Unit8 仿写法介绍梦想（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 8 译林版三年级起点六年级下册 仿写法介绍梦想 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍梦想是什么 介绍原因 4 01 写作方法指引-汉堡法 原句： I want to be a teacher. 句子结构： I want to be a …. 仿写： I want to be a doctor. 原句： To make my dream come true, I will study math. 句子结构： To make my dream come true, I will …. 仿写： To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I want to be a teacher. I want to inspire students and help them gain knowledge. For example, I plan to design interesting teaching methods to make learning more engaging. To make my dream come true, I will study educational theories and various subjects hard. I will also participate in teaching practice activities. I believe with my love for education and continuous efforts, I can become an excellent teacher. 01 写作方法指引-示例 I want to be a teacher. I want to inspire students and help them gain knowledge. For example, I plan to design interesting teaching methods to make learning more engaging. To make my dream come true, I will study educational theories and various subjects hard. I will also participate in teaching practice activities. I believe with my love for education and continuous efforts, I can become an excellent teacher. 介绍梦想是什么 I want to be a teacher. I want to inspire students and help them gain knowledge. For example, I plan to design interesting teaching methods to make learning more engaging. To make my dream come true, I will study educational theories and various subjects hard. I will also participate in teaching practice activities. I believe with my love for education and continuous efforts, I can become an excellent teacher. 介绍原因 I want to be a teacher. I want to inspire students and help them gain knowledge. For example, I plan to design interesting teaching methods to make learning more engaging. To make my dream come true, I will study educational theories and various subjects hard. I will also participate in teaching practice activities. I believe with my love for education and continuous efforts, I can become an excellent teacher. I want to be a teacher. I want to inspire students and help them gain knowledge. For example, I plan to design interesting teaching methods to make learning more engaging. To make my dream come true, I will study educational theories and various subjects hard. I will also participate in teaching practice activities. I believe with my love for education and continuous efforts, I can become an excellent teacher. 如何实现梦想 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.梦想是什么 参考句型： 1. I want to be a/an ______. 2. My dream is to be a/an ______. 3. I hope to be a/an ______ in the future. 参考词汇： teacher（教师）, doctor（医生）, nurse（护士）, driver（司机）, farmer（农民）, policeman（警察）, singer（歌手）, dancer（舞者）, writer（作家）, painter（画家） 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细介绍原因 参考句型： 1. I want to be a/an ______ because ______. 2. ______ is/are interesting/fun, so I want to be a/an ______. 3. I like ______, so my dream is to be a/an ______. 参考词汇： 情感类： help（帮助）, make people happy（让人们快乐） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细介绍原因 参考词汇： 情感类： make people healthy（让人们健康）, bring joy（带来欢乐） 兴趣类： like...very much（非常喜欢……）, be interested in（对……感兴趣）, fun（有趣的）, cool（很酷的） 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.如何实现梦想 参考句型：  I will ______ to make my dream come true. To be a/an ______, I will ______. I will ______ and ______ every day. 参考词汇： 学习类： study hard（努力学习）, learn...well（学好……）, read books（读书） 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.如何实现梦想 实践类： practice（练习）, take lessons（上课）, join clubs（加入俱乐部）, do sports（做运动）- 态度类：work hard（努力）, never give up（永不放弃） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 “want”用法讲解 一、want to be​ 1. 结构与含义​ “want to be” 通常用于表达主语希望成为某种身份、职业或具有某种状态。​ 2. 用法示例​ 关于职业：He wants to be a doctor.（他想要成为一名医生。）“a doctor” 是一种职业身份，表明主语未来职业发展的期望。​ 02 基础知识精讲-语法 “want”用法讲解 关于状态：She wants to be happy every day.（她想要每天都快乐。）“happy” 描述的是一种状态，说明主语期望自身能保持的情绪状态。​ 二、want to do sth “want to do sth” 侧重于具体的行为动作，强调去做某件事情；而 “want to be” 侧重于身份、职业或状态，强调成为某种角色或达到某种状态。比如，“I want to play the piano”（我想要弹钢琴），重点在 “弹钢琴” 这个动作；“I want to be a pianist”（我想要成为一名钢琴家），重点在成为 “钢琴家” 这个职业身份 。 单项选择 I ______ to visit the Great Wall this summer. A. want B. wants C. wanting 2.My sister ______ to be a teacher when she grows up. A. want B. wants C. wanting 3.They want ______ a party next week. A. have B. to have C. having 02 基础知识精讲-语法 A B B 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 根据提示完成写作，内容需包含未来想成为的职业、原因及实现方式。 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 梦想 原因 如何实现 scientist make the world better study；join science clubs 17 参考句型： I want to be ______. I want to ______ because ______.  To make my dream come true, I will ______. 参考词汇： scientist（科学家）, invent（发明）environment（环境）, solution（解决方案）, math（数学）, physics（物理）, join（加入）, science club（科学俱乐部）come true（实现） 18 My Dream I want to be a scientist. I want to invent new technologies to make the world better. For example, I hope to create clean energy solutions to help the environment. To make my dream come true, I will study math and physics hard at school. I will also join science clubs. I believe hard work will help me become a useful scientist. 范文1： 介绍梦想是什么 介绍原因 如何实现梦想 19 模拟写作提升2 根据图片提示，写一篇短文描述朋友的梦想职业、原因及实现计划。 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 20 参考句型： My friend wants to be ______. He / She wants to ______ because ______.To achieve his/her dream, he/she will ______. 参考词汇： artist（艺术家）, doctor（医生）, teacher（教师）, help（帮助）, create（创造）, learn from（向……学习） 21 My Friend's Dream My friend Lily wants to be an artist. She loves drawing and wants to create beautiful paintings that make people happy. She often says art can express feelings that words can't. To achieve her dream, Lily will practice drawing every day. She also will take art classes on weekends and visit museums to learn from famous painters. She hopes to hold her own art exhibition one day. 范文2： 介绍梦想是什么 介绍原因 如何实现梦想 22 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 用英文参考提示完成写作，内容需包含未来想成为的职业、原因及实现方式。 What do you want to be? Why do you want to be it How will you achieve it 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 真题写作练习-苏州姑苏 24 参考句型： I want to be a ______. I want to ______to ______. For example, I hope to ______ to ______. To make my dream come true, I will ______ and ______ at school. I will also ______ . I believe hard work will help me become ______. 参考词汇： scientist（科学家）, singer（歌手）, engineer（工程师）, study（学习）, practice（练习）, make...better（使……更好）, bring joy（带来快乐） 25 My Dream I want to be a scientist. I want to invent new technologies to make the world better. For example, I hope to create clean energy solutions to help the environment. To make my dream come true, I will study math and physics hard at school. I will also join science clubs. I believe hard work will help me become a scientist. 范文3： 介绍梦想是什么 介绍原因 如何实现梦想 26 Thank you! $$