you will have a great time there (省略that的宾语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$